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ContinuationWritingLeadinIfyouseeastrangersittingonawheelchair,what’syourfeeling?Ifyoucomeacrossanoldfriendsittingonawheelchair,howdoyoufeel?Ifyouencounteranoldclassmatewhobulliedyousittingonawheelchair,areyouhappyorsad?Whatifheorsheneedsyourhelp?I.Reading---forbasicinformationwho
whenwherewhat&why
tensepersonRoger(“I”)BarbaraTonysimplepasttensethefirstperson
Inthe________Iwasaboutto_____ina_________whenawomancameuptomeaskingmewhetherIknewTonywhowassittingaloneata______table,withawheelchair______thecorner,butI_______him.Suddenly,itcametomethatTonywasthebullywhomadefunofmemanytimes.WhenIturnedaroundandfacedinhisdirection,heraisedhishandsand_______atme.I______,________thewave,thinkinghewasso______.eatforgotwavedsmiledreturnedmorningrestaurantpolite,kind,friendly,forgiving,distantaroundthinII.Preparing---
toplantheplotPara1:Allofasudden,IheardthesoundofdishesbreakingsoIturnedaroundtoseewhathadhappened.1.WhathappenedtoTony?(Whywerethedishesbroken?)Tony
touched
severalplatesandknocked
themoffthetable.2.What’sTony’sfeeling?Tonywasembarrassed.Sowashiswife.
1.WhathappenedtoTony?(Whythedisheswerebroken?)Tonytouched
severalplatesandknockedthemoffthetable.2.What’sTony’sfeeling?Tonywasembarrassed.Sowashiswife.
___________(无意地)____________severalplatesandknockingthemoffthetable,Tony______________(陷入)greatembarrassment.Sowashiswife.Tipone:usevividadverbs
or
verbstomodify(用生动的副词/动词或加以修饰)AccidentallywastrappedinbumpingintoPara1:Allofasudden,IheardthesoundofdishesbreakingsoIturnedaroundtoseewhathadhappened.3.WhatdidIdo?Isawthemapologizetothewaitress.Igotup.Iwalkedtotheirdistanttable.Ihelpedhiswifepickupthebrokendishesfromtheground.4.What’smyfeeling?Iwassympathetic.
3.WhatdidIdo?Isawthemapologizetothewaitress.Igotup.I
walkedtotheirdistanttable.
Ihelpedhiswifepickupthebrokendishesfromtheground.4.What’smyfeeling?Iwassympathetic.Seeingthemapologizetothewaitress__________________(一次又一次)towardsthewaitress,Iwassosympathetic
thatIimmediately____________,________totheirdistanttable____helpedhiswifepickupthebrokendishesfromtheground.
overandoveragainrosetomyfeetrushedTipTwo:verbchains
(三连动作)andWewerefacetoface.----Iwassurprised.Para1:Allofasudden,IheardthesoundofdishesbreakingsoIturnedaroundtoseewhathadhappened.Para2:“Couldyouhelpmegetintothewheelchair?"askedTony.Atthatmoment,Ifound
fromthewaistdownTonyhadnomotorabilityandhisthinlegsjustputthere,lifeless.Surprisedanddepressed,withmyheadraised,Ilookedat
Tonyinanefforttogivehimsomecomfortandcourage.AtthatmomentIfound_______________(惊讶地)fromthewaistdownTonyhadnomotorabilityandhisthinlegsjust________there,lifeless.Surprisedanddepressed,withmyheadraised,I__________________Tonyinanefforttogivehimsomecomfortandcourage.inastonishmenthunghadeyecontctwith
AllofasuddenIheardthesoundofdishesbreakingsoIturnedaroundtoseewhathadhappened.
Accidentally,bumpingintoseveralplatesandknockingthemoffthetable,Tonywastrappedin
greatembarrassment.Sowashiswife.Seeingthemapologize
overandoveragaintowardsthewaitress,IwassosympatheticthatIimmediately
rosetomyfeet,rushedtotheirdistanttableandhelpedhiswifepickupthebrokendishesfromtheground.
Atthismoment,IfoundfromthewaistdownTonyhadnomotorabilityandhisthinlegsjusthungthere,lifeless.Surprisedanddepressed,withmyheadraised,Ihadeyecontactwith
Tonyinanefforttogivehimsomecomfortandcourage.Para.1Para2:“Couldyouhelpmegetintothewheelchair?”askedTony.conflictsolution/endingThemegenerosity/tolerance/forgivenessconversationplotemotionmyanswer:YesIhelpedTonyTonyapologizedIforgaveTonysympatheticmoved/relievedhappy/warmTaskOneWriteparagraphtwowithintenminutesIII.
Writing
“Couldyouhelpmegetintothewheelchair?"askedTony.SimplePast&theFirstPersonskillsyoucanuseusevividadverbsverbchains(三连动作)usevividverbsTaskTwoAssessthecompositionbasedontheassessmentcriteriaAssessmentCriteriaforWriting
Usethechecklisttohelpyouevaluatehis/herdraft.Istheplotwell-organized?Doesthewriterusevividadverbs?Doesthewriterusevividverbs?Doesthewriteruseverbchains?Doesthewriterrespondtothetheme?Theheartisnotconqueredbyforce,butbyloveandtolerance.---SpinozaTheworldhaskissedmysoulwithitspain,askingforitsreturninsongs.---TagoreIfyouencounteranoldclassmatewhobulliedyousittingonawheel
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