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个人顿悟篇1.欧亨利式转折✔转折情节设置2.人生导师✔3.个人顿悟✔想要炫耀骑车去学校急刹车摔倒Paragraph

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Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.

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2:“That’snottherightway.Patience.Will,patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearaftertheboyleft.负我匆忙着急我耐心平静定全文主线正转想起祖父的话人物主题词细节词grandfather;mymother;boys;Crawleythewatch;patienceRomenumber;possessions;impress;bike动词可以变词性、变时态或者非谓语名词可以改变单复数，单用所有格’s不算划线词划线词不可以改变词性和词义理下划线词grandfather;thewatch;patience;mymother;boys;;Romenumber;possessions;impress;bikeCrawley推下文情节衔接第一段开头P.1:

Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.

P.2:That’snottherightway.Patience.Will,patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearaftertheboyleft.被男孩嘲笑，我很生气衔接第二段开头根据第二段开头倒推首段结尾找不到查看手表心理顿悟找不到+震惊/紧张1️⃣【衔接】推下文情节情绪/动作/心理/语言/渲染衔接第一段开头找不到查看手表男孩嘲笑+我生气根据第二段开头倒推首段结尾2️⃣环顾四周+即将哭泣3️⃣看到手表⌚️4️⃣蹲下来捡手表+检查5️⃣男孩嘲笑+我生气grandfather;thewatch;patience;mymother;boys;;Romenumber;possessions;impress;bike；Crawley顿悟1️⃣【衔接】推下文情节情绪/动作/心理/语言/渲染2️⃣【语言】对自己说3️⃣4️⃣衔接第二段开头顿悟心理拭去眼泪+抱着手表走向学校+内心平静grandfather;thewatch;patience;mymother;boys;;Romenumber;possessions;impress;bike；Crawley空的！我口袋里什么也没有找到！这一事实让我目瞪口呆，我觉得好像有一只长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。Empty！Ifoundnothing

inmypocket!Thefactleavingmedumbfounded,IfeltasIfaspearhadpiercedintomyheartwhichstartedtobleedimmediately.连情节成句找不到+震惊/紧张1️⃣【衔接】P.1:

Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.

我交集地环顾四周，几乎哭了起来。Lookingaroundwithmountinganxiety,Ialmostburstintotears.连情节成句2️⃣环顾四周+即将哭泣连情节成句3️⃣看到手表⌚️突然，手表出现在我的视线里，在我躺着的自行车旁边，它的金表壳坏了All

ofsudden,intomysightcamethewatch,nearmylyingbike,whosegoldencasewasbroken.我热泪盈眶，蹲了下来，小心翼翼地把整个东西放在掌心上，仔细检查了一下损坏情况。Withtearsbriminginmyeyes,Isquatteddown,deliberatelyputthewholethingonmycuppedpalmsandinspectedthedamage.连情节成句4️⃣蹲下来+捡手表+检查就在这时，Crawley带领的一群男孩从我身边走过，他们大声笑着，用“多么漂亮的破表啊！”讥讽我。听到这话，我生气得握紧拳头！Justatthismoment,agroupofboysledbyCrawleypassedme,wholaughedloudlyandsniffedatmewithwords“whatafinestbrokenwatch!”Hearingthewords,Iclenchedmyfistwithanger.连情节成句5️⃣男孩嘲笑+我生气顿悟1️⃣【衔接】推下文情节情绪/动作/心理/语言/渲染2️⃣【语言】对自己说3️⃣4️⃣衔接第二段开头顿悟心理拭去眼泪+抱着手表走向学校+内心平静grandfather;thewatch;patience;mymother;boys;;Romenumber;possessions;impress;bike；Crawley我突然意识到我已故祖父所说的是对的。Itdawnedonmethatwhatdeceasedgrandfatherhadsaidwasright.连情节成句顿悟1️⃣【衔接】“木已成舟，我应该有耐心。”我喃喃地对自己说。“WhatwasdonewasdoneandIneedtohavepatience.”murmuredtomyself.连情节成句2️⃣【语言】对自己说我没有回应，拭去眼泪，用一张纸包着我珍贵的手表。连情节成句3️⃣拭去眼泪+抱着手表Ididn’trespondtothoseboys,wipingawaymytearsandwrappedmypreciouswatchwithapieceofpaper.当我大步走向学校时，我发现我的内心世界是平静的，因为我确信这只破了的手表会一直提醒我要耐心，直到真相出现。AsIstrodetowardsschool,IfoundmyinnerworldwaspeacefulforIknewforsurethatthisbrokenwatchwouldalwaysremindmetobepatientuntiltruthemergeditself.连情节成句4️⃣走向学校+内心平静全文整合 Empty！Ifoundnothing

inmypocket!Thefactleavingmedumbfounded,IfeltasIfaspearhadpiercedintomyheartwhichstartedtobleedimmediately.Lookingaroundwithmountinganxiety,Ialmostburstintotears.All

ofsudden,intomysightcamethewatch,nearmylyingbike,whosegoldencasewasbroken.Withtearsbriminginmyeyes,Isquatteddown,deliberatelyputthewholethingonmycuppedpalmsandinspectedthedamage.Justatthismoment,agroupofboysledbyCrawleypassedme,wholaughedloudlyandsniffedatmewithwords“whatafinestbrokenwatch!”Hearingthewords,Iclenchedmyfistwithanger. Itdawnedonmethatwhatdeceasedgrandfatherhadsaidwasright.“WhatwasdonewasdoneandIneedtohavepatience.”murmuredtomyself.Ididn’trespondtothoseboys,wipingawaymytearsandwrappedm