读后续写专题第15章万能句型

读后续写之万能句型万能片段①:复杂心情(负向)万能片段②:不知所措(负向)万能片段③:感激(转变)万能片段④:激动(转变)万能片段⑤:紧张+成功(正向)万能片段⑥:成功+结尾(正向)解析万能片段1:复杂心情(震惊/害怕/迷茫)Foramoment,withinmyheartwasacomplexfeeling,whichmademerootedtothespot.Ishouldnothavebehavedinthatway.有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，令我钉在原地(全部倒装+定从)我不应该那样做(虚拟语气)(红字通用，蓝字根据题目替换）真题例子[2016浙江卷]:在她内心有一种复杂的感觉，简维持一动也不动，疲惫和无法动弹。Withinherheartwasacomplexfeeling.Janeremainedrootedtothespot,exhaustedandunabletomove.[2021八省联考续写:在我内心有巨大的惊讶和感激，我站着一-动也丕动，盯着那个即将从盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。Withinmyheartwereenormoussurpriseandgratitude.Istoodrootedtothespot,staringatthegirlwhowasabouttotakeouttheirlunchfromabox.[2021全国1卷]:爸爸难以置信地钉在原地，当他看着可怕的厨房，想象双胞胎做了啥Withinhisheartwasacomplexfeeling.Dadremainedrootedtothespotindisbelief,watchingtheterriblekitchenandimaginingwhattheyhaddone.复杂心情词汇Complexcomplicatedemotion(s)startledfreeze(froze)adj.复杂的adj.复杂的n.情绪adj.吃惊的v.冻住，冻结berootedtothespotabruptlystand(stood)stillimaginedwhatsbhaddonethesuddensituation(因为惧怕或吃惊而)钉在原地突然地站住不动那想象下某人做啥突如其来的情况万能片段2:不知所措(茫然/紧张/害怕)基础版:心在狂跳，她不知道该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。Heartbeatingwildly,shehadnoideawhattodo.Asafewsecondspassed,anideacameintohermind.升级版:(高分替换词+比喻+名从+时间独立主格句式)Heartbeatingwildlylikeabeast,shewasatalosswhattodonext.Acoupleofsecondsslippingaway,anideastruckherlikelightning.（独立主格句式:独立主语1+非谓语动词，句子主语2+谓语动词。）真题举例练习1:她的脸颊因尴尬而灼热，她不知道该怎么办。(前半句“五官”用:独立主格)Cheeksburningwithembarrassment,shewonderedwhattodo.练习2:顿时，她的大脑一片空白，不知道该怎么办。(前半句“大脑”用:独立主格)Allofasudden,hermindgoingblank,shehadnoideawhattodo.练习3:被所发生的一切吓坏了，他站原地不动，不知道接下来怎么办(非谓语)。Terrifiedbywhathadhappened,hewasrootedtothespot,notknowingwhattodonext.不知所措词汇wildlylikeabeastlikelightningslipaway(be)atalossadv.狂乱地像猛兽般地像闪电般地(时间)溜走不知所措的Mindgoingblank,..Heartbeating(racing)....Cheeksburning,...wonderwhattodoacoupleof大脑一片空白,...心狂跳...脸颊在燃烧般...(不知道)想着怎么办一些(人或物)万能片段3:感激(感激+感悟)①Chokedwithoverwhelminggratitude,Macbowedlowtothemrepeatedly,withoutwhosehelphecouldn'thavegonethroughit.②ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedMacofthevalueofstrangers'help,inspiringhimtospreadthiskindnesstoothers.①Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，--再向他们深深鞠躬，没有他们的帮助，他就无法度过难关。②正是这个独特的经历让Mac想到了陌生人帮助的价值，激励他将这种善意传播给他人。(红字模板通用，蓝字根据题目替换)提炼:①Chokedwithoverwhelming...sb1...sb2,withoutwhosehelpsb1couldn'thavedonesth.②Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedsb1ofthevalueofsth,inspiringhimtodosth.练习:[2022全国1卷theforestrun]构思结尾:David完成跑步，明白勇气的重要t(用以上模板)①David因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有(我们的)指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这样说。②正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从此勇敢地应对挑战。参考范文:(红字模板通用，黑字根据题目替换)Chokedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,Davidhuggedmeandhiscoachtightly,withoutwhoseguidancehecouldn'thavefinishedtherun,asheinsisted.ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethathadremindedDavidofthevalueofcourageandfaith,inspiringhimtoaddresschallengesbravelyeversince.感激词汇overwhelmingGratituderepeatedlgothroughsthvalueadj.巨大的n.感激adv.一再地度过(难关)n.价值，重要性bechockedwith(+情绪n.)bowed(low)tosbcouldn'thavedonesthremindsbofsthinspiresbtodosth因..而哽咽向某人(深深)鞠躬本不能做到(但实际做了)提醒某人做某事(使某人想到某事)激励某人做某事.万能片段4:激动(开心/紧张/害怕)情绪+肢体+语言Overwhelmedbywildjoy,Irosetomyfeetandpunchedmyfistintheair,shoutingoutloud,“Imadeit!".被狂野的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，在空中挥拳，大喊道:“我做到了!”练习1:惊慌失措，我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖叫:“救命!”。Overcomebyasenseofpanic,Irosetomyfeet,screamingasloudasIcould,“Help!”.练习2:被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说:“我该怎么办?”。Dominatedbyaflushofnervousness,Ijumpedtomyfeet,askingmyself,“WhatshouldIdo?”练习:[2021全国1卷Mother'sDaySurprise](红字通用，黑字根据题目替换)“成功了!我们做到了!Jeff大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是--次难忘的经历。不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜“Itwasasuccess!Wemadeit!”Jeffshoutedasshepunchedherfistintheair.Asenseofwarmthfilledtheirheartsinthatitwastrulyamemorableexperienceforthem.(inthat由于=because)Believeitornot,theypulledoffadelightfulsurprise.激动词汇madeitinthatasenseofTrulydelightful成功了;做到了由于(=because)一种..感觉(后加情绪名词)真正地.(=really/exactly)令人快乐/愉悦的punchedsb'sfistwarmthfilledsb'sheartamemorableexperiencepulledoff(doing)sthBelieveitornot,...挥舞拳头温暖充盈内心一次难忘的经历胜利完成(=succeedindoing)不管怎样;不管你信不信万能片段5:紧张+成功Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistremblinglegsforward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.I’llmakeit!"(成功后)Hearingtheinspiringnews,heleapedintotheairwithjoy.[2022深圳二模GoGreen](以上红字通用，黑字根据题目替换)心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，“--切都会很好的。我能做到!”听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。相关词汇heartracingpalmssweatinghandsshakingthroattighteninglegstrembling心跳加速着...手心出汗着...手抖着...喉咙紧绷着..腿在颤抖着...draggedsb'slegs/feetrosetosb'sfeetleapedintotheairmurmuredtooneselftookadeepbreath拖曳着步伐站/跳起来跳起来/跃入空中喃喃自语深吸了一口气心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，“--切都会很好的。我能做到!”听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。Heartracingandpalmssweating,Daviddraggedhistremblinglegsbacktothecourse.Hecouldfeelnothingbuthishandsshaking,heartpoundingandthroattightning.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.I'llmakeit!"....Havingfinishedtherun,Davidleapedintotheairwithjoy.紧张+成功词汇（左边动词为非谓语，右边动词为谓语过去式）heartracing(heartpounding)palmssweatingHandsshakingThroattighteninglegstrembling心跳加速着...手心出汗着..手抖着...喉咙紧绷着...腿在颤抖着....draggedsb'slegs/feetrosetosb'sfeetleapedintotheairmurmuredtooneselftookadeepbreath拖曳着步伐站/跳起来跳起来/跃入空中喃喃自语深吸了一口气万能片段6:成功+结尾Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheairashefinallymadeit.Peterwassothrilledinthathesucceededindeliveringthespeechandconvincingthejudges.Hethoughttohimselfthathewoulddowhateverhecouldwheneverneeded.Sheddingtearsofjoy,hewasinhighspiritsthewholeday![2022深圳二模GoGreen]空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，他最终做到了。Peter非常激动，因为他成功地发表了演讲并说服了评委们。他内心想到，只要有需要，他会尽其所能。他流下了喜悦的泪水,整天都兴高采烈!练习:[2016年浙江高考](红字通用，黑字根据题目替换)空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，Jane最终获救了。她非常激动，因为她成功地和丈夫团聚。她内心想到，她再也不会犯同样的错误了。流下了喜悦的泪水，夫妇两人都兴高采烈!(句首非谓语sheddingtears)AbuzzofexcitementfilledtheairasJanewaseventuallyrescued.Shewassothrilledinthatshesucceededinreunitingwithherhusband.ShethoughttoherselfthatneverwouldshemakethesamemistakeSheddingtearsofjoy,thecouplewereinhighspirits!成功+结尾词汇Thrilledconvincejudgeshedtearstearsofjoydj.兴奋的，激动的(=delighted)v.说服，使信服n.评委/法官v.判断流泪喜悦的眼泪Abuzzofexcitementsucceedin(doing)sthdeliveraspeechthink