专题6.书面表达（教师版）

书面表达一20202021湖北省武汉市汉阳区请用以下材料写一篇文章来介绍你的好朋友王强。要点如下：1.以前很怕英语，现在上课听讲认真，做笔记，进步很大。2.去年去欧洲旅游，发现那里有很多中国制造的产品，感到很自豪。3.有机会与外国人交流，觉得学好英语很重要。4.补充两点你对学英语的建议。要求：1.词数：60802.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译参考词汇：productn.产品；foreignern.外国人municatewith与...交流_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisWangQiang.HeusedtobeafraidofEnglish.Nowhelistenscarefullyinclass,takesnotesandmakesgreatprogress.HewenttoEuropelastyearandfoundthatthereweremanyproductsmadeinChina.Hewasveryproud.There,hehadtheopportunitytomunicatewithforeignersandthoughtitimportanttolearnEnglishwell.IthinkitisveryimportantforustolearnEnglishwell.WecanreadEnglisharticles.WecanalsolistentomoreEnglishsongs.IthinkwatchingEnglishmoviesisalsoagoodwaytoimproveourEnglish.【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，根据以下材料写一篇文章来介绍好朋友王强。要点已给出，不能遗漏和省略。文中必须围绕所给提示来写，最后必须添加两点对学英语的建议。2.写作指导：本文用第三人称和第一人称来介绍，时态采用一般现在时为主，也用到了一般过去时，注意动词的过去式的变化，描述尽量用简洁的语言，运用适当的语法规则和词汇把各个要点准确表达出来。二20192020湖北省武汉市汉阳区你们学校在举行以"重阳敬老"为主题的征稿活动。请你根据以下中文提示，写一篇80个词左右的短文。要点如下：1.重阳节（DoubleNinthFestival）是我国的一个传统节日。2.你认为尊重老人很重要，我们大家都应该尊重老人。3.你很爱自己的爷爷奶奶，你常常去看他们，帮他们做家务，逗他们开心。4.你对所有老人都有礼貌。在公交上你常给他们让座。5.你还主动照顾街坊的独居老人，帮助打扫房屋，陪老人聊天。6.适当发挥一条。参考词汇：cheer...up使高兴neighborhoodn.街区；街坊respectv.尊敬_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DoubleNinthFestivalisatraditionalFestivalinChina.Ithinkitisveryimportanttorespecttheoldandallofusshouldrespecttheold.Ilovemygrandparentsverymuch.Ioftengotoseethem,helpthemwiththehouseworkandamusethem.IampolitetoalltheoldpeopleandIoftengivemyseattothemonthebus.Ialsoofferedtotakecareofelderlypeoplelivingaloneinmyneighborhood.Ihelpedcleanthehouseandchattedwiththeoldman.Ithinkweshouldvisittheelderlypeopleaslongaswearefree,notonDoubleNinthFestival.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类作文写作。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。三20192020湖北省武汉市江岸区假设你是小美,为了感谢外教Mike对自己英语学习上的帮助,在他即将回英国之前,请他来家中过周末,请拟写一封邀请信,要点如下:1.自己以前很害羞,但现在敢于表达自己,英语口语有很大提升;2.学会了很多有趣但有效的英语学习新方法,如:听英文歌、画思维导图等；3.准备送Mike中国剪图作为馈赠,在中国;剪纸可以贴在窗户或门上祈福；4.周末会吃上中国传统美食——饺子,相信Mike一定会喜欢;5.补充一至两点对Mike的祝福。注意：1、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2、不得逐条翻译,内容要连贯得体;3、文章的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数参考词汇:思维导图mindmap中国剪纸Chinesepapercutting张贴putupDearMike,ThankyousomuchforhelpingmealotwithmyEnglish.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,ThankyousomuchforhelpingmealotwithmyEnglish.Iusedtobeveryshy.ButnowIdaretoexpressmyselfandmyspokenEnglishhasimprovedalot.Withyourhelp,IhavealsolearnedmanyinterestingbuteffectivenewwaysoflearningEnglish,suchaslisteningtoEnglishsongs,drawingmindmapsandsoon.IamgoingtosendyouChinesepapercuttingsasathankyou.InChina,papercutscanbeputupWindowsordoorsforblessing.BeforeyougobacktoEngland,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomefortheweekend.Onweekend,youwillhavedumplings,atraditionalChinesefood.I’msureyouwilllikethem.Ihopeyouwillalwaysbehappy.Yours,XiaoMei【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。假设你是小美，要求你根据所给出的材料提示内容，给你的外教Mike写一封邀请信，感谢他对自己在英语学习上的帮助，在他即将回英国之前，请他来家中过周末。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。四20192020湖北省武汉市外国语学校学校即将举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以TheChangesinMyHometown为题，用英语写一篇6080词的短文。内容包括：1.家乡人民过去生活贫困，房屋破旧；2.过去道路不宽敞，也不干净；3.现在发生了很大变化，家乡人民住房宽敞明亮，许多人拥有了自己的汽车；4.每年有成千上万来自各地的游客；5.对家乡未来的发展提出自己的期望。提示词：wideadj.宽敝的；ownv.拥有touristn.游客；TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,sofewvisitorscamehere.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbeemorebeautiful.Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversclearerandtheskybluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldetovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbeebetterandbetterinthefuture.【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，以TheChangesinMyHometown为题，文中必须包含所给提示的内容，介绍了家乡过去和现在的不同。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来介绍；因为是家乡的变化，时态采用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，写作时注意承接开头，本文思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。五20192020湖北省襄阳市假定你所在的班级上周举行了一次“KeepOurSchoolClean”的主题班会，你们班针对这个主题踊跃发言，提出了许多好的建议，结束时班长（monitor）做了总结发言。班会很成功，大家收获很多。于是你给校园英文报写了一篇报道。请根据下面写作要点提示及注意事项，完成这篇英文报道。1．写作要点提示：1)活动时间、地点、主题；2）活动过程、内容；3）你的简要评价。2．注意事项：1)字数：90词左右；2)短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；4)已给的标题及开头不计入总字数，也不得抄入答题卡。AClassMeetingonKeepingOurSchoolCleanInordertostudyandliveinacleanandbeautifulenvironment,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AClassMeetingonKeepingOurSchoolCleanInordertostudyandliveinacleanandbeautifulenvironment,wehadaclassmeetingonkeepingourschoolcleanlastweekinourclassroom.Atthebeginningofthemeeting,ourheadteacherfirstannouncedthethemeofthemeeting.Thenthestudentsbegantodiscusshowtokeepourschoolclean.Somestudentsthoughtweshouldnotlitter.Weshouldthrowthegarbageintothedustbin.Otherssuggestedweshouldnotdrawonthewallandwemustprotecttheflowersandtreesoftheschool.Everyonespokeactivelyandputforwardmanygoodsuggestions.Attheendofthemeeting,themonitorgaveasummaryspeechtotheclassmeeting.Ithoughtourclassmeetingwasverysuccessful.Allofusrealizedtheimportanceofschooltidiness,andwealsounderstoodhowtokeepourschoolcleaninourdailylife.【解析】【详解】题干解读：这是一篇提纲作文。明确文章内容：介绍班会的时间，地点及主题；班会进行的过程及讨论内容：首先宣布班会主题，然后同学讨论，最后班长总结。拓展：同学们讨论的建议。最后要发表自己对班会的评价。明确人称和时态：第一人称；一般过去时态。例文点评：这篇短文分三段进行介绍：第一段介绍班会的主题，时间及地点；第二段介绍班会过程：首先班主任宣布主题，然后同学讨论，最后班长总结；第三段发表对班会的看法及班会收获。短文内容丰富，逻辑清晰，语言准确。高分亮点：短语：Atthebeginningofthemeeting，hethemeofthemeeting，throw…into，spokeactively，Attheendofthemeeting，Allofus，theimportanceofschooltidiness，keepourschoolclean，inourdailylife复合句：Somestudentsthoughtweshouldnotlitter；Otherssuggestedweshouldnotdrawonthewallandwemustprotecttheflowersandtreesoftheschool.六2020湖北省武汉市武昌区假如你是李华，你们班将举办一场告别初中生活的晚会，请你代表班级用英文写一封邮件，邀请你们的外教David前来参加。内容要点如下：1.时间和地点：6月30日晚上7:00，本班教室；2.分享过去的幸福记忆，畅想未来的美好梦想；3.感恩老师关爱，感谢同学友情；4.同唱一首歌曲，互赠一份礼品；5.请补充一至两点与晚会相关的活动。注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2.词数：60~80；3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：sharen.分享memoryn.记忆presentn.礼物DearDavid:I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoourfarewellparty.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We’reexpectingyouring.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDavid:I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoourfarewellparty.Thepartywillbeat7:00p.m.onJune30thinourclassroom.Wehavemadeafullpreparationforit.Duringtheparty,firstwearegoingtoshareoursweetmemoriesinthepastthreeyearswitheachother.Second,weareexpectedtotalkaboutourdreamsaboutthefuture.Thenwewillgivethankstoteacherswhohavehelpedusalot.We’llalsothankourclassmatesforourfriendship.Afterthatwe’llsingasongtogetherandsendpresents.Lastbutnotleast,studentsandteacherswilltakephotostogether.We’reexpectingyouring.Yours,LiHua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信类写作，根据题目要求，承接文章开头，按照内容要求告诉收信人晚会的时间、地点、目的以及活动内容，活动内容可自行补充一点到两点，可以参考题目中给出的词汇。写作指导：本文承接第一段点明来信目的；第二段，应用一般将来时介绍清楚晚会的时间、地点，分点描述活动内容安排；文章最后一段（题目已给出），期待对方到来。文章内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。七20192020湖北省鄂州市梁子湖区最近你校针对“青少年在周末应不应该和朋友外出”的问题进行了讨论。请根据讨论结果，以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”为题写一篇短文。AgreeDisagreerelaxgooverlessons.entertainmenthaveagoodsleep...helpparentsdohousework要求：1.词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）；2.内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥，不用逐词翻译；3.条理清楚，语句连贯；4.文中不得出现真实学校和姓名。Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyclassmatesaboutwhetherteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Intheend,weallagreedthatgoingoutissometimes,notalways.Andteenagerscangooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends.【答案】Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyclassmatesaboutwhetherteenagerscangooutwithfriendsonweekends.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somestudentsthinktheyshouldn’tgoout.Theythinkthatstudentsneedtogoovertheirlessonsatweekends.Ifyoualwayswentout,youcan’thaveagoodsleepandifyoudon’tgoout,youcanalsohelpparentsdohousework.Theotherstudentsthinkentertainmentisasimportantasstudying.Theyhaveheavystudyduringweekdaysanditisagoodchanceforthemtorelaxattheweekend.Inaddition,goingoutcanletthemknowmoreabouttheoutsideworld.Intheend,weallagreedthatgoingoutissometimes,notalways.Andteenagerscangooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends.【解析】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”为题写一篇短文，内容包括同意和不同意两派，并按表格信息分别详细阐述原因。例文点评：文章主要采用第三人称进行客观论述，时态以一般现在时为主；文章分为三段：第一段点明主题，指出讨论的话题；第二段分别对两派观点进行详细阐述；第三段进行总结，得出结论。文章层次分明、条理清晰、语言精炼。高分亮点：短语：haveopinionsabout；needtodo；goover；helpsb.do；inaddition；letsb.do。句型：that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；as+形容词/副词原级+as；itis+n.+forsb.todo。八20192020湖北省恩施市巴东县假如你是李华，三年前开始学英语时，听力和阅读很薄弱，是来自澳大利亚的Sam同学主动关心你、帮助你，使你走出困境。临近他回国之际，你想对他表示感谢。根据下表中的内容，用英语给他写一份不少于80词的留言。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。写作要点1.学英语时，听力和阅读感觉很难；2.Sam对你的帮助和建议经常在课余时间帮助我；多看英语电影、多听英语歌曲；.……(自由发挥，至少一条)3.你的收获和感谢；DearSam,Howtimeflies!It’stimeforustosaygoodbye.YouhaveofferedmesomuchhelpinmyEnglishthatIthinkwordstoshowmythanksarefarfromenough.Istillrememberthreeyearsago,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforallyourhelp.Andbestwishesforyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSam,Howtimeflies!It’stimeforustosaygoodbye.YouhaveofferedmesomuchhelpinmyEnglishthatIthinkwordstoshowmythanksarefarfromenough.Istillrememberthreeyearsago,IhaddifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizesomanywordsandunderstandwhatpeopleweresaying.MyspokenEnglishandwrittenEnglishwerepoor,too.However,IwassoluckythatImetyou,akindhearted,smartandpatientboy.Firstly,youtaughtmetolistenmoreandreadmore.Anditreallyhelpedmealot.Besides,yousuggestedthatIshouldwatchEnglishmoviesandsingclassicEnglishsongs.Inaddition,youtoldmetoformthehabitofreadingEnglishaloudinthemorningandreadingnovelsbeforegoingtobed.Asaresult,Ifinallymadegreatprogress.Thankyouforallyourhelp.Andbestwishesforyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇为材料作文，要求以李华的身份，按照下表中的内容，用英语给来自澳大利亚的同学Sam写一份留言，向他表达谢意，感谢他3年来在英语学习方面给你提供的帮助。1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份，用第一人称给来自澳大利亚的同学Sam写一份留言，向他表达谢意，感谢他3年来在英语学习方面给你提供的帮助。讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。九20192020湖北省黄冈市麻城市假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily给你发来一封电子邮件，询问你家乡近五年的变化。请你根据下面要点提示给她回复邮件，简单介绍你家乡发生的变化。要点提示：1.环境方面（比如种花栽树）;2.交通方式方面（比如道路,交通工具）;3.休闲方式方面(比如健身娱乐);写作要求：1.词数90词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.内容应包括所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。DearEmily,I’mgladtotellyouthatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownoverthepastfiveyears.Herearesomechanges.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!I‘mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEmily,I’mgladtotellyouthatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownoverthepastfiveyears.Herearesomechanges.First,peopledidnotpayattentiontotheenvironmentaroundtheminthepast.Solotsofrubbishusedtobehereandthere,butnowtheyknowrubbishshouldbethrownintotherubbishbin,sothestreetsbeecleaner.What’smore,morerestroomsarebuiltnotonlyinthecitiesbutalsointhevillages.Itmakesmyhometownmorebeautiful.Second,theroadsarewiderandwider.Itisconvenientforpeopletodriveorhaveawalk.Third,peopleusedtowatchTVorplayputersathome.Butnow,theydodifferentthings.Inthemorningsorevenings,theydancetogether.Oldpeopleusuallyhaveawalkwiththeirfamilies.Theywanttoimprovetheirhealth.I’mreallyhappytoseethesegreatchangesinmyhometown.Bestwishes!Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】题干解读：根据要求可知：要从三方面介绍家乡的变化：1.环境；2.交通方式；3.休闲方式。根据题干可知，要用第一人称来写，描述发生的变化，要把过去和现在进行比较，介绍过去的情况要用一般过去时。例文点评：短文采用了总—分—总的顺序介绍家乡的变化：分别从环境、道路交通和休闲娱乐方式进行比较，最后期待对方来家乡参观。高分亮点短语：takeplace；payattentionto；hereandthere；what’smore;notonly…butalso;lookforwardtodoingsth.句型：含有情态动词should的被动语态；usedto表示一般过去时；so引导结果状语从句。十20202021湖北省随州市广水市假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发。2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。3.性格：以前外向；现在有些内向要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥；2.层次清晰，语言流畅；3.80词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ihaveafriend.HernameisLinda.Sheisabeautifulgirl.Ihaveneverseenherfortwoyears.Shecamebackfromstudyingabroadlastweek.It'sapleasureforustomeeteachother.Sheusedtolikeplayingtabletennis,watchingTVandchatting.Butnowshelikesplayingthepiano,readingandtakingawalk.Inthepast,sheusedtobeshortandhadshorthair,nowsheismuchtallerandshehaslonghair.Sheusedtobeoutgoing,butnowshechangesintoaintrovertedgirl!Whatgreatchangesshehas！【解析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定格式和短语，为文章增色不少。如usedtpdo过去常常做某事；likedoingsth喜欢做某事；but但是等等。语言的表达符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。适当的使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。十一20202021武汉市蔡甸区求新联盟假如你是李华，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划，请你根据以内容提示，用英语汇报一下你的计划。内容要点如下:1.博览群书，学习技能；2.健康饮食，坚持锻炼；3.亲子交流，增进了解；4.热爱劳动，分担家务；5.热爱公益，关爱他人；6.可适当补充一点有关信息或个人想法。注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2.词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;3.表达中必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，不逐条翻译。参考词汇：skillv.技能municatev.交流charityactivitiesn.慈善活动DearClassmates,Summerholidayising,andhereismyplanforit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________…Ihopeallofyoucanenjoytheingholiday.That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】Dearclassmates,Summerholidayising,andhereismyplanforit.First,I’dliketochooseseveralgoodbooksandreadthemcarefully.Thiscanhelpmeopenmymindandlearnmoreabouttheworld.Ialsothinkit’snecessaryformetolearnatleastoneskill.I’minterestedincooking,soIwilllearntocooksomedeliciousdi