2025年高考教案英语专题一高级表达

第二部分读后续写专题一高级表达素材高级表达1灵活运用词汇类型1名词/形容词活用作动词单词活用成动词示例bareadj.光秃秃的→vt.使露出Annebaredherteethinagrin.安妮露齿一笑。Thedogbareditsteethandgrowled.那条狗龇牙咧嘴地低吼。blindadj.失明的→vt.使眼花，使目眩Shewasblindedbythelightwhenshewentoutside.她出去的时候被光线照得眼花。capn.帽子→vt.用……覆盖顶部（或端部）Themountainsinthebackgroundwerecappedwithsnow.背景中的山峦被白雪覆盖。closetn.壁橱→vt.把……关在房间里Upongettinghome，sheclosetedherselfawayinherroom.一回到家，她就把自己关在房间里不见任何人。cupn.杯子→vt.使（双手）成圆状托起Shecuppedherlittleson’sfaceinherhandsandkissedhim.她双手捧着小儿子的脸亲吻他。edgen.边缘→v.（使）徐徐移动，慢慢移动Heedgednervouslypastthedog.他紧张不安地从狗旁边慢慢走过去。elbown.肘→vt.用肘推；用肘挤Sheelbowedherwaythroughthecrowd.她用手肘从人群中挤了过去。emptyadj.空的→vt.倒空，腾空Theyemptiedtheirpockets，butfoundnothing.他们掏空了自己的口袋，但里面什么也没有。eyen.眼睛→vt.注视，审视Theboycouldn’thelpeyeingthecakeshungrily.男孩儿饥不可耐地盯着蛋糕。floodn.洪水→v.照进，（光线）充满；（情感等）充满，涌上心头Morningsunshinefloodedinthroughthewindowassheopenedhereyes.当她睁开眼睛，清晨的阳光从窗口洒进来。Awaveofhappinessfloodedme.我心中涌起一股幸福的暖流。inchn.英寸→v.（使朝某方向）谨慎移动Sheinchedherwaydelicatelyovertheroughground.她小心翼翼地在高低不平的地面上慢慢行走。narrowadj.狭窄的→v.缩小Hepressedhislipstogetherandhiseyesnarrowed.他抿紧嘴唇，眼睛眯起来。pocketn.口袋→vt.把……放进衣袋Shepaidforthedrinkandpocketedthechangewithoutcountingit.她付了饮料的钱，把找回的零钱数都没数就装进了口袋。restn.休息→v.（使）倚靠，托Shewasthinkinghowtoworkoutthemathproblem，withherchinrestedinherhands.她双手托着下巴，在想怎么解这道数学题。Hiselbowwasrestingonthearmofthesofa.他的胳膊肘靠在沙发的扶手上。shouldern.肩膀→vt.扛，背；承担Heshoulderedhisbagandsetoffhome.他扛起包朝家走去。Sheshoulderedthedoubleburdenofchildcareandfulltimework.她承担着抚养孩子和做全职工作的双重负担。snaken.蛇→v.曲折前行Theroadsnakedthroughforestedmountains.道路在林间蜿蜒延伸。stormn.暴风雨→vi.气呼呼地疾走，闯Ryanstormedintotheoffice，demandingtoknowwherethemanagerwas.瑞安气冲冲地闯进办公室，质问经理在哪里。类型2具体动词代替笼统动词笼统动词具体动词动作描写示例look/see/watch看spot看见，发现，注意到Ispottedacutepuppyinthebusheswhilewalkingdownthepath.走在小路上时，我发现灌木丛中有一只可爱的小狗。glance瞥一眼Sheglancedshylyathimandthenloweredhereyes.她害羞地瞥了他一眼，然后垂下了眼睛。scan浏览；细看，端详Hescannedthroughthenewspaperoverbreakfast.他边吃早饭，边浏览报纸。Shescannedhisfaceanxiously.她急切地端详着他的脸。observe观察Heobserveskeenly，butsayslittle.他观察敏锐，但言语寥寥。stare/gaze盯着看，凝视Emmastared/gazedathimindisbelief，shakingherhead.埃玛一边狐疑地盯着他看，一边摇着头。glare怒目而视Theoldwomandidn’tshout，justglaringathimsilently.老妇人没有喊叫，只是默默地怒视着他。peek窥视，偷看Shepeekedfrombehindthebedroomdoor，foundnobodyinthesittingroom，andthenslippedoutofthehouse.她从卧室门后偷看，发现没人在客厅，就溜出了房子。cry哭weep流泪，哭泣Sheweptbittertearsofdisappointment.她失望得痛哭流涕。sob啜泣，抽噎Shebegantosobagain，buryingherfaceinthepillow.她把脸埋在枕头里，又开始抽噎起来。say/talk说whisper耳语，低语EmilyleanedoverandwhisperedsomethinginAmy’sear.埃米莉探过身去附耳跟埃米说了些什么。stammer结结巴巴地说"Morning，MrBrook.I...I’veetosaysorryfor..."Billstammered."早上好，布鲁克先生。我……我来道歉，是为……"比尔结结巴巴地说。shout大声说Thetwinsmerrilyshouted"Happybirthday，Mom！"asshecamein.当她进来时，这对双胞胎高兴地喊道："生日快乐，妈妈！"yell叫喊Thecoachstoodonthesidelinesyellingencouragementattheplayers.教练站在场外，为运动员呐喊鼓劲。smile/laugh笑smile微笑Hesaidnothing，merelysmiledandwatchedthem.他什么也没说，只是微笑地看着他们。laugh发笑，大笑Seeinghisheadstuckinthepumpkin，hisdadjustcouldn’tstophimselflaughing.看到他的头卡在南瓜里，他的爸爸忍不住大笑起来。grin露齿而笑Hegrins，delightedatthememory.想起往事，他开心地咧嘴笑起来。giggle咯咯地笑Childrengiggledatthejoke.孩子们给这笑话逗得咯咯笑。chuckle低声轻笑Shechuckledtoherselfforhavingworntwosocksthatdidn’tmatch.她对自己穿了两只不配对的袜子而暗自发笑。eat吃；drink喝bite咬Shegrabbedthebreadonthetable，bitintoit，andthenrushedouthurriedly.她抓起桌上的面包，咬了一口，然后匆匆地跑了出去。chew咀嚼，嚼（碎）Heleanedoutofthewindowchewinggum.他嚼着口香糖探身窗外。swallow吞下，咽下Sheswallowedhardandforcedbackhertears.她使劲咽了一下口水，强忍住了泪水。wolf大口地快吃，狼吞虎咽Thehungryboytookthesteamedbunandwolfeditdown.饥饿的男孩儿接过馒头，狼吞虎咽地吃了下去。taste品尝Shewasdisappointedanddiscouraged，forthecookiesshemadetastedawful.她既失望又气馁，因为她做的饼干吃起来很糟糕。consume吃，喝，饮Heconsumedaloafofbreadandalargebottleofmilkbeforeleaving.他在离开前吃了一条面包，喝了一大瓶牛奶。hit打，击knock敲，击；把……打成（某种状态）Thewildanimalwasknockedflatbytheblow.那野兽被一拳打倒在地。beat敲打，锤砸Windroared，thunderrolledandrainbeatagainstthewindows.狂风大作，雷声隆隆，雨点打在窗户上。strike打，击Hestruckthetablewithhisfistangrily.他生气地用拳头打桌子。walk走；run跑wander漫步，闲逛Wewanderedbacktowardsthehouseafterthepicnic.野餐后，我们溜达着回到房子里。bounce活泼兴奋地走，蹦蹦跳跳地去Hebouncedacrosstheroomtogreetthem.他兴奋地冲过房间去迎接他们。stamp跺着脚走，噔噔地走Angerwellingupinhim，heturnedandstampedoutoftheroom.他勃然大怒，转身噔噔地走出了房间。storm气呼呼地疾走，闯，冲Judyburstintotearsandstormedoff.朱迪突然大哭起来，气冲冲地走了。stagger摇摇晃晃地走，蹒跚Hestaggeredtothebedandcollapsedinexhaustion.他摇摇晃晃地走到床边，筋疲力尽地倒了下去。tiptoe踮着脚走，蹑手蹑脚地走Shetiptoedtotheroom，afraidofwakingupthesleepingbaby.她踮着脚走向房间，害怕吵醒睡着的婴儿。slip悄悄疾行，溜Ididn’tnoticethecatslippingoutofthedoorwhenIcamein.我进来的时候，没有注意到猫溜出了房间。jog慢跑Wewerejoggingwhilethedogswereboundingahead.我们在慢跑，而狗在前面蹦蹦跳跳地跑。bound跳跃着跑rush迅速移动，冲Thelittlegirlrushedtogreethermother，sweepingherarmswide.小女孩儿张开双臂舞动着，冲过去迎接母亲。dash猛冲Withtheshotofthestartinggun，IdashedoutandranasfastasIcould.随着发令枪的一声枪响，我冲出去，以最快的速度奔跑。think想wonder琢磨Hewonderedwhatheshouldsaytohertomakeherfeelbetter.他想知道该对她说些什么才能让她感觉好点儿。reflect认真思考，沉思Ineedtimetoreflectbeforemakingadecision.做决定前，我需要时间认真思考。guess猜想，认为Iguesshemustbereallyangryatme.我想他一定很生我的气。imagine胡乱猜想，误以为He’salwaysimaginingthatwe’retalkingabouthimbehindhisback.他总是胡乱猜测我们在背后说他的闲话。flash突然想到，猛然想起Aterriblethoughtflashedthroughmymind.一个可怕的想法闪过我的脑海。shake抖tremble（因紧张、激动、惊慌等）颤抖，哆嗦Shehasdoneherbesttokeepcalmbutfindsherselftremblingwithtension.她尽力保持镇定，可还是由于紧张而抖个不停。shiver（因寒冷或恐惧而）哆嗦，颤抖Ishiveredandpulledmyscarfmoretightlyroundmyneck.我打了个寒战，用围巾把脖子围得更紧了。高级表达2丰富优化句式句式1画龙点睛的"非谓语动词"1.Helistenedwithcloseattention，bitinghislipsandstaringatthefloor.他聚精会神地听着，咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。2.Hesatwithhisheadinhishands，notbelievingwhatItoldhim.他双手抱头坐着，不相信我告诉他的话。3.Iopenedthelettercarefully，hopingforsomecluestotheidentityoftheownerofthewallet.我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索。4.Gaspingwithpain，heforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow，shakysteps，begantowalk.他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。5.Themanstoodtheresilently，tornbysorrowandpassion.男人安静地站在那里，被悲伤和同情折磨着。6.Encouragedbyhisteacher，hedecidedtogatherhiscourageandparticipateinthewritingcontest.在老师的鼓励下，他决定鼓起勇气参加写作比赛。7.Filledwithfright，Idraggedmyexhaustedbodyinchingforward.我心中充满恐惧，拖着疲惫的身体慢慢向前走。8.Havingtoldthetruth，hefeltaloteasierandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.说出真相后，他感觉轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。句式2光彩夺目的"with复合结构"和"独立主格结构"9.Withmyeyesfulloftears，Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.我满眼泪水地冲出公寓，沿着街道跑。10.Heembracedmewithhisarmswideopenandhiseyesshininglikeadiamond.他张开双臂拥抱我，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。11.Allofuswerehardatitatthekitchentable，withmydadfilmingtheannualevent.我们都围着厨房的桌子忙碌，而爸爸在拍摄这个一年一度的活动。12.Withherplanruinedbytheaccident，sheletoutacrywithanger.由于她的计划被事故破坏了，她愤怒地叫了一声。13.Mymotherstoppedandraisedherheadwithsurpriseinhereyes.我的母亲停下，满眼诧异地抬起头。14.Hehungupthephoneandrantohospital，worrywrittenonhisface.他挂断，跑去医院，脸上写满担忧。15.Thenightfalling，theyputupatentandwolfeddownasimpledinner.夜幕降临，他们搭起帐篷，狼吞虎咽地吃了一顿简单的晚餐。16.Hewalkedaimlesslyalongthestreet，headdownandshouldersbowed.他低着头，垂着肩，漫无目的地在街上走着。17.Hundredsofeyesfixeduponhim，hefeltsonervousthathisteethstartedtochatter.上百双眼睛盯着他，他感到十分紧张，牙齿咯咯打颤。18.Helayonthegrass，hishandscrossedunderhishead.他躺在草地上，双手交叉放在头下。句式3丰富多彩的"复合句"19.Withabranchinmyhand，Iintendedtofrightenthedogsaway，whichinturnannoyedthem.我手里拿着一根树枝，打算把狗吓跑，这反过来又惹恼了它们。20.Hisbodytrembled，hismouthhalfopened，andheletoutascreamofpainthatfeltlikeaknifecuttingthroughhischest.他的身体颤抖着，他的嘴半张着，发出一声痛苦的尖叫，感觉就像一把刀穿过他的胸膛。21.Thethoughtthatwemighthavegotlostinsuchdarknesssentshiversdownmyspine.想到我们可能在这样的黑暗中迷了路，我背上一阵阵发冷。22.AnideaflashedintoJack’smindthathecouldwakethefamilybythrowingsomestonesintothehouse.杰克脑子里闪过一个念头，他可以扔一些石头到房子里，把这家人吵醒。23.Whatfollowedwasanawkwardlylongsilence，whichwaseventuallybrokenbyDavid’sstomachgrowling.随后是一段长时间尴尬的沉默，最终被戴维肚子的咕咕叫声打破了。24.Shecouldhardlyconcealherexcitementthemomentsheknewshewasadmitted.当她得知自己被录取的时候，她几乎无法掩饰自己的兴奋之情。句式4彰显文采的"特殊句式"25.Standingonstage，sonervouswasIthatmymindwentblank.站在舞台上，我紧张得头脑一片空白。26.Notuntilthendidshepouroutwhathadbeendisturbingherthewholeday.直到那时，她才说出了困扰她一整天的事。27.Onlyafterwehadpreparedallthenecessaryingredientsdidwebegintomakethecake.我们直到把一切必需的原料都准备好后才开始做蛋糕。28.Outofthedarknesscameavoicehehadneverheardbefore.黑暗中传来一个他从来没有听过的声音。29.Coldandtiredthoughwewere，thekids’smilingfacescheeredusup.虽然我们又冷又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。30.HangingonthewestwallareagroupofpicturesbyQiBaishi.挂在西墙上的是一组齐白石的画。31.Nosoonerhadherealizedhismistakethanheapologizedtoher.他一意识到自己的错误就向她道歉。32.Fromthenon，notonlydidIhaveagoodmandofwriting，butIalsoknewthetruth：withbeliefanddetermination，everythingispossible.从那时起，我不仅很好地掌握了写作，而且还知道了：有了信念和决心，一切皆有可能。33.ItwasatthatmomentthatIfeltsomethingchangedinourrelationship.就在那一刻，我觉得我们的关系发生了变化。34.Thankstomymom，wemadeitatlast.Itwasshewho/thatalwaystaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetowardsdifficulties.多亏了妈妈，我们最终成功了。是她总教导我们对困难要持积极的态度。35.HelpinganewfriendmadeJoeyfeelgoodinside，for，althoughthebaseballcapdidmattermuchtohim，heknewthereweremoreimportantthingsinlife.帮助一个新朋友让乔伊内心感觉很好，因为尽管棒球帽对他来说很重要，但他知道生活中还有更重要的事情。36.Whatunacceptableexcuseshemadetoavoidhisresponsibility！他为了逃避责任编的理由太不能让人接受了！37.Howwonderfulatimeweeverhadtogether！我们曾一起度过了多么美好的时光啊！38.Howmovedandproudshewaswhenlearninghertwinsmadethebreakfastforher！当她得知她的双胞胎为她做早餐时，她是多么的感动和自豪！句式5委婉动人的"虚拟语气"39.IfIhadn’tquarreledwithTom，Iwouldn’thavebeentrappedinthisawfulplace，confrontedwiththedangerofdeath.我如果没有和汤姆吵架，就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面临死亡的危险。（表达后悔）40.Ilostmyjobanditseemedasiftheendoftheworldhade.我丢了工作，似乎世界末日已经来临。（表达沮丧）41.WithoutEric’sencouragement，Iwouldhavebeenimmersedinsorrowfortherestoftheday.要是没有埃里克的鼓励，我可能后半天都沉浸在悲伤的情绪里。（表达感激）42.Stevenloweredhisheadwithembarrassment，wishinghehadn’tsaidthat.史蒂文尴尬地低下头，希望自己刚才没说那些话。（表达后悔）43."IfonlyIhadlistenedtomymother’sadvice！"thelittlegirlwhisperedtoherself."要是我当初听取了妈妈的建议该多好！"小女孩低声对自己说。（表达后悔）高级表达3心理描写万能句式（awave/sense/feeling/surge/flush/rippleof＋）情感名词＋seized/overwhelmed/tookholdof/sweptover/floodedover＋sb.表示"某人感到……"或"一阵/一种……向某人袭来"1.Awaveofpanicseizedher，butsheforcedherselftoleavetheroomcalmly.她感到一阵恐慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。2.AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthegoodnews.听到这个好消息，我很开心。3.Asherealizedhehadmadeabigmistakeintheteamwork，afeelingofguiltsweptoverhim.当他意识到自己在团队合作中犯了一个大错时，内疚感席卷了他。4.Fearsweepingoverher，shestoodrootedtothespot.恐惧笼罩着她，她站在原地，一动不动。情感名词＋welledupinside/in/withinsb.表示"某人心中充满了……"或"……涌上心头"5.EverytimeIthinkofmygrandpa，sadnesswillwellupinsideme.每当我想起爷爷，悲伤就会涌上心头。6.Atthethoughtofhowhappyhermotherwaswhenreceivingthegift，joyandpridewelledupwithinher.一想到母亲在收到礼物时多么高兴，她内心就充满了喜悦和自豪。7.Angerwellingupwithinhim，heflushedbrightred.他怒不可遏，脸涨得通红。alook/anexpressionof＋情感名词＋flashedacross/spreadacross/crossedone’sface表示"……神色从某人脸上掠过"8.Levinsatthereandanexpressionofsadnesscrossedhisface.莱文坐在那里，脸上掠过一丝悲伤。9.Alookofannoyancecrossedherfacewhensheknewthatherfatherforgotherbirthdaygiftwhichhehadpromised.当知道父亲忘记了答应她的生日礼物时，她脸上掠过一丝恼怒的神色。thesight/thoughtofsth.madesb.＋情感形容词/filledsb.with＋情感名词表示"看到/想到某事物让某人……"10.Thesightofhersongraduatingfilledherwithpride.（＝Atthesightofhersongraduating，shewasfilledwithpride.）看到儿子毕业，她充满了自豪。11.Theverysightofthebearmadehimnervous.（＝Atthesightofthebear，hewasnervous.）一见到那头熊，他就紧张。12.ThethoughtofthemomentssharedwithGrandpafilledmewithgreatjoy.（＝AtthethoughtofthemomentssharedwithGrandpa，Iwasfilledwithgreatjoy.）一想到和爷爷度过的时光，我就感到十分快乐。13.Thesightofitsownermadethelittledogexcited.（＝Atthesightofitsowner，thelittledoggotexcited.）看到自己的主人，小狗兴奋不已。one’sheartpounded/thumped/raced/flutteredwith＋情感名词（excitement/nervousness/fear/fright/...）表示"某人……得心怦怦直跳"14.MyheartwasthumpingwithfearasIwalkedthroughthedarkhallway.当我穿过黑暗的走廊时，我害怕得心怦怦直跳。15.Hishearthadbeenpoundingwithnervousnessbeforehesteppedontothestage.在登上舞台之前，他紧张得心怦怦直跳。16.Herheartwasracingwithanticipationasshewaitedfortheresults.她心怀期待，心怦怦直跳，等待着结果。情感名词A＋gavewayto/wassweptawayby/wasreplacedby/wasovershadowedby/...＋情感名词B表示"……变为……/……为……所取代"17.Herpreviouscalmgavewayto/wassweptawaybyfearwhenshelearnedthatshewasleftaloneatthestation.当她得知自己被独自留在车站时，她先前的泰然自若已变为害怕。18.Hisinitialexcitementwasreplacedbyadeepsenseofdisappointment.他最初的兴奋被深深的失望取代。19.Thejoysheoncefeltwasovershadowedbyawaveofsadness.她曾经感受到的喜悦被一股悲伤的浪潮掩盖。情感名词（fear/terror/panic/surprise/shock/embarrassment/...）rootedsb.tothespot表示"某人……得呆住"20.Embarrassmentrootedhertothespot.她尴尬得呆住了。情感名词（joy/happiness/delight/excitement/...）＋wasshininginone’seyes表示"某人眼里闪着……的光芒"21.Excitementwasshininginhereyes.（＝Hereyeswereshining/sparkling/twinklingwithexcitement.＝Therewasasparkleofexcitementinhereyes.）她的眼里闪烁着激动的光芒。sb.feltagreatsenseof＋情感名词＋wellingupinsb.’sheart/surgingthroughsb.表示"某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾/奔涌"22.Motherfeltagreatsenseofhappinesswellingupinherheart，tearsrollingdownherface.母亲感到一股巨大的幸福感涌上心头，她泪流满面。23.Seeingthebarkingdogchargingtowardsher，Maryfeltagreatsenseofhorrorsurgingthroughher.看到那只狗吠叫着朝她冲来，玛丽感到一股强烈的恐惧奔涌而来。（much）toone’s＋情感名词，主句表示"令某人（非常）……的是，……"24.Tohissurpriseandjoy，hisfathertoldhimtokeepthemoneyandbuysomethinghewanted.令他惊讶和高兴的是，父亲告诉他把钱留着，买一些他想要的东西。25.Muchtomyannoyance，theydecidednottoeafterall.他们最终决定不来，这使我很生气。26.Ineverthoughtshe’dagree，buttomyamazementshedid.我从未想过她会同意，但是令我吃惊的是她同意了。What＋moved/excited/shocked/...＋sb.（most）＋wasthat从句表示"（最）令某人……的是……"27.Whatworriedherwasthatherteammatemightnotagreewithherplan.让她担心的是她的队友可能不同意她的计划。28.Whatupsethimmostwasthathisparentsforgothisbirthdaybecauseofthebirthofhislittlesister.最令他难过的是，因为妹妹的出生，他父母忘记了他的生日。情感形容词（短语），主句29.Excitedandmoved，hefollowedthesoundandwentoutforhelp.他又激动又感动，顺着声音出去求助。30.Speechlesswithhappiness，sheheldhersontightlyinherarms，withtearswellingupinhereyes.她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地抱着她的儿子，热泪盈眶。31.Lonelyandsad，Iwasindesperateneedofclosefriends，withwhomIhopedtosharemyhappinessandsorrow.我既孤独又悲伤，迫切需要亲密的朋友，我希望与他们分享我的快乐和悲伤。32.Disappointedandfrustrated，thepoormanmadehiswaybacktohishome.带着失望和沮丧，这个可怜的人回家了。33.Jackpacedupanddowninhisroom，restlesswithanxiety.杰克在他的房间里来回踱步，焦躁不安。高级表达4动作描写万能句式三连动作链：主语＋didA，didBanddidC1.Shewokeup，slippedoutofherbedandtiptoedtothedoor.她醒了，溜下床，踮着脚走到门口。2.Johnpressedhisfingeragainsthislips，pointedtothecat，andshookhisheadgently.约翰把手指放在嘴唇上，指了指猫咪，轻轻摇了摇头。3.Helosthisbalance，staggeredbackagainsttherailandfellover.他失去了平衡，往后趔趄撞在栏杆上摔倒了。4.Benalsoraninmydirection，gatheredmeintohisarmsandkeptpattingmyback.本也朝我这个方向跑过来，把我拥入怀中，不停地轻拍我的后背。5.Shewipedawaytears，turnedbackandsmiledatmesweetly.她擦去眼泪，转过身，朝我嫣然一笑。主语＋didAanddidB，非谓语动词；主语＋did，非谓语动词A＋and＋非谓语动词B；非谓语动词A，主语＋did，非谓语动词B6.Theyraninbarefeet，laughingandteasing.他们光着脚跑着，笑着闹着。7.Helaidhisfishingpoledownanddraggedhisfeet，movingtowardmeatasnail’space.他放下钓鱼竿，像蜗牛一样磨磨蹭蹭地向我走来。8.Usingitshead，ittouchedourhands，seeminglysayingthatweweretobethanked.它用头碰了碰我们的手，好像在说，它要感谢我们。9.Dadsatbesidemeandpattedmeontheshoulder，notsayingawordofblame.爸爸坐在我旁边，拍了拍我的肩膀，一句责备的话都没说。10.EncouragedbyMrWales，Davidhadmadegreatprogressandevendecidedtotakepartinthespeechcontest.在威尔士先生的鼓励下，戴维取得了很大的进步，甚至决定参加演讲比赛。主语＋did，with＋名词＋非谓语动词或形/副/介词短语11.WhenKarinasawit，shehuggedittightlywithtearsfillinghereyes.当卡琳娜看到它时，她紧紧地拥抱着它，双眼满是泪水。12.Weallprettymuchsleptwithoneeyeopen.我们几乎都不敢睡太熟。13.Heleanedagainstthekitchencounterwithhisarmsfoldedacrosshischest，glaringatme.他靠在厨房的操作台上，双臂交叉抱在胸前，怒视着我。14.Withthebiggestpumpkinonmyshoulder，Iheadedhomemerrily，singingalongtheway.我肩上扛着最大的南瓜，愉快地朝家走去，一路上唱着歌。15.Hereceivedtheletterwithhishandstremblingandhisheartthumping.他接过信，双手颤抖，心怦怦直跳。主语＋did，独立主格[逻辑主语（heart，eyes等表身体部位的名词）＋非谓语动词或形/副/介词短语]16.Reachingout，Itoucheditshead，myheartracing.我心跳加速，伸手去摸它的头。17.Hetossedandturned，hisheadhottotouch.他辗转反侧，头摸着烫手。18.Heracedtothebusstop，hisheartpoundingviolently.他飞快地跑到公交车站，心怦怦狂跳。19.Myarmsachingandkneestrembling，Icrawledoutofthecaveandshoutedforhelp.手臂疼痛、膝盖发抖，我爬出了洞，大喊救命。20.Eyesgluedtoit，hefellinlovewiththeshinyredcartheinstanthesawit.他一看到那辆闪亮的红色汽车就爱上了它，目不转睛地盯着它。21.Somanyeyeslookingather，Maryfeltveryshy.这么多双眼睛望着她，玛丽感到很害羞。高级表达5修辞运用万能句式明喻：主语＋did/系动词＋like/asif...1.Seizedbycuriosity，Tomwentoutoftheroomontiptoelikeacat.汤姆好奇心顿起，像猫一样踮着脚走出房间。（心理＋动作描写）2.Thesceneryalongtherouteisjustlikeabreathtakinglandscapepainting.沿路的景色就像一幅令人惊叹的风景画。（环境描写）3.Theskiesweredark.Astrongwindwasblowinghard，cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.天空一片漆黑。一阵大风猛烈地刮着，像一把锋利的刀割着我的脸。（环境描写）4.Scaredtodeath，Johnstoodunderthetreelikeastatue.约翰吓得要死，站在树下，像雕像一样一动不动。（神态描写）5.Childrenarerunningonthegrassasiftheywerehappybirds.孩子们在草地上奔跑，宛如快乐的小鸟。（心理＋动作描写）6.Icouldn’tmovemylegs.Itwasasiftheyhadbeenstucktothefloor.我的腿动不了，就好像被固定在地板上了。（动作描写）明喻：A＋系动词/did＋as＋形容词/副词＋as＋B7.Mymotherwasasbusyasabee，makingpreparationsforthefestival.我妈妈忙得不可开交，为节日做准备。（动作描写）8.Herfaceturnedaspaleassnow.她的脸变得苍白如雪。（神态描写）9.Theteacher’sfortwasasgentleasaspringbreeze.老师的安慰如春风般温柔。（人物描写）10.Havingwalkedinthesnowfortwohours，Ifeltmyhandswereascoldasice.在雪地里走了两个小时，我感觉我的手冷得像冰。（感受描写）11.Thebusfullofpassengerswentasslowlyasasnail.这辆载满乘客的公交车慢得像蜗牛。（场景描写）12.Hervoicecamedownthelineasclearasabell.她的声音如铃声般清晰地从听筒里传出来。（人物描写）13.Hehasbeenasnervousasacatonhotbricksallevening.他整个晚上都紧张得像热锅上的蚂蚁。（心理描写）14.Theboywasasproudasapeacockwhenheshowedmehisnewsneakers.那个男孩给我看他的新运动鞋时，骄傲得像一只孔雀。（性格描写）暗喻：A＋be动词＋B；通过其他一些能暗含A与B之间联系的动词15.Mysister’shairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownoverhershoulders.我姐姐的头发像一条流动的金色河流顺着她的肩膀散下来。（外貌描写）16.Theboyseizedthefoodonthetableandwolfeditdown.男孩一把抓过桌上的食物，狼吞虎咽地吃了下去。（动作描写）17.Thenewswasadaggerinherheart，makinghertoopainfultobreathe.这个消息犹如一把匕首刺在她心头，使她痛苦得无法呼吸。（心理描写）18.Hisangerwasawildfirewaitingtolight.他的愤怒就像等待点燃的野火。（心理描写）19.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.房间里一片寂静。（环境描写）拟人：主语（表"动物/自然现象/含蓄抽象"的名词）＋用于人的谓语动词20.Sorrowwaswrittenineachandeverywrinkleofhisface.他脸上的每一条皱纹都写着悲伤。（心理描写）21.Heglancedatthedewcoveredgrass，anditwinkedbackathim.他扫了一眼挂满露珠的青草，青草就向他眨了眨眼。（环境描写）22.Thecolorrushedtohercheekswhensherealizedshewasbeingwatched.意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。（神态描写）23.Thetreebranchscratchedandclawedatmywindow，tryingtobreakintothehouse.树枝抓挠我的窗户，试图闯进屋内。（环境描写）24.Shefeltontopoftheworld，andeveryfreckleonhercheekswasdancingwithjoy.她感到非常高兴，脸颊上的每一个雀斑都在高兴地跳舞。（心理描写）25.Depressed，Iranoutoftheroom.Agentlebreezegreetedme，caressedmycheeksandsmoothedmyheart.我沮丧地跑出了房间。一阵轻柔的微风向我袭来，抚过我的脸颊，抚慰了我的心。（心理描写）26.Shedidn’trealizethatanopportunitywasknockingatherdoor.她没有意识到一个机会正在敲她的门。（事件描写）夸张：（动词＋）数词/量词/形容词＋名词；动词（＋名词）＋副词27.Despitethecold，hewassweatingfromcarryingamountainofcardboardintothebackyard.尽管天气很冷，他还是因为搬了一大堆硬纸板到后院而汗流浃背。（数量的夸张）28.Hearingthebadnews，shecriedhereyesout，herheartbreakingintoaboutamillionpieces.听到这个不幸的消息，她痛哭流涕，心都碎了。（情绪和数量的夸张）29.Carryingabackpackwhichweighedaton，hewasextremelyexhaustedandlookedhalfdead.他背了个很沉的背包，非常疲惫，累坏了。（数量和感受的夸张）30.Whensheheardthebadnews，shecriedariveroftears.当她听到这个噩耗时，她泪流满面。（情绪的夸张）31.Maryisamusicalgenius.Herperformancesalwaysbringthehousedown.玛丽是个音乐天才。她的表演总能赢得满堂喝彩。（动作的夸张）32.Thelimitlessgrassland，thewanderingsheepandthesettingsunkeptmefascinated.一望无际的草原、徜徉的羊群和落日都让我着迷。（环境的夸张）33.Hewassonervousandworriedthatsweatbegantopourdownhisface.他如此紧张和担忧，以至于汗开始沿着面颊淌下来。（情绪的夸张）排比：词语/句子＋词语/句子，and词语/句子34.Johnconvincedmostoftheaudiencebecausehearguedlogically，calmlyandreasonably.约翰说服了大多数听众，因为他辩论得合乎逻辑，冷静而合理。（突出了辩论的说服力）35.Tomaintaingoodhealth，hedeterminedtoeatawellbalanceddiet，sleepfor8hourseverynightandexercisefor20minuteseveryday.为了保持健康，他决定均衡饮食，每晚睡8小时，每天锻炼20分钟。（展示一系列行动）36.Hewassoashamedofwhathethought，whathesaidandwhathedidthatday.他为自己那天所想的、所说的和所做的感到非常羞愧。（突出人物羞愧的情绪）37.Myforgetfulmomoftenforgetstobringthekey，takethewallet，andevenlockthedoor.我健忘的妈妈总是忘记带钥匙，忘记带钱包，甚至忘记锁门。（突出人物健忘的性格）38.Asatypicalstudentfavoredbyteachers，heisneverlateforschool，alwaysactiveinclass，andalwaysfriendlytowardshisclassmates.作为一名典型的受老师喜爱的学生，他上学从不迟到，课堂上总是很活跃，而且对同学一直都很友好。（突出人物的优秀品质）39.TerriblethoughtsflashedthroughJane’smind：whetherthereweredangerousanimals，whethershecouldsurvivethisscarynight，andwhetherTomcouldfindher.一些可怕的念头闪过简的脑海：是否有危险的动物，她是否能熬过这个可怕的夜晚，汤姆是否能找到她。（突出人物害怕的心情）高级表达6升华结尾万能句式情感升华：衔接语，主人公＋gradually/eventually/suddenly/...＋realized/learned/felt/...＋n./that从句表示"……，主人公渐渐/终于/突然/……意识到/明白/感到……"1.Afterthisevent，hecametorealizethatwhilehehadgiventhedogahome，ithadgivenhimsomethingbigger—asecondlife.这件事发生后，他开始意识到，虽然他给了那只狗一个家，但它给了他更重要的东西——第二次生命。2.Atthatmoment，Itrulyunderstoodthemeaningofthesayingthatkindnessbringsaboutkindness.在那一刻，我真正理解了善有善报这句谚语的含义。3.Byshowingkindnesstoothers，theyoungboygraduallylearnedthathecouldmakeapositiveimpactontheworldsurroundinghim.通过对他人友善，年轻男孩逐渐明白他可以对周围的世界产生积极的影响。情感升华：衔接语，itstruck/hit/occurredto/dawnedon＋主人公＋that从句表示"……，主人公突然想到/逐渐明白……"4.Followingthat，itgraduallydawnedonmethattheloveofmymotherispriceless，whichnothingcanmatch.在那之后，我逐渐明白了母亲的爱是无价的，没有什么能与之相比。5.Atthesightofmyparents’workinghardonthefarm，itoccurredtomethatitwastheirselflessdevotionthatgavemeahappylife.看到父母在农场辛勤工作，我突然醒悟，正是他们的无私奉献给了我幸福的生活。结尾点题：lookingbackon/thinkingof/atthethoughtof/atthesightof...，主人公＋always/still...表示"回首/想到/一想到/一看到……，主人公总是/仍然……"6.Lookingbackonouradventurousjourney，werealizedthatitwasallworthitintheend.回首我们的冒险之旅，我们觉得最终这一切都值得。7.Atthethoughtofthatheartwarmingscene，Jennacouldn’thelpgettingdeeplymovedbytheselflessloveandcareofherneighbors.一想起那暖心的场景，詹娜就会情不自禁地被邻居无私的关爱深深打动。8.Andnow，whenlookingbackuponthatexperience，shestillfeelsthatitwasthatexperiencethattransformedherintoanaturelovingbeing.现在，当回顾那段经历时，她仍然觉得正是那段经历把她变成了一个热爱自然的人。结尾点题：衔接语，无灵主语＋sounded/echoed/rang/lingered＋inone’sear/head/mind/...表示"……，……在耳边/脑中/……回响"9.Sincethen，myfather’splainandencouragingwordshavealwaysechoedinmymind，guidingthewayofmylife.从那时起，父亲那些平淡而令人鼓舞的话就一直在我的脑海中回响，指引着我的人生道路。10.Thoughmanyyearshadwornon，hiswarningwasstillringinginmyear.虽然许多年过去了，但他的警告仍然在我耳边回响。结尾点题：（衔接语，）无灵主语＋reminded/enlightened＋主人公＋that...表示"（……，）……提醒主人公/使主人公明白……"11.Thewholeexperienceremindedmethatteamworkwaskeytooursuccessintheproject.整个经历提醒我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这个项目的关键