六年级英语下册Unit 1单元话题写作“寓言故事”译林版三起

Unit1单元话题写作“寓言故事”第一篇【话题分析】同学们，本单元我们通过一则寓言故事，复习了一般过去时，并学习了形容词和副词的使用。现在让我们以《龟兔赛跑》为例，叙述一个含有一般过去时的故事。【思路点拨】作文结构呈现可能用到的词汇和句子开头：介绍故事的时间、地点、人物和起因。句子：Longlongago,therewas/were...Oneday,....metatortoise(鸟龟).中间：依据时间挨次/情节进展挨次进行叙述，留意动词形式的变化，并结合使用形容词和副词。词汇：walkby/wakeup,runfast/slowly句子：Let'shavearace...Afewminuteslater...Justthen...Soon,hecaughtup(赶上)with...结尾：写清故事的结局，可以进行总结、评价。句子：Atlast,hewontherace.Therabbitcriedsadly.Fromthenon...【范文观赏】Longlongago,therewasarabbit.Oneday,shemetatortoise.Shesaid,"Hello,Mrtortoise.Let'shavearunningracenow.”“Great!”saidthetortoise.Thentheybegantorun.Therabbitranfast.Afewminuteslater,therabbitstopped.Shecouldn'tseethetortoise."Thetortoiserunssoslowly,"saidtherabbit.Soshesleptonthegrass.Butthetortoisedidn'thavearest.Soon,hecaughtupwiththerabbit.Atlast,hewontherace.Therabbitcriedsadly.【句型热身】1.那些同学正在阅览室安静地看书。2.一只狗吵醒了婴儿。婴儿大声地哭了起来。3.女孩快活地大笑起来，由于她发觉了很多五彩缤纷的烟花。【写作练习】你和伴侣们去你家四周的公园玩，你们玩得很快活。就在这时你们遇见了一个找不到回家的路的小女孩。你们帮她找到了家，她看到家人很快活。请你据此写一篇短文记叙事情的经过，留意使用一般过去时，运用副词，可适当发挥想象。【参考答案】句型热身Thosestudentsarereadingquietlyinthereadingroom.Adogwokethebabyup.Thebabycried/begantocryloudly.Thegirllaughedhappilybecauseshefoundmany/alotofcolourfulfireworks.写作练习Oneday,Iwenttotheparknearmyhomewithmyfriends.Weplayedgamesthere.Wehadalotoffun.Justthen,wesawalittlegirlcryingsadlyontheground.Whathappened?Shecouldn’tfindherwaybackhome.Wetalkedwithherandhelpedherfindherhome.Shewashappytoseeherfamilyagain.其次篇请你依据图片提示，用英文编写一则小故事。不少于6句话。【思路点拨】这是一篇有关“狐狸与葡萄”的看图作文。同学们在写作之前，要先弄清楚每幅图片所要表达的内容。在写作时，要留意文章的连贯性、情节的完整性。故事的写作通常使用一般过去时，所以文章中主语后的大多数谓语动词要用过去式。另外，在写作时可以适当增加故事中角色的心理描写，使故事更加生动，但需留意的是，角色的心理描写要用一般现在时。【范文观赏】Longlongago,therewasafox.Hewashungry.Sohewentouttolookforfood.Hesawsomebigandbeautifulgrapeswhenhewalkedbyagarden.“Thosegrapeslooksonice.Icanpicksometostaymyhunger(充饥),”saidthefox.“IthinkIcanjumphighandgetthem.”Sothefoxstartedtojumptogetthegrapes.Hetrieditseveraltimes,buthestillcouldn’treachthem.Atlast,thefoxhadtogoawayandsaidangrily,“Idon’twanttoeatthosegrapesatall.Theyaregreen.Theymustbesour!”【小试身手】Longlongago,【参考答案】Longlongago,therewasafox.Onedayhewashungry.Helookedforfood,andsawsomegrapes.Hewantedtoget