（高考英语作文炼句）第25篇译文老师笔记

PAGEPAGE11.尽管即时聊天工具能使学生之间保持联系,但它却耗费了他们面对面交流的时间.Whiletheuseof

instantmessagingtools

(1.即时聊天工具)canallowstudentsto

stayconnected(2.保持联系),itcanalso

eatinto

(3.消耗,耗费)thetimetheyspendin

face-to-faceinteractions(4.面对面交流).

1-instantmessagingtools词典释义：instantmessagingnoun

uncountable

■a

typeofserviceavailableontheInternetthatallowsyoutoexchangewritten

messageswithsomeoneelsewhoisusingtheserviceatthesametime

(网际网路服务)即时通讯

外刊例句：Chinahasvowedtointensifycontrolsonsocialmediaand

instantmessagingtools,inthe

highest-levelofficialresponsetotheextraordinarysurgeinmicroblogging

inthecountry.

()中国对于异乎寻常的微博浪潮予以最高程度的官方回应,誓要加紧对于社交媒体和即时通讯工具的监控.

替换表达：instantmessagingservices

学生错误表达：(1)

instant

messagingapplication点评：表示具体的某类应用时,application是可数名词,这里应该改为instantmessagingapplications

2-stayconnectedstay此时是系动词.

词典释义：stay[steɪ]

verb

CONTINUE

继续

ESSENTIAL

intransitive

usually+adverborpreposition

[L]

■tocontinuedoing

something,ortocontinuetobeinaparticularstate

继续做;保持•Stay

awayfromtheedgeofthecliff.不要到悬崖边上去.•He'sdecidednotto

stay

in

teaching/medicine/thearmy.他已经决定不再教书／从医／当兵.•Thefinalfiguresshowedthatmostdepartmentshad

stayed

withinbudget.最终数据显示大部分部门都没有超出预算.•Itwassowarmwe

stayed

(out)

inthe

gardenuntiltenthatnight.那天晚上天气很暖和,我们一直在花园里待到十点钟.•Putalidonthepansothefoodwill

stay

hot.盖上锅盖,这样食物就不会冷掉了.•Theshops

stay

openuntil9o'clock.商店一直营业到九点.•They

stayed

friendsaftertheirdivorce.他们离婚后仍然是朋友.

connected

●●○○○1.ADJ

形容词

Seealso：

connect;well-connected;

有关的;有联系的

Ifonethingis

connectedwith

another,thereisalinkorrelationshipbetweenthem.

【搭配模式】：usuv-linkADJ•Haveyoueverhadanyskinproblems

connected

withexposuretothesun?...你曾因日晒出现过皮肤问题吗?•Thedisputeisnotdirectly

connected

tothenegotiations...这一争端与谈判没有直接联系.•ShewasbornatAmbala,India,herfamilybeingclosely

connected

withtheIndianarmy.她出生在印度的安巴拉,她们家族与印度军队关系甚密.

外刊例句：Inhelpingpeopleto

stay

connected

totheirpeers,socialmediasitessuchasFacebookalsolet

themcomparethemselvestopeoplewhoaredoingbetterthantheyfeelthey

are(oratleastappeartobe,intheircarefullycraftedprofiles).

()诸如Facebook等社交媒体为了让人们与其小伙伴能一直保持联系,就让人们能与那些感觉过得比他们好(至少在他们精修的图片上是这样)的人比较.

替换表达：beincontact

学生错误表达：(1)

keep

contact

点评：应该改为固定表达stay/keep

incontact(2)

keepconnection点评：没有keepconnection的说法,这里应该改为stayconnected

3-eatinto

词典释义：eatinto1.PHRASAL

VERB

短语动词

消耗,耗费(时间或资源)

Ifsomething

eatsinto

yourtime

oryourresources,itusesthem,whentheyshouldbeusedforotherthings.

【语法信息】：VPn•Responsibilitiesathomeandwork

eatinto

histime...家庭和工作的双重负担耗费了他的时间.

•Wageswererisingfasterthanproductivityandthiswas

eatingintoprofits.工资的涨幅高过了生产率增长的速度,从而消耗了利润所得.

外刊例句：Whilstonlinebrowsingforbooks,beaniebabiesandmutual

fundsdoes

eatinto

thetime

availabletospendinfrontofatelevisionscreen,theInternethasacresof

chatroomsdevotedtofavouritesoaps.

()(人们)上网看书、浏览玩具熊和查阅共同基金虽然会消耗掉用来看电视的时间,但网络也有着大量用于讨论喜爱的电视剧的地方.

替换表达：useup/eatup/swallowup/takeup/consume

4-face-to-faceinteractions词典释义：face-to-face

[ˌfeɪs.tə'feɪs]

adverb

[beforenoun]

adjective

■directly,meetingsomeoneinthesameplace

面对面(的)•We'vespokenonthephonebutnever

face-to-face.我们通过电话,但素未谋面.•She

came

face-to-face

withthegunmanashe

strodeintotheplayground.持枪歹徒大步走到操场时,她碰个正着.

interaction

UK

[ˌɪn.tə'ræk.ʃən]

US

[-tˌɚ-]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

■whentwoormorepeopleorthingscommunicatewithor

reacttoeachother

交流,交往;相互作用,相互影响•There'snotenough

interaction

between

the

managementandtheworkers.管理部门与工人之间的沟通不足.•Languagegamesareusuallyintendedtoencouragestudent

interaction.语言游戏通常用来鼓励学生间的交流.•Theplayfollowsthe

interactions

ofthreevery

differentcharacters.该剧以三个性格迥异的人物之间的交往为主线展开情节.

外刊例句：Theyshouldprovideguidelinestoemployeesonhowto

minimiseoverloadonothers;avoidingsendingemailstocolleaguesinthe

samebuilding–therebyencouraging

face-to-face

interactions;andensuringthatanybodysendinganemailshouldletthe

receiverknowhowimportanttheirresponseis,andbywhentheirresponseis

required.

()他们该指导雇员如何减少工作负担——(呼吁他们)不要给同一栋楼的同事发电子邮件,从而鼓励他们更多地面对面接触,并且确保发送电子邮件者该让接收人知道其回复的重要性和期限.

替换表达：face-to-facecommunication

Q：例句的主语是use,而我的翻译的主语是instant

messagingtools,这样翻译有问题吗?我的翻译是：Althoughinstant

chattingapplicationcanmakestudentskeepintouchwitheachother,it

wastestheirface-to-facecommunicatingtime.

A：使用theuseofinstantmessagingtools或者instantmessagingtools做主语都可以,但如果用instant

messagingtools做主语,句子要改为Althoughinstantmessaging

toolscanallowstudentstokeepintouchwitheachother,theywaste

students’timespentinface-to-facecommunicatingtime.

Q：老师,请问,messagetool和messaging

tool,什么时候需要用message做定语,什么时候需要用messaging,或者说两者是否可以替换?A：instantmessagingtools/services是一个固定表达,含义是"即使通信工具/服务”,不能写成instantmessagetools,平时可以多记一些这样的固定表达.

2.高中生和大学生正处于发展社交技能的阶段.那些在网上花费太多时间的人可能会损害自己在线下的现实世界场景中与人交流的能力.Highschoolersandcollegestudentsarestill

intheprocessof(1.处于……的阶段)developingtheirsocialskills.Thosewhospendanexcessiveamountoftimeonlinemayjeopardize

(2.损害)theirabilitytointeractwithothersin

offline,realworldscenarios(3.线下的现实世界场景).

1-intheprocessof

词典释义：processnoun

countable

UK

[ˈprəʊ.ses]

US

[ˈprɑː-]

beintheprocessofdoingsth

ADVANCED

■tohavestarteddoingsomething

在…的进程中•We'restillinthe

process

ofdecoratingthehouse.我们还在装修房子.

外卡例句：LastyearMonsantotriedunsuccessfullytobuySyngenta;

theSwissfirmisnow

intheprocess

of

beingboughtbyChemChina,astate-ownedentity.()孟山都公司去年收购先正达公司失败,而这家瑞士公司如今正遭国有企业中国化工所收购.

替换表达：inaphaseof

学生错误表达：(1)

Ataphrase

of点评：介词使用有误,应该改为ina

phraseof

2-jeopardize

词典释义：jeopardize

(UK

usually

jeopardise)

UK

['dʒep.ə.daɪz]

US

[-ɚ-]

verb

transitive

■toputsomethingsuchasaplanorsystemindangerof

beingharmedordamaged

使处于危险境地;危及,损害•Sheknewthatbyfailingherexamsshecould

jeopardize

herwholefuture.她知道考试不及格会影响自己整个未来的前途.

外刊例句：Beforetakingoffice,DonaldTrumpalsoraisedanxietiesby

threateningtoterminateNafta,whichwould

jeopardize

tradewithtwoofAmerica’sbiggestbeefimporters,

MexicoandCanada.

()特朗普在上台前,就威胁要废除北美自由贸易协定,引起公众不安,因为这将损害美国与其最大的两个牛肉进口国墨西哥和加拿大的贸易.

替换表达：harm/adverselyaffect/undermine/impair

3-offline,realworldscenarios

词典释义：realworld

1.N-SING

单数名词

真实的世界;现实世界;现实生活

Ifyoutalkabout

therealworld,you

arereferringtotheworldandlifeingeneral,incontrasttoaparticular

person'sownlife,experience,andideas,whichmayseemuntypicaland

unrealistic.

【搭配模式】：theN•Whentheyeventuallyleavetheschooltheywillbetotally

ill-equippedtodealwiththe

real

world...当他们最终离开学校的时候,他们没掌握什么实际技能,难以应对现实世界.•IwasOlympicchampionbutIhadtogooutintothe

realworld

andworkforaliving.我是奥运冠军,但是我不得不走进现实生活工作谋生.

scenario

●●○○○1.N-COUNT

可数名词

设想;可能发生的情况

Ifyoutalkabout

alikelyorpossible

scenario,youaretalkingaboutthewayinwhichasituationmaydevelop.•...thenightmare

scenario

ofadividedandirrelevantRoyalFamily...对于王室四分五裂、无足轻重的可怕设想

•Intheworst-case

scenario,

youcouldbecomeahomelessperson...最坏的情况是你可能会无家可归.

•Trytoimagineallthepossible

scenariosandwhatactionyouwouldtake.努力想象所有可能出现的情况并考虑一下你会采取什么行动.

外刊例句：Withcomputerscienceallaroundus,it'seasytomake

linksto

realworldscenarios

that

studentscanrelateto.

()随着计算机技术变得无处不在,学生能轻松联系到线下与其相关的现实场景.

替换表达：offline,real-worldsituations

学生错误表达：(1)

Reality点评：没有突出"线下”这一层含义.

Q：不理解第三个翻译点中offline,real中间的逗号是起什么作用的?A：这里逗号的作用类似于and,用于将两个形容词连接起来,类似的例子还有BBC例句：Theempiregaveitscoloniesreal,

tangiblebenefits.

3.网上购物最吸引人的地方在于它能让学生用鼠标轻轻一点就能找到最便宜的价格.学生缺钱是出了名的,他们利用网络购买便宜商品可减轻他们的经济负担.Thebiggest

draw

(1.吸引人的地方)ofonlineshoppingisthatitallowsstudentstofindthecheapestpossibleprice

attheclickofamouse(2.鼠标轻轻一点).Students,whoarenotoriously

strappedforcash(3.缺钱的),caneasetheirfinancialstrainby

takingadvantageof(4.利用)bargainsonline.

1-thebiggestdraw

词典释义：drawUK

[drɔ：]

US

[drɑ：]

noun

ATTRACTION

吸引力

countableusuallysingular

■someoneor

somethingthatalotofpeopleareinterestedin

有吸引力的人(或事物)•Weneedsomeoneattheeventwho'llbea

big

draw

andattractthepayingpublic.我们需要一个深受大家喜欢的人到场,以吸引人们花钱买票.

外刊例句：India,byfar

the

biggestdraw

inthegame,threatenedtowithdrawfromshowpieceevents

liketheWorldCupandtheWorldTwenty20.

()印度作为现今比赛中最引人注目的国家,威胁要从诸如板球世界杯和板球20杯赛等大型比赛中退赛.

学生错误表达：(1)

addict点评：addict是指"吸毒上瘾的人;对……着迷的人”,用在此处不恰当.

2-with/attheclickofamouse

词典释义：click[klɪk]

verb

OPERATE

COMPUTER

电脑操作

ESSENTIAL

intransitive

or

transitive

specialized

■to(causeacomputerinstructionto)operatebypressing

abuttononthemouse(=smallcontroldevice)ofacomputer

点击(滑鼠)•Ifyouwanttoopenafile,

click

twice

on

theiconforit.如果你想开启一个档案,按两下该档案图示.•Whenyouhaveselectedthefileyouwant,

click

the

'Open'box.选中了你想要的档案,用滑鼠点击"开启”方框.

外刊例句：Onceyoulogon,itasksaserverwhetheryourfriendsare

connected,andletsyouknowwhichofthem,ifany,areonline.With

theclickofamouse,youcanthen

starttypingaway.

()你登录后,它就会访问搜索业务查询你的好友是否在线,让你知道谁在线.你只需点击一下鼠标,就可以开始打字聊天了.

学生错误表达：(1)

through

clicking/onlyusedmouse点评：这里应该改为常见说法

with/attheclickofamouse

3-(be)strappedforcash

词典释义：strapped[stræpt]

informal

adjective

■nothavingenoughmoney

手头紧的,缺钱的

•I'dlovetocometoMalaysiawithyou,butI'mafraidI'm

abit

strapped

(forcash)

atthemoment.我想和你一起去马来西亚,但恐怕我现在手头有点紧.

外刊例句：ThePalestinianAuthorityhasbeen

strappedforcash

sinceHamasswepttoasurprisevictoryin

parliamentaryelectionsinJanuary.

()因为哈马斯于一月份的议会选举中出乎意料地获胜,巴勒斯坦政权已经手头紧缺.

替换表达：(be)shortofmoney/cash

4-takeadvantageof

词典释义：take

advantageof

phrasal

1.

：

tomakeuseofforone'sownbenefit

：

useto

advantage

：

profitby

<extends

hisexamination

…

to

take

advantageof

modernmethodsofdiagnosis

—

MorrisFishbein>

<feelswe

arenot

taking

proper

advantageof

ouropportunity

—

R.A.Smith>

2.

：

imposeupon

：

abuse,

exploit

<was

alwaysgoodtopeople

…

andtherewasthosethat

tookadvantageof

him

—

NigelBalchin>

<not

above

takingadvantageof

another'sweakness>

外刊例句：Bigdataallowfishtobeprotectedasneverbefore.

Governmentsshould

takeadvantageof

this.

()大数据让鱼类可以得到前所未有的保护.政府该捉紧此机遇.

替换表达：makethebestuseofsomething

Q：请问attheclickofamouse里面的at是类似于by/with这样的介词吗,表示通过,利用;还是说和click专门搭配的词?A：at/withtheclickofamouse是一个常见搭配,可以当成固定表达记住.

Q：不是一般用low形容价格低吗?请问这里为什么用cheapest?A：cheapestprice是一个常见说法,例如《经济学人》例句：Butfortradedgoods,pricesarelikelytoconvergedownwards,

towards

thecheapestprice.这个表达可以当成特例记住.

Q：thecheapestpossibleprice是什么用法?possible的位置比其他形容词更靠近中心词?A：这是possible的一个常见用法,置于比较级最高级之后,可以参考朗文词典解释：

thebest/biggest/fastestetc.possible

thebestetc.thatcanexistorbeachieved最好的/最大的/最快的等：•Trytogetthebestpossibleprice.尽量要拿到最好的价格.•Whatistheworstpossiblethingthatcouldhappen?最坏的情况会是什么呢?

Famousfor不能写成famousof,学生造句Students

arefamousofbeingshortofmoney.应该改为Studentsare

famousforbeingshortofmoney.

4.网上购物的快速与方便可能会诱导学生购买超出他们需求的东西,导致轻率或者不必要的消费.花几个小时在网上搜索以找到最合算的商品或者最新的时尚潮流,这种诱惑也会使热衷购物的年轻人的学习半途而废.Thespeedandconvenienceofonlineshoppingmayencouragefrivolousorunnecessaryspendingby

inducing

(1.诱导)studentstobuymorethantheyneed.Thetemptationtospendhourssurfingtheinternettofindoutabout

thebestbuys

(2.最合算的商品)orthelatestfashiontrendscouldalsocausethestudiesofyoung

shopaholics(3.热衷购物的人)to

fallbythewayside(4.半途而废).

1-inducesbtodosth

词典释义：induceUK

[ɪn'dju：s]

US

[-'du：s]

formal

verb

PERSUADE

诱使

[T+obj+toinfinitive]

■topersuadesomeonetodosomething

诱使;劝说•They

induced

her

to

takethejobby

promisingeditorialfreedom.他们向她保证有编辑自由,以劝服她接受这项工作.•Nothingcould

induce

me(=Idefinitelycannotbepersuaded)toclimba

mountain/rideabike.没有甚么能诱使我去爬山／骑脚踏车的.

外刊例句：Itispossiblethatessay-writingservicesmaybe

committingacriminaloffence,throughaidingandabettingfraud,oratthe

veryleastmaybe

inducing

students

tobreaktheircontracts

withtheirinstitution.

()论文写作服务可能会是一种犯罪行为,因为它帮助和参与到了犯罪,或者说它起码引诱了学生违背其与学校的约定.

替换表达：lure/seducesomebodyintodoingsomething

2-thebestbuyBuy在这里是名词,thebest

buy的含义是"最合算的商品”.

BuynounC,usuallysingular1.somethingthatisworthbuying,becauseitischeap,goodquality,or

likelytogaininvalue合算的东西,便宜货：agood/excellentetcbuy•Thewineisagoodbuyat$6.50.这葡萄酒6.50美元,买得很合算.•It'sworthshoppingaroundfor

thebestbuy

(=whatyouwantatthelowestprice).为买到最合算的东西,值得四处逛逛.

外刊例句：Thismeantthatcustomershadlittleneedtoconsult

independentintermediarieson

thebest

buys.

()这意味着,顾客无需中间人的帮助就能拿到最实惠的价格.

3-shopaholics

词典释义：-aholic

-aholic/

əhɔlɪk

;

əhɔlɪk

/suffixinnounsand

adjectives

1.someonewhocannotstopdoingsomethingorusing

something对…痴迷的人,沉湎于…的人：

aworkaholic(=someonewhoneverstopsworking)工作狂

achocaholic(=someonewholoveschocolate)嗜巧克力成癖的人

外刊例句：Previousstudieshavesuggested90%of

shopaholics

arewomen,butinthelateststudypsychologists

foundthedifferencewasalmostnegligible,withthedisorderaffecting6%of

womenand5.5%ofmen.

()之前的研究指出,90%的购物狂都是女性,但心理学家在最新的研究中发现,这些差距是几乎可以忽略不计的,因为这种行为错乱会影响6%的女性和5.5%的男性.

替换表达：shoppingaddicts

4-fallbythewayside

词典释义：fallbythewayside

■Ifsomeonefalls

bythewayside,theyfailtofinishanactivity,andifsomethingfallsby

thewayside,peoplestopdoingit,makingit,orusingit

中途退出;半途而废•Sowhydoesonecompanysurvivearecessionwhileits

competitors

fall

bythewayside?

那么为甚么一家公司熬过了经济衰退期,而其竞争对手都中途倒闭了呢?

外刊例句：Smartfridgesmaywellbetheapplianceofthefuture,or

could

fallbythewayside

astoo

muchtechfortoolittlegain,buttheideaofconnectedsensorsandsmart

devicesmakingdecisionswithoutourinputwillcontinue.

()智能冰箱可能于未来某一天问世,也可能因为要投入过多技术却成效不大而中途夭折,但把检测器与智能设备相连,让其自主运转的想法仍会继续存在.

学生错误表达：(1)

unableto

stickattheirstudy点评：当表示"课业,学业”时,study应该使用复数形式studies

Q：attheclickofamouse老师,这个介词不应该用with吗?theclickofamouseusedtoshow

howquicklysomethingcanbedoneonacomputer：Yourphotoscanbeviewed

withtheclickofamouse.A：at/withth