3.4应用文写作（专练）

2020年初升高英语无忧衔接第三章英语技能衔接专题四应用文写作解析版【写作练习一】假如你是李华，你昨天收到好友晓东的来信，他说他上了高中以后感觉很郁闷，很孤独，学习压力大，作业完不成，上课听不懂等诸多学习和生活的问题，想放弃。请你帮帮他，给他提些建议。

要点：

（1）和同学友好相处，多交友，多参加课外活动。

（2）找到适当的放松方式。

（3）努力学习，课前做好准备。

注意：

（1）字数80左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

​（3）可紧扣主题适当发挥。DearXiaoDong,

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LiHua【答案】​DearXiaoDong,

Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublewithyourmiddleschoollife.However,thesituationisveryeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.

Firstofall,youshouldbefriendlytoanyonewhoyoumeetatthenewschoolandtrytomakefriendswiththem.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities.Thatcanmakeyouhappy.Secondly,Whynotchoosesomeproperwaystorelax.Inmyopinion,takingexercise,watchingTVorplayingputergamesisagoodwaytorelaxyourself.Thirdly,Iagreethatyoushouldstudyhardandhaveagoodpreparationforeveryclasssothatyoucanunderstandtheteacher.

Ihopethatyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.

Yours,

​LiHua【解析】​思路点拨这是一篇提纲作文，根据题干提示给你的好友晓东写一篇回信，给他的学习上出现的问题提些建议。本文主要用一般现在时态和第一、第二人称来写作。注意把提示要点准确的表达出来，并适当发挥，使文章更充实。写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。另外注意书写工整，尽量避免拼写错误，字数100左右。二、高分语块1.havetroublewith在某事方面有麻烦；

2.haveagoodpreparationfor为……做好准备。三、高分句型

1.However,thesituationisveryeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.（if引导的条件状语从句）

2.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities.（it做形式主语）

3.Thirdly,Iagreethatyoushouldstudyhardandhaveagoodpreparationforeveryclasssothatyoucanunderstandtheteacher.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）【写作练习二】假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Merry约好一起去长城，但你因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件,内容包括：(1)表示歉意；(2)说明原因；(3)重新预约时间。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMerry,I’mtrulysorrytosaythat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours，LiHua【答案】

DearMerry，

I'mtrulysorrytosaythatIcannotvisittheGreatWallwithyouthisSaturdaymorning.IhavejustlearnedthatIhavetomeetmyuncleattheairportthatmorning.Ihopethechangewillnotgiveyoutoomuchtrouble.

ShallwegoonnextSundaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe'llhavemoretimetoenjoythescenery.Ifit'sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30outsideourschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Yours,

LiHua【解析】一、思路点拨这是一篇书信类作文。假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Merry约好一起去长城，但你因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件。内容包括:

(1)表示歉意；(2)说明原因；(3)重新预约时间。材料已给出，写作的时候关键在于要点不能有遗漏和省略。还要有适当的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。二、高分语块1.visittheGreatWall参观长城2.toomuchtrouble太多麻烦三、高分句型1.I'mtrulysorrytosaythatIcannotvisittheGreatWallwithyouthisSaturdaymorning.(that引导宾语从句)2.IhavejustlearnedthatIhavetomeetmyuncleattheairportthatmorning.(that引导宾语从句)3.Wecansetoutearlysothatwe'llhavemoretimetoenjoythescenery.（sothat引导状语从句）4.Ifit'sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.(if引导条件状语从句)​​

【写作练习三】假设你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会正面向全国学生招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据提示用英文给组委会写一封信，要点如下：(1)自我介绍：年龄，性别，学历等;(2)个人条件：英语好，善于交际等;(3)希望获得批准。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）；(3)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSir/Madam,

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LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,

MynameisLiHua.Iwouldliketoworkasavolunteerforthe2022BeijingWinterOlympicGames.

IwasquiteexcitedwhenIheardabouttheWinterOlympicGamestobeheldinourcountry.IamafemalestudentinaseniormiddleschoolandIcandoagoodjobforthegames.First,IamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.Second,Iamfamiliarwiththelocalconditions.Third,Igetalongwithotherseasily.AndI'mreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded.Shouldyougivemeanopportunityofapersonalinterview,I