读后续写微写作之情绪描写 Ways of Describing Emotions 课件-高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

读后续写微写作之情绪描写WaysofDescribingEmotionsLearningObjectives:Bytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto:1.Remembersomeexpressionsrelatedtofeelings.2.Describeone’sfeelingsvividly(生动地)bytechnique“show,don’ttell”3.writethepassagetoshowthefirstdayofyourfeelingsatseniorhigh.

BeforegoingtoschoolArrivingatschoolDuringtheclassAftertheclassexcitedcuriousnervousembarrassedrelaxedconfidentWhat’sMengHao’sfeelings?Hewasexcited.Hewascurious.Hewasnervous.……Relytoomuchontelling!!!过度依赖陈述Show！√Tell！×ShutyourreadersoutofthehouseInviteyourreadersintothehouseSheisinlove“He’splantingatree?”“I’dhelphim,buthesayshehastodothishimself."

Iwhispered.

"lsita…"Thewordsstuckinmythroat,

andthenextthinglknowhe'sholdingmyhand,lookingrightintomyeyes.Myheartstopped.Itjuststoppedbeating.Andforthefirsttimeinmylife,Ihadthatfeeling.Liketheworldismovingall

aroundyou,allbeneathyou,allinsideyou,andyou'refloating.

Floatinginmidair.

Andtheonlythingkeepingyoufromdrifting

awayistheotherperson'seyes.They'reconnectedtoyoursbysomeinvisiblephysicalforce,andtheyholdyoufastwhiletherestoftheworldswirlsandtwirlsandfallscompletely

away.VOICE

BODY

ENVIRONMENT

FACE

Step1Face+Body+Voice+EnvironmentShow！Don'ttell！Haveaclearandvividpictureinyourmind.AfaceinfearFACE:Drawhisface恐惧让他毛发直竖(makeone’shairstandonend)Thefearmadehishairstandonend.他惊恐地瞪大了(wide)双眼。Heopenedhiseyeswideinpanic他脸色变得苍白(pale/white)。Hisfaceturnedpale.BODY:Makeyourbodymove他感到双腿发软Hefelthislegsturnedtojelly.他全身止不住的颤抖Hetrembleduncontrollably.VOICE:Makesomenoise.Ifeltsoscaredthatmykneesfeltweak.“什么？”他发出(letout)一声恐怖(terror)的尖叫(scream)。“Whattttt?!”heletoutascreamofterror.Environment:Giveitasetting(背景)Ifeltsoscaredthatmykneesfeltweak.老师让我们挨个上去自我介绍Theteacheraskedustointroduceourselvesonebyone.FACE

BODY

VOICEENVIRONMENT

Showthepicture!makehishairstandonend/openhiseyeswide/faceturnedpale.Hislegsturnedtojelly/HetrembledletoutascreamofterrorTheteacheraskedustointroduceourselves句式1:sbbeso+情绪adj+that从句

某人如此...以至于...letoutascreamofterror我太害怕了以至于我发出恐怖的尖叫声。IwassofrightenedthatIletoutascreamofterror.Iwassoafraidthat

I

lowered

my

head观察例句，总结句型hislegsturnedtojelly/HetrembledTheteacheraskedustointroduceourselvesScaredandnervous,Itrembleduncontrollablywhentheteacheraskedustointroduceourselvesonebyone.句式2:形容词1+形容词2,sbdidsth.

(感到)...和...,某人做了某事。当老师叫我们挨个上去自我介绍时，我感到紧张和恐惧不受控制的颤抖着。(Body+Enviroment)Scared

and

nervous,he

let

out

a

scream

of

terror.观察例句，总结句型makehishairstandonend/openhiseyeswide/faceturnedpale.hislegsturnedtojelly/HetrembledScaredandnervous,Itrembleduncontrollablywithmyhairstandingonend.技巧3:with+n/代+Ving，sbdidsth.

有……,某人做了某事Scared

and

nervous，he

let

out

a

scream

of

terrorwithtearsrunningdownhisfaceuncontrollably.感到紧张和恐惧，我不受控制的颤抖着，汗毛直立。(Body+Face)观察例句，总结句型我的脸变得惨白，全身止不住的颤抖，我感觉我双腿发软。Withmyfaceturningpale,

ItrembleduncontrollablyandIfeltmylegsturningtojelly.句式3:with+n/代+Ving/Ved/todo/介词短语，sbdidsth.

有……,某人做了某事(Voice)“Noooo!”Iletoutascreamofterror(Environment)

aswewereaskedtointroduceourselvesonebyone.(Face)Withmyfaceturningpale,(Body)ItrembleduncontrollablyandIfeltmylegsturnedtojelly.(Voice)“Noooo!”Iletoutascreamofterror(Environment)

aswewereaskedtointroduceourselvesonebyone.(Face)Withmyfaceturningpale,(Body)IwassoscaredthatItrembleduncontrollablyandIfeltmylegsturningtojelly.YesNoIfeltnervousPractice:Hewasexcited.FACEBODYVOICEENVIRONMENT

语言素材：Face眼睛--lightup亮起来嘴巴--smilefromeartoear

咧嘴笑语言素材：Bodyjumptoone’sfeet跳起来punchtheair举拳欢呼语法结构：with+n+doing;adjandadj,SVO;so…that...Expressionsandgrammaryoucanuse语言素材：Voiceletoutacryofjoy发出喜悦的欢呼Practice:HewasexcitedWithmyeyeslightingupwithdelight(face),Ijumpedtomyfeet,punchingtheairwithfists(body)asallday’sclasseshavebeenfinished.