高中英语外研版选择性必修第一册Unit 2 Period 6　Writing-Writing about an experience

Period6Writing—WritingaboutanexperienceActivity1Readforsomedetails.1．Fromthepassage，wecanknowthat.A．theauthorwasfullafterleavingtherestaurantB．theauthorfeltnormaltodineinthedarknessC．thewaiterwasimpatientintherestaurantD．theauthorkeptdrinkingfromhisfriend’sglass答案D2．Howdidtheauthorfeelwhenmostofthesoupendeduponhisshirt?A．Satisfied. B．Embarrassed.C．Angry. D．Delighted.答案B3．Duringthedining，whichdidn’thappenintherestaurant?A．Theauthorknockedoverglasses.B．Theauthorfailedtopickupanyfoodwithafork.C．Theauthorandhisfriendatequicklyintherestaurant.D．Thewaiteradvisedtheauthortouseaspoontodrinkthesoup.答案CActivity2Readforthestructures.Ⅰ.Readthestoryanddothefollowingexercise.GeneralintroductionIwantedtoexperience1.beingblind，soIwenttoa“darkrestaurant”.DifficultiesMyfriendandI2.knockedoverglassesand3.droppedfood.4.Pouringwaterwasdifficult.Idrankfrom5.myfriend’sglass.SolutionsIusedmyhandsbutIstuckmyhandinto6.soup.Usingaspoon，thesoupendedup7.onmyshirt.LessonsandfeelingsIfelt8.hungrybutlearnedaboutthe9.challengesthatblindpeopleface.Ⅱ.Thewritingtemplateofanexperience.(写作模板)Generalintroduction：______________________________________________________________Difficulties：____________________________________________________________________Solutions：_______________________________________________________________________Lessonsandfeelings：______________________________________________________________Activity3Readforsomegoodsentences.1．Pleasefindoutthesentencethattheauthorusestodescribeintentionsorpurposes.答案Wewantedtounderstandtheexperienceofbeingblind，andIthoughteatingwouldbethemostdifficultactivity.2．Pleasefindoutthesentencethattheauthorusestodescribeeffortsorattempts.答案Afterfailingtopickupanyfoodwithaforkforfiveminutes，Idecidedtousemyhands.3．Pleasefindoutthesentencethattheauthorusestodescribelessonsandfeelings.答案However，Istilllefttherestaurantfeelinghungry，thoughIwasmuchmoreawareofthechallengesthatblindpeopleface.本单元的写作目标是“写一次经历”，以写人、叙事为主，属于记叙文写作。写作时要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、事件，可使用典型的“总—分—总”三段式结构。一、篇章结构1．开头：介绍这次经历发生的背景；2．主体：具体介绍这次经历；3．结尾：介绍自己对这次经历的感受。二、注意事项1．正确使用时态，通常使用过去范畴的时态。2．常用第一人称。3．重视上下文的衔接，用好过渡词。常用表达开头部分常用表达1．Severaldaysago，Iattendedaparty...几天前，我参加了一场派对……2．LastSunday，myfriendsandIwentto...上周天，我和我的朋友去了……3．Lastmonth，ourschoolinvitedacraftsmantoteachus...上个月，我们学校邀请了一名手艺人来教我们……主体部分常用表达1．Itwasveryhardforme...……对我来说很困难。2．Tomysurprise，itissointeresting...令我吃惊的是，……很有趣。结尾部分常用表达1．Thisexperiencemademebecomemore...这次经历让我变得越来越……2．Fromthenon，Ididn’twanttodo...从那时起，我不再想……3．Inaword，Iwillnot...总之，我不会……4．Igotanimportantlessonfromthisexperience...我从这次经历中得到了一个重要的教训……假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示描述自己的一次经历。1．大约六岁时，你在野外独自玩耍；天突然下起了大雨，你迷路了，不知道该怎么办。这时一位女士从你身边走过。她询问了你的情况，然后把你送回了家。2．你的父母非常感激那位女士，你从此知道了要乐于助人，帮助别人会使自己更快乐。注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步审题谋篇审题写作要求是介绍自己的一次经历。写作时应注意下面几点：1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作时应注意记叙文的常规格式。2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。3．主体人称：由于是介绍自己的一次经历，所以应该以第一人称为主。谋篇第一段：开门见山，引入话题——介绍自己难忘的经历；第二段：具体介绍这次经历；第三段：表达自己对这次经历的感受。第二步遣词造句核心词汇1．独自玩耍playalone2．开心的delighted3．降临descendupon4．带某人回家takesbhome5．匆忙inahurry6．从那以后fromthenon7．处于困难中introuble/need8．感激appreciativeof9．遭到某人拒绝receiveone’srejection连词成句1．我忘不了发生在我六岁左右的一件事情。(定语从句和时间状语从句)Icannotforgettheincidentthat/whichhappenedwhenIwasaboutsixyearsold.2．我在大雨中迷路了，这让我非常紧张。(并列句)Igotlostintheheavyrainanditmademeverynervous.3．我站在那里，不知道做什么。(并列句)Istoodthereanddidn’tknowwhattodo.4．看到我站在雨里哭，她把我送回了家。(时间状语从句)Whenshesawmestandingintheraincrying，shetookmetomyhome.5．这是我遇到的最可怕的事情。Itwasthemostdreadfulthingthathaddescendeduponme.第三步句式升级1．用非谓语动词改写句1。IcannotforgettheincidenthappeningwhenIwasaboutsixyearsold.2．用定语从句改写句2。Igotlostintheheavyrain，whichmademeverynervous.3．用非谓语动词改写句3。Istoodthere，notknowingwhattodo.4．用非谓语动词改写句4。Seeingmestandingintheraincrying，shetookmetomyhome.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。参考范文IcannotforgettheincidenthappeningwhenIwasaboutsixyearsold.Oneday，Iwasplayingaloneoutdoors.Suddenly，itbegantorainheavily.Igotlostintheheavyrain，whichmademeverynervous.Itwasthemostdreadfulthingthathaddescendeduponme.Istoodthere，notknowingwhattodo.Justthenawomanwalkedpast.Seeingmestandingintheraincrying，shetookmetomyhome.Whenarrivingho