2024-2025学年外研版九年级英语上学期考点 专题04 书面表达串讲【考点清单】

Module1如何写描述旅行经历或某个景观的文章本模块的写作话题是介绍某处自然景观或人文景观，这是中考常考的一个话题。要求学生能够对自己熟悉的某个景观进行事实性描述；能够描写自己的旅行经历和个人感受。中国的长城举世闻名，它是世界七大奇观之一。长城长8000多千米，平均高7.8米。长城始建于公元前7世纪，是用泥土、砖块和石块修筑的。在古代长城主要用于防止外敌入侵，如今，长城是中国乃至世界上著名的旅游景点之一。现在，每天都有成千上万的人参观长城。请根据所提供的信息材料，以"TheGreatWall"（体裁：说明文人称：第三人称话题：介绍长城）为题，写一篇文章。要求： 1.结构完整、语言准确、符合逻辑,可适当发挥。2.词数80以上（题目已给出，不计入总词数）。提示词语：brickn.砖块;onaverage平均佳作展示TheGreatWallTheGreatWallisknowntotheworld.Itisoneofthesevengreatestwondersoftheworld.TheGreatWallliesinnorthernChina.Itisover8,000kilometreslongand7.8metreshighonaverage.Ancientpeoplestartedtobuilditinthe7thcenturyBC.TheGreatWallwasmadeofearth,bricksandstones.ItwasbuiltinancientChinatokeepoutenemies..However,itisnowregardedasoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsinourcountryoreveninthewholeworld.Everyday,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldvisittheGreatWall.ItisalsoasymbolofChina.Module2如何写与节日相关的文章本模块的话题为公共假日，包括节日的起源、概况、庆祝方式等内容。写这类话题的文章时，还可以补充该节日的特色美食、相关人物等信息以使文章内容更加充实。文章可按"总—分—总"的模式谋篇布局，时态以一般现在时为主，介绍节日起源应用一般过去时。假如你是刘伟，你的英国笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问相关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件（体裁：应用文），简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节（话题：介绍端午节），请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的（时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称）。注意： 1.80—100词。2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.______________________WhatdoyouthinkoftheDragonBoatFestival?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiuWei佳作展示DearJim,I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.YouaskedmeabouttraditionalChinesefestivals.I'llintroducetheDragonBoatFestivaltoyou.Thefestivalhasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itiscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthofthelunarcalendar.AnditiscelebratedinmemoryofQuYuan,anhonestminister.Peoplealwayseatricedumplingsandwatchdragonboatracestocelebrateit.Thericedumplingsaremadeofrice,meatandsoon.Theyareverydelicious.Besides,wehaveathree-dayholidayduringthefestivalsoit'salsotimeforfamiliestogettogetherandenjoyourselves.weusuallywatchthegamesontelevisionandenjoyourselvesverymuch.Overall,theDragonBoatFestivalisveryinteresting!WhatdoyouthinkoftheDragonBoatFestival?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiuWeiModule3如何写关于心目中的英雄的文章本模块的写作话题是"描述自己心目中的英雄"。这种话题通常要求学生介绍一位伟人的生平。在写作时，如果叙述的是过去发生的情况，应使用过去时；如果讲述的是现在的情况，应使用现在时。写作时，可按照时间顺序展开叙述，写作过程中可使用本模块所学的状语从句对事情的原因或结果进行阐述。文章的结尾可表达自己的观点或看法。2021年5月22日，"世界杂交水稻之父"袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以"Thegreatestheroinmyheart—YuanLongping"为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹（话题：人物介绍人称：第三人称体裁：记叙文）。Facts

about

his

life生平事迹（时态：一般过去时）1930

be

born,

in

Beijing;1964

start

a

special

study

about

rice;1974

develop

a

new

kind

of

rice;1980

begin

to,

help

people

grow

more

rice,not

only...but

also...，China,

many

other

areas

around

the

world;2021

die,

in

Changsha;…Contributions成就贡献solve,

the

problem

of

food,

for

millions

of

people,

call,

the

"Father

of

Hybrid

Rice"（杂交水稻之父）；…One

of

the

bestways

to

remember

him纪念他最好的方式之一should,

save

food,

never

waste

any

food…【写作要求】1.短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。2.文章词数90左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。Thegreatestheroinmyheart—YuanLongpingYuanLongpingisthegreatestheroinmyheart.佳作展示Thegreatestheroinmyheart—YuanLongpingYuanLongpingisthegreatestheroinmyheart.Hesolvedtheproblemoffoodformillionsofpeopleandiscalledthe"FatherofHybridRice".HewasborninBeijingin1930.Inthe1960s,Chinesepeopleweresufferingfromhunger,sohedecidedtofindawayofgrowingabetterkindofrice.In1964,hestartedaspecialstudyaboutrice.Tenyearslater,hedevelopedanewkindofrice.In1980,hebegantohelppeoplegrowmorericenotonlyinChinabutalsoinmanyotherareasaroundtheworld.HediedinChangshaon22ndMay2021，whenhewasninety-oneyearsold.Oneofthebestwaystorememberhimisthatweshouldsavefoodandneverwasteanyfood.YuanLongpingwillliveinmyheartforever.Module4如何写描述独自在家做某事的经历的文章请根据下面所给信息,描述一下自己独自在家的经历:(体裁：记叙文人称：第一人称)在我十三岁时(时态：一般过去时),有一次父母都出差了,我独自在家生活了两天。在这期间，我自己洗衣服、做饭。我为自己感到自豪。注意: 1.文章要包含所给的全部信息；2.条理清楚、语意连贯、句式规范、字迹工整；3.不少于80词。佳作展示Myfirstexperienceathomealonewasunforgettable.WhenIwasthirteen,onedaybothofmyparentswereawayonbusiness,andIhadtostayathomeallbymyselffortwodays.Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingmealone,theyhadtogoaway.Aftertheyleftonthefirstday,IwasveryhappybecauseIcoulddowhateverIliked.Butonthefirstevening,Ifeltlonelyandalittleworried.Irealisedbeinghomealonewas.Althoughmyparentswereveryworriedaboutleavingme,theyhadtogoawayonbusinessforafewdays.ThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysperfect.noteasy.InordertoshowthatIcouldlookaftermyself,Iwashedmyownclothesandcookedsimplemealsonthesecondafternoon.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldlookaftermyself.Whenmyparentscamehome,theywerehappytofindthatIcouldcookandtidyupnow.Ireallyfeltproudofmyself.Module5如何写关于公共场所行为规则的文章本模块以"Museums"为话题，主要谈论公共场所的注意事项和行为规则。该话题与日常生活紧密联系，写作时常用到should、can等情态动词。上海迪斯尼乐园吸引着许多孩子前往游玩。假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园（话题：介绍迪士尼乐园及规则体裁：应用文）。乐园介绍上海东部，地铁可达，由6个主题公园组成，参加活动，欣赏表演，购买礼物，观看烟火（用第二、三人称和一般现在时）文明游园不扔垃圾，保持整洁，考生自拟（至少2点）注意：词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：themen.主题；fireworkn.烟火Goodmorning,children!AsavolunteerfromShanghaiDisneyland,I'dliketosaysomethingabouttheparkandtellyouhowtobehavewellinit.____________________________________________________Theparkisworthyourvisit.Ihopeyouwillhavefun.佳作展示Goodmorning,children!AsavolunteerfromShanghaiDisneyland,I'dliketosaysomethingabouttheparkandtellyouhowtobehavewellinit.ShanghaiDisneylandislocatedintheeastofShanghai.Youcangettherebyunderground.It'smadeupofsixthemeparks.Youcanjoinindifferentkindsofactivitiesthereandenjoywonderfulmusicalsorplays.Youcanalsobuynicepresentsintheshoppingarea.Atnight,youcanwatchfireworks.Nowonderthousandsofpeoplecometovisit.However,it'simportanttoobeytherulesinthepark.First,don'tlitteroryouwillbepunished.Second,remembertowaitforyourturnanytime.Moreover,it'simpolitetoshoutloudlyinpublicplaces.Theparkisworthyourvisit.Ihopeyouwillhavefun.Module6如何写描述生活或学习中遇到的问题或麻烦的文章本模块围绕"problems"展开，描述了青少年生活中遇到的问题，有自我愿望与家长管控的矛盾，有兴趣爱好与学业成绩的矛盾，也有朋友间的矛盾。通过本模块的学习，学生应学会正视矛盾并正确处理矛盾。在写这一话题的文章时，可以多用表达情绪的词来描述心理状态，也可以多用提建议的句型来提出化解矛盾的方法。你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben（人称：第二人称为主）的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由（话题：解决问题时态：一般现在时）。Ben's

problemsYour

advice

and

reasons朋友少，感觉孤单1.参加学校社团（club）——结识更多朋友2?（请你补充）英语单词难记1.多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词2?（请你补充）注意：（1）回信应包括所有要点；（2）词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtothelifeinmiddleschool.Inyourletteryousaidthat___________________________________________________________Goodluckwitheverything!佳作展示DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtothelifeinmiddleschool.Inyourletteryousaidthatyoualwaysfeltlonelybecauseofhavingfewfriends.Ithinkitisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschool.Besides,befriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouaresuretogetasmileinreturn.Ontheotherhand,youfounditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.ReadingmoreEnglishstoriesandnewsmaybeofgreathelp.Inaddition,ifyougetintothehabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday,itwillbeeasierforyoutoremembermorewords.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.Iwantyoutogetintothehabitofdoingyourhomeworkassoonasyoucomehomefromschool.Ifyoutellhimthetruthnow,hewillbeangrywithyou...Goodluckwitheverything!LiHua综合练习1.假如你们班将以Anunforgettablefestival为题开展一次英语主题班会，请你根据以下提示内容写一篇短文，准备发言用。提示内容：1.令你难忘的节日及时间；2.描述你是如何度过这一节日的；3.谈谈你对这一节日的看法或感受。

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AnunforgettablefestivalformewastheSpringFestivallastyear.Iwasvisiting

Singapore.ItwasmyfirsttimetospendtheSpringFestivalinaforeigncountry.Oneofmyclassmatesinvitedmetospendtheholidaywithhisfamily.Iboughtabagoforangesforhisfamily

onmywaytotheirhouse.WhenIenteredthehouse,Iwishedthem“HappySpringFestival”.Tomysurprise,Igota

hongbao

inreturn.

Then

wehadabigmeal.

After

themealwasover,wewentto

Chinatown

toseetheliondance.

ThisSpringFestivalwasspecialandunforgettable.Ienjoyedmyself.IalsolearnedaboutsomeSpringFestivaltraditionsin

Singapore.2.假定你是李华,下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩,并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。Hi,NextweekI’llbewithyouinBeijing.Ican’twait!Wecoulddolotsofexcitingthingstogether.AndnowIneedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?Ialwaystakelotsofthingsinmybagandcan’tfindwhatIreallywant!PleasetellmehowIcouldpack.SinceIaminterestedinhistoryandcultureofChina,Iwanttoknowwherewewillgo.I’dliketogetyousomesouvenirsfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?I’msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.Alan提示:1.Makealist(T⁃shirts,sunglasses...)2.Placesmallbagsinsidebigbags...3.Placesofinterest(thePalaceMuseum,theGreatWall...)4.Souvenirs:postcards,books...参考词汇:packv.打包souvenirn.纪念品注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;2.短文需包含所有提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!LiHua答案[思路点拨]①题干解读:该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述去北京游玩需要携带的东西、打包的方式、可以参观的地方以及自己想要的纪念品。②写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主,要叙述完整,条理清晰。[标准范文]HiAlan,

I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.Sinceyouaregoingonalongflight,Isuggestyoumakealistofthingsyoutake.Itisabithotinsummerhere.SoyoucantakeT⁃shirtsandsunglasseswithyou.Doyouhatethatfeelingwhenyoucan’tfindwhatyou’relookingforinyourbag?Metoo!Placingsmallbagsinsidebigbagsisthebestsolution.

Ithinkit’sagoodideatogotosomeplacesofinteresttogether,suchasthePalaceMuseumandtheGreatWall.YouwilllearnalotaboutChinesecultureandhistory.Asforthesouvenir,Ilikecollectingpostcardsandbooksfromdifferentplaces.DoyouhaveanypostcardsofTowerBridge?Thiskindofsouvenirwouldsuitmefine.Thanks!I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!

LiHua

高级语块:重点短语nextweek下周;makealistof列出……的清单;insummer在夏季;bestsolution最佳的解决办法;asfor...至于……;Chineseculture中国文化重点句型1.I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.我很高兴收到你的电子邮件,说你下周要来看我们。(该句是一个简单句,youremail后面的现在分词短语作后置定语)2.Ithinkit’sagoodideatogotosomeplacesofinteresttogether,suchasthePalaceMuseumandtheGreatWall.我认为一起去一些名胜古迹是个好主意,比如故宫博物院和长城。(该句是一个主从复合句;Ithink后面是宾语从句。)3.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Harry给你发来电子邮件，询问你父母不在家时你会做与不会做的事。请根据表格提示内容，给Harry回一封邮件。会做的事不会做的事按时醒来做早饭整理房间洗衣服洗碗独自给狗洗澡DearHarry,Thanksforemailingme.LetmetellyouwhatIcando