主题06 观点之辩-2021年中考英语作文素材大全

主题6

——观点之辩

I.主题词汇

dealwiththeproblemsonstudy,byourselves,getmuchfurtherknowledge,helpusimproveour

scores,workoutdifficultquestions,becomeindependent,teachstudentstolearnstudymethods,try

yourbesttomemorizetheknowledge,sleepingmoreandlisteningtoteacherscarefully,realways,

trytofindsomegoodways,fitus,thebasicwaysofimprovingstudy（提高学习的最基础的方法）

n.常用句型

1.Theycanalsoteachusthewaytosolvedifferentkindsofproblems.

2.Whydon'twcstudybyourselvesinsteadofhavingprivatetutors?

3.Youcanimproveyourstudybytakingnotesregularly.

4.Forsomestudents...,andfortheothers....

5.Toimproveourstudy,studentsshoulddosomerevision,practicemore,listentotheirteachers

morecarefullyanddotheirhomeworkbythemselves,

6.Ithinkthesearethebasicwaysofimprovingstudy.

7.Onewayofimprovingstudyis...

8.Somyconclusionisthat...

9.Ifsgoodfbrusto...

10.Ifwehavelessonsatweekends,wewon'thavethechancetotakepartinactivities.

11.Itisbecause...,we...

12....isagoodchancetosolvemanyproblemsandwecanalsolearnextraknowledgethatwecan't

learnatschool.

m.模拟试题

Privatetutorsinmyeyes

a.Isitnecessaryorunnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors?

b.Whydoyouthinkso?（Giveatleasttworeasons）

c.What'syoursuggestionofimprovingstudy?

要点分析

1.学生先审题，确定你自己的观点（切记：正反两个观点都可以）。

2.不要走过场。

3.不要忘了写结尾，且结尾与开头相呼应。

写作思路

I）提出对“请家教”的观点

1.Nowadays,moreandmoreprivatetutorscallmeandletattendtheirextraclass.

2.Inmyopinion,itisreallyunnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Why?Becauseitisnot

verydifficultforustostudybyourselves.Wccandealwiththeproblemsonstudybyourselves.

3.Nowadays,mostoftheparentslettheirchildrenhaveprivatetutors,butIthinkit'sunnecessary.

4.It'susualthatsomeofthestudentshaveprivatetutors.

II）正方观点：请家教有必要

Itisnecessaryforustohaveprivatetutors.

1.Wecangetmuchfurtherknowledgeonsubjectsthatwecan'tlearnfromschool.

2.Wecanhavemoretimetocheckwhetherourownstudymethodisgoodornot,andwecan

exercisemoreanddealwithproblemsonstudywiththetutors'help.

3.Theycanhelpuswithourhomework.Theycanteachushowtoworkoutdifficultquestions.And

theycanhelpusimproveourscores,too.

4.Itisagoodwaytogooverourlessons.

5.Theycanteachstudentstolearnstudymethods.

6.Thus,mysuggestionsofimprovingstudyistohavemorerevision.

ni）反方观点：请家教没有必要

Itisunnecessaryforustohaveprivatetutors.

l.Itisjustawasteoftimeandmoney.

2.Itmustbeveryexpensive.Itoftencostsusseveralthousandyuanandevenmore.

3.Ifwcalwaysdependonprivatetutors,wcwon'tbecomeindependentpeople.

4.Ontheotherhand,itisn'tcheapenoughtohaveprivatetutorsandtheymaynotbeashelpfulasthe

teachersatschool.

5.Havingprivatetutorsisn'tashelpfulashavingclassesinschoolandcostsmuch.What's

more,somestudentsthinkit'sunnecessarytolistentoteacherscarefullyinschoolbecauseofprivate

tutors.

6.Listeningcarefullyinclassisthebestwaytoimproveourstudyandwecanalsodosomepractice.

7.Youshouldtryyourbesttomemorizewhattheteacherssaidinclass.Moreimportantly,doas

manyexercisesasyoucan.

8.Ishouldhavemoretimeformyinterestsatweekends.

9.Ifwewanttoimproveourstudy,weshouldtrytofindsomegoodwayswhichfituswell.

Althoughstudyplaysamajorroleinourlives,itdependsonourselves.

10.Wecanwritedownallthemistakesonanotebookandoftenreadit.

11.Ifwehaveprivatetutors,wewilldependonthemdeeply,andwecan'tsolvetheproblemsby

ourselves.

总结

1.Rememberthatprivatetutorsaren'ttheonlywaytoimproveourstudy.

2.Inmyopinion,studyinghard,sleepingmoreandlisteningtoteacherscarefullyarerealwaysto

improvestudies.

3.Sowhydon'twestudybyourselvesinsteadofhavingprivatetutors?

4.Thereisnothingdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.

5.Tosumup,tohaveprivatetutorsisunnecessary.Weshouldstudybyourselves.

6.SoIbelievethathavingaprivatetutorisneveragoodidea.

范文，评讲

原文稿

批注应用动词不定式…作

Haveprivatetulorsseemstobecomeatrendamongstudentsnowadays.ISUDDDSCit's[al]:Tohaveprivatetutors

主语作为文章的开头，开门见山地拉开文章的序幕。

unnecessarytohavelulors.Firstofall,it'sreallydifficulttofindatutorbecausemanyofthemare批注[a2]:Isupposeil'sunnecessaryiohavelutors.在这

句前，用上转折词however,起到承上启下的作用。

justcollegestudentsandtheymaybelackofexperience.Secondly,studentswillrelyontutorsso

批注[a3]:在findatutor中加上professional,突显出

thattheywon'tbeindependentenoughtworkouthomeworkproblemsthemselves.Inmyopinion,更为专业的家教。

studentscanasktheirownteachers.Theycanalsodiscussproblemstogether.Iftheyfollowsuch批注[a4]:Inmvopinion,studentscanasktheirown

teachers.这句话的目的是学生向自己的老师请求帮助，

kindsofsuggestions,theycanimprovetheirstudy.

所以加上fbrhelp,

批注[aS]:IfIheyIbllowsuchkindsofsuggeslions.Ihcy

点评与评分canimDrovetheirstudy.结束句中，把can改成may，表

示有提高学习的可能性，而不是强迫性地提高学习。

作者对这篇文章的整体布局合理，并恰当地运用了一些有用的词组和从句，使文章更具文采。

按照中考作文20分计算，属于第一档作文，可得16〜18分。需改进之处：

1.应用动词不定式Tohaveprivatetutors…做主语作为文章的开头，开门见山地拉开文章的

序幕。

2.1supposeitsunnecessarytohavetutors.在这句话前，用上转折词however,起到承上启

下的作用。

3.在findatutor中加上professional,突出是更为专业的家教。

4.Inmyopinion,studentscanasktheirownteachers,这句话的目的是学生向自己的老师请

求帮助，所以加上forhelp.

5.Iftheyfollowsuchkindsofsuggestions,theycanimprovetheirstudy.结束句中，把can改

成may,表示有提高学习的可能性，而不是强迫性地去提高学习。

修改稿

Tohaveprivatetutorsseemstobecomeatrendamongstudentsnowadays.HoweverJsuppose

it'sunnecessarytohavetutors.Firstofall,it'sreallydifficulttofindaprofessionaltutorbecause

manyofthemarcjustcollegestudentsandtheymaybelackofexperience.Secondly,studentswill

relyontutorssothattheywon'tbeindependentenoughtworkouthomeworkproblemsthemselves.

Inmyopinion,studentscanasktheirownteachersforhelp.Theycanalsodiscussproblemstogether.

Iftheyfollowsuchkindsofsuggestions,theymayimprovetheirstudy.

范文选登

1.Ithinkitisnecessaiyforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Theprivatetutorscanhelpuswhenwe

areintrouble.Theycanalsoteachusthewaytosolvedifferentkindsofproblems.Besides,IthinkI

willlearnmysubjectsmuchmoreeasilyifIhaveaprivatetutor.Privatetutorsinmyeyesarehelpful

andnecessary

2.Ithinkitisnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Forsomestudentswhohavepoormarks,

theyneedprivatetutorstoreviewtheknowledgewhichtheycan'tunderstand.Forsomeothers,they

needprivaletulorstogivethemmorepraticeandinformationlosludybetlerandfaster.Toimprove

ourstudy,studentsshoulddosomerevision,praticemore,listentotheirteachersmorecarefullyand

dotheirhomeworkthemselves.Ithinkthesearethebasicwaysofimprovingstudy.

3.Nowadays,manyofmyclassmateshaveprivatetutors.Inmyopinion,itisunnecessaryforstudent

tohaveprivatetutors.Therearetworeasonsforthis.First,theprivatetutorshelpyousolvedifficult

problemssothatyoudon'tsolvethembyyourselfGradually,youwillbepooratthinking.You

probablydoyourhomeworkwellbutdobadlyinyourtest.Secondly,tohaveprivatetutorscosts

much.Itisdifficultforyourparentstoearnmoney.Ifyoucanstudywellbyworkingharder,why

notsavethemoney?Aneasywaytoimprovestudyistoconcentrateinclass.Thethingsteacherssay

arcalwaysveryimportant.Atnight,youshouldgooverwhatyouhavelearnt.Ifyoutakemyadvice,

youwillgetgoodmarks

.4、IslronglyODDOseprivatelutors.Theyareunnecessaryatall.Iadmithavingaprivatetutorcan

beofsomehelp,butitiseasytogotheoppositewaywhenparentschooseabadprivatetutor.I

heardthataprivatetutorofonestudenttaughthimhowtosolveaprobleminextremelydifficult

ways.Ofcourseitwastoodifficultforthestudentstounderstand.Thereforehisscoreonlywent

frombadtoworse.Apartfromthat,someprivatetutorsaskforahugeamountofmoneyfora

lesson.Privatetutorsareexpensiveandcanmisleadthestudents.That'swaytheyarcunnecessary.

Inmypointofview,inwrovingstudylargelydependsonstudents'interestinShelessonand

theirdesireofbeinggood.Sotryingtostayinterestedandworkinghardarethekeystosuccess.

范文链接

Myviewonbringingmobilephonestoschool

A.Withthedevelopmentofmodemscience,moreandmorepeoplehavetheirownmobilephones.

Ialsohaveamobilephone.Frommypointofview,it'snecessaryfbrstudentstobringmobile

phonestoschool.Foronething,mobilephonescanhelpustocommunicatewithourparentsso

easilythattheywon'tworryaboutus.Foranotheraspect,mobilephonesarecapableofconnecting

totheInternet.Wecangainagreatdealofinformationfromit

Tosumup,theadvantagesofusingmobilephonesaremorethanthedisadvantages.Thus,I

thinkit'snecessarytobringmobilephonestoschool.

B.Nowadaysyoucanseealmosteverystudentbringingamobilephonetoschool.Butithinkitis

reallyunnecessary.

Firstly,itmightgetstolen.Therefore,studentshavetospendalotoftimetakingcareofit.

Secondly,manystudentsplaygamesonitaftereachlessonandtheyusemobilephonestocheat

duringexams.What'sworse,studentswon'tbeabletoconcentrateontheirstudieswithamobile

phonesaround.

AlthoughMobilephonescanbringalotofconveniencetoourlives,weneedtohave

self-controltomakebetteruseofit.IfstudentsreallyneedtobringaMobilephonetoschool,they

cangiveittotheirteachersduringschooltime.Ifwedon'tuseitwell,itwillhavebadeffectsonour

students.

2a.Dogsareourgoodfiends

Ilikemanyanimals,suchascats,dogs,rabbits,andsoon.Butilikedogsbest.Everyoneknows

thatdogsarcourpeople'sbestfriends.Theyarckind,lovelyandbrave.Totheblind,dogsaretheir

eyesbecausetheycantaketheblindeverywheresafely.Tothepolice,dogsranhelpthemtocatch

thethievesorrobbersmorequickly.Inmyfamily,mydog,Samisourspecialfamilymember.He

oftenbringsushappiness.Dogsaresoimportantthatweshouldbefriendlytothem.

3.

“Whentheoldmanfelldowninthestreet,・・.”

A.Recently,thetopicof“Shallwehelpanoldpersonwhofelldown“hasbecomeverypopular.

Differentpersonshavedifferentideas.Inmyopinion,ifiseeanoldpersonfelldowninthestreet,i

willcertainlyhelphim.

Therearethreereasons.Firstly,helpingothersisatraditionalvirtueofChinese.Wheneverwe

meetsomeonewhoisintrouble,weshouldgivehimahand.Secondly,it'salsoastudent'sdutyto

helpthetheold.Manypeoplemaymarry,“Whatiftheoldmanischeatingme?”Thethirdpersonis,

ifeverybodyworriesaboutthis,oursocietywillneverbepeacefulandnoonewilllivehappily.

Therewillbenomorekindpeople.So,wheneverIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,Iwilltry

mybesttohelphim.What'smore,Filstaycalmandcallthepolicefbrhelp.Whilewaitingforthe

policeman,THstaytotakecareofhim.

Ibelievethatit'ssomethingmeaningful,andwhenwearehelpingothers,wearchelpingourselves

tobecomeamoreresponsibleandhelpfulperson.

B.TakingcareoftheoldisatraditionalvirtueinChina.Butintheseyears,whensomethingwrong

happenedwiththeold,somepeoplealwayskeptquietandjustwentaway.

I'mamsoangrywiththem.Whatabadthingtotheold!IfIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthe

street,Iwillhelphimandsendhimtothehospital.ThenIwillsendamessagetohisfamily

memberssothattheydon'tworryaboutthis.Solet'scarefortheoldandpaymoreattentiontothem.

C.Recently,thetopicaboutifweshouldgiveahandtotheoldpersonwhofelldownisverypopular.

Somepeoplethinkthatweshouldn'tgivehimahand.However,Iamnotinfavourofthisbehavior.

IfIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,Iwillgoandhelphimatonce.

Therearesomereasons.Foronereason,helpingtheoldisatraditionalvirtue,soweshouldcare

fortheoldandgetalongwellwiththem.Foranotherreason,asaGradeNinestudent,owningakind

heartisveryheartisveryimportanttous.Ifallofusdosomekindthingseveryday,thelifewillbe

better.

Therefore,nexttimewhenyouseeanoldpersonwhoisinneedofyourhelp,justcalmdownand

givehimahand!

D.Nowadays,agreatnumberofpeople,includingmyclassmatesandmyself,havetroubleabout

whattodowhenweseeanoldpersonfalldown.Asweallknow,helpingothersintroubleis

certainlyagoodmanner,butrecentsurveyshowsthatfewpeoplewillhelptheoldpersonwhofell

downbecausetheyareafraidtogetintotrouble.Inmyopinion,it'snodoubtthatweshouldhelpthe

oldperson.

Inordertokeepmyselffrombeingintrouble,perhapsIhavetoletsomepeopletakethephotosto

recordtherealsituation.Peopleshouldn'tbeunmoved,orthesocietywouldbereallyterrible.Ihope

thatmoreandmorepeoplecanshowtheirwarmthtotheold.Asthesayinggoes,“presentroseto

otherswithremainingfragranceathand."Ibelievetheworldwillbekillofwannthandloveifwe

alltryourbesttohelpothers.

E.”whenyousecanoldpersonfallinthestreet,whatwillyoudo?"hasbecomethehottesttopic.In

myopinion,whenImeetthisproblem.Ishoulddailthe110atonce.IfIcandothat,Icannotonly

protectourselvesbutalsohelptheoldperson.Next,Iwillaskforsomeadultsforhelp.Neverbe

impetuous.Withothers'help,Icannotonlyprotectourselvesbutalsohelptheoldperson.Next,1

willaskforsomeadultsfbrhelp.Neverbeimpetuous.Withothers,help,Icanhelpoldpeople

correctlyandsafely.

Inshort,weshouldbecalmwhenwemeetanoldpersonfallinthestreetsothatwecangive

morelove.Lovewillalwayspassonifwehelptheoldpeoplearoundus.

4.Therightuseofmoney

Everyoneknowsthevalueofmoney.Nothingcanbeboughtwithoutmoney.Itistrueeveryone

needsmoney.Thoughmoneyisveryuseful,weshoulduseitintherightway.

Themoneywehavecomesfromourparents,salary,sowecan'tuseitasweplease.Weshould

spendoursmallsumofmoneyinaplannedway.Weshouldnotwasteitongambling,smoking,or

drinking.Itisnecessaryforustofonnagoodhabitofsavingmoney.

Inshort,weshoulduseourmoneyproperlyandspenditcleverly.Therightuseofmoneymay

bringusacheerfulheartandapeacefulmind.

5.Myopiniononhavinglessonsatweekends

Inmyopinion,it'sagoodideaofhavinglessonsatweekend,whichcanhelpusmakeprogress

instudy.Asweallknow,,it'simpossiblefbrastudenttounderstandalltheknowledgethatistaught

tohimatschool.Sohavinglessonsatweekendscangiveusagoodchancetosolvemanyproblems

andwccanalsolearnsomeextraknowledgethatwecan'tlearnatschool.Inaddition,wccanmake

friendswhenwehavelessonsatweekends.

Inaword,havinglessonsatweekendsisagoodwaytostudy.

6.

Drinking

Chinahasalongstoryofdrinkingculture.Butdrinkingtoomuchmaybringagreatharmto

people.Inrecentyears,caraccidentsduetooverdrinkingaremoreseriouslypunished.Drinkingalso

doesagreatharmtohealthofthedrunkardhimself.Somestudentslearntodrinkbecausetheythink

drinkingiscool.Theytrytoattractothers,attentionbydrinking.Inmyopinionmiddleschool

studentsshouldrefusetodrink.

7.Studyingabroad

Nowadays,moreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.Somestudentsgoingabroadwant

tobroadentheirmindsandlearnmoreaboutthec