应用文：分享露营经历+讲义-江浙皖高中发展共同体 高三上学期10月月考英语试题

应用文写作假定你是李华，上周末你们全家去户外露营。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：(1)露营过程；(2)你的感想。注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

【简析】这道题很明显是模仿6月高考题而出的了，相关话题早年浙江卷考过续写，也就是2017年11月讲健忘妈妈的那一篇，当然2017年6月浙江卷应用文写郊游，部分内容或许也可以用上。露营虽然对高中生来说，不一定都经历过，但是大致知道是和吃喝玩乐以及帐篷有关，所以大体不会写偏。【审题】文体：分享｜告知信话题：露营时态：过去时为主（上周末）人称：第一人称（Iorwe）【要点剖析】要点一：露营过程。事件的三要素为时间、地点、人物，由于背景信息已经给出了时间和人物，即上周末和myfamily，所以我们需要自行添加地点。思考：露营的地点一般有哪些？海滩边（喝点小酒、吃点烧烤、吹吹海风）、小河/湖泊边（可以野餐等）、山区（像黄山顶可以看日落，看云海）、专门露营基地、公园等等，自己对哪个地点熟悉就选哪个写。然后整体的露营过程可以按照时间顺序来写，同时结合层级顺序，最重要的是全文要体现话题词汇。要点二：你的感想。这里需要思考感想的切入点，这里主要提供三个点参考。第一个就是根据同行的人，既然一起去的是家人，那么就可以从亲情切入；第二个就是话题本身，可以划分到人与自然主题语境，那就从大自然角度切入；第三个就是结合学生身份，从校园生活切入，可以说远离繁忙校园生活，放松身心等。当然，这三个切入点并不是孤立的，而是可以相结合的。【谋篇布局】开头：段首句已经给出，通过主位推进，我们通常可以在后面加一句话，比如用一到两个形容词来概述这个经历，同时这两个形容词是能贯穿以下内容，所以不建议用太笼统的词，比如good，great，fantastic，fabulous等，可以用稍微具象的词，比如说fun-filled充满乐趣的，那么你的整个露营过程就是要围绕fun展开，又比如说educational有教育意义的，那么露营过程中你的相关事件就是要来体现这个词。这个知识点在“演讲与辩论”的时候尤其要注意。I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Itwasarelaxingandrefreshinggetaway.正文：我们家住海边，虽然没有亲身在海边露营，但大致也是见到过很多游客露营场景，所以这里选海滩边来写。Earlythatmorning,assoonaswearrivedatthepicturesquebeachinXiangshan,Icouldn’twaittopitchthetent.Aftersettlingin,wefiredupthegrillforabarbecueandsippeddrinks,savoringtheraremomentsofleisure.Asthesunbegantoset,westrolledalongtheshore,collectingseashellsandenjoyingthecoolsandbeneathourfeet.Canyouguessthehighlightoftheday?Withoutadoubt,itwaswhengatheredunderaskyfullofstars,sharingstories—rangingfrommyschoollifetomom’stalesofyouthanddad’sentrepreneurialadventures.Thistripallowedmetounwindfromthepressuresofschoolandstrengthenedmybondwithmyfamily.Beingclosetonaturedidbring

meadeepsenseofpeace.结尾：从对方思考，为什么要告知英国朋友Chris？可能是对方也对露营感兴趣，可以邀请对方一起，兴趣共鸣的同时加深友谊；分享该经历，让对方了解中国生活方式，促进文化交流。Ireallyhopeyoucanjoinusforournextcampingadventureandsharethewonderfulmoments!【参考范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Itwasourfirsttimeonacampingtrip,inwhichmyfamilysleptunderthestarsintheWildernessPark.Wehadnosoonersetupthetentthanitstartedtorain.Whileweenjoyedthesoundoftheraindrippingonourtent,playinggamesandchattingaboutourdailylifestories,mompreparedsomesnacksanddrinksforus.Wemadewet-weathercampingfun.I’mgratefulforthecampingtrip.NotonlydidIenjoythebeautyofnature,butIlearnedthereisplentyofentertainmenttobefoundinexploringnature.Yours,LiHua下水文1DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Wedrovetoabeautifulspotbythelake,setupourtents,andenjoyedthetranquilityofnature.Intheevening,wecookedoveranopenfireandsharedstoriesunderthestars.Thenextday,wewentfishingandhiking,whichwasbothrelaxingandinvigorating.Thewholeexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Itmademerealizehowimportantitistodisconnectfromthedigitalworldandreconnectwithnature.Ifeltasenseofpeaceandunitywithmyfamilythat'shardtofindinourbusylives.I'malreadylookingforwardtoournextadventure.Yours,LiHua下水文2DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Weventuredintothemountains,wherewespenttwodayssurroundedbylushforestsandcrispair.Thefirstdaywasallaboutsettingupcampandexploringthenearbytrails.Wemarveledatthewildlifeandthebreathtakingviews.Onthesecondday,wechallengedourselveswithamoredemandinghiketoawaterfall.Itwasatoughclimb,buttherewardwasworthit.Thesoundofwatercascadingdownandthemistonourfaceswasexhilarating.Thatnight,wecookedasimplemealandenjoyedthesolitude,awayfromthecity'shustleandbustle.Thiscampingtripwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlife.Ittaughtmethevalueofpatienceandteamwork,asweallworkedtogethertoovercomechallenges.Icamebackwitharenewedappreciationforthegreatoutdoorsandthebondsweshareasafamily.Yours,LiHua下水文3DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Wechoseapicturesquespotnearariver,wherewespenttheweekendimmersedinnature'sembrace.Theprocessofpitchingourtentsandpreparingourcampsitewasafun-filledfamilyaffair.Wespentourdaysfishingbytheriverbankandournightsroastingmarshmallowsoverthecampfire.Thehighlightwasastargazingsessionwhereweidentifiedconstellationsandsharedlegendsaboutthestars.Itwasasereneandpeacefulexperiencethatallowedustoslowdownandappreciatethesimplepleasuresoflife.Thiscampingtripwasamemorableadventurethatbro