高考英语读后续写专题之个人成长类+牧场女孩的成长之旅+讲义

PAGE10阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Papaalwayswantedaboy,acowboy,tohelponourranch（牧场）.IknowhewishesIwereaboy.He'salwayscallingme"Joey"insteadof"Josefina."WheneverIasktohelpherd（放）thecowshereattheranch,Papasays,"That'smen'swork."ItwasSaturdaymorning.IflewintothekitchenwhenIsmelledthedelicioussmellofbreakfast.Papahadalreadyfinishedeatingandwasputtingonhisrubberboots（橡胶靴子）Withoutaword,hewalkedoutintotheheavyrain."IsPapamadatmeorjusttheworldingeneral?"IaskedMama."We’vebeenhavingalotofrain.Yourfather'sworriedaboutthecows,"sheexplained."Unlesshecandrivethemtohighground,theywillbeindanger.Heneedshelp.""I'mprettygoodonahorse,"Isaid."I'vegotprizestoproveit."Shelaughed."YouknowhowPapafeelsaboutyoungladiesdrivingcows."Idid,butIdecidedtomakeanofferanyway.WhenPapagotback,Iwaswaitingatthedoor."Icouldhelpifyou'donlyletme,"Itoldhim.Hestoodthereforwhatseemedlikeanhour,andthensaid,"Gogetyourraincoat,Joey.""It'sJosefina!"Iracedbackintothehouse.Werodeintothegrassland,PapaonabighorsenamedMiguelandmeonmyhorse,Isabella.Webegancallingthecowsassoonaswereachedtheriver.Finally,wefoundourred-and-whitecowsinathicket（灌木丛）.Wegotthecowsoutofthethicketandherdedthemtowardhigherground.Buttheystoppedatthedeepriverthatstoodinourway.Finally,thefirstcowsteppedintothewater,andtheothersfollowed.PapaswamacrossonMiguel,thenturnedtowatchme,"Holdontight,Joey.".AsIsabellawalkedin,Ifeltcoldwateraroundmylegs.Thenmyhorsetripped（绊倒）andwentunderexcept-forherhead.Igotwetallthewayuptomyback.Smiling,Papasaid,"Atruecowboyisbrave,Joey.""Cowgirl,"Icorrectedhim.注意∶1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunder（雷声）almostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意故事围绕一个渴望在牧场帮忙的女孩展开。女孩的父亲一直想要个男孩来帮忙，总是把她叫成“Joey”而不是“Josefina”，且认为放奶牛是男人的工作。一个下雨的周六早上，父亲担心奶牛安危去赶牛，女孩主动提出帮忙，父亲最终同意。他们骑马赶到草原，找到奶牛并将其赶往高地，途中遇到河流，女孩在过河时马摔倒，她全身湿透，但父亲鼓励她是勇敢的“牛仔”，她纠正说是“女牛仔”。二、伏笔及续写回应（一）伏笔父亲对男孩的期望及对女孩的态度：为后续女孩努力证明自己、争取在牧场帮忙的机会做铺垫，在续写中可体现女孩通过行动逐渐改变父亲的看法。女孩的骑马技能和获奖经历：暗示女孩有能力在牧场工作，续写中可利用这一点让女孩在后续情节中发挥优势。下雨的天气和父亲对奶牛的担忧：推动故事发展，营造紧张氛围，续写中可进一步描写恶劣天气带来的挑战及女孩的应对。（二）续写回应第一段：可写雷声对马和女孩的影响，以及女孩如何在这种突发情况下保持冷静或应对，进一步展现她的勇敢和成长。第二段：描写回到牧场后的情景，如父亲和女孩的互动、母亲的反应等，体现家庭氛围的变化和女孩的成就感，突出女孩在经历这次事件后的情感收获。三、续写要点（一）第一段描述雷声响起后马的反应和女孩的处境，如马是否受惊、女孩如何控制马等。女孩的心理活动，可能包括害怕但又努力克服的想法，以及对完成任务的决心。父亲的反应和可能给予的指导或鼓励。（二）第二段描写回到牧场时的环境和女孩的感受，如疲惫但满足等。父亲和母亲对女孩的态度变化，例如父亲的认可、母亲的欣慰等。女孩对这次经历的感悟或总结，可体现她对自己的新认识和成长的体会。四、故事线女孩渴望帮忙-父亲因雨担心奶牛-女孩主动请缨-父女赶牛过河-马受惊-继续赶牛-成功回到牧场五、感情线女孩从渴望得到父亲认可，到面对困难时的坚定和勇敢，再到最后可能获得父亲认可的喜悦和成就感，以及家庭氛围中情感的变化，如父亲对女孩态度的转变，母亲的欣慰等。六、主旨升华句Inthefaceofchallenges,agirl'sdeterminationandcouragecanbreakthroughgenderlimitationsandwinrespectandrecognition.（在面对挑战时，一个女孩的决心和勇气可以突破性别限制，赢得尊重和认可。）Thejourneyofayoungheartisfilledwiththepursuitofself-worth,andeverystepofgrowthiswrittenwithperseveranceandbraveryintherainandthunderoflife.（一颗年轻的心的旅程充满了对自我价值的追求，在生活的风雨雷电中，每一步成长都用毅力和勇敢书写。）Throughthetrialsoftheranchandthethunderofthestorm,agirldiscoversherinnerstrengthandredefinesherplaceinaworldthatonceunderestimatedher.（通过牧场的考验和风暴的雷声，一个女孩发现了自己内心的力量，并在一个曾经低估她的世界中重新定义了自己的位置。）Intherealmoftheranch,wheretraditionsoncedefinedroles,agirl'sbravestepsandunwaveringspiritchangetheperceptionandlightupthepathofself-actualization.（在牧场这个曾经由传统定义角色的领域，一个女孩勇敢的步伐和坚定的精神改变了观念，照亮了自我实现的道路。）Againstthebackdropoftheranchandthesymphonyofnature'selements,agirl'sgrowthunfolds,teachingusthattruecourageknowsnogenderanddreamscantranscendexpectations.（在牧场的背景和自然元素的交响乐中，一个女孩的成长展开，告诉我们真正的勇气不分性别，梦想可以超越期望。）七、写作范文范文一第一段We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Thepoorhorsewasclearlyfrightened,andittookallmystrengthtoholdontightandcalmherdown.Icouldfeelmyheartpoundinginmychest,butIknewIhadtobebrave.Papashouted,"Staycalm,Joey!Keepcontrolofthehorse!"ItookadeepbreathandtriedtosootheIsabellawithgentlewordsandpats.Afterafewtensemoments,sheseemedtosettleabit.Wecontinuedtoherdthecows,butthethundermadethetaskevenmorechallenging.Thecowswerealsogettingrestless,butImanagedtokeepthemmovingintherightdirection,determinednottoletPapadown.第二段IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.Whenwefinallystopped,Papalookedatmewithanewfoundrespectinhiseyes."Youdidagoodjoboutthere,Josefina,"hesaid,usingmypropernameforthefirsttimeinawhile.Mamacameout,sawmywetandmuddystate,andrushedtohugme."You'reabravegirl,"shesaidwithasmile.Aswesatdowntoeat,Ifeltasenseofprideandaccomplishment.IhadproventomyselfandtoPapathatIcouldhandlethetasksontheranch,notasaboy,butasacapableanddeterminedgirl.ThisexperiencehadnotonlystrengthenedmybondwithmyfatherbutalsomademerealizethatIcouldovercomeanyobstaclewithcourageandperseverance.范文二第一段We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Isabellarearedup,andIhadtoholdonfordearlife.Myheartraced,butIrememberedwhatPapahadtaughtmeaboutstayingcalminsuchsituations.IspokesoftlytoIsabella,tryingtocalmhernerves.Paparodeoverquickly,"It'sokay,Joey.Justkeephersteady."Inodded,takingdeepbreathstosteadymyselfaswell.Thecowsweregettingmoreagitatedbythethunder,anditwasastruggletokeepthemmovingtowardshigherground.ButIrefusedtogiveup.Iusedallmyskillsanddeterminationtokeeptheherdtogetherandmovingforward,showingthatIwasjustascapableasanycowboy.第二段IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.Aswedismounted,Papaputhishandonmyshoulder."Youdidreallywelltoday,Josefina.I'mproudofyou."Ibeamedwithpride.Mamagreeteduswithawarmsmileandsaid,"Mylittlecowgirlisallgrownup."Atthedinnertable,wetalkedabouttheday'sadventure.Irealizedthatthroughthisexperience,IhadnotonlyhelpedPapawiththecowsbutalsoearnedhisrecognition.Itmademeunderstandthatgenderdoesn'tmatterwhenitcomestodoingwhatyouloveandbeingbrave.Iwasdeterminedtocontinueprovingmyselfandmakingavaluablecontributiontotheranch,asaconfidentandfearlessgirl.Thisdaymarkedanewbeginninginmyrelationshipwithmyfatherandmyplaceontheranch.参考答案We'djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Isoftlystrokedandpattedher