2020年高中英语二轮复习-专题练1-短文改错二-全国版

2021年高中英语二轮复习专题练1短文改错〔二〕1、短文改错Itwasraininghardlyoutside,whichmadeitdifficultformetogohomeforlunch.JustasIwaswonderingwhatIshouldeatatnoon,Isawafamiliarfigurepassedbyourclassroom.Irushedoutandfounditwasmymother,alreadyinfifties,whichbroughtmelunchinspiteoftheheavyrain.InChina,manyparentsmakegreatsacrificeforourchildren.Butwhathadthechildrendoneinreturn?Alltoooften,mostchildrenjusttakeitforgrantedthattheirparentshouldserveforthemunconditionally.Mydearmumordad,thankyouverymuchforbringingmeup.HowshallIdoforyou?【答案与解析】Itwasraininghardlyhardoutside,whichmadeitdifficultformetogohomeforlunch.JustasIwaswonderingwhatIshouldeatatnoon,Isawafamiliarfigurepassedpassingbyourclassroom.Irushedoutandfounditwasmymother,alreadyin∧herfifties,whichwhobroughtmelunchinspiteoftheheavyrain.InChina,manyparentsmakegreatsacrificeforourtheirchildrenthemunconditionally.Mydearmumoranddad,thankyouverymuchforbringingmeup.HowWhat1.hardly→hard考查副词。此处表示“外面雨下得大〞,应使用副词hard。hardly意为“几乎不〞。2.passed→passing考查非谓语动词。由句意可知,此处表示“看见一个熟悉的身影从我们教室经过〞,应使用seesb.doingsth.这一结构,故passed改为动词-ing形式passing。3.在fifties前加her考查固定搭配。此处句意为“她已五十多岁了〞,而“inone’s+基数词复数〞是固定用法,意为“在某人……岁时〞。4.which→who考查关系代词。分析句子结构可知,此处为非限制性定语从句,先行词为mymother,关系词在从句中作主语,故应使用who引导该从句。5.our→their考查代词。本句的主语是“manyparents〞,因而此处表示“他们的孩子〞,故用their。6.had→have考查动词时态。由句意可知,此处强调现在的情况,即已发生的动作对现在有影响,故应使用现在完成时。7.parent→parents考查名词复数。由本句中“mostchildren〞和“their〞可知,此处应使用名词复数形式。8.删除serve之后的for考查介词。表示“为某人效劳〞时,serve为及物动词,因而介词for多余。9.or→and考查连词。由句意可知,此处mum和dad为并列关系,因此使用连词and。10.How→What考查疑问代词。此处句意为“我能为你们做些什么〞,因而应使用疑问代词what。2、.短文改错Lastmonth,ourschoolorganizeanactivitynamed“GreenTravel,StartwithMe〞,thatwasofgreatsignificance.Wehadaheateddiscussionandeveryoneexpressedtheirwillingtoparticipate.Aftergethome,Italkedtomyparentsaboutmyideasbuttheywereverysupportive,sayingthattheywouldn’tdrivetoworkfromthenextday.Inthefollowingtwoweek,Iwenttoschoolbythebikewhilemyparentstookabustowork.Tiredaswewere,weallfelthappily.LastFriday,aclassmeetingwasheldlikescheduled.Wesharedourexperiencesandthoughtsduringtheactivityandweallthoughtourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.【答案与解析】Lastmonth,ourschoolorganizeorganizedanactivitynamed“GreenTravel,StartwithMe〞,thatwhichwasofgreatsignificance.WehadaheateddiscussionandeveryoneexpressedtheirwillingAftergetgettinghome,Italkedtomyparentsaboutmyideasbutandtheywereverysupportive,sayingthattheywouldn’tdrivetoworkfromthenextday.Inthefollowingtwobikewhilemyparentstookabustowork.Tiredaswewere,weallfelthappilyhappy.LastFriday,aclassmeetingwasheldlikeasscheduled.Wesharedourexperiencesandthoughtsduringtheactivityandweallthought∧anize→organized考查时态。由句首时间状语“Lastmonth〞可知,此处应使用一般过去时,故改为organized。2.that→which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,此处是非限制性定语从句,此时只能使用which引导该从句。3.willing→willingness考查名词。由句中前面“expressedtheir〞这一信息可知此处应使用名词willingness(意愿);willing是形容词,意为“愿意的〞。4.get→getting考查动词-ing形式。此处介词after之后应使用动词-ing形式getting。5.but→and考查连词。由句意可知,此处前后两个句子之间在意义上是并列关系,故应使用连词and。6.week→weeks考查名词复数。前面的two暗示了答案,即应使用名词复数形式。7.删除bike前的the考查冠词。此处表示“骑自行车上学〞,而bybike是固定短语,其中的the多余。8.happily→happy考查形容词。由句意可知,此处felt是连系动词,其后应接形容词作表语。9.like→as考查连词。由句意可知,此处表示“按照方案〞,asscheduled是省略句式,完整的句子是“asisscheduled〞。10.在thought后加上it考查代词。分析句子结构并结合句意“我们都认为保护环境是我们的职责〞可知,此处应使用it作thought的形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的不定式短语。3、短文改错Lifeisfullofvariousexperiences,someofthatareunforgettable.Istillrememberthehikingexperienceswithmyclassmatesfor16kmayearago.Thatsummerday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,thinkitwouldbeagreatfuntowalkforsolongadistance.However,astheweatherisgettinghotterandhotter,Ifoundtheirlegsheavierandheavier.What’sworse,myfeetbeganbleedingbecauselongtimepressingagainsttheshoes.Atonepoint,Ievenwantedtogiveup.ButImanagedtodraggingtherestofthewaytothedestination.Thoughnotpleasant,thisjourneywasimpressiveorrewarding.Ihavelearntthatlifeisalongjourneylikethis.Nomatterwhathappened,weshouldnevergiveup.【答案与解析】Lifeisfullofvariousexperiences,someofthatwhichareunforgettable.Istillrememberthehikingexperiencesexperiencewithmyclassmatesfor16kmayearago.Thatsummerday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,greatfuntowalkforsolongadistance.However,astheweatheriswasgettinghotterandhotter,Ifoundtheirmylegsheavierandheavier.What’sworse,myfeetbeganbleedingbecause∧oflongtimepressingagainsttheshoes.Atonepoint,Ievenwantedtogiveup.ButImanagedtodraggingdragtherestofthewaytothedestination.Thoughnotpleasant,thisjourneywasimpressiveorandrewarding.Ihavelearntthatlifeisalongjourneylikethis.1.that→which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,此处是非限制性定语从句,应使用关系代词which。2.experiences→experience考查名词。由句意和下文内容可知,此处指“一次徒步旅行经历〞,应使用名词的单数形式。3.think→thinking考查动词-ing形式。分析句子结构可知,此处应使用动词-ing形式作伴随状语,故应改为thinking。4.删除great之前的a考查冠词。fun是不可数名词,其前不能使用定冠词a。5.is→was考查时态。由上下文及本句后面的“found〞这一信息可知,此处应使用一般过去时。6.their→my考查代词。由句中主语“I〞并结合句意可知,此处表示“我的腿越来越沉重〞,故改为my。7.在because后加上of考查介词。由句意及分析句子结构可知,句中后面的“longtimepressingagainsttheshoes〞是名词短语,因此应使用becauseof;because是连词,用来连接句子。8.dragging→drag考查不定式。由句意可知,此处表示“我成功地走完剩下的路程〞,而managetodo是固定短语,意为“设法做到……〞。9.or→and考查连词。由句意可知,句中“impressive〞和“rewarding〞在意义上是并列而非选择关系,故改为and。10.happened→happens考查时态。由句意可知,该句客观地说明自己的观点,应使用一般现在时,what为单数意义,故改为第三人称单数形式happens。4、短文改错WelcometotheGreatWall.Measuredmorethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelongwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.ThatisamazingabouttheGreatWallisthatitismainmadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.Thoughitwasusedtoprotectthecountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,assymbolofChina,theGreatWallwillbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulthattheGreatWallattracthundredsofthousandsofforeigntouristseveryyear.【答案与解析】WelcometotheGreatWall.MeasuredMeasuringmorethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelonglongestwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.ThatWhatisamazingabouttheGreatWallisthatitismaintheGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,as∧asymbolofChina,theGreatWallwillhasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulwonderthattheGreatWallattract1.Measured→Measuring考查动词-ing形式。分析句子结构可知,theGreatWall与measure在逻辑上是主谓关系,故用动词-ing形式作原因状语。此处measure意为“尺寸、长短、数量等量度为……〞,是不及物动词。2.long→longest考查形容词最高级。由句意可知“长城被誉为世界上最长的城墙〞,因而应使用最高级形式longest。3.That→What考查连词。分析句子结构可知,本句主语是主语从句,从句中缺少主语;再结合句意“长城的神奇之处在于它主要是用石头和砖砌成的〞可知,此处应使用连词what。4.main→mainly考查副词。由句意可知,应使用副词mainly修饰谓语“ismadeof〞。5.Though→As/Since/Because考查连词。由句意可知,本句主、从句之间存在因果关系,因此应用附属连词As/Since/Because。6.删除along之后的with考查介词。由句意可知,此处表示“长城沿线每隔几百米就有一座瞭望塔〞,其中介词along(沿着)后应直接跟名词作宾语,故with多余。7.symbol前加上a考查冠词。由句意可知,此处表示“长城作为中国的一个象征〞,symbol为单数意义,该词以辅音音素开头,故symbol前加a。8.will→has考查时态。由句意可知,此处应使用现在完成时表示“已经成为世上最著名的旅游景点之一〞,故will改为has。9.wonderful→wonder考查名词。此处句意为“难怪长城每年都会吸引成千上万的外国游客〞,而nowonder(难怪)为固定短语。10.attract→attracts考查时态及主谓一致。由句中“everyyear〞可知,本句为一般现在时,主语是theGreatWall,故谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式attracts。5、短文改错Ourschoolencouragedustoexperiencesomefuturecareerslastvacation.Somestudentschoosetoworkaseithercashiersinastoreandwaitersatarestaurant.Iwasoneofthe500studenttojoinintheactivity.IdecidedbeanassistantinaphotostudiobecauseofIlovetakingphotosinmysparetime.Withthehelpofaadvancedphotographerinthestudio,Iopenedmyimaginationinmydailywork.Ialsodevelopedpracticallyskillswhicharenecessaryforthemtofacefuturechallenges.ThemostimportantthingI’velearnedaretoimprovemyselfafterIgetmydreamjob.【答案与解析】Ourschoolencouragedustoexperiencesomefuturecareerslastvacation.Somestudentschoose

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istoimprovemyselfafter1.choose→chose考查时态。此处作者在陈述过去的事情,故用一般过去时。2.and→or考查并列连词。由句意“一些同学选择在商店里当收银员,或在餐厅当效劳员〞可知,此处使用的是either...or结构,故把and改为or。3.student→students考查名词复数。oneof后应接可数名词复数,故把student改为students。4.在decided后加上to考查不定式。由句意可知,此处使用的是“decidetodosth.〞这一结构,故在decided后加to。5.删除because之后的of考查连词。分析句子结构可知,本句为原因状语从句,故用连词because。6.a→an考查冠词。由句意可知,此处advancedphotographer泛指单数意义,advanced以元音音素开头,故用an。7.practically→practical考查形容词。此处表示“我也培养了一些实用的技能〞,修饰名词应使用形容词,故把practically改为practical。8.them→me考查代词。由句子意义可知,本句讲述这份工作对作者本人的意义,故应使用代词me。9.are→is考查主谓一致。分析句子结构可知,本句主语“themostimportantthing〞为单数形式,故谓语用第三人称单数形式,所以应把are改为is。10.after→before/until考查连词。此处句意是“我学到的最重要的事情就是在得到梦想的工作之前要提升自己(提升自己直到找到梦想的工作)〞,应把after改为before或until。6、短文改错Iamalwaystellingtoworkhardtohaveagoodlifeinthefuture.Therefore,Idomybesttoplaybasketballorstudy.IwanttobebasketballplayerwhenIwillgrowup.Torealizemydream,Ipracticeplayingbasketballregular,aimingtomakemybestshots.AlthoughI’minterestinginwatchingTV,Imanagetofinishmyhomeworkfirst.Itrymybestinallthetest,especiallyinthemathtestbecauseIfindmathmoredifficultythananyothersubject.AnywayIwillsparenoeffortsandnevergiveinmystudiesandIbelieveifIamsuretosucceed.【答案与解析】Iamalwaystelling

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