（高考英语作文炼句）第65篇译文老师笔记

PAGEPAGE11.我们每个人的技能和专长都是有限的.要想取得成功,我们需要谋求其他人的智慧,并将这些智慧应用起来以创造集体优势.Eachofuspossessesalimitedsetofskillsandexpertise.Tosucceed,itisnecessaryto

enlist

(1.争取,谋求)eachother'swisdomand

useittoourcollectiveadvantage(2.将这些智慧应用起来以创造集体优势).

1-争取,谋求enlist

词典释义：enlist[ɪn'lɪst]

verb

ASKFORHELP

请求帮助

transitive

slightly

formal

■toaskforandgethelporsupportfromsomeone

争取,谋取(帮助或支援)

•We'vegotto

enlist

somepeopletohelppreparethefood.我们得请些人来帮忙做饭.•Theorganizationhas

enlisted

thesupportofmanyfamouspeopleinraisingmoneytohelphomelesschildren.这个组织募款帮助无家可归的儿童的活动已经得到了很多名人的支持.

外刊例句：SaudiArabiaistryingto

enlist

otheroil-producingcountriestosupportaprovocativeidea：ifwealthycountriesreducetheiroilconsumptiontocombatglobalwarming,theyshouldpaycompensationtooilproducers.

()沙特阿拉伯正谋求其他产油国支持其富有争议的想法：若发达国家为了对抗全球变暖而减少使用石油,那么他们该给产油国提供相应补助.

2-将这些智慧应用起来以创造集体优势useittoourcollectiveadvantage

词典释义：collective[kə'lek.tɪv]

adjective

[beforenoun]

■oforsharedbyeverymemberofagroupofpeople

集体的;共同的

•a

collective

decision/effort共同的决定／努力•collective

responsibility/leadership共同责任／集体领导

tosb'sadvantage

withresultswhichareprofitableorhelpfultosb其结果对某人有利或有帮助：

Theagreementis/workstoouradvantage.

协议对我们有利.

turnsthtoone's(own)ad`vantage

cause(asituationoranevent)toleadtopersonalprofit;makethemostofsth使(情况或事情)导致个人获利;充分利用某事物.

外刊例句：BushandhisWhiteHousewereengaginginacarefullyorchestratedcampaigntoshapeandmanipulatesourcesofpublicapproval

toouradvantage.

()布什及其政府各人员正精心策划着一场政治运动,致力于赢得公众支持,并且为了集体利益,操纵其来源.

2.在我们的日常生活中,我们难免会遇到一些情形,在这些情形中,我们无法得到外界的帮助,只能依靠我们自身的知识和问题解决技巧来应对.在这种情况下,那些习惯性地依赖别人的人会变得茫然不知所措.Inoureverydaylives,therewillalwaysbeoccasionswhenweareunabletoobtainoutsideassistanceandhavetodependonourownknowledgeand

problem-solvingskills(1.问题解决技巧).Inthesesituations,peoplewho

habitually

(2.习惯性的)relyonotherswillfindthemselves

ataloss(3.茫然不知所措).

1-问题解决技巧problem-solvingskills注意不可以把problem-solving写成solvingproblem.名词和非谓语构成合成词时,一般都是"n-doing”/"n-done”/"n-todo”的形式.如果要用solvingproblems或者tosolveproblems,也需要放在n后面作定语,而不能像合成词(合成词相当于只有1个单词)那样放在n前面作定语.

词典释义：problem-solving

'problem-ˌsolvingnounU

1.whenyoufindwaysofdoingthings,oranswerstoproblems解决问题：

tasksthatinvolveproblem-solving包括解决问题的工作任务•employeeswithgoodproblem-solvingskills具备良好解决问题能力的雇员

外刊例句：Similarly,employerscomplainthatlessthanhalfoftheyoungwhomtheyhirehaveadequate

problem-solvingskills,yetnearlytwo-thirdsoftheyoungbelievethattheydohavesuchskills.()同样,雇主也抱怨道,他们雇佣的年轻员工有充足解决问题技能的连一半都不到,但三分之二左右的年轻员工认为自己具备这些技能.

2-习惯性地habitually

词典释义：habitually

\-lē,-li\

adverb

1.

：

byhabit

：

customarily,

unthinkingly

2.

：

consistently,

persistently,

repeatedly,

usually

外刊例句：Hewastoldhewasnot,underthenewbenefitsrules,considered

habitually

residentintheUKandwouldhavetowaitthreemonthsbeforeclaimingJSA.

()他得知,根据新的福利条例,自己不算是英国的常住居民,得再等三个月才能拿失业救济.

学生错误表达：chronically点评：用词不准确,chronically是指"慢性的”,例如：patientswhoarechronicallyill患慢性病的病人

3-茫然不知所措ataloss

词典释义：

UK

[lɒs]

US

[lɑ：s]

noun

beataloss

■tonotknowwhattodoorsay

不知所措;不知说甚么

•I'mata

loss

toknowhowIcanhelpyou.我不知道该怎么帮你.

外刊例句：TheAmericansare

ataloss

todecidehowtotakeonSomalia’sjihadists.()美国尚无统一方案对付索马里的恐怖分子.

3.很多奥运会选手天生拥有优秀的体格条件.但如果没有经过多年的严格训练,他们就不能像现在一样发挥他们的潜力,或者得到参加奥运会的机会.ManyOlympiansarebornwith

superiorphysiques(1.优秀的体格条件).Withoutyearsof

rigoroustraining(2.严格的训练),however,noneofthemwouldhaverealizedtheirpotentialorhavehadtheopportunitytoparticipateintheOlympicGames.

1-优秀的体格条件superiorphysiquesphysicalcondition一般指的是身体健康状况,不适用于这里.

词典释义：

physique[fɪ'zi：k]

noun

countable

■theshapeandsizeofahumanbody

体格,体形

•Hehasaverypowerful,muscular

physique.他体格强壮,肌肉发达.

外刊例句：AnthropologicaltheoryhasitthatNeanderthalssportedhuge,

powerfulphysiques

adaptedtoiceageEuropebutneverthelessexhibitedstay-at-home,unadventurousbehaviouruntilthearrivalofearlymodernhumansintheUpperPalaeolithic30,000yearsago.

()根据人类学理论,尼安德特人身强力壮,体格优越,能适应冰河时期欧洲地区的生活,不过他们喜欢留在居住地,不爱探索四周,这一直等到旧石器时期晚期,现代人类出现时才有所转变.

替换表达：athletic

physiques

学生错误表达：(1)

greatphysicalrequirements点评：中式表达,requirement是指"要求”,不能用来指"体格条件”.(2)

excellentfigure点评：figure是指"(女性的)身材”,例如：Shehasagoodfigure.她有很好的身材.

2-严格的训练rigoroustraining

词典释义：rigorousUK

['rɪg.ər.əs]

US

[-ɚ-]

adjective

STRICT

严格的

■severeorstrict

严格的,严厉的

•the

rigorous

controlsgoverningthesaleofshares管制股权出售的严格约束

外刊例句：More

rigoroustraining

isaboontoapprentices.

()学徒能从更为严格的训练中获益更多.

替换表达：hard/serious/strict/tough

training

Withoutyearsofrigoroustraining,however,noneofthemwouldhaverealizedtheirpotentialorhavehadtheopportunitytoparticipateintheOlympicGames.

[分析]本句是虚拟语气,条件句是介词短语Withoutyearsofrigoroustraining,表示与现在事实相反,介词短语作虚拟条件句是一种特殊情况,它相当于iftherewerenoyearsofrigoroustraining.主句是however之后的部分,其中,主语是noneofthem,谓语是wouldhaverealized…orhavehad,两个谓语动词之后的宾语分别为theirpotential和theopportunitytoparticipateintheOlympicGames,在第二个宾语中,不定式结构toparticipateintheOlympicGames作定语,修饰theopportunity.

4.做准备对于想成功的人会带来很大的影响.第一,做准备可以帮助我们从众多可能的方法中找出最有效果的一个.其次,当机会来临时,我们对知识和技能的不懈准备也会让我们超过他人.这样,我们就能够抓住机会,向成功迈进一步.Preparationcan

makeagreatdifference

(1.带来很大影响)tothosewhowanttoachievesuccess.Foronething,preparationhelpsusfindthemosteffectivewayfromvariouspossibleones.Foranother,whenopportunitycomes,our

constantpreparationsforskillsandknowledge

(2.对知识和技能的不懈准备)willhelpus

outperformothers(3.超过他人).Therefore,wecanseizetheopportunityandgetclosertosuccess.

1-带来很大影响makeagreatdifference

词典释义：makea(big)difference

ADVANCED

(also

makeallthedifference)

■toimproveasituation(alot)

(极大地)改善

•Exercisecanmakeabig

difference

to

yourstateofhealth.运动会极大地改善你的健康状况.•Puttingupsomenewwallpaperhasmadeallthe

difference

to

theplace.贴上一些新壁纸后这个地方变得焕然一新了.

外刊例句：AswiththeWHO,itwouldnotbepossibletokilloffallinfection,butthepoolingofresourcescould

makeagreatdifference.

()正如世界卫生组织所言,要让全部感染现象消失并不现实,但集中资源可以对此造成巨大影响.

2-对知识和技能的不懈准备constantpreparationsforskillsandknowledge

词典释义：constantUK

['kɒnt.stənt]

US

['kɑ：nt-]

adjective

FREQUENT

频繁的

IMPROVER

■happeningalotorallthetime

经常发生的;连续发生的;连续不断的

•He'sin

constant

troublewiththepolice.他与警方麻烦不断.•machinesthatarein

constant

use经常使用的机器

外刊例句：Asthedaysdiminish,Mabelseems,withherwashing,cooking,sewingandthelightingofoillamps,toenacta

constantpreparationfo