热点18旅游2020-2021学年中考英语最具热度话题作文（教师版）

热点18旅游旅游无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了快乐。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：旅游。【预测题目】（一）下图是某街区的平面图,最近来此旅游的人很多,为方便游客,请写一份旅游指南。(词数不少于60个单词)WeletoCenterStreet.First,takeataxifromtheairport._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WeletoCenterStreetTakeataxifromtheairport.GoalongRiverStreetandturnleftatthefirstturning.ThengodownBridgeStreetandturnright.NowyouareonCenterStreet.CenterStreetisagoodplacetohavefun.It’saverybusystreet.Youcanenjoyflowersinthegarden.It’sbetweenthepostofficeandtherestaurant.Ifyoulikereading,youcangotothebookstore.Andwhenyouarehungry,youcaneatintherestaurant.It’sacrossfromthebookstore.【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据所给的图示写一篇旅游指南。这是一篇看图作文，我们要仔细观察图片中所标注的街道、场所的名称，分清方向等信息，用正确的英语介绍里面的这些场所。这篇作文跟我们教材中所学的指路这一话题非常相关，里面会涉及一些短语和句型，因此学生们可以从教材上所学的这些知识着手。写作时，要注意空间顺序，叙述要有条理，不能杂乱无章。使用祈使句和并列句，这些句型在这个场景中是经常用到的。注意动词的正确形式，使用正确的介词短语。还应使用一些较好的句型，增强文章的表现力。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目所给的图示，介绍了图上的街道、场所的位置关系等信息。首先短文的内容完整，包括了文章需要的所有信息。整篇短文表达有序，作者按照了从下向上的顺序，依次介绍，这样处理，使文章很有条理。这篇短文里主要使用了祈使句和and连接的并列句，还使用了复合句。文章里比较好的句型有GoalongRiverStreetandturnleftatthefirstturning.、ThengodownBridgeStreetandturnright、Ifyoulikereading,youcangotothebookstore.、Andwhenyouarehungry,youcaneatintherestaurant等。（二）假如你叫Jane,这个暑假你们全家准备出去旅游，就下列内容给旅行社的经理写一封信。注意：1、字数80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2、不得在文中透露自己的真实姓名和学校名称，否则不予评分。Dearmanager,Mywholefamilywantto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jane【答案】Dearmanager,MywholefamilywanttohaveajourneytoDalianduringthesummerholiday.ItwillbeginonJuly10th,andthejourneywilllastfortendays.Wewillgotherebyplane.Couldyouhelpmebooksevenairtickets?Then,wewanttobookahotelwhichisnotexpensive.Weneedthreeroomsforsevenpeople,andwhat’sthemostimportant,thehotelshouldnotbefarfromtheocean.Wewilltakeawalkalongthebeachinthemorning,andwewillgoswimmingandplayingvolleyballonthebeachafterlunch.Besides,myfatherandIwillgosurfinganddivingintothewaterintheafternoon.Itwillbegreatfun.Intheevening,wewilleatmanydifferentkindsofseafood.Itwillbeanexcitingvacationandwewillhaveagoodtime.Wearelookingforwardtothisjourney.Thankyouforyourhelpingus.Yours,Jane【解析】试题分析：本篇作文为应用文，要求用英文写一封信，告知旅行社经理关于旅游的主要事项。要求：1．书信应包括图中所有要点，可适当发挥,并补充相关内容；2．信中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3．词数控制在80字左右。（开头和结尾不计入词数）。4．要注意时态运用，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。【写作亮点】：这篇书信要点全面，结构连贯，字数符合要求，成功地完成了写作任务。并准确运用时态，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。亮点是表示顺序词的运用，使文章更具条理性，思维清晰，表达清楚，例如ItwillbeginonJuly10th,，Then,wewanttobookahotelwhichisnotexpensive.，Besides,myfatherandIwillgosurfinganddivingintothewaterintheafternoon.等。（一）假如在英语课上，老师让同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开讨论。请你根据下面的表格提示写一篇发言稿，谈谈你喜欢哪种旅游方式并说明理由。团队旅游

1.有导游，不会迷路；

2.不必自己找宾馆；

3.结识朋友，相互帮助。

个人旅游

1.自由安排时间；

2.选择自己喜欢的旅游景点；

3.学会照顾自己。

注意事项:1.词数不少于60；2.文中不得出现真实的校名或姓名。参考词汇:团队旅游travelwithagroup；个人旅游travelalone;安排arrange;景点sightsHello,myclassmates.Ofthetwowaysoftravel,Ilike____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,myclassmates.Ofthetwowaysoftravel,Iliketravellingwithagroupbetterthantravellingalone.That’sbecauseifwehaveaguideleadingtheway,wewon’tgetlost.Andthereisnoneedforustolookforahotelbyourselves.Inthisway,wecanmakelotsofnewfriendsandlearntohelpeachother.Anyway,weshouldgeteverythingreadybeforewestart.Sotravellingwithagroupisachancetocooperatewithothers.【解析】试题分析：作者介绍了在团队旅游和个人旅游之间进行选择自己喜欢的旅游方式，作者选择了团队旅行。并介绍了团队旅行的优点。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，作者把为什么喜欢团队旅游的原因交代的很清楚，Inthisway,wecanmakelotsofnewfriendsandlearntohelpeachother；weshouldgeteverythingreadybeforewestart..这些句子给文章增色不少。（二）在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。团队旅游有导游，不会迷路不必自己找旅馆结识朋友，相互帮助个人旅游自由安排时间选择自己喜欢的旅游景点学会照顾自己你的想法……注意：1.文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节；2.想法至少在两句以上；3.词数为80—100，开头已给出，不计人总词数。参考词汇：团队旅游travelwithagroup；个人旅游travelalone；安排arrangeRecently,wehavediscussedthewaystogotravelling.Hereistheresult.Somestudentschoosetotravelwithagroup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,wehavediscussedthewaystogotravelling.Hereistheresult.Somestudentschoosetotravelwithagroup.Withaguide'shelp,theywon'tgetlostandtheydon'tneedtolookforhotelsbythemselves.Besides,theycanmakefriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletravelling.However,otherstudentsprefertotravelalone.That'sbecausetheycanarrangetheirtimefreelyandchoosetovisittheirfavouritesights.What'smore,it'sachanceforthemtolearntolookafterthemselves.Forme,I'dliketotravelalone.IwanttospendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike.Inthisway,Icanenjoymyvacationbetter.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是一篇讨论结果报告，结合本题所给的写作信息，介绍喜欢的旅游方式。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后表达出自己的看法与观点。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中getlost，withaguide’shelp,lookfor,besides,makefriends,preferto,lookafter等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还使用了表语从句，固定句型It’s+形容词/名词+for+sb.+todosth.等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。（三）山东泰山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你学校参观后准备去旅游。请结合以下要点和图片向外国友人简单介绍泰山：1.位于山东中部，是中国著名旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客去旅游观光。2.乘汽车大约要2个小时，也可以乘火车。3.登山便可领略。注意：字数不少于80词，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MountTaiisoneofthemostfamousmountainsinChina.ItisinthemiddleofShandongProvince.EveryyearthousandsofChineseandforeignersvisitthere.It’snotfarfromhere.Ittakesyouabouttwohourstogettherebybus.Youcanalsogotherebytrain.AutumnisthebestseasontoclimbMountTai.Onthetopofthemountain,youcanenjoytheseaofclouds,wondrouspines,uniquerocksaroundyouandthesunrise.Andthesunriseiswonderful.MountTaiisreallyaniceplacetovisit.【详解】本文是一篇旅游景点的介绍英语作文一般分为三个部分第一部分：交代写作的目的：介绍泰山的情况——是我国最著名的山峰之一。第二部分：文章主体部分：介绍泰山的具体信息——地理位置，交通方式，旅游季节等。第三部分：总结全文。（四）根据下表提示，写一篇有关北京的旅游指南，可以适当发挥。要求语言通顺，条理清晰，词数不少于90词.

China

Aboutthecountry

location

InAsia

Beijing,thecapital

Oldandbig

longhistory

Oneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld

Placestovisit

Beijing

VisitthePalaceMuseum,

tryBeijingduck

Weather

Verydifferentaroundthecountry

Others

Language

Chinese

Money

RMB

...

...

BeijingisthecapitalofthePeople'sRepublicofChinaandoneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BeijingisthecapitalofthePeople'sRepublicofChinaandoneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld.Itisoldandbig.InBeijing,wecanvisitthePalaceMuseumandwecantryBeijingduck.TheweatherinBeijingisverydifferentaroundcountry.ThepeopleinChinaspeakChinese.WeuseRMB.【解析】试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如InBeijing,wecanvisitthePalaceMuseumandwecantryBeijingduck.TheweatherinBeijingisverydifferentaroundcountry.ThepeopleinChinaspeakChinese.等等。（一）假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹来北京旅游．请根据以下提示给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中学生．写作要点：1、欢迎她来北京．2、介绍北京的情况．（1）下周天气：白天最高温度超过330C；（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地铁；（3）必去的名胜：长城．3、对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议．写作要求：1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．4、至少80词．DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!YoursLiLi．【答案】DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？WeletoBeijing．BeijingislocatedintheeastofChinaandattractsmoreandmorepeopleathomeandabroadtovisit，studyandevenlivedthereforalongtime．Thereasonwhybeijingissopopularisthatitisneitherhotinsummernorcoldinwinter．Notonlyisitthecapitalofchina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．Ifyouwanttohaveanenjoyablejourney，Isuggestyouclimbthegreatwall．BecausethefamoussayinginChinaisthatthemanwhodoesnotreachthegreatwallisnotatrueman．Theweatherwillbehotnextweekendsandthehighesttemperatureisabove30degrees．Soyoushouldwearcoolclothes．Thetransportationisveryconvenientbecausethesubwaynearlycoversthewholecity．Soyouhadbettertakethesubwaytogoout．Beijingisacivilizedcityandyoushouldbeacivilizedstudent．ZunlaoaiyouisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation．Ifyousitnexttotheoldorthesick，pleasetaketheinitiativeseat．Lookingforwardtoyouring.Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以来“北京旅游”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一封书信。介绍北京的情况，以及写出文明旅游的要求。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中Weleto,thecapitalof,takethesubway,hadbetter,lookingforwardto，and、so等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如:句型notonly...butalso...；宾语从句、条件状语从句、原因状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。（二）国庆节即将到来，你的笔友想去三亚旅游，正好今年暑假你和父母去了三亚旅游。请根据自己的所见、所感及所给的信息向你的笔友介绍三亚之旅.AtriptoSanyaLocationinthesouthofHainanWeatherhotintheday,coolatnightTotalsize(面积)about1919.58squarekilometers,thesecondlargestcityCharactersblueseaandbeautifulbeachesThemostfamoustouristattractions(旅游胜地)BuddhiststatueofGuanyin(海上观音),NanshanTemple(南山寺),YalongBay(亚龙湾),Theendsoftheearth(天涯海角),WuzhizhouIsland(蜈支洲岛)Activitiesgoswimming,gosurfing(冲浪),gofishing,godiving(潜水),playbeachvolleyball…Foodseafood,coconutjuice,fruitTransportationbyair,bytrain…Feelings…要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；3.词数不少于70左右。(短文的开头和结尾已给出，但须把省略号的部分补充完整，不计入总词数)AtriptoSanyaIhadawonderfultriptoSanyawithmyparentsthissummerholiday.Letmetellyouaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soasyoucansee,Sanyaisawonderfultouristresorttoenjoyyourholiday.I'msureyouwillhaveagreattimethere.【答案】AtriptoSanyaIhadawonderfultriptoSanyawithmyparentsthissummerholiday.Letmetellyouaboutit.SanyaisinthesouthofHainananditisabout1919.58squarekilometers,thesecondlargestcityinHainan.It'shotintheday,coolatnight.It'sfamousforblueseaandbeautifulbeachesthere.ThemostfamoustouristattractionsareBuddhiststatueofGuanyin,NanshanTemple,YalongBay,TheendsoftheearthandWuzhizhouIsland.TherearelotsofthingstodoinSanya,youcangoswimming,gosurfing,gofishing,godivingandplaybeachvolleyballandsoon.It'swonderful.Alsoyoucanenjoytheseafoodanddrinkcoconutjuiceandtastelotsoffruit,theyareverydelicious.IfyougotoSanya,youcangotherebyairorbytrain.Inthecityyoucangoanywherebybus,bybikeandbytaxi.It'sveryconvenient.Ithinkitwasrelaxingtospendmylastholiday.Soasyoucansee,Sanyaisawonderfultouristresorttoenjoyyourholiday.I'msureyouwillhaveagreattimethere.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇风景介绍，开头和结尾已给出。要求根据表格内容提示来写一篇介绍三亚风景区的信件，主要介绍三亚的位置，天气，旅游点及当地特色等，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；用一般现在时描述三亚景区的相关信息；描述细节时，细节描写细致；并同时要结合所给信息叙述完整，保证条理清晰。（三）考试结束,我们背上包,带上自己,去旅游。假如你是李华,今天你们班英语课上进行了讨论。请根据以下信息给远在英国的笔友Peter写封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况,并说说你喜欢的旅游方式和理由。写作要点:1.讨论的话题:去旅游。2.同学们的旅游方式:(1)50%的同学想进行一次自己计划的"自由行"(DIYtour)(2)30%的同学想进行一次简单的"跟团旅游"(packagetour)3.说说你喜欢的旅游方式和理由。写作要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?Recentlywehavediscusseddifferentwaystogotravelling.HalfofthestudentschooseaDIYtour.Itisconvenientforthemtoarrangetheirtimefreelyandchoosetovisittheirfavouritesights.Inaddition,itisalsoagoodchanceforthemtolearntolookafterthemselves.However,30percentofthestudentspreferapackagetour.Withaguide’shelp,theywon’tgetlostandtheydon’tneedtolookforthehotelsbythemselves.Besides,theycanmakesomenewfriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletravelling.Personally,IremendaDIYtourbecauseIcanspendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike.Inthisway,Icanenjoymyvacationbetter.Bestwishes!YoursLiHua【详解】1.题干解读：这篇书面表达属于议论文写作，但写作时要按照电子邮件格式写。在写作时应承接开头，主体部分结合学生的观点并说明原因，最后表明自己的观点和理由。2.例文点评：文章采用三段式，简洁明了；第一段先表示问候，第二段开门见山，用一般现在时介绍了两种不同的旅游方式并详细说明了理由，