热点 14 健康 2020-2021学年中考英语最具热度话题作文（教师版）

热点14健康健康无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来很多快乐。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：健康。【预测题目】（一）健康饮食一直是人们关注的问题。假如你是李华，你将在下周英语课上介绍HealthyDiet这本书，并作健康饮食的呼吁。请你根据以下提示与要求，写一篇发言稿。健康饮食是什么每天吃不同种类的健康食物。健康饮食的目的◆养成良好生活习惯；◆保持生活健康愉快。建议◆少盐少油，多吃蔬菜和水果；◆(你的两点建议)注意：1.词数100个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。HealthyDietGoodafternooneveryone.TodayIamheretogiveyouatalkabouthealthydiet.IhavereadabooknamedHealthyDiet._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HealthyDietGoodafternooneveryone.TodayIamheretogiveyouatalkabouthealthydiet.IhavereadabooknamedHealthyDiet.Asweallknow,healthydiethasbeenpeople’sconcern.Thisbookmainlytellsuswhathealthydietis.Healthydietisactuallyeatingvariouskindsoffoodthatdogoodtoourbody.Wechoosetoeatinahealthywaybecauseitplaysanimportantpartindevelopinggoodlivinghabits.What’smore,eatinginahealthywayalsomeanslivingahappylife.Inthisbook,itisstronglyrecommendedthatweshouldhavemorefruitandvegetablesandfoodcookedwithlesssaltandsugar.AsfarasIamconcerned,itwouldbeagoodideaifwedon’teatjunkfoodtoooften.Besides，Iadvisepeopletodosportsregularlysothatitbenefitsourhealthtoo.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿，题目要求是根据提示要点介绍“HealthyDiet”这本书，呼吁大家要健康饮食。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；100词左右；切忌透露真实校名、姓名等任何个人信息。2.写作指导：由于本文是一篇发言稿，所以主语为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。写作时，首先要承接开头，引出话题。针对健康饮食这本书介绍健康饮食的定义、目的、建议，然后提出自己的建议（至少两点）。不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。（二）健康对每个人来说非常重要，但很多人不知道该如何保持健康。请根据以下图片及提示词语简要介绍如何才能保持健康。（补充一两个建议）80词以上。提示词：important,need,feelactive,abalanced（均衡的）diet,begoodfor,snack,junkfood,domoreexerciseAllofuswanttobehealthy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Allofuswanttobehealthy.Itisveryimportanttoeverybody.Butdoyoureallyknowhowtostayhealthy?Herearesomeusefultips.First,weshoulddoexerciseifwehavetime.Forexample,wecangotoswiminthesummerholiday.Orwecantakeawalkaftersupper.Doingexercisemakesushealthyandstrong.Second,weshouldtakemorevegetablesandfruitandlesssnacks.Stopeatingjunkfoodanddrinkingbeers.Wehaveabalanced（均衡的）diet.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldgotobedearlyandwakeupearly.Weshouldhaveenoughsleep,orwewillgetsleepyinthedaytime.Ifwepaymoreattentiontothetipsabove,wewillhavehealthierbody.Iwisheverybodyhasastrongandhealthybody。【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据图片及提示词语简要介绍如何才能保持健康。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾短语，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Itis……，weshould…….，Wehave……，Orwecan……，Iwish……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了健康很重要，接下来介绍如何保持健康的建议，最后希望每个人都有个强健的身体。此处forexample,takeawalk,makesb+形容词，haveabalanceddiet,gotobed,wakeup,payattentionto等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。（一）亲爱的同学们,健康是一个人的首要财富。拥有健康的身体,才能保证良好的学习状态。有些同学由于平时不注意照顾自己的身体,而导致健康出现了一些问题。想要拥有健康的身体,需要大家在日常生活中多加注意。请你结合自身的经历谈谈如何保持身体健康。内容须包含以下要点：要求:1.词数80词左右；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthisthemostprecioustreasureinourlives.Itisbasedonwhatwecando,suchasstudying,workingandsoon.Iusedtopaylittleattentiontomyhealth.Iatelotsofjunkfoodandseldomtookexercise.Asaresult,Iwasinpoorhealthandgottiredeasily.SoIdecidedtochangemylifestyle.Aftergivingupjunkfoodandplayingmoresports,Ibecomehealthierandhealthier.Thenhowcanwestayhealthy?First,doingsportsisnecessary.Wecantakepartinoutdooractivitiesinourfreetime.Second,weshouldeatmealsontime,andeatmorehealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesbutlessjunkfood.Besides,keepingagoodmoodandhavingenoughsleeparealsoimportant.Ihopeallofuscanbehealthy.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真说读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时及一般过去时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致及时间状语与时态的一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。（二）健康对我们非常重要，但很多人不知道如何保持健康。请根据下面的表格提示，写一篇短文倡导健康生活，并从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文必须包含表格内所有内容，再适当发挥，80个词左右。FoodExerciseHappinessKeepinghealthyagooddietvegetablesandfruitlessmeatbreakfastjunkfooddomoreexercisetakeawalksmilekeephappymakefriendshelpothersGoodWaystoKeepHealthyIt’simportantforustokeepfit.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeephealthy?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodWaystoKeepHealthyItisveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushealthy?First,weneedtohavehealthyeatinghabits,wecaneatalotofvegetablesandfreshfruit,butwe’dbettereatlessmeatandjunkfood.Differentkindsoffoodsarenecessary,it’salsoimportanttoeatabalanceddietandhaveagoodbreakfast.Then,playingsportseverydaycanalsohelpuskeepfit.Wecantakeawalkafterdinner,wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus,afterschoolwecanspendhoursplayingbasketballorsoccerwithourfriends.Weshouldtrytodomoreexerciseeveryday.Happinessisanotherwaytokeephealthy.Whenwearelonelyorunhappy,trytomakefriends,itisagoodwaytokeepushappy.Ifyousmileoften,youalsofeelhappy.Don’tforgettohelpothers.So,behappytobehealthy.【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于说明文。写作时要围绕如何保持健康，第一段可以提出如何保持健康的问题；第二段介绍健康的饮食习惯有利于保持健康；第三段介绍运动对健康的重要性；第四段描述保持心情愉悦的重要性。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍各种意见时，要准确地使用表示提建议的句型；表格内的内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。（三）“幸福的基础是健康的身体！”为此，国家提出2030健康中国计划，某英语报社举行“健康中国与我”的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括：1.健康的重要性；2.谈谈当今中学生健康现状及原因；3.作为中学生，如何为建设健康中国做出自己的努力。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Theimportanceofhealth1.Happylife2.Studybetter...Theconditionofstudents’healthnow1.Getover-weighted2.Pooreyesight...Thereasonfortheproblems1.Lessexercise2.Eattoomuchorwithoutregularity(规律)3.ElectronicproductsHowtodealwiththeproblems1.Balanceddiet...Asweallknow,keepinghealthyisimportantforourlife.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asweallknow,keepinghealthyisimportantforourlife.Goodhealthcanhelpusdowhatwewantinourlife.Studentscanstudybetter.Withoutgoodhealth,it'simpossibletohaveahappylife.Nowthousandsofstudentsareinpoorhealth.Manystudentsgetover-weighted.Moreandmorestudentshavepooreyesight.Someofthemevengetilleasily.Whatcausesthecondition?Somestudentshardlyexerciseafterschool.Someofthemeattoomuchortheycan'thavemealsregularly.What'sworse，manystudentsuseelectronicproductstoomuchafterschool.Asstudents,weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.We'dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadofmeat.Havinggoodlivinghabitsisimportanttous.We'dbetterexerciseforanhoureveryday.Let'stryourbesttobuildahealthyChina.【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以表格的形式给出文章需要包括的内容——健康的重要性、现在学生的健康状况和原因、建议，这就是文章的大纲。注意短文中，包括表格的所有信息，并且需要自由发挥，分段需合理，才能使短文条理清晰。2.例文点评：本文分成三段，第一段总领全文，第二段介绍健康的重要性、现在学生的健康状况和原因，第三段提出自己的建议。题材是议论文，时态是一般现在时。本文应用高分短语和高分句型，如宾语从句，特殊疑问句以及祈使句，提升文章档次。要点包括齐全，并且观点明确且合理。3.高分亮点：短语：thousandsof；inpoorhealth；moreandmore；getill；insteadof；tryone’sbesttodosth。句型：宾语从句Goodhealthcanhelpusdowhatwewantinourlife.；固定句型Withoutgoodhealth,it'simpossibletohaveahappylife.；特殊疑问句Whatcausesthecondition?；We'dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadofmeat.；祈使句Let'stryourbesttobuildahealthyChina.（四）健康是成长的基石。假如你是张利，在疫情返校后，你由于不好的习惯导致了困倦、焦虑等问题。在即将到来的暑假中，你打算如何养成良好习惯，塑造健康体魄呢?请以"GoodHabits,StrongBodies"为题写一篇英语短文。提示：1.至少写出3个影响你健康的问题，可适度添加；2.至少写出4个有利于健康的好习惯，可适度添加；3.号召更多的同学养成好习惯，塑造健康体魄。要求：1.紧扣主题，语言连贯，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名，词数在60—80词左右。参考词汇：exercisemore,haveabalanceddiet(平衡饮食),sleepearly,keephappyGoodHabits,StrongBodies____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodHabits,StrongBodiesHello,IamZhangLi.Inthepast,Iusedtofeelunhealthybecauseofmybadhabits.Ialsofeltworriedbecauseofsomanyexams.SometimesIstayedupsolatethatIwassleepyinclass.AndIdidn'thavemuchfreetimetotakemuchexercise,asaresult,Iwasveryheavy.Tosolvetheseproblems,duringthecomingsummerholiday,Iwillgetintothehabitofgettingupearly.Sleepingearlyisalsonecessary.Iwillexercisemoreandhaveabalanceddiet.It'sgoodtoeatmorevegetablesandfruitinsteadoftoomuchjunkfood.What'smore,whateverhappens,Iwilltrytokeephappy.IfIkeepdoingthese,Iwillcertainlykeephealthyeveryday.Socomeon,everyone.Formyourownhealthyhabits,andactquickly!Goodhabitsmustbringyoustrongbodies.【详解】1、题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以GoodHabits,StrongBodies为题，介绍一下如何养成良好习惯，塑造健康体魄。题干中给出了提示，主要从以下几个方面介绍：写出至少3个影响你健康的问题；写出至少4个有利于健康的好习惯；号召更多的同学养成好习惯，塑造健康体魄。2、写作指导：这篇短文应用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称是第一人称。写作时注意英语句式的结构，简单句、复合句穿插使用，同时注意上下文语句的衔接。使用一些高级词汇和句型，使文意连贯，表达流畅。（一）随着“健康中国”活动不断地深入，徐州市许多中小学也开展了“健康校园”的建设，努力让每一个孩子健康生活。假如Jim是你们学校健康俱乐部的一员，也是你的好朋友，请你根据提示介绍一下他的健康生活吧！具体内容如下：健康中国WhatJimeatsHowhelives早餐：一个鸡蛋、一杯牛奶和一些包子午餐：蔬菜、牛肉和米饭晚餐：鱼肉、面条和水果起得早，常运动一周游泳两次几乎不玩电脑游戏原因……注意：1.词数60左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Ihaveafriend.HeisJim.HeisamemberofHealthClub.Hehasahealthylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeeveryonecanhaveahealthylifelikeJim’s.【答案】Ihaveafriend.HeisJim.HeisamemberofHealthClub.Hehasahealthylife.Forbreakfast,healwayshasanegg.Healsoeatssomebaozianddrinksaglassofmilk.Forlunch,hehasrice,vegetablesandbeef.Fordinner,hehasfish,noodlesandfruit.Hegetsupearlyeveryday.Heoftenexercisesinthemorning.Healsogoesswimmingtwiceaweek.Heseldomplayscomputergamesbecauseitisbadforhiseyes.IhopeeveryonecanhaveahealthylifelikeJim’s.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容，介绍Jim的健康生活，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。收尾两段题干已给出，注意连贯性；两段分别介绍Jim的饮食习惯和生活习惯，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（二）如今人们越来越重视健康饮食，21世纪英语报向中学生发起征文活动，主题是健康饮食习惯，请结合下列内容要求和表格，写一篇文章进行投稿。内容要求：1.你父母的饮食习惯是否健康，请简述理由。2.你的饮食习惯是否健康，请简述理由。3.请你提出健康饮食的建议。FamilymembersEatinghabits（饮食习惯）Healthy/UnhealthyReason（理由）Youradvice（你的建议）MyfatherHelikes……Eatlotsoffruitandvegetables.Mymother……I……注意：（1）文中不得出现真实人名校名；（2）词数：不少于60词；（3）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Wehavedifferenteatinghabits.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Wehavedifferenteatinghabits.Myparentshavehealthyeatinghabits.Myfatherlikeseatingvegetablesbecausetheyarehealthy.Mymotherwantstoloseweighttokeepfit,sosheeatsalotofchickenandfruit.Theynevereatjunkfood,becauseit’sbadforhealth.MyeatinghabitisnothealthybecauseIdon’tliketoeatvegetables.Ialwayseatalotofmeat.SometimesIeatjunkfood.SoIneedtochangemyeatinghabits.Iwanttosharesomeideasabouthowtoeatinahealthyway.First,don’teatfriedfoodorfoodwithlotsofsugar,becausetheyarebadforourhealth.Second,trytoeatlotsoffruitandvegetablesbecausetheycanmakeusbecomehealthy.Ihopeeveryonecanliveinahealthywayanddevelopsomegoodeatinghabits.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照题目中的要点阐述家人的饮食习惯；内容包括：父母的饮食习惯及是否健康、自己的饮食习惯及是否健康、给出健康饮食的建议，以上三点缺一不可。2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，以第一人称和第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时应注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，点明主题；第二段介绍父母及自己的饮食习惯；第三段介绍关于健康饮食的建议；最后一段总结全文。写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。（三）卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲稿。保持健康的重要性;保持健康的方法;保持健康的结论.（你的看法?）1．多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2．多锻炼健身强体;3．鄙弃不良习惯（你的看法?Howtostayourhealth/fit?Dearboysandgirls：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I'mtalkingabout/Hereismyadviceabouthowtokeephealth/fit?Asamiddleschoolstudent，firstyou'dbetterdomoreexercisesuchasplayingballgames,running,swimmingandjumpingropes（绳子）．Thenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormeals．Don'teattoomuchmeatandsugarbutmorevegetablesandfruits．Third,youneedenoughsleeporrest．Next,keepyourselfhappy．Aspeopleoftensaysmilingmakesyounger．Lastyoumustn'tdrinkwineorsmoke．Theyarebadforyourhealth．Thatismyadvice．Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife．Thankyou,bye!【解析】试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍怎样保持我们的健康，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Aspeopleoftensaysmilingmakesyounger．Lastyoumustn'tdrinkwineorsmoke．Theyarebadfor