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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasfifteenwhenmyworldtookahopelessturnfortheworst.|Mymomwasdiagnosedwithcanceragain.Shehadundergonesurgeryandbeatenthecancer.1henthecancercameback.However,therewasmoretoworry,aboutthanthediseasethatmymomwas.battling.Mydadhadleftusyearsbefore..Besides,becauseofthemountingmedicalbillsshewaspayingforherpreviouscancer,wewereontheedgeoffinancialruin.Iwastooyoungtogetajob.Thatwinterwastheworst.Wedidn’thavemoneytopayforelectricity.Ourneighbor,Sophia,allowedustouseherelectricitysothatwecouldhaveonelamponinourhome.Thegasstovein.thelivingroomwastheonlyheatinourhouse.Mymomsleptinhercoldroom,withasmanyblanketsaswecouldpileonher.ThanksgivingDaycame.Isearchedourcupboardsforfoodandthere,wasn'tmuch.Istarted,slammingdoorsasIlookedthroughthecabinetsforacanoffoodwemighthavemissed.ThemoreIsearched,theangrierIbecame.Thenoisemusthavewokenmymom,becauseshecametothekitchenwrappedinablanket.She.lookedworriedatmeandasked,“Baby,what'swrong.”Iretorted,“I'mhungry.I'mfreezingtodeathinourownhouse."Iwasn'tangryather.Iwasangryatoursituation.Sheopenedherarmstowardmeandsaid,“Comehere.Rightnow.thingsarehard,buthopeisalwaysthere.Whateverdifficultieswemeet,weshouldbestrong.Allyouhavetodoishavefaith.Whynotbelievewecanbebetterbyusingourownhands.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意本文讲述了作者15岁时家庭陷入绝境的故事。母亲癌症复发,父亲早已离开,医疗费用使家庭经济濒临崩溃,冬天没钱交电费,取暖也成问题。感恩节时家里食物匮乏,作者在橱柜寻找食物无果后情绪爆发,向母亲发火。母亲安慰作者,让其要有信念,相信能用双手创造更好的生活。伏笔及续写回应伏笔:邻居Sophia允许作者一家使用她的电。续写回应:Sophia在感恩节给作者一家送来晚餐和毛毯。伏笔:母亲鼓励作者要有信念,靠自己双手改变现状。续写回应:作者在接受Sophia的帮助后,感受到温暖和善意,决心和母亲一起坚强面对困难,体现出依靠自身和他人善意改变困境的信念。续写要点第一段情感线:从羞愧到感受到温暖和希望,重新振作起来。作者对自己向母亲发火感到懊悔,母亲的安慰让其平静,意识到要坚强。故事线:作者与母亲相互依偎,从母亲那里获得力量,决定积极面对困境。第二段情感线:惊喜和感动,对生活重拾信心。因Sophia的善举而深受触动,体会到人间有爱。故事线:Sophia送来食物和毛毯,一家人度过一个温暖的感恩节,作者感受到希望和善意的力量。主旨升华句“Hardshipsmayknockusdown,butloveandhopewillalwaysliftusup.”(艰难困苦可能会把我们打倒,但爱和希望总会让我们振作起来。)“Inthedarkesttimes,alittlekindnesscanbethebrightestlightguidingusforward.”(在最黑暗的时刻,一点善意可以成为指引我们前进的最明亮的光。)“Toughsituationstestus,yetthepowerofbeliefandhumankindnessprevails.”(艰难的处境考验我们,但信念和人类善良的力量占上风。)“Whenlifeseemshopeless,thecombinationoffamilyloveandneighborlycarebecomesourstrength.”(当生活看似无望时,亲情和邻里关怀的结合成为我们的力量。)“Nomatterhowhardthestormis,theshelterofhopeandlovewillkeepussafe.”(无论暴风雨多么猛烈,希望和爱的庇护所都会保护我们的安全。)写作示范一IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.MyheartwasfilledwithguiltasIhuggedmymothertightly.TearsstreameddownmyfaceasIwhisperedmyapology.Mom'swordsechoedinmyears,givingmethecouragetofaceourharshreality.Irealizedthatmyoutburstwasnotonlyasignofweaknessbutalsoabetrayalofourfamily'sspirit.Weheldeachotherforalongtime,drawingstrengthfromourbond.Fromthatmomenton,Iwasdeterminedtobeasourceofsupportformymother,justasshehadalwaysbeenforme.JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor.Withabigsmile,shewalkedinwithabasketfulloffoodandwarmclothes.Shesaidshecouldn'tbeartoseeusstruggleduringthisspecialholiday.Herkindnesswaslikeawarmfireinthecoldwinter,meltingtheiceinmyheart.Aswesharedthedeliciousfoodshebrought,IfeltthetruemeaningofThanksgiving-thegratitudeforthosewhobringlighttoourdarkdays.Itmademeunderstandthatthereisalwayshopeandlovearoundus,waitingtobediscovered.写作示范二IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.Iburiedmyfaceinmymother'schest,sobbing.Mom'sembracewaswarm,andherwordswerelikeagentlebreezecalmingthestorminmyheart.Ifeltsochildishformytantrum.Atthatmoment,Iunderstoodthatwewereeachother'spillarsinthisdifficulttime.Wesharedasilentvowtobestrongandfacethechallengeshead-on.Iknewthatourloveanddeterminationwouldbeourweaponsagainstthehardships.JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor.Shehadalargeboxinherhands,filledwithasumptuousThanksgivingdinnerandthickblankets.Hereyeswerefullofkindnessandconcern.Shetoldusthatshehadbeenthinkingaboutusallday.Wewelcomedherin,andaswesataroundthesmalltableenjoyingthefood,Irealizedthateveninthedarkestoftimes,thereareangelsamongus.Sophia'sactofkindnesswasareminderthathopeexistsintheformofhumanconnection,anditgavemethemotivationtokeepgoingwithaheartfullofgratitude.参考范文:IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.Istoodtheresilently,tearsrunningdownmyface.Myinitialangergavewaytomyregretandshame.“Mom,Imakeanapologytoyou.HowIwishIcouldtakebackwhatIhadsaid,”Ichuckled,loweringmyhead.Mymomhuggedmeagainandcomfor
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