北师大版高三英语一轮复习类型二第1讲续写门话题个人成长课件

第三部分写作专题突破类型二读后续写第1讲续写热门话题个人成长阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)WhenIwasinmiddleschool，mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest．Isaidnowithoutthinking．Ididnotlovewriting．MyfamilycamefromBrazil，soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage．WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay，whereIplayedalltheparts．Noonelaughedharderthanhedid．So，whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply：“BecauseIloveyourstories．Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself，Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis．”Encouragedbyhiswords，Iagreedtogiveitatry．IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject．PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18，1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming．Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse'smouth．Notabrilliantidea，butfunny；andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice．Whatdidthehorsethink，ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately．Igottired．Ihaddoubts．Iwantedtoquit．But，likeRevere'shorse，Ikeptgoing．Iworkedhard．Icheckedmyspelling．Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar．Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary．Ievenreadafewofthem．WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher，hereadit，laughedoutloud，andsaid，“Great．Now，writeitagain．”Iwroteitagain，andagainandagain．WhenIfinallyfinishedit，thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting．IfIdidn'twin，Iwouldn'tcare．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Afewweekslater，whenIalmostforgotthecontest，therecamethenews．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导：Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我得知获奖后的激动心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也为我感到高兴，并回顾参赛的心路历程。第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写我表达对老师的感谢，老师会再次给予认可和鼓励。最后，可适当进行升华，不要轻易说不可能。范文佳作：A

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presentation．Gigglinginstantlywithabroadsmilespreadingonhisface，hetoldmethathewasproudofmywonderfulperformance．Itwasatthatmomentthatawarmsurgeofstreamswashedthroughmybody，andtheimageofthehorseemergedinmymind，encouragingmetocontinuewriting．Indeed，Igotatasteofvictoryandlearnedtopursuemydreamwithperseverance，whateverdifficultiesmightarise．话题佳句：1．Hardthoughitis，thereisnothingmorevaluablethanthesenseofachievementyougetfromchallengingyourself．虽然很困难，但没有什么比挑战自己获得的成就感更有价值的了。2．Takingadeepbreathtocollectmyself，IdecidedtorisefromwhereIfell．深吸一口气让自己镇定下来，我决定从我跌倒的地方站起来。3．Agreatweightoffhismind，Tonyhadneverfeltsorelieved．卸下了沉重的负担，托尼从没有像现在这样如释重负。4．Lifeisfullofsmilesandtears．Onlybyacceptingthembothcanweenjoyourlife．生活充满了微笑和泪水。只有接受它们两者，我们才能享受我们的生活。5．Atthemoment，Ilearnedwhatmydadmeantandbecamewillingtocontributemoretothehousehold．Ididn'tfeelconfusedanymoreaboutwhyIshouldhandinmyearnings，asitwasindeedmyresponsibilitytosupportthewholefamily．那一刻，我明白了父亲的意思，并愿意为家庭做更多的贡献。我不再对为什么我应该上交我的收入感到困惑，因为养活整个家庭确实是我的责任。6．Thismadememoved，andIwouldtrymybesttohelpmorepeopleinthefutureandbringwarmthtomorepeople．这让我很感动，以后我会尽我最大的努力去帮助更多的人，给更多的人带来温暖。7．Thisexperiencemademerealizethatthepersonswhoyouaregratefultoarealwaysthereanddon'tignorethem!这次经历使我意识到，你所要感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽视他们。8．Throughtheaccident，Icametorealizethevalueoflifeandtheimportanceofobeyingtrafficrules．Afterall，nothingismorepreciousthanlife．通过这次事故，我开始认识到生命的价值和遵守交通规则的重要性。毕竟，没有什么比生命更珍贵。9．Atthirteen，IrealizedthatI'dalwaysbecomethewinnerifIwantedsomethingbadlyandworkedforit．Icanbethemasterofmyowndestiny．十三岁的时候，我意识到如果我非常想要某样东西并为之努力，我总是会成为胜利者。我可以是自己命运的主宰。10．Ineverforgotthefeelingofpowerlessnesswhenfacedwiththeinjuredintheaccident．Itwasthataccid