高考英语复习课件四联图作文写作技巧共

高考四联图作文写作技巧【例1】【例2】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于60。（注意：有环保话题）提示词：游乐园amusementpark；垃圾bin情景作文写作四“绝杀”绝杀1.主题先行+双线并行（景+感情）绝杀2.矛盾冲突+心理发展luckily，unluckily,while，however绝杀3.联想画面+细节补充绝杀4.起承转合+合理分段文章结构1.主题段：一句话概括这个故事2.展开段：按顺序描述四幅图（时间地点、天气人物、工具事件、动作心情）3.总结段：所感所悟常用模板1.主题段：lastweekend,wehadameaningfulandentertaining/educationalspringouting/greenaction/monitorelection/…activity2.展开段：起LastFriday,aheateddiscussionwasheldinourclassonsth.\doingsth.Severalopinionswereshared,suchasdoingA,doingBanddoingCbeforeafinaldecisionwasmadethat…承Earlyinthemorning,bathedinthewarmsunshine,wesetouttodosth,chattingandlaughingalltheway,feelingratherexcited/delighted/joyful/passionate…转Hardlyhadwearrivedat…whenwestartedtodosth.Workswereassignedtous,suchasdoingA,doingBanddoingC.合Havingfinishedallthework,wewavedgoodbye.TiredasIwas/wewere,wefeltourtimeandeffortworthwhile,inthat/consideringthat…3.总结段(突出环保话题）Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatweteenagersaresupposedtodosth1insteadofdoingsth.Onlyinthisway,canoursociety/school/country/earthbefloodedwithatsunamiofharmonyandhappiness.【例3】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的班长李华，去年冬天你们班开展了“为西藏希望小学献爱心”的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文短文向某中学生英语报投稿，介绍你们本次献爱心活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。Lastwinter,wecarriedoutanactivitythemed“HelpingtheChildrenintheHopePrimarySchoolinTibet”.

Lastweek,wecarriedoutanactivitythemed“helpingtheChildrenintheHopePrimarySchoolinTibet”.Inordertolighttheloveinourheart,weheldaclass-meetingtoshareourhope.Duringthemeeting,wewatchedaTVprogrampostedbyCCTVnewsaboutthelifeinTibet’sHopePrimarySchool.Seeingthehardlifeofthosepoorchildren,weallfeltit’sourdutytochangetheirlives.

Tomakemorepeopleparticipateinthisprogram,wewroteurgingletters(倡议书）tocallforhelps.Weputuptheposterintheschoolexhibitboardandhandedoutmessages,tellingeveryonepassingbyabouttheunimaginablesituation.Afterweeksofbroadoutworks,weheldadonatingpartyinourschool.It’sreallybeyondourimaginationthatnearlyeveryoneinourschoolgaveoutpartoftheirefforts.Notonlydidwedonateourpocketmoney,butalsoalotofusefulgoodsweredonated,suchasschoolbagsandquilts.

Assoonasthedonatingpartyended,wecarriedthegoodsandmoney,whichembodiedoursincerelyloveandhopeforthepoorchildrentothepostoffice.WhenIwasfillingthepostlist,Ifeltsoproudofmyclassmatesandme.Thoughthelittledonationsfromuswouldn’tcompletelychangethelifeofthechildren,Ihopeouractioncanbringthemhopetofightagainsttheadversitiesoflife.ForIknow,loveissuchalittlething,butithasthestrengthtochangetheworld.描写心情1.喜悦withabroadsmileshiningonhisfaceThebroadsmilesonmygrandparents’facesdelightedme.withenthusiasmmakingmemorethanalittledelightedMysmileleapedthroughthebarsandgeneratedasmileonhislips.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilently.2.悲伤、感动Iheldbackthetearswellingupinmyeyes.Movedbeyondwords,hetriedtoswallowtherapidlyswellinglumpinhisthroat.TearscametomyeyesasIrealizedwhatafoolIhadbeentojudgehimasafailure.情景作文写作四“绝杀”：绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情）绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充绝杀4.起承转合+合理分段文章结构1.主题段：一句话概括这个故事2.展开段：按顺序描述四幅图（时间地点、天气人物、工具事件、动作心情）3.总结段：所感所悟

【例4】绝杀1.主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情）学生关爱老师，老师感动学生绝杀2.矛盾冲突+心理发展意外→担心→急迫→感动绝杀3.联想画面+细节补充怎么摔倒的？怎么送医院？说了什么？结局如何？绝杀4.起承转合+合理分段第一段：LastMonday,ourEnglishteacherMissLiwasgivingaclass.whensheslippedsuddenly,felloffandhurtherrightfootbadly.第二段：Shockedandworriedaswewerethat,withMissLionmyback,weimmediatelysenthertotheschoolclinic.Thedoctorexaminedhercarefully,sayingshehadtostayinhospitalforatleast2weeks.第三段：Afterschool,thewholeclasswenttoseeher,bringingsomefruitsandabunchofflowers.MissLiaskedustostudyhard,andwedeliveredourbestwishes.Wewerehappythatshewouldcomebacktoussoon.第四段(转合可以合为一段）

Thenextday,wewerewaitingforthenewEnglishteacherwhenMissLicameback!Sittingonherwheelchair,shelookedsogentleandkind.Shoutingandclapping,weedourbelovedteacher,whowassoresponsibletous.第五段Whatamemorableexperienceandwhatagreatteacher!Witheveryoneofustakingourownresponsibility,thesocietywillbecertainlyfloodedwithendlessharmonyandhappiness,whichisnotonlypossiblebutalsoinevitable.【练习】假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。2．词数不少于60。要点总结：1.搜信息：IsearchedtheInternetforinformationaboutthetriptoBeidaihewithmygrandparents.2.买车票：Iwenttothetrainstationandmanagedtobuytwoticketsformygrandparents.3.收拾行李：Ipackedintothesuitcasethethingsmygrandparentswouldneed4.送别：Iwenttothestationtoseethemoff.第一段：OnSaturdaymorning,togetherwithmygrandparents,IsearchedtheInternetfordetailedinformationaboutthetriptoBeidaihe(时间人物事件),suchasthetrainschedule,theweatherinBeidaihe,andsomehotelinformation(细节).第二段：Intheafternoon,Iwenttothetrainstationtobuyticketsformygrandparents(时间地点人物事件).Tomygreatsurprise,therewasalongandcrowdedqueuewhenIarrivedthere(细节).Havingwaitedforatleast40minutes,Ifinallymanagedtobuytwotickets(矛盾冲突+具体动作).JustimaginehowexcitedIfeltholdingtheticketsinmyhandtightly(心情).第三段：Intheevening,Ipackedintothesuitcasethethingsmygrandparentswouldneed(时间人物事件),suchassomeclothes,glasses,amapaswellasotherdailynecessities(细节).Mygrandmaeverremindedmetoputanumbrellaintothesuitcase,whichshowedhowcarefulshehasalwaysbeen(合理想象).第四段：Thenextmorning,Iwenttothestationtoseethemoff(时间地点人物事件).Wavinggoodbyetothemontheplatform,Ifelthappyforthemandwishedthemasafejourney(动作细节心情).【图表作文】Studythefollowingdrawingcarefullyandwriteanessayto1)describethepicture2)deducethereasonsforthepredictionsrevealed,and3)putforwardyoursuggestions.Youshouldwriteabout160—200wordsneatlyANSWERSHEET2.Paragraph1：描图（注意加连接词）

Asisapparentlybetrayedinthedrawingabove,theaveragelifespansoftheworldpopulationandChina’spopulationwillreachfiftyyearsandonehundredyearsrespectivelybytheyearof2300.Andbythenthenumberofpeopleabovetheageofsixtywillaccountforthirty-eightpercentofthetotalworldpopulation.Thisisagreatchangeinhumanhistory,whichhasmadeusthinkdeeply.

Theforemostreasonsforthepredictionswhichareindicatedinthedrawingabovecanbeillustratedasfollows.Tobeginwith,therapiddevelopmentoftheworldeconomyhascontributedtothepredictions.Overtheseyears,theworldeconomyisdevelopingatasurprisingspeed,whichhassuppliedpeopleallovertheworldwithadequatedailynecessities.What’smore,thedevelopmentofmedicalsciencehasbroughtaboutthepredictions.Overthepastyears,anumberofmedicalbreakthroughshavebeenmadeinthefieldofmedicalscience,whichhasgreatlyprotectedpeopleandimprovedthequalityofpeople’slife.Withthefurthergrowthoftheworldeconomyandmedicalscience,theUNpredictionswillbemorepersuasive.

Bytheway,herearesuggestionsofmineforthepredictionsrevealedinthedrawingabove.TheinternationalcommunityincludingChinamustnowmakepreparationsforthecomingoftheday.Muchknowledgeconcerningseniorcitizensshouldbepopularized.Morepublicfacilitiesforseniorcitizensshouldbesetup.Moreprofessionalsonseniorcitizensshouldbestrictlytrained.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinapeacefulandharmoniousenvironment.模板一：积极向上主题（青少年多运动）谚语开头+Thepictureaboveillustratethat…(描述图画)….Undoubtedly,wecandeducefromthecartoonthatthepainteristryingtoshowusthat…（主旨）分析原因Tobeginwith,…Inaddition,…besides，…（小结）

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AsfarasIamconcerned,itishightimethatwehighlightedthesignificanceof…andcultivatedthecitizens’awarenessthat….…isessentialtous.Onlybyenforcingthesemeasuresintopractice