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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inthedynamicandfast-pacedcityofMumbai,ayoungboynamedKabirlivedalivelylife.TheIndiancitywashisfavorite,filledwiththehustle(喧闹)ofbusystreets,thesweetsmellofvariousstreetfood,andthelaughteroffriendsastheywalkedhomefromschool.HelovedeverythingaboutMumbai—theseawindthatblewhishair,thebrightcolorsandfestivitiesthatbroughtjoytothecity,andthewarmthofhisfriends’smiles.Hehadadailyroutinewhichwasfullofexcitementandjoy,livinginharmonywiththecityhecalledhome.Asaphotographylover,heoftentookpicturesofthebeautifullandscapesofthecity.Onefatefulday,however,everythingwasabouttochange.Kabir’sfather,MrKapoor,receivedaletterofgreatsignificance.Itwasanofferforanewjobinacityfaraway,anopportunitythatcouldprovidehisfatherwithcareerprospectsbutalsowouldtakethemawayfromtheircurrenthomeandthefamiliarsurroundingsKabirlovedsomuch.ThenewsleftKabirfeelingconflictedashethoughtaboutleavingbehindhisbelovedMumbaiandallitswarmthandjoy.Thefamilysatdowntodiscusstheofferindetail.MrKapoorspokepassionately,“Thisnewopportunitymaybringaboutabetterfutureforourfamily.Thereisthepossibilitythatwewillhavenewexperiences,newadventures,andnewbeginnings.”Hismothernoddedandsaid,“Ican’tagreemore.”Kabirlistenedsilently,hismindwanderingbacktothefamiliarsightsandsoundsofMumbaithathehadgrownupwith.Astheyspoke,Kabirstruggledwiththedecision.HeknewhelovedMumbaiwithallhisheart,buthealsosawthepotentialinthisnewopportunity.Heknewthatchangewasunavoidableandthatitbroughtthepotentialforgrowthandadventurewithit.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Thenextday,Kabirpickeduphiscamera,keepinghisfather’sadviceinmind.文章大意:在孟买生活的男孩Kabir热爱这座城市的一切,这里充满活力与欢乐,他日常喜欢拍摄城市美景。然而父亲收到一份远方城市的工作邀请,这意味着全家要搬离孟买。家庭会议上父母对新机会满怀期待,Kabir虽内心纠结不舍,但也明白改变可能带来成长与冒险。他在对熟悉的热爱与未知的机遇间挣扎,最终要做出一个影响全家的决定。伏笔及回应:伏笔:Kabir是摄影爱好者,常拍城市景观。回应:续写中他带着相机去记录孟买,作为告别与纪念。伏笔:新工作在远方城市,将改变全家生活。回应:续写中全家开始为搬离做准备,适应即将到来的变化。伏笔:Kabir热爱孟买的各种美好。回应:续写中他在告别孟买时流露出深深的不舍与眷恋。伏笔:父亲提及新机会有新体验等。回应:续写中Kabir开始期待新城市的生活,思考新的可能。伏笔:Kabir听父母讨论时默默思考。回应:续写中他在行动上体现出接受决定并积极面对的态度。续写要点:
第一段:Kabir决定接受搬家,他开始和家人一起整理物品,打包行李。他看着熟悉的房间,心中五味杂陈,但也有对未来的一丝期待。他拿着相机在孟买的大街小巷穿梭,拍摄下那些曾经最爱的角落,像是在和这座城市郑重告别。
第二段:到达新城市后,Kabir被眼前不同的景象所吸引。尽管还是会时常想念孟买,但他也积极地去探索新环境,结交新朋友。他用相机记录新城市的点点滴滴,发现这里也有着独特的魅力,逐渐适应并融入了新生活。情感线:起初,Kabir对要离开孟买充满了不舍与纠结,这座城市承载了他太多美好的回忆。当决定接受搬家后,在告别孟买的过程中,眷恋与伤感交织。到了新城市,虽仍有对旧地的思念,但好奇与期待逐渐占据上风,开始积极面对新环境,情感从消极的不舍向积极的接纳转变。故事线:Kabir在孟买快乐生活,因父亲工作变动面临搬家抉择,决定接受后与孟买告别,来到新城市,从初到时的陌生到慢慢探索发现新城市的魅力,最终融入其中开启新生活。主旨升华句:Changeislikeadoor,closingbehindusthefamiliar,andopeningaheadtheunknownyetfullofpossibilities.(改变就像一扇门,在身后关闭熟悉的一切,在前方开启未知却充满可能的世界。)Embracingchangemeanssteppingoutofourcomfortzoneandembarkingonajourneyofself-discoveryandgrowth.(拥抱改变意味着走出舒适区,踏上自我发现与成长之旅。)Althoughleavingthepastishard,itisinnewbeginningsthatwefindthechancetorewriteourstory.(虽然离开过去很难,但在新的开始中我们才有机会重写自己的故事。)Thepathofchangemaybewinding,butitleadsustoabroaderandmorecolorfulhorizon.(改变的道路或许曲折,但它引领我们走向更广阔、更绚丽的天地。)Whenweacceptchangewithanopenheart,weopenourselvestoaworldofunexpectedwonders.(当我们敞开心扉接受改变时,我们便向一个充满意外惊喜的世界敞开了自己。)写作示范一:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Hetoldhisparentsthathewaswillingtomove.Thefollowingdayswereaflurryofactivity.Kabirhelpedhisparentspackuptheirbelongings,hisheartheavyeachtimeheplacedaniteminabox.Buthealsorememberedhisfather'swordsandpickeduphiscamera.HeroamedthestreetsofMumbaionelasttime,photographingtheoldtempleswiththeirintricatecarvings,thebustlingmarketplacesfilledwithpeoplehagglingoverprices,andtheseathatstretchedoutendlessly.Thesepictureswouldbehispreciousmemoriesofthecity.Thenextday,Kabirandhisfamilysetoffforthenewcity.Astheydrove,Kabirwatchedthescenerychange.Whentheyarrived,hewasgreetedbyamoderncityscapewithtallskyscrapersandwideboulevards.Hefeltabitlostatfirst,butthenhestartedexploring.HemetaboynamedRajintheneighborhoodpark.Rajshowedhimaround,andKabirusedhiscameratocapturethenewsights.Herealizedthatthisnewcityalsohaditsowncharm,andhewasreadytoembracethisnewchapterofhislife.写作示范二:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Heacceptedthemovewithamixtureofsadnessandanticipation.Hespentthedaysayinggoodbyetohisfriends,promisingtokeepintouch.Thenhestartedpackinghiscameraequipmentcarefully.Heknewhewantedtodocumentthistransition.Hetookpicturesofhisschool,thestreetwhereheplayedcricketwithhispals,andthesmallcornershopwhereheboughthisfavoritecandies.Thenextday,Kabirgotintothecarwithhisfamily.Alongtheway,helookedatthephotoshehadtakeninMumbai.Whentheyreachedthenewcity,itwasawholenewworld.Theairsmelleddifferent,andthesoundswereunfamiliar.ButKabirwasdeterminedtomakethebestofit.Hewentforawalkinthenewcitycenter.There,hesawagroupofkidshisagedoingastreetartproject.Hejoinedthem,takingpicturesandmakingnewfriends.Heunderstoodthatchangewasnottobefearedbuttobeembracedasitbroughtnewopportunitiestolearnandgrow.参考范文:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Withaheavyheart,heagreedtomovetothenewcity.However,MrKapoorcouldsenseKabir’sreluctancefromhisexpression,amixtureofsadnessandhesitation.TakingKabir’shand,hereassuredhim,“Wewillcomebacktovisitwheneverwehavethechance.”Inanefforttocomfortherson,MrsKapoorproposedthatKabirusehiscameratocapturesomepreciousmem
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