Unit3-写作课名师课件

Unit3AHealthyLife人教版选修六0Writing

建议信Trainstudents’writingskillsofwritinga

practicalletter.0(回复性)建议信回复性建议信是针对对方提出的问题或困惑，有针对性地提出自己的建议的一种书信文体。Discusshowtowriteit:

假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到很大影响。他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。体裁建议信时态一般现在时（某些句子可以用一般将来时）人称第一、二人称几段三段一、审题谋篇二、每段内容第一段，找到问题，表明可以提出意见/劝告；第二段，针对问题提出建议，并说明原因；第三段，提出期望，希望收信者积极行动，改进现状，并礼貌地结束全文。1．首段：引出问题。Iamsorryyouhavehadsomuchtroublein...Youhaveaskedformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．主体：提出建议。Inmyopinion，youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.Firstofall...Meanwhile，...Inaddition，...It’simportantforyouto...3．结尾：提出期望。Cheerup！Yourtroubleswillsoonbeover.Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.Don’tloseheart，whateverhappens.Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.三、每段常用句型假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到很大影响。他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。

四、现学现用—练习写作要点：1.限制玩游戏的时间，把精力逐渐转移到其他事情上；2．规定起床和睡觉的时间，形成良好的作息习惯；3．每天锻炼半小时，增强体质。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.词汇1．沉迷于 2．对……有不利影响 3．除去 4．参加 5．养成……的习惯 6．增强体质

Ⅱ.句式1．I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergames.Theyhavehadabadeffectonyourhealth.(用定语从句合并句子)I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergames,

whichhavehadabadeffectonyourhealth.2．Youshouldgetupandgotobedataspecifictimeinordertogetintothehabitofgettingupandgoingtobedregularly.(改为复合句)Youshouldgetupandgotobedataspecifictimesothat/inorderthatyoucangetintothehabitofgettingupandgoingtobedregularly.【参考范文】

DearJohn，

I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergames,

whichhavehadabadeffectonyourhealth.Iknowyouworryaboutitverymuch.Asafriend，I'mwillingtogiveyousomeadvicetohelpyougetridofcomputergames.

Firstly,

youhadbetterlimitthetimethatyouspendplayingcomputergamesandpaymoreattentiontootherthingssuchasjoininginvariousactivitiesafterschoolandmakingfriends.Secondly,

youtrygettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucangetintothehabitofgettingupandgoingtobedregularly.Lastbutnotleast,

itisagoodideatodosomeexerciseforabouthalfanhourtostrengthenyourhealtheveryday.

Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputergamestoliveahealthylife.Yourssincerely，LiHua提出个人的建议时，应注意以下两点：1．态度谦恭理智：不管对方提出的问题有无实际价值，态度是否中肯，都要认真对待，理智分析，并对对方提出的问题给出合理的解释以及实际有效的解决方法。2.简明扼要，以理服人：针对问题提出解决方法时，态度明确，表达时语言应委婉客气,减少使用Youshoulddo...等表达方式。逻辑分明，重点突出，让对方感到“纳而有因，拒而有理”。五、高分技巧ReadthisletterandthenwritealettertogiveXiaoleisomehelpfuladvice.Dear…,Canyouhelpme,please?Ihavetriedtostopsmokingseveraltimes.IamOKfortwodaysandthenIfeelreallysickandirritableandIhavetostartsmokingagain.Iknowsmokingisabadhabit,butIjustcan’tseemtogiveitup.Doyouhaveanyusefultips?Yoursincerely,LiXiaolei六、WritingDearTom,I’mverysorrytohearthatyouhavegotintothehabitofsmoking.Nowyou’veaskedmeforadviceonquittingsmoking,andI’lltrytogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,Ithinksmokingisharmfultoyourhealth,whichhasabadeffectonyourlungsandcanevenleadtolungcancer.Secondly,italsoaffectspeoplearoundyou,includingyourfamilyandfriends.Finally,itwastesyourmoneyandtime.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudyhardinsteadofsmoking.Infact,ifyoudon’tsmoke,itisnormalthatyou’llfeelnervousandstressed,buttrytorememberthatitwillonlylastsomedaysandthenyouwillbegintofeelbetter.Moreover,toavoidsmoking,youcandosomerelaxationexercise.Idohopethosesuggestionswillbehelpful.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LIHua

七、总结“模板”Dear…，

Havinglearntthatyou……,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.

Inmyopinion，….Firstofall,

you’dbetter…...Secondly,itisagoodideathat……Finally,……Idohopethosesuggestionswillbehelpful./Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.