Unit1AnewstartDevelopingideasWriting课件高中英语

Period5Writingajournalentry

Developingideas目录Lead-inPre-writingFast-readingWhile-writingPost-writingHowdidfreshmenfeelontheirfirstdayatseniorhigh?(writedownasmanywordsasyoucantodescribetheirfeelings.)

Lead-inhomesick、frustrated、upset、disapointed、nervous、inpanic、eagerness、pleased、withbutterfliesinmystomach...Reviewthefirstpassageandthinkabouthowtowriteajournalentry?

Lead-inStructure?Person?Tense?Order?Howtowriteajournalentry?

第一人称一般过去式时间顺序Lead-inBeginning/IntroductionMainBodyMainBodyEnding/ConclusionHergeneralimpressionofthefirstweek(Beginning/

Introduction)Anenjoyableclass(Main

Body)After-schoolactivities(Main

Body)Herplanfortomorrow(Ending/Conclusion)Dividthejournalentryintofourpartsandgetthemainideaofeachpart.Fast-readingReadthejournalentryandanswerthequestions.

Whatisthepassageabout?Whathappenedinherphysicsclass?Whatdidshedoafterclass?It’sabouttheauthor’sexperiencesduringthefirstdayatseniorhigh.Shecouldn’ttakenotesofeverythingthephysicsteachersaid,buttheteachertoldhertostoptakingnotesandjustlisten.Hesaidthatthinkingwasmoreimportantthannote-takingandmemorising.Shehurriedtotheschoolskateboardingclub,andbumpedintoagirlontheway.Thenshetriedskateboardingattheclubandmakefriendswiththegirlshebumpedintoearlier.Pre-writingExciteddisappointedsorrylookforwardtolaughGeneralimpressionoftheschoolInphysicsclassAfterclassTomorrowevening·cometoanendaroundthecornercouldn’ttakeeverythingdownstrugglewith...·hurriedtotheschollskateboardingclubbumpintoagirlsaysorrytomakefriendswiththegirlwatchafilmRetelltheexperiencesaboutthefirstweekwithexpressionsinthepassage.Yourownexperiencesoffirstweekatseniorhigh.

English/math/Chinese/chemistry/physics/history/politics/psychology/PE...WhenI...bedoing....whenexcited/confident/embarrassed/curious/inpanic/stressful..badmintonclub/dramaclub/musicclub/debateclub/Englishcorner...AnenjoyableclassHowImadeanewfriend?MyimpressionofthefirstweekAfter-schoolactivities3124While-writing1.atlast__________________________2.duringclass__________________________3.giveaspeech__________________________4.callone'sname__________________________5.loseheart__________________________6.speakupinclass__________________________7.signupfor__________________________8.abusyschedule__________________________9.attheendofthefirstweek__________________________10.hangout闲逛：在某个地方消磨时间，特别是与朋友一起◆写作训练Ⅰ.【参考词块】翻译下列词块。终于/最终在课堂上发言/做演讲叫某人的名字灰心在课上大胆发言报名参加紧张的日程安排（开学）第一周结束的时候对开学第一周的印象：1.时间过得真快!明天就是周末了。_____________________________________________________________________2.开学第一周发生了很多有趣的事。(happentosb)________________________________________duringthefirstweekatseniorhigh.一堂有意思的课：3.尤其令我印象深刻的是周二的英语课。(beimpressedby…)___________________________________________________________________4.老师让我们用英语介绍一下自己。(asksbtodosth)____________________________________________________________________5.我害怕在一群人面前讲话。(befrightenedtodosth)_____________________________________________________________________6.在老师的鼓励下，我最终鼓起勇气表达自己。(pickupthecouragetodosth)_____________________________________________________________________Ⅱ.【实用表达】翻译下列句子。Howtimeflies!

It'sgoingtobetheweekendtomorrow.Manyinterestingthingshappenedtome.Iwasespecially

impressedby

theEnglishclassonTuesday.OurteacheraskedustointroduceourselvesinEnglish.Iwasfrightenedtospeakinfrontofagroupofpeople.Withmyteacher'sencouragement,

Ifinallypickedupthecouragetoexpressmyself.课外活动：7.课余时间，我会参加各种各样的课外活动。(I'dliketo…)Inmysparetime,________________________________________________8.为了提高口语能力，我决定加入英语俱乐部。(decidetodosth)______________________________________________________________怎样交到了新朋友：9.她主动帮我纠正发音。(offertodosth)______________________________________________________________10.我们都对摄影感兴趣，这让我感到很惊讶。(Itsurprisessbthat…,share)______________________________________________________________结尾：11.我期待着精彩的高中生活。(lookforwardtosth)________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardto

a

wonderfullifeatseniorhigh.Itsurprisedmethatwesharedaninterestinphotography.Sheofferedtocorrectmypronunciation..Inordertoimprovemyspeakingskills,

IdecidedtojointheEnglishClub.I'dliketotakepartinvariousafter-schoolactivities.Nowwriteajournalentryaboutyourfirst-weekexperienceatseniorhigh.Usetheexpressionsabovetohelpyou.While-writingFriday8SeptemberHowtimeflies!Ican'tbelievethefirstweekiscomingtoanend.Thingsaregoingquitewellandthereareoneortwothingsinparticularthathaveleftadeepimpressiononme.TheEnglishclassonThursdaywasunforgettable.Duringtheclass,wewereaskedtogiveashortspeechaboutthefirstdayatseniorhigh.Iwassecretlyhopingthatnobodywouldnoticeme,whensuddenlyheardmynamecalled.Istoodup,blushing(涨红了脸),withnothingcomingoutofmymouth.“Don’tbeshy!Justthinkofyourfirstdayatseniorhighandsaywhatevercomestomind.”Theteacher‘swordsmademerelaxedabit,andIfinallybegantosaysomething.ltwashard,butitdidn'tfeelbad.Afterschoolthatday,IdecidedtogototheEnglishClubtofurtherpractisemyEnglish.lwastryingt