




下载本文档
版权说明:本文档由用户提供并上传,收益归属内容提供方,若内容存在侵权,请进行举报或认领
文档简介
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Thisismyfirstdaydeliveringfood.”“Thisismyseconddayofdelivery.”...Xiaowenpostedhisdailyvlogonline,inwhichheworeacontagioussmileandstammered,“Itismy20thdayoffooddeliveryandI’mworkinghardtoearnmoneyformycochlearimplantation(耳蜗植入手术)!”Recognizedastheonlymeanstorestorehearingandlanguageabilityforpeoplewithextremelysevereneurologicaldeafness,cochlearimplantationinvolvesconductingriskysurgerywheredoctorswillputabuilt-indeviceinthepatient’sheadbehindtheearandfittingthepatientwithawearablesignal-receivingdevice,likeanearphone,onemonthafterthesurgery.Meanwhile,itcostsashighas300,000yuan,orover100,000yuanwhensocialsecurityreimbursespartofit.InXiaowen’scase,itwouldmean10yearsofdeliverywhenhejustmadeapproximately100yuanaday.Worsestill,hearing-impaired,Xiaowenhadseveralnarrowescapeswithdeathattheintersectionontheroadsbecausehecouldn’thearthehornofthecarsbehindhim!Hesighedwithaheavyheartwhencustomerscomplainedabouthisinabilitytospeakonthephonetoinformthemofthearrivalofadelivery.Evenso,Xiaowenkindlyrefusedpeople’sfattipsbutacceptedtheirapologieswhentheyfoundoutabouthisdisability.Borninanordinaryfamily,Xiaowen,thelittlechubbyboy,wasdiagnosedwithcongenitalhearingimpairment.Thiswaslikeaboltfromtheblue,breakingthefamily’sbeautifulvisionofXiaowen’sfuture.Butitdidn’tbringdownXiaowen’smother.FearingthatXiaowencouldn’tunderstandteachers’instructions,shewasalwayspatientlytheretohelphimwithlip-readingandguidehimtoexpresshimselfbravely.Thankstomom,Xiaowenhasgrownintoaself-reliantadultwhowouldn’treapwithoutsowing.Oneday,Xiaowenwatchedhismothersingingandsaidwithalisp,“Mom,youmusthavethemostbeautifulvoiceintheworld!”“Dear,howIwishyoucouldhearmommyandsingwithme...”MomeyedXiaowenwithtenderlove,atraceofsorrowflashingoverherface.Itwouldbejustalong,longtimebeforetheycouldpaythatmuchmoney.Mr.B,awell-knownblogger,isdevotedtocharitycauses.HeandhisteamhappenedtoseeXiaowen’spostsandtheyfollowedhimonlineanddecidedtohelphim.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:小文因先天性听力障碍,为了筹集高昂的耳蜗植入手术费用开始送外卖并拍摄日常vlog。他在送外卖过程中面临诸多困难,如路口听不到汽车喇叭声而险象环生,与顾客沟通不便被投诉等,但他依然乐观善良。他的家庭普通,母亲一直耐心帮助他成长。知名博主Mr.B看到小文的帖子后决定帮助他。伏笔及续写回应:伏笔:小文努力送外卖赚钱做耳蜗植入手术且费用高昂。续写回应:Mr.B告知他们要资助手术费用,解决了小文家的经济难题,使小文有了恢复听力的希望,推动故事走向转机。伏笔:小文在路口因听力问题有危险。续写回应:手术后小文能听到路口声音,意识到之前危险,凸显手术对他生活的重要改变,也体现出他重获听力后的感慨。伏笔:顾客因小文无法电话沟通而抱怨。续写回应:手术后小文能正常与顾客交流,改善了他的工作状况,从侧面反映出手术给他带来的积极影响,也展现了他生活的变化。伏笔:小文看到母亲唱歌表示母亲声音美但自己听不到。续写回应:手术后他听到母亲歌声,母子能一起唱歌,满足了之前的愿望,使亲情在经历磨难后更加深厚,温暖感人。伏笔:Mr.B致力于慈善事业且关注到小文。续写回应:他邀请小文母子并资助手术,体现了其慈善行为的落实,也使故事有了圆满结局,弘扬了乐于助人的精神。续写要点:
第一段:描述Mr.B告知小文母子资助消息时他们的反应,如惊喜、感激等。提及准备手术的相关事宜,如安排手术时间、医院协调等。第二段:讲述小文试用信号接收装置时的场景和感受,如听到声音的新奇、对周围环境声音的描述等。表达小文对未来生活的期待以及对Mr.B的感恩之情。情感线:
小文和母亲起初因手术费用高昂而忧愁无奈,但依然怀揣希望努力生活。得知Mr.B资助后转为惊喜与感激。手术前是紧张与期待,试用装置时则充满新奇与兴奋,对未来充满信心并感恩所有帮助过自己的人,情感从压抑逐步走向积极向上,体现了困境中得到帮助后的转变与希望。故事线:
Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews.“Wearegoingtopayforyourcochlearimplantationsurgerycompletely.”Xiaowenandhismomwerestunnedatfirst,thentearswelledupintheireyes.TheythankedMr.Bprofusely.Soon,thehospitalwasarranged,andXiaowenwaspreparedforthesurgery.Thedaybeforetheoperation,Xiaowenwasalittlenervousbutalsofullofanticipation.Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.Whenthedoctorturnedonthedevice,Xiaowenheardavarietyofsoundsforthefirsttime.Hecouldhearthebeepingofthehospitalequipment,thefootstepsinthecorridor,andthevoicesofpeopletalking.Hewassoexcitedandsaidtohismom,“Mom,Icanhear!Icanhearyourvoiceclearlynow.”Hismomhuggedhimtightly,cryingwithjoy.Xiaowenknewthathislifewouldbecompletelydifferentfromthenon,andhewasdeeplygratefultoMr.Bforthisnewleaseonlife.主旨升华句:“Inthefaceofadversity,ahelpinghandcanbethekeythatunlocksthedoortoanewandhopefulfuture.”(在困境面前,援助之手可以成为开启充满希望的新未来之门的钥匙。)“Kindness,likeabeamoflight,piercesthroughthedarknessofmisfortune,illuminatingthepathtoabetterlife.”(善良,如一束光,穿透不幸的黑暗,照亮通往美好生活的道路。)“Eveninthedeepestvalleyofdespair,thegiftofhopecantransformlivesandcreatemiraclesofgratitudeandrenewal.”(即使在绝望的最深谷,希望的礼物也能改变生活,创造感恩与新生的奇迹。)“Thepowerofcharityliesnotonlyinthematerialassistancebutalsointherestorationofdreamsandtherevivalofspirits.”(慈善的力量不仅在于物质援助,还在于梦想的重拾和精神的重振。)“Whenkindnessandneedconverge,asymphonyofhopeandchangeisorchestrated,playingamelodyofasecondchanceatlife.”(当善良与需求交汇时,希望与改变的交响乐奏响,奏响生命重生的旋律。)写作示范一:Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews.Xiaowen'smomcoveredhermouthinshock,andtearsstreameddownherface.Xiaowenwasalsovisiblyexcited,hiseyesshining.Mr.Bexplainedthedetailsoftheassistanceandassuredthemthateverythingwouldbetakencareof.Thefamilywasfilledwithgratitudeandrelief.Theyimmediatelystartedpreparingforthesurgery,withXiaowen'smomconstantlycomfortingandencouraginghim.Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.Asthesoundsenteredhisears,Xiaowenwasamazed.Hecouldheartherustlingoftheleavesoutsidethewindowandthesoftwhispersofthenurses.Heturnedtohismomandsaid,“Mom,it'slikeawholenewworld.Ican'twaittoexperiencemore.”Hismomsmiledthroughhertears,andXiaowenfeltanewfoundconfidence.Heknewthathewouldnowbeabletoliveamorenormallifeandwasdeterminedtomakethemostofthisopportunity.Healsomadeamentalnotetopayforwardthekindnesshehadreceived.写作示范二:Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegood消息.Xiaowen'sfacelitupwithdisbeliefandjoy.HismomhuggedMr.B,thankinghimoverandover.Thenextfewweekswereaflurryofactivityastheygotreadyforthesurgery.Xiaowenwasabitscaredbutalsoeagertochangehislife.Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.Xiaowen'seyeswidenedasheheardthesounds.Heheardtheclickingofthedoctor'spenandtheringingofadistantphone.Hesaidtohismom,“Mom,Icanfinallyhearyouclearly.Thisisamiracle.”Hismomheldhishandtightly.Xiaowenwasfilledwithasenseofhopeandpurpose.Herealizedthattherewerestillmanygoodpeopleintheworldandthathecouldnowfacelife'schallengeswithanewperspective.Hewaslookingforwardtoafuturewherehecouldcommunicatebetterandpursuehisdreams.读后续写参考答案Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews.Hesaidthatthey’dliketooffermoneyfortheimplantation.Surprisedbutgrateful,Xiaowendeclinedthegestureatfirst,sayingheshouldn’ttakeitwithoutareason.“Butthat’stheonlywaytorestoreyourhearing.Andyoucanreturnthatfavorafterwardsifyouinsist!”Mr.Bmaintainedthatthisuprig
温馨提示
- 1. 本站所有资源如无特殊说明,都需要本地电脑安装OFFICE2007和PDF阅读器。图纸软件为CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.压缩文件请下载最新的WinRAR软件解压。
- 2. 本站的文档不包含任何第三方提供的附件图纸等,如果需要附件,请联系上传者。文件的所有权益归上传用户所有。
- 3. 本站RAR压缩包中若带图纸,网页内容里面会有图纸预览,若没有图纸预览就没有图纸。
- 4. 未经权益所有人同意不得将文件中的内容挪作商业或盈利用途。
- 5. 人人文库网仅提供信息存储空间,仅对用户上传内容的表现方式做保护处理,对用户上传分享的文档内容本身不做任何修改或编辑,并不能对任何下载内容负责。
- 6. 下载文件中如有侵权或不适当内容,请与我们联系,我们立即纠正。
- 7. 本站不保证下载资源的准确性、安全性和完整性, 同时也不承担用户因使用这些下载资源对自己和他人造成任何形式的伤害或损失。
最新文档
- 兼职出纳合同范例
- 农田农园流转合同范例
- 养殖场管理员聘任合同范例
- 化妆品代加工厂合同范例
- 农村副产品买卖合同范本
- 与超市合伙合同范例
- 上海厂房合同范本
- 垫江石纹石膏板施工方案
- 高标准农田建设项目对当地农业发展的推动分析
- 高标准农田建设农业生产能力分析
- 语文-山东省2025年1月济南市高三期末学习质量检测济南期末试题和答案
- 服务项目质量保障体系及措施
- 抖音认证承诺函
- MFC Windows应用程序设计习题解答及上机实验
- 红色艺术欣赏诗词《七绝 赠父诗》
- 儿科学课件:营养性维生素D缺乏
- 男性乳腺发育护理查房课件
- ZF转向机安装及调整说明教学文稿
- 住房公积金经办人(专管员)登记申请表(2022新版)
- 如何唤醒孩子的内驱力PPT课件
- 叉车年度(首检)自检报告
评论
0/150
提交评论