Unit1PeopleofAchievementUsingLanguage作文评讲课课件高中英语人教版选择性

英语家作：1.完成英语周报第二期，C和D篇阅读不用做。2.写一篇英语作文“介绍你钦佩的人”，80个单词以上。本次作文出现的问题：1.抄袭现象严重。2.没有分三段来写。3.作文没有新意。写屠呦呦、爱因斯坦、袁隆平的人很多。4.作文的逻辑性不强。5.不交或者没写完整。Writeanintroductionaboutsomeoneyouadmire.admirev.敬佩；钦佩；欣赏

admirationn.钦佩admirableadj.令人敬佩的1.Choosethepersonyouaregoingtowriteabout.Itshouldbesomeoneyouthinkisgreatinsomeway.Itcanbeanordinaryperson,suchasaparent,arelative,orafriend.2.Mayalistofthingsthatneedtobeincludedinyourintroduction.3.Useyournotestowriteyourintroductionandsumuphowyoufeelaboutthisperson.ThepersonIadmiremostis_______(人）.Bornin_______(地点/时间）,_______（人），whoisoneofthegreatest_______(职业）,showedapassionfor___________(方面）Aftergraduatingfrom__________(学校）,he/shespentmostofhis/hertimeindoing/on___________.Despitemanydifficulties,he/shemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessin_________,whichmadehim_____________(成就）.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.

我最崇拜的人是_______(人）.出生于_______(地点/时间）,_______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一,表现出对___________(方面）的热情。

在__________(学校）毕业后,他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）.

为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。写英雄/伟人/敬佩的人的模板ThepersonIadmiremostisYuanLongping.BorninBeijingin

1930,YuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestscientist,showedapassionforresearchingrice.AftergraduatingfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege,hespentmostofhistimeonagriculturalteachingandresearch.Despitemanydifficulties,hemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessinbreedinghybridrice,whichimprovedthericeproductionandhelpedridtheworldofhunger.Soheisknownasthefatherofhybridrice.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.全文：110小作文衔接词

第一点：Firstofall/Firstly/Firstandforemost/Aboveall/Tostartwith第二点：Secondly/Moreimportantly/What’smore第三点：Thirdly/Finally/Lastbutnotleast/Inaddition/Besides总结：Inconclusion/Tosumup/Allinall小作文高分短语积累11.sb.haveapassionforsth.某人对某事热爱2.sb.showrespecttosb.向某人表示敬意3.notonly...but(also)...不仅...并且...4.tryone’sbesttodosth.尽某人最大努力去做某事5.sb.beinterestedindoingsth./sth.某人对某物感兴趣小作文高分句式积累1

1.Itiswellknownthat+完整句子“众所周知，........”例：ItiswellknownthatZhongNanshanisagenunienationalhero.众所周知，钟南山是一位真正的民族英雄。2.Thereisnodoubtthat+完整句子“毫无疑问，......”例：Thereisnodoubtthathealthisbetterthanwealth.毫无疑问，健康胜于财富。3.Itis+形容词+(forsb.)+todosth.例：Nowadays,itisconvenientforpeopletopaybillswiththemobilephone.现在人们用手机支付账单非常方便。

ThepersonIadmire(most)

is

SunYingsha.Itiswellknownthatsheisayoungandtalentedtabletennisplayer.Shehasapassionfortabletennis.

Therearesome

reasonswhyIadmireSunYingsha.

Firstly,shehasobtainedanumberof

achievements

atsuchayoungage,winningmanytitlesandmedals.Herskillsandspeedonthetableareamazing.

Secondly,SunYingshaisfamousforherpositiveattitudeandsportsmanship.Shealwaysshowsrespecttoheropponentsandplaysfairly,whichisvitalinsports.

Inconclusion,SunYingshaisnotonlyagreatathletebutalsoagoodrolemodel.Herdiligentandfriendlypersonality

inspiremetotrymybesttodoeverything.

我最敬佩的人是孙颖莎。众所周知，她是一位年轻且有天赋的乒乓球运动员。她酷爱乒乓球。

我敬佩孙颖莎的原因有以下几点。首先，她在如此年轻的时候就取得了许多成就，赢得了许多头衔和奖牌。她在台上的技术和速度令人惊叹。其次，孙颖莎以她积极的态度和体育精神而闻名。她总是尊重对手，公平竞争，这在体育运动中至关重要。

总之，孙颖莎不仅是一个伟大的运动员，也是一个好榜样。她的勤奋和友好的个性激励我尽最大努力做好每一件事。

ThepersonIadmire(most)ismygrandmother.Sheisakindandwisewomanwhohaslivedthroughmanychallengeswithgraceanddetermination.

Mygrandmothertaughtmetheimportanceof

hardworkandnevergivingup.Despiteherage,shecontinuestolearnnewthingsandinspireeveryonearoundher.

Hergentlesmileandwarmhugsmakeeverydaybrighter,andIhopetobeasstrongandlovingassheiswhenIgro