新高考英语二轮复习题型归纳与变式演练专题23 书信类02（告知信、建议信、道歉信）（原卷版）

专题23书信类02（告知信、建议信、道歉信）（原卷版） 书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。 以下对告知信、咨询信、道歉信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。四、告知信 1.布局思维导图段落要点首段告知内容（原因、背景等）正文告知具体事宜（时间、地点等）结尾表达期待愿望 2.基本模板写作模板①Dear______(称谓)Awareofyourenthusiasmfor/Delightedtolearnthat______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣),I’mwritingtoextendmy______(看法、关心、欢迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation. ______(活动信息).Tobeginwith,______(要点一).Furthermore,______(要点二).Tosumup,______(要点三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua写作模板②Dear________，Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumble(谦虚的)opinion，youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions：________________(建议的内容)．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful，andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿)．Yourssincerely，LiHua 3.高频词句【常用词汇】1.inform

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我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...

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我提出几条有关于……的建议。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.

请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationshelpful/useful.

希望这些建议对你有帮助。Thankyouforyourattention.感谢你对此事的关注。 4.写作实操技巧 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1．比赛信息； 2．赛前准备； 3．表达期待。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearChris(称谓)Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣),I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitement(看法、关心、欢迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.. Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldwillbeginat2P.M.andlastforroughly3hours(活动信息).Preparationsshouldbemadeinadvance,rangingfromdoingregularexercise,keepingpositiveattitudetopresentingyourselvesaheadoftime(要点一).Furthermore,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou(要点二).Tosumup,Iwishthatwithjointeffortsandexcellentteamwork,wecouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschool(要点三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua 5.仿写演练 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校的交换生Bob已学习中国象棋长达一年，特发邮件向你询问将由学生会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1．举办比赛的目的； 2．比赛的时间和地点； 3．建议他报名参加并说明理由。注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：中国象棋大赛ChineseChessContest________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearChris(称谓)AwareofyourenthusiasmfortheChineseChessContesttobeheldbytheStudents'Union(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣),I’mwritingtoextendmyopinion(看法、关心、欢迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.. Firstandforemost,Aimedatraisingstudents'awarenessoftraditionalChinesecultureanddevelopingstudents'loveforChinesechess,thecontestwillbeheldattheStudentCenteronSeptember8th(活动信息).SinceyouhavelearnedtoplayChinesechessforayear,Isuggestthatyoushouldparticipateinthecontest(要点一).Furthermore,Iamconvincedthatyourparticipationwillsurelymakeadifference(要点二).Tosumup,throughthecontest,notonlycanyouimproveyourskillsofplayingChinesechessbutalsoyoucanmakefriendswithotherexcellentplayers(要点三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua 6.高考真题【2022年1月浙江卷】假定你是李华，在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．回忆活动经历；2．分享个人收获；3．希望保持联系。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2019·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris，I'mLiJim，astudentatChenguangHighSchool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin【2019年1月广东卷（春考）】你是李华，就读于国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友（penpal），以便相互学习对方的语言和文化：你容易相处，熟悉中国历史，喜欢中国传统音乐。内容要点：1.写信目的；2.自我介绍；3.表示感谢。注意:1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不算词数；3.可以适当增加细节，并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。Dearbob,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【2019年新课标全国卷II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意:词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2018·全国卷1】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2017·全国卷1】假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2017·天津卷】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会the13thNationalGamesDearMrs.Green,I’mgladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin五、建议信 1.考情分析1、学习类：给图书馆建议，提高服务质量；给选修课提建议；给读书节提建议2、环境保护类：给相关部门或报纸提建议①限制使用白色塑料袋，②节约食物③合理使用共享单车。3、文化自信类（★★★★★）：外国留学生，来你们学校学习，给他们的学习生活或学习中文提建议。4、身心健康：给校长写信，关于提高学生身心健康：身体健康，减压等。 2.布局思维导图段落要点首段写信目的正文提出建议、说明原因结尾表达期望和祝愿 3.基本模板写作模板①Dear______(称谓)Youcan’timaginehow______(情感)Iamhearingabout______(写信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedto______(建议一).Additionally(Foronereason),itmakessenseto______(建议二/理由一).Moreover（Foranotherreason）,______(建议三/理由二)isalsoagoodchoice.Dobearinmindthat（Therefore）______(建议四/理由三) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandwewill______(以上建议的好处).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表达希望接受建议).Yoursincerely,LiHua写作模板②Dear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建议的内容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua写作模板③Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建议).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具体到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建议).I’msure______________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行为的信心和决心).Ihope____________(表达愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua1.建议信写作注意事项建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。2.写作方法①首段：a.简介自己，不要罗嗦；b.说明目的，注意语气。②主体：a.提出具体建议；b.首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；c.经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。=3\*GB3③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。3.写作流程图说明写信目的介绍详情、说明原因提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 4.必备词句 Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...

我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...

我建议……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？为何不……？Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...

我认为……是个好办法/有利的。It'simportantto.../Ithelpsto...Itshouldbeagoodideato...

很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning...

我提出几条有关于……的建议。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.

请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationshelpful/useful.

希望这些建议对你有帮助。Thankyouforyourattention.感谢你对此事的关注。【必背词句】第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因套语：(1)它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午，我们会一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’lltogether.(4)记得带上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分：提出建议套语：我建议……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:

Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！4.

Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。5.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 5.写作实操技巧 假如你是李华，你的外教MrGeller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养，正在书法、剪纸与象棋中选择，写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐内容及简要原因； 2.切实可行的学习建议； 3.祝福与希望。注意：1．词数：80词左右； 2．内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；参考词汇：书法：calligraphy剪纸：paper-cutting象棋：Chinesechess__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear______(称谓)Youcan’timaginehowoverjoyed(情感)Iamhearingaboutyourplan(写信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedtochooseChinesecalligraphybecauseit’sanaturalcombinationofbeauty,strength,historyandtechnique(建议一).Additionally,aimingatlearningitwell,itmakessensetodevotehimself/herselftolonghoursofpractice(建议二).Moreover,signingupforacalligraphycourse(建议三)isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelpherstudyinasystematicway.Dobearinmindthatit’dalsobebeneficialtostudyandimitatetheworksoffamouscalligraphers(建议四) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit(以上建议的好处).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表达希望接受建议).Yoursincerely,LiHua 6.仿写演练 假定你是李华，你朋友张帅在美国学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，前不久,他来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。1.建议他回国。2.你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。注意：1.词数80左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearZhangshuai(称谓)Youcan’timaginehowoverjoyed(情感)Iamhearingaboutyouaregoingtograduate(写信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youaresupposedtocomebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesabroad(建议).Foronereason,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneedednowadaysinChinaanditwillbequiteeasyforyoutofindagoodjob(理由一).Foranotherreason,itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsastheyare

gettingold(理由二).Therefore，it'sagoodideaforyoutoreturn.(总结) Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表达希望接受建议).Yoursincerely,LiHua 7.高考真题 【2022年全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述：2.简单评论;3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【参考范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：choose→select提高：improve→strengthen各种各样的：various→diverse就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.拓展句：Nowadays,becausesmartphonesandcomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.【点睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】It'surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline(运用了it作形式主语，toimprovetheirself-discipline为真正的主语)【2021年6月全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以Besmartonlinelearner写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括：分析优势及不足；提出学习建议。注意：词数100词左右；题目和首句以为你写好。【参考范文】BesmartonlinelearnersJustliketheoldsayinggoes,"eachcoinhastwosides."Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.Ontheotherhand,whatwelearnonlineisn'tnecessarilywhatweneed,nottomentionitsconstantdamagetooureyes.Forme,onlinelearningis,afterall,justatool.It'snotthenewmethoditselfbutthepersonwhouseitthatreallymatters.Tobecomeasmartonlinelearner,notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.What'smore,onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.Thanks,everyone.Hopeweallcouldbesmartonlinelearners.【解析】本篇书面表达是演讲稿，一种常见的应用文，与去年英语作文比赛稍有差别。英语书面表达近几年来稳中求变，在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能，进行思想交流的同时，注重文体变化，突出实用性，更考查学生能否利用所学语言知识、文化知识等，根据不同目的和受众，通过书面形式创新语篇。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如非谓语动词：providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.；名词性从句：whatwelearnonlineisn'tnecessarilywhatweneed,nottomentionitsconstantdamagetooureyes.倒装：Tobecomeasmartonlinelearner,notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.；状语从句：onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。【2019年6月天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.

Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJinDearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighschool.

Hearingthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltoparticipateinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Ifeelexcitedtogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternart,whichwillbegivenbyyou.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Frommyperspective,amongallthethemesonwesternculturelikemusic,drawinganddancing,Iwouldliketohaveabetterunderstandingofmusic,foragreatnumberofmyclassmatesarefondofmusic.Toenhanceourknowledge,Iwouldappreciateitifyouaddsomeinformationaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofwesternmusic.Inaddition,someexcellentworksofmusicandtheintroductionofseveraldistinguishedmusicianswouldbeagoodwaytobroadenourhorizon.Anyway,Ican'twaittomeetyoufromthebottomofmyheart!Thankyouforyourtime!Yours,LiJin本篇写作为应用文体，书信类的建议信。第一步：审题。（1）判断时态与写作主语：时态为一般现在时为主，人称第一人称。（2）根据细节判断文章段落：三段式：开头寒喧说明理由（需要补充），中间发展说明具体事项，结束表达感谢或祝福（已给出）。第二步：细节补充：第一段：说明写信目的：根据题目提示，说明写信背景（友好校活动以及老师讲座），点名主题（关于讲座给出建议）。第二段：针对写作细节详细介绍：从三个话题中做出选择，并说明选择的理由。补充想要了解的内容（建议1-2点）。第三段：表达见面的期望并感谢阅信。（由于最后一段文章已给提示为感谢，可考虑将期望放到第二段结尾）。最后，整洁的卷面是写作获得良好印象分的关键，记得用心誊抄哦。【2019北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sot