新高考英语二轮复习讲练测专题01 提高词句表达能力的技巧（练习）（解析版）

专题01提高词句表达能力的技巧目录TOC\o"1-1"\p""\h\z\u提高词句表达能力的技巧-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2页一、提升句子表达练习---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2页Ⅰ.根据提示提升句子----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2页Ⅱ.用高级词汇或短语替换普通词语----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3页Ⅲ.用高级句式升级下列句子-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------4页二、应用文写作------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------6页01提高词句表达能力的技巧一、提升句子表达练习Ⅰ.根据提示提升句子1.Ourannualautumnouting,_________________________________（以“通过劳动学习”为主题）,willbeheldatthepracticaltrainingbaseonSeptember20th.（with介词短语作定语）2．Andthereisawidevarietyofactivities____________________________（像这里春节期间的龙舟舞）．(列举活动让表达丰富)3.Tofacilitatemovementforthemselvesandthefuturegeneration,Yugong,___________________（临近90多岁了）,wasdeterminedtoremovethemountains,_________（一铲一铲地）.（运用现在分词短语作定语和方式状语增加细节，丰富内容）4.Intheafternoon,we’lltraveltothecountrysidewhereyoucanenjoy______________________________（美丽的风景和各种有机食品）.（用并列连词both...and...提升句子品质）5．AsfarasIknow,traditionalChineseculture,_________________________________________（包括剪纸艺术、古筝等）,hasitsuniquecharacteristics.（用介词including列举具体内容，让表达更具体）6._________________________________________（已经审阅了你的关于“保护野生动物”的海报设计竞赛的初稿）,I’mwritingtooffersomesuggestionsforimprovement.（用现在分词短语的完成式提升句子品质）7．WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture，______________________________________________________________（所以我希望我们学生在业余时间读更多关于中国传统文化的书籍）．(增加希望)8.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldreviewthearticleandprovideanysuggestionsorcorrections______________________________________________________________（提高其整体的清晰度、连贯性和准确性）.（用不定式作定语增加细节内容，让表达更具体）9.Thisactivitywashighlythoughtof,____________________________________________________（因为这不仅产生了作用，而且提高了学生的参与意识）.（增加原因）10.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.___________________________________（他们为我感到骄傲）．(增加评价)11.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.________________________________________________________________（例如，我们可以使用可回收的塑料袋代替塑料袋，拒绝使用一次性产品，节约能源）．(用forexample举例增加细节)12．Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyou____________________________________________________（这样我们就可以一起取得进步）．(增加结果)13．Asforme,I'mpassionateaboutbasketball____________________________________________________（因为它给了我力量去面对我生活中的挑战）．(增加原因)14.YoucanseesomefamouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,____________________________________________________（我想，这肯定会吸引游客的目光）.（用非限制性定语从句增加扩展细节内容）15.______________________________（常言道）,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.(用非限制性定语从句增强表达效果)【答案】1.withthethemeof“LearningthroughLabor”2.likethedragondanceduringtheSpringFestivalhere3.approachinghis90s;shovelbyshovel4.boththebeautifulsceneryandvariouskindsoforganicfood5.includingpaper-cutting,guzhengandsoon6.Havingreviewedyourinitialdraftfortheposterdesigncompetitionon“ProtectingWildlife”7.soIhopewestudentsshouldreadmorebooksabouttraditionalChinesecultureinoursparetime8.toimproveitsoverallclarity,coherence,andaccuracy9.becauseitnotonlymadeadifference,butalsoraisedthestudents’senseofparticipation10.Andtheywereveryproudofme11.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproductsandsaveenergy12.sothatwecanmakeprogresstogether13.sinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife14.whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors’eyes15.AsthesayinggoesⅡ.用高级词汇或短语替换普通词语1.I’mveryprivilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.→I’m_________privilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.2．Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，wheremanysportsactivitiesareheldthere.→Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，where____________sportsactivitiesareheldthere.3．Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.→I_____________ourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanconsidermyslogan.→Iwouldappreciateitifyoucan_______________.5．Rememberthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.→__________thatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.6．Aimedtohelpustoknowtheimportanceofworking,anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.→Aimedtohelpusto_________theimportanceofworking，anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.7．Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarmisatthefootofthehillnearourschool.→Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarm_________thefootofthehillnearourschool.8.Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.→Ishouldbe____________anytimeafterschoolnextweek.9.Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralgoodactivities.→Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveral________activities.10.Hearingthebadnews,theboycriedsadly.→Hearingthebadnews,theboy_________________sadly.【答案】1.morethan2.alargenumberof/varietiesof3.amconvincedthat4.takemysloganintoconsideration5.Keepinmind6.beawareof7.islocatedat8.available9.instructive10.burstintotearsⅢ.用高级句式升级下列句子1．Theydidn'trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionuntilallthefishintheriverdied.→____________________________________________________________________.(倒装句)→_________________________________________________________________________.(强调句)2.Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.Theexhibitionwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou.→Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme,______________________________.(定语从句)3．Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.→_______________________________________________________________.(倒装句)4.Thetournotonlyinstilledmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration.→__________________________________________________________________________________.(倒装句)5.LastweekIengagedinanunforgettableactivity—“ShowGratitudetoOurSchoolthroughLabor”whichwasorganizedbytheStudentUnion.→__________________________________________________________________________________.(过去分词短语作定语)6．IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.→__________________________________________________________________________________.(强调句)7．Therearealotoftreesandflowersinourschoolandourschoollookslikeabiggarden.→_____________________________________________________________________.(with复合结构)8．Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.→_______________________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)9.Wecanenjoythepleasureindoinghouseworkwhenwereallyrealizethegreatsignificanceofdoingit.→_______________________________________________________________________________.(倒装句)10.Youshouldmakegooduseofthetimetoimprovemyperformanceatschoolandpreparemyselfwellforthefuture.→_______________________________________________________________________________.(用虚拟语气提出建议)【答案】1.Notuntilallthefishintheriverdieddidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection;Itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection2.whichwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou3.Notuntileverybodytakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove4.Notonlydidthetourinstillmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration5.LastweekIengagedinanunforgettableactivity—“ShowGratitudetoOurSchoolthroughLabor”organizedbytheStudentUnion.6.ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish7.Withalotoftreesandflowersinourschool，ourschoollookslikeabiggarden8.Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose9.Onlywhenwereallyrealizethegreatsignificanceofdoinghouseworkcanweenjoythepleasureindoingit.10.IfIwereyou,Iwouldcertainlymakegooduseofthetimetoimprovemyperformanceatschoolandpreparemyselfwellforthefuture.二、应用文写作1.（2024·福建省漳州市高中毕业班第二次质量检测）假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你的英国外教Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容如下：（1）你的态度；（2）你的理由；（3）你的建议。注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearAndrew,ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcominglessons.However,Ibelievethatitisn’tnecessary.Ourfocusshouldbeonimprovingstudents’Englishlanguageskills.WhilelearningaboutBritishcultureisinteresting,itmaynotbedirectlyrelevanttotheirlanguagedevelopment.Therefore,Isuggestwecontinuewithourcurrentlessonplan.However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainlyincorporateitintoourlessons.Butoverall,ourprimaryobjectiveshouldbetoimprovestudents’languageproficiency.Bestregards.

Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国外教Andrew写一封邮件，就是否需要在接下来的课程中介绍一些有关英国的历史知识表明态度并提出建议。1.词汇积累感谢：thank→appreciate应该：should→besupposedto集中于：focuson→concentrateon建议：suggest→advise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcominglessons.拓展句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhetheryoushouldintroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcominglessons.【点睛】[高分句型1]However,Ibelievethatitisn’tnecessary.（运用了that引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainlyincorporateitintoourlessons.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的定语从句）2.（2024·湖南省长沙市高三上学期1月新高考适应性考试）为了丰富校园生活，你校将组织迎新年音乐会，请你写一则通知，刊登在学校英文网站上。内容包括：1.举办时间和地点；2.活动的内容；3.活动的意义。注意：词数80左右。Notice________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】NoticeAimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadi