读后续写+勇敢破茧绘梦飞翔+讲义 高一下学期期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ethanwasayoungmanlivinginasmalltown.Hewasabrightsoulwithdreams,buthewasalsotrappedbythechainsoffearanddoubt.Ethanworkedatasmallbookshop,yetdeepwithin,hehadastrongdesiretobecomeapainter.Everyevening,asthesettingsunpaintedtheskyinorangeandpink,Ethanwouldsitbyhiswindow,ablankcanvas(油画布)beforehim.Yet,nostroke(笔画)gracedthecanvas.Thefearoffailureandthewhispersofdoubtpreventedhimfrompainting.“WhatifI’mnotgoodenough?”heoftenthought.Onecoldautumnevening,anunexpectedvisitorcameknockingatEthan’sdoor-Mrs.Wilkins,anelderlywell-knownwomanofwisdom.“Ethan,”shebegangently,“I’venoticedthelightinyourroomnightafternight,andyet,I’veseennocolorgracetheworldfromyourhands.Whyisthat?”Ethansighed,theweightofhisunspokendreamsheavyonhisshoulders.Hewhispered,“I’mafraidthatI’llneverbegoodenoughandthatmyworkwillnevertouchtheheartsofothers.”Mrs.Wilkinssmiled,akind,understandingsmile.“Ethan,”shesaid,drawingcloser,“letmetellyouastoryofayoungbird,muchlikeyourself,afraidtoleaveitsnest.Thelittlebirdwasalwaysscaredatthethoughtofflight.Dayafterday,itwatchedotherbirdsflyintothesky,whileitremainedwhereitwas,fulloffear.Thebirdfearedtheunknown,fearedfailure,andmostofall,fearedthatitswingswerenotstrongenoughtocarryit.Butthen,oneday,astormapproached,andthelittlebirdhadnochoicebuttojumpintothestorm.Itwasnotaneasyjourney;thewindswereverystrong,andtherainblindeditseyes.Yet,witheachflap(拍打)ofitswings,thebirdrealizedthatitwasabletofly.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.开头已给出。EthanfeltasenseofwarmthandhopewashoverhimasMrs.Wilkinsspoke.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatnight,forthefirsttimeinmanyyears,Ethanpickeduphisbrush.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意Ethan生活在小镇，在书店工作但内心渴望成为画家。他每晚面对空白画布却因害怕失败和自我怀疑而不敢下笔。一个秋天的夜晚，智慧的Mrs.Wilkins来访，她察觉到Ethan的困境并给他讲述了一只害怕离巢飞行的小鸟最终在风暴中不得不展翅飞翔的故事，Ethan听完后感受到了温暖和希望。二、伏笔及续写回应（一）伏笔Ethan每晚窗前的空白画布：暗示了他内心的渴望与行动的缺失，为后续他的转变埋下伏笔。在续写中，这将成为他突破自我的关键场景，他可能会最终在这块画布上留下自己的笔触。小鸟的故事：小鸟害怕飞行但在风暴中被迫飞翔的经历与Ethan的处境相似，预示着Ethan也需要克服内心的恐惧去追求自己的梦想，在续写中Ethan可能会从小鸟的故事中获得启示并付诸行动。Mrs.Wilkins的智慧与关心：她的到来和对Ethan的引导是推动故事发展的重要因素，续写中她的影响可能会继续体现在Ethan的行动和心态变化上。（二）续写回应第一段：描述Ethan听完故事后的心理变化和初步的行动意向，如他可能开始思考自己是否也应该像小鸟一样勇敢尝试，回应了故事给他带来的温暖和希望，以及他内心渴望改变的伏笔。第二段：讲述Ethan当晚拿起画笔的具体行动和他在绘画过程中的感受，体现他真正迈出了追求梦想的第一步，回应了他之前面对空白画布的犹豫和恐惧。三、续写要点（一）第一段Ethan内心的触动和对自己的反思，如他意识到自己不能一直被恐惧束缚，要像小鸟一样勇敢尝试。他可能会对Mrs.Wilkins表达感激之情，并表明自己想要改变的决心。可以描写一些他此时的小动作或表情，增强情感的表达，比如他紧握拳头，眼神变得坚定等。（二）第二段Ethan拿起画笔时的紧张与激动，详细描述他的手部动作和心理活动。他在绘画过程中对色彩和线条的尝试，以及他逐渐沉浸在绘画中的状态。可以提及他画出来的初步效果，或者他对自己作品的初步感受，即使不完美，但也是一个重要的开始。四、故事线故事以Ethan的梦想与困境开篇，Mrs.Wilkins的到来和讲述的小鸟故事为转折点，Ethan受到启发后情感和行动发生变化。续写部分，第一段Ethan内心产生希望和决心，第二段他真正拿起画笔开始绘画，故事线围绕Ethan从恐惧到勇敢尝试追求梦想的过程展开。五、情感线从Ethan最初的恐惧、自我怀疑到听了故事后感受到的温暖和希望，再到最后拿起画笔时的紧张与激动，情感线随着情节发展而变化，展现了他在面对梦想时内心的挣扎与成长。六、主旨升华句（5句英文）Fearisonlyashadowthatfadeswhenwefaceitwithcourageandtakethefirststeptowardsourdreams.

（恐惧只是一个阴影，当我们勇敢面对它并朝着梦想迈出第一步时，它就会消失。）Everyjourneyofself-discoverybeginswiththecouragetobreakfreefromthechainsofdoubtandembracetheunknown.

（每一次自我发现的旅程都始于打破怀疑的枷锁并拥抱未知的勇气。）Inthefaceofourfears,wefindthestrengthtosoarandcreatealifefilledwithcolorandmeaning.

（在面对恐惧时，我们找到了翱翔的力量，创造出一个充满色彩和意义的生活。）Thegreatestartistheartoflivingbravely,paintingourdreamsontothecanvasoflifeonestrokeatatime.

（最伟大的艺术是勇敢生活的艺术，一次一笔地将我们的梦想画在生活的画布上。）Justasthelittlebirdfounditswingsinthestorm,wetoocandiscoverourtruepotentialwhenwedaretofacethechallengesthatholdusback.

（就像小鸟在风暴中找到它的翅膀一样，当我们敢于面对阻碍我们的挑战时，我们也能发现自己的真正潜力。）七、写作示范（一）EthanfeltasenseofwarmthandhopewashoverhimasMrs.Wilkinsspoke.Helookedintoherkindeyesandrealizedthathehadbeenhidingbehindhisfearsfortoolong."Thankyou,Mrs.Wilkins,"hesaidsoftly."YourstoryhasmademeseethatIcan'tletfearstopmefromchasingmydream.Iwanttobelikethatlittlebirdandtakeachance."Withnewfounddetermination,hesatupstraighter,hismindalreadyracingwiththoughtsofwhathecouldcreateonthatblankcanvas.Heknewitwouldn'tbeeasy,buthewasreadytofacetheunknown.Thatnight,forthefirsttimeinmanyyears,Ethanpickeduphisbrush.Hishandtrembledslightlyashedippeditintothepaint.Heclosedhiseyesforamoment,tookadeepbreath,andthenlethisinstinctsguidehim.Thefirststrokewashesitant,butashecontinued,hebecamemoreconfident.Colorsbegantoblendanddanceonthecanvas,andhelosthimselfintheprocess.Itwasn'tamasterpiece,butitwasastart.Ethanfeltasenseofliberationandjoythathehadneverexperiencedbefore.Heknewthathehadfinallytakenthefirststeptowardsbecomingthepainterhehadalwayswantedtobe,andhewasgratefultoMrs.Wilkinsforlightingtheway.（二）EthanfeltasenseofwarmthandhopewashoverhimasMrs.Wilkinsspoke.Asparkignitedwithinhim,andhestartedtobelievethathecouldovercomehisfears.HesmiledatMrs.Wilkins,asmilefilledwithnewfoundresolve."Iunderstandnow.Ican'tletmydoubtsholdmebackanylonger.I'mgoingtogiveitatry,"hesaidwithenthusiasm.Mrs.Wilkinsnodded,pleasedtoseethechangeinhim.Ethanspenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutthecolorsandimageshewantedtobringtolifeonhiscanvas.Thatnight,forthefirsttimeinmanyyears,Ethanpickeduphisbrush.Hisheartpoundedwithexcitementandatouchofnervousness.Ashetouchedthebrushtothecanvas,itwasasifhewasopeningadoortoanewworld.Hestartedwithsimplelines,graduallybuildinguptheshape.Thecolorsflowedfromhisbrush,andhelethisimaginationrunwild.Witheachstroke,hefelthimselfgettingclosertohisdream.Theroomwasfilledwiththesmellofpaintandthesoundofhisbreathing.Bytheendofthenight,hehadcreatedsomethingthatwasuniquelyhis.Itwasasmallstep,butitwasastepintherightdirection.Ethanknewthathehadalongwaytogo,buthewasexcitedaboutthejourneyahead,andhewasreadytofacewhateverchallengescamehisway,inspiredbythestoryofthelittlebirdandthewisdomofMrs.Wilkins.参考答案EthanfeltasenseofwarmthandhopewashoverhimasMrs.Wilkinsspoke.Herwordsseemedtoresonatedeeplywithinhim,touchingtheverycoreofhisfearsanddoubts.Hefeltinspired,asifaweighthadbeenliftedoffhisshoulders.“MaybeIc