2024-2025学年新教材高中英语UNIT6TheadmirableSectionⅢ表达作文巧升格教师用书教案北师大版必修第二册

PAGE1-UNIT6Theadmirable本单元写作项目是写一篇概要。[基本框架]1．开头(beginning)——点明主旨2．主体(body)——概况要点3．结尾(ending)——简要总结[常用词块]1．attachgreatimportanceof强调……重要性2．againstone'swill违反某人的意志3．oneafteranother相继地4．takeacorrectattitudeto/towards对……抱有正确的看法5．attractone'sattention引起某人的留意6．makethebestof充分利用[常用语句]★精彩开头1．Theauthorhighlightstheimportanceofencouragementforstudents.作者强调了激励学生的重要性。2．Thepassagearguesthatwemustnotonlyvaluethosewhocomefirstorarethebestinanyfieldbuttheotherswhoseeffortpushthemtosuccess.文章认为，我们不仅要重视那些在任何领域都是第一位或最好的人，而且要重视那些努力促使他们胜利的人。★正文佳句1．Peoplewhotalkandsingtoplantshavenomentalproblemsatall,accordingtoanagriculturalexpert.据一位农业专家说，跟植物说话唱歌的人根本没有精神问题。2．LaughterYogawasinventedbyMadanKataria,adoctorinMumbai,India.Laughterincludesforcedlaughterandreallaughter.Theybothleadtoafeelingofhappiness.笑瑜伽是由印度孟买的医生马丹·卡塔利亚独创的。笑包括强迫笑和真正的笑。它们都能带来华蜜感。★余味结尾1．Luckily,thereisalotonecandotomaketimeawayfromworkthoughittakessomeeffort,butanyway,it'sworthwhiletohaveatry.幸运的是，虽然须要付出一些努力，但是人们可以做许多事情来腾出时间离开工作，但是无论如何，值得一试。2．But,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.但是，一些科学家认为，接触一些泥土有助于我们的免疫系统。阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Theproductionofcoffeebeansisahuge,profitablebusiness,but,unfortunately,full­sunproductionistakingovertheindustryandbringingaboutalotofdamage.Thechangeinhowcoffeeisgrownfromshade­grownproductiontofull­sunproductionendangerstheveryexistenceofcertainanimals,andevendisturbstheworld'secologicalbalance.Onalocallevel,thedamagetotheforestsrequiredbyfull­sunfieldsaffectsthearea'sanimals.Theshadeoftheforesttreesprovidesahomeforbirdsandotherspecies(物种)thatdependonthetrees'flowersandfruits.Full­suncoffeegrowersdestroythisforesthome.Asaresult,manyspeciesarequicklydyingout.Onamoregloballevel，thedestructionoftherainforestforfull­suncoffeefieldsalsothreatens(威逼)humanlife.Medicalresearchoftenmakesuseoftheforests'plantandanimallife，andthedestructionofsuchspeciescouldpreventresearchersfromfindingcuresforcertaindiseases.Inaddition，newcoffee­growingtechniquesarepoisoningthewaterlocally，andeventuallytheworld'sgroundwater.Bothlocallyandglobally，thecontinuedspreadoffull­suncoffeeplantations(种植园)couldmeanthedestructionoftherainforestecology.Thelossofshadetreesisalreadycausingaslightchangeintheworld'sclimate,andstudiesshowthatthelossofoxygen­givingtreesalsoleadstoairpollutionandglobalwarming.Moreover,thenewgrowingtechniquesarecontributingtoacidicsoilconditions.Itisobviousthatthewaymuchcoffeeisgrownaffectsmanyaspectsoflife,fromthelocalenvironmenttotheglobalecology.Butconsumersdohaveachoice.Theycanpurchaseshade­growncoffeewheneverpossible,althoughatahighercost.【参考范文】Full­sunproductionofcoffeebeanshascauseddamagetosomespecies,eventheecology.(要点1)First,itdestroysthehabitatsoflocalspecies,andevencausestheirextinction.(要点2)Moreover，withwaterpoisonedandfewerspeciesformedicalresearch,people'slifeisseverelyaffected.(要点3)Thedestructionoftherainfore