2024-2025学年新教材高中英语UNIT5LANGUAGESAROUNDTHEWORLD表达作文巧升格学案含解析新人教版必修第一册

UNIT5LANGUAGESAROUNDTHEWORLD询问博客本单元的写作项目是写一则博客，询问英语学习方面的问题。[基本框架]1．开头(beginning)提出问题2．主体(body)询问详细问题3．结尾(ending)表明迫切心情和感谢[常用词块]1．developone'sinterest培育某人的爱好2．improveone'sreadingability提高某人的阅读实力3．formthe/ahabitofreading养成阅读习惯4．enlarge/expandone'svocabulary扩大某人的词汇量5．practiseone'soral/spokenEnglish练习某人的口语6．expressoneselfinEnglishfluently用英语流畅地表达自己7．improvewritingskills提高写作实力8．takepartintheEnglishCorner参与英语角9．haveagoodcommandof...精通……10．haveagoodknowledgeofEnglish通晓英语11．fallinlovewith爱上……12．makegreatprogress取得很大进步[常用语句]1．询问问题Iwouldliketoknowwhetheryoucanprovidemewithinformationregarding...Iwishtorequestinformationabout...2．交代自己所面临的问题Ihavemetsometroublein...Ifinditdifficultto...Idon'tknowhowto...3．恳求对方给出建议Wouldyouliketo...sothat...?Wouldyoumind...?Wouldyoubesokindtotellme...?Couldyouplease...?Iwouldappreciateitif...Iwouldbeforevergratefulifyoucouldsendmeinformationconcerning...4．展望自己获得建议后可能会取得的进步I'msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.IthinkIwillsurely...withyouradvice.Inthenearfuture，IamsureIcan...5．表明获得信息的急迫心情Lookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.Yourattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.Iamwaitingforyourquickreply.Thankyouinadvanceforyourcooperation/assistance.假设你是李华，你的英国网友Jack正在学习汉语，他在博客中询问如何提高汉语写作实力。请你用英语给他回帖，就如何提高汉语写作实力给他提些建议。内容要点如下：1．多读别人的文章；2．多写多练；3．不要胆怯 出错。留意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【学生习作】Hi，Jack，Iamsosorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleimprovingyourChinesewriting.I'mverygladtoofferyousomesuggestions.①Readingotherpeople'sarticlesisagoodwaytoimprovewriting.IfyoureadplentyofgoodChinesearticles，youwilllearnhowskillfulwritersuseChinesetoexpressthemselvesandpresentinformationinanexcellentway.Thusyoucanimproveyourabilitytousethelanguage.Likeotherskills，youshouldimproveyourwritingbypracticing.Keepingadiaryisagoodidea.②Thebeginnersmaymakemistakeswhiletheywritetheirarticles.Butdon'tworry.Findingoutwhyyoumadethemistakeswillhelpyouavoidthesamemistakesandenableyoutowritebetter.③Hopefully，theadvicewouldbehelpfultoyou.[点评]1.①句可变换形式，避开与后文句式重复。2.②句可用Itis＋adj.＋that从句重写此句。3.③句基础词汇helpful可换为高级词汇。【升格作文】Hi!Jack，Iamsosorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleimprovingyourChinesewriting.I'mmorethangladtoofferyousomesuggestions.Averygoodwaytoimprovewritingistoreadotherpeople'sarticles.IfyoureadplentyofgoodChinesearticles,youwilllearnhowskillfulwritersuseChinesetoexpressthemselvesandpresentinformationinanexcellentway.Thusyoucanimproveyourabilitytousethelanguage.Likeotherskills,youshouldimproveyourwritingbypracticing.Keepingadiaryisagoodidea.Itisnaturalthatthebeginnersmakemistakeswhilewriting.Butdon'tworry.Findingoutwhyyoumadethemistakeswillhelpyouavoidthesamemistakesandenableyoutowritebetter.Hopefully,theadvicewouldbebeneficialtoyou.假设你叫李华，是某中学的一名高一学生，你们班同学就英语学习现状进行了探讨，发觉有许多问题。请你依据下面的提示在网上写一篇询问博客，希望得到网友的帮助。同学们发觉的问题有：1．学习没爱好；2．单词难记；3．说英语怕出错；4．阅读生词多；5．写作难下笔。请参考以上提示，提出至少三个自己在英语学习中遇到的问题。留意：1．词数80左右；2．开头已给出，但不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。Hello，everyone，I'mwritingtoaskyouforadviceonsomedifficultiesthatwehavemetinourEnglishstudies._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]Hello，everyone，I'mwritingtoaskyouforadviceonsomedifficultiesthatwehavemetinourEnglishstudies.Yousee，sinceweenteredseniorhighschool，Englishhasbecomemoreandmoredifficultandsomeofmyclassmates，includingme，havelostinterestinit.AndithasprovedtobeatoughjobtotrytoremembersomanynewEnglishwords.Forfearofmakingmistakes，inEnglishclasswedon'twanttospeakEnglish.What'sworse，whenreadingEnglisharticles，wemeetsomewordsthatwedon'tknow，whichmakesithardforustounder