高考英语复习读后续写练习+阿布山之旅后行李箱意外失踪之谜 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习阿布山之旅后行李箱意外失踪之谜1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Alongtimeago,whenIworkedinAhmedabad,wewouldoftendrivetoMountAbuforshorttrips—ittookusanywherebetweenseventoeighthourstodriveup.Thatyear,mycloserelativeswerevisitingfromLucknowduringtheholidays,andwemadeaplantovisitAbuforthreedays.Sincethereweresevenofus,includingmybrother’sfamilywhoalsolivedinAhmedabad,wehiredtwocabs.Wepickedourselvesintothevehicles,stacked(堆放)ourluggageonthecarriersontopandstartedout.Agoodtimewasbadbyall,andsoonitwastimetoreturn.Duringthejourneyback,westoppedataDhabaforteaandsnacksneartheMehanadistrict.That’swhenInoticedsuddenlythattheropewithwhichtheluggagewastiedonandofthecarriershadcomelooseandoneofthesuitcaseswasmissing.Itmusthavefallenoffsomewherealongtheway.4续写原文Althoughitdidn’tcontainanyvaluables—justclothesandsomecash,wedecidedtoretraceoursteps,drawingbackfourkilometres,lookingforthebag.Butluckwasn’tourfriend:wecouldnotlocateitandreturnedtoAhmedabaddepressed.Afteraboutamonth,oneday,whileinmyoffice,IgotacallfrommyassistantthatacertainMr.Shahwantedtoseeme.Iwasinthemiddleofameetingsohewasaskedtowait.AfterIgotdone,Icalledhimintomyoffice.5续写原文Iwaslookingafterthedevelopmentofsmallindustriesinthestateatthetime,somyimmediatequerywas.“Howcanwehelpyou?Doyouwanttosetupanindustryorareyoufacinganyissuesinyourenterprise?”Towhichhesaid,“No,sir.Ihavenotcomeforanyofficialhelp.Itisapersonalmatter.Didyoulosesomethingrecently?”Ofcourse,itallcamebacktomeandItoldhimaboutthelostsuitcasefromthecabbackfromMountAbuamonthago.6段首句Paragraph1：ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.Paragraph2：Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了很久以前，“我”在艾哈迈达巴德工作时，常与家人去阿布山短途旅行。那次假期亲戚来访，一行七人租两辆出租车前往阿布山游玩三天后返程。途中在梅哈纳区附近的小餐馆休息时，发现一辆出租车车顶行李架上绑行李的绳子松开，一个行李箱丢失，里面虽无贵重物品但大家仍决定沿原路返回寻找，可惜未找到只能沮丧回艾哈迈达巴德。约一个月后，“我”在办公室接到沙阿先生来电，他因一件私事求见，原来是关于那个丢失的行李箱。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.然后沙阿先生讲述了他的经历。他说自己是一位农民，就住在我们所经之路附近。那天，他正在田间劳作，突然看到路边有一个行李箱。出于好奇，他走上前去查看，发现里面装满了衣物和一些现金。他明白这肯定是某位过客遗失的。于是他把箱子带回了家，并努力想办法归还。他在当地社区四处打听，后来通过有我们那次旅行通行证记录的当地政府部门，终于找到了我的联系方式。11续写思路分析Para2：Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.但这位先生坚持要亲自把行李箱送到我手上。尽管我提出安排人去他那里取，他却说一定要确保箱子安全且当面交到我手中。他长途跋涉，换乘了好几趟巴士，甚至还步行了一段路。当他终于抵达我的办公室时，虽略显疲惫，但脸上满是坚定与真诚。他把行李箱递给我，我感激不已。我连连向他道谢，并要给他酬谢以报答他的善良与诚实，可他拒绝了，说这只是他应该做的，能帮上忙他很高兴。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.Hesaidthathewasafarmerwholivedneartheroutewehadtaken.Thatday,whilehewasoutinhisfields,henoticedasuitcaselyingbythesideoftheroad.Curious,hewenttocheckitoutandfounditwasfilledwithclothesandsomecash.Heknewitmusthavebelongedtosomeonewhohadpassedby.Hetookithomeandtriedtofigureoutawaytoreturnit.Afteraskingaroundinthelocalcommunityandmakingsomeinquiries,hefinallymanagedtotrackdownmycontactinformationthroughthelocalauthoritieswhohadarecordofourtravelpermitsforthattrip.14范文呈现Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.Despitemyoffertoarrangeforsomeonetopickitupfromhisplace,hesaidhewantedtomakesureitreachedmesafelyandinperson.Hetraveledalongdistance,takingseveralbusesandevenwalkingpartoftheway.Whenhefinallyarrivedatmyoffice,hewasabittiredbuthisfacewasfilledwithdeterminationandhonesty.Hehandedmethesuitcase,andIwasextremelygrateful.Ithankedhimprofuselyandofferedhimarewardforhiskindnessandhonesty,butherefused,sayingthatitwasjusttherightthingtodoandthathewashappytobeofhelp.15升级版范文呈现ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.Hewasafarmerwhosefieldswereneartheroutewehadtaken.Oneday,whileworkinginhisfields,hespottedasuitcaselyingdesertedbytheroadside.Beingakind-heartedman,hewentovertohavealookandfounditfilledwithclothesandabitofcash.Knowingitmusthavebelongedtoatravelerpassingby,hetookithome.Aftermakinginquiriesinthelocalcommunity,itwasthroughthelocalauthorities,whohadarecordofourtravelpermitsforthattrip,thathefinallymanagedtotracemycontactdetails.16升级版范文呈现Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.Regardlessofmyoffertosendsomeonetofetchitfromhisplace,hesaidhewouldensureitssafearrivalinperson.Havingtraveledalongway,takingseveralbusesandevenwalkingpartofthejourney,hefinallyreachedmyoffice.Tiredashewas,hisfacewasfilledwithdeterminationandhonesty.Itwashewhohandedmethesuitcase.Iwasextremelygratefulandthankedhimprof