第12练应用文写作能力强化练

2024年高一英语夯基培优暑假作业(人教版2019)第12练应用文写作能力强化练目录01、应用文常见文体02、应用文写作策略03、应用文好词积累04、从句在应用文中的运用05、15篇精选应用文01.应用文常见文体申请信建议信邀请信投诉信应用文常见文体道歉信应用文常见文体祝贺信请求信倡议书通知演讲稿02.应用文写作策略审题，画出要点，分点写，合理分段；应用文写作应用文写作策略字数达标，使用衔接词；写完检查：单词拼写，谓语动词形式，名词单复数等；不断积累作文素材。03.应用文好词积累好词broadenone’shorizon开阔视野enrichone’slife丰富生活raiseone’sawareness提高意识berequiredtodosth被要求做某事（应当）haveanopportunitytodosth有机会做某事arouseone’sinterestin提升兴趣haveabetterunderstandingof更好地了解onbehalfof代表boostone’sconfidence增强信心beenthusiasticabout对.....热情enablesbtodosth使某人可以做某事bebeneficialto对......有益participatein参加copewith处理takesthintoconsideration把某事考虑在内showgratitudeto感谢avarietyof许多haveagoodknowledgeof了解，掌握onthecontrary相反sparenoefforttodosth不遗余力做某事inspiteof即使，尽管enjoygreatpopularity受欢迎enhancemutualunderstanding增进相互了解bescheduledtodo被安排在beresponsiblefor为......负责leaveadeepimpressiononsb给某人留下深刻印象04.从句在应用文中的运用定语从句01.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutogoforamorningrunwithme,whichmaybenefitbothofusinanamazingway.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）02.Sincethen,runninghasplayedanimportantroleinmylife,withoutwhichIwouldn’thavebuiltstrongbody.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句）03.Thenyouwilldiscussyournoteswiththreeotherjudges,whoareEnglishteachers.(运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)04.Also,don’tmissthecaptivatingnighttimeshowsandparadesthatwillimpressyoualot.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)05.Thevideo,whichlastsaboutfiveminutes,itwouldbebetterforthenarrationstobelimitedto800words.06.Butinourdailylife,toomuchfoodiswasted,whichmakessavingfoodmoreurgent.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）07.LastSunday,ourschoolorganizedahikingactivity,whichattractedalargenumberofstudentsandteacherstoparticipate.名词性从句01.Whatdistinguishesmefromotherapplicantsismyabilitytocopewithurgenciesondifferentoccasions.（运用了what引导的主语从句）02.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifmyapplicationwereapproved.（运用了it作形式宾语，if引导的条件状语从句）03.IbelievethatvisitingitwillbeahighlightofyourtriptoChina!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)04.Duetothefactthatyou’rekeenonChineseculture,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoapplyforvolunteerworkwithme.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)05.Knowingthatyouareinterestedinourmusicclass,I’mhappytoprovideyouwiththerequestedinformation.（由that引导的宾语从句）06.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwecanreducethepossibilityofdisabilityandsavelives.（that引导的表语从句）07.Iamwritingtotellyouthatourschoolwillholdafireescapedrillthisweekend.（运用了宾语从句）状语从句01.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifmyapplicationwereapproved.（运用了it作形式宾语，if引导的条件状语从句）02.Whentheyareout,Ihavetostayathomealone,doingnothingbutwatchingTVallday.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)03.Thoughtheprogramsareinteresting,IstillfeellonelybecauseIhaven’tgotanyfriendsherenow.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)04.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoask.（由If引导的条件状语从句）05.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoufollowthetipsabove.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)06.Third,itwouldbeagoodideatohelpotherswhentheyareintroubleandshowthemyouarekindheartedandhelpfultopeopleallaround.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)05.15篇精选应用文1.假设你是李华，最近，在英语课上，你们班学习了有关急救方面的一些常识，同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣，大家都认为学校有必要提供相关方面的课程，请你作为班长给校长写一封信，提出你的建议，并写出建议的理由。内容包括：1.学习急救知识的意义；2.具体建议及原因；3.重申建议的重要性。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMr.Principal,Ourclasshasbeenstudyingsomeknowledgeaboutfirstaid.Weareallinterestedinitandfeelthatbeingabletogivefirstaidwhenneededcanmakeadifferencebeforepropermedicaltreatmentisgiven.Therefore,wesuggestthatcoursesonfirstaidshouldbeofferedinourschool.Postersaboutthetreatmentfordifferentinjuriescanbeputupineverycornerofourcampus.What’smore,ourschoolcanorganizetherescuedrillstoprovideastageforstudentstopracticeandgainexperienceinfirstaid.Ibelievehavingaknowledgeoffirstaidisofvitalimportance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakeoursuggestionsintoconsideration.Bestregards!Yourssincerely，LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生作为班长给校长写一封信，提出有关开设急救方面的课程的建议，并写出建议的理由。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。要求：1.学习急救知识的意义；2.具体建议及原因；3.重申建议的重要性。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）knowledge;firstaid;beinterestedin;beableto;makeadifference;propermedicaltreatment;course;posters;differentinjuries;putup;corner;what’smore;therescuedrills;gain;ofvitalimportance;appreciate;takesth.intoconsideration第三步：连词成句1.Ourclasshasbeenstudyingsomeknowledgeaboutfirstaid.2.Weareallinterestedinitandfeelthatbeingabletogivefirstaidwhenneededcanmakeadifferencebeforepropermedicaltreatmentisgiven.3.Therefore,wesuggestthatcoursesonfirstaidshouldbeofferedinourschool.4.Postersaboutthetreatmentfordifferentinjuriescanbeputupineverycornerofourcampus.5.What’smore,ourschoolcanorganizetherescuedrillstoprovideastageforstudentstopracticeandgainexperienceinfirstaid.6.Ibelievehavingaknowledgeoffirstaidisofvitalimportance.7.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakeoursuggestionsintoconsideration.8.Bestregards!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…,Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n./doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakeoursuggestionsintoconsideration.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如beinterestedin;beableto;makeadifference等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2.假定你是李华，你想约你的外国同学Anderson一起晨跑，请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.发邮件的目的;2.邀约原因及有关事项;3.期待回复。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearAnderson,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutogoforamorningrunwithme,whichmaybenefitbothofusinanamazingway.WhenIwasinjuniorhighschool,Ioftengotsickduetolackofexercise.SoIpickeduprunninginthemorning.Sincethen,runninghasplayedanimportantroleinmylife,withoutwhichIwouldn’thavebuiltstrongbody.Ithinkitisagoodwaytokeepfit.That’swhyIwanttoinviteyoutojoinme.Beforerunning,itisnecessarytohavesomepreparationexercises,suchaspressinglegsandswingingarms.What’smore,makesureappropriateshoesandclothingareworn.Ihopeyoucanjoinmeinexercising.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生邀请外国同学Anderson一起晨跑。【详解】1.词汇积累由于：dueto→becauseof重要的：important→vital保持健康：keepfit→keephealthy另外：what’smore→inaddition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.拓展句：I’dappreciateitifyoureplytomeasquicklyaspossible.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mwritingtoinviteyoutogoforamorningrunwithme,whichmaybenefitbothofusinanamazingway.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Sincethen,runninghasplayedanimportantroldeinmylife,withoutwhichIwouln’thavebuiltstrongbody.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句）3.假如你是李华，校学生会主席，高二年级组织主题为“用英语讲好中国故事”演讲比赛，请你邀请你校外教Mr.Green充当评委，请你给他写一封邀请信，内容包括：1.比赛时间、地点；2.评委的工作要求。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMrGreen,IamwritingonbehalfoftheSchool’StudentUniontoinviteyouhelpusjudgetheEnglishSpeakingpetitiontobeheldattheLectureHallon10December.ThethemeofthelectureisTellingChineseStoriesinEnglish.16studentseacharetogiveafiveminutespeechonthethemeinEnglish.Asajudge,youwillberesponsibleforlisteningtoallthespeeches,notingdownanypositiveornegativeaspectsforeachone.petitorsshouldbejudgedontheirpronunciation,clarifyandfluencyandinfluenceofstories.Thenyouwilldiscussyournoteswiththreeotherjudges,whoareEnglishteachers.Finally,makeadecisionaboutwhoesfirst,secondandthird.Isincerelyhopeyoucane.Yourssincerely,LiHuaPresident,StudentUnion【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，校学生会主席，高二年级组织主题为“用英语讲好中国故事”演讲比赛，请你邀请你校外教Mr.Green充当评委，请你给他写一封邀请信。【详解】1.词汇积累主题：theme→topic代表：onbehalfof→represent演讲：speech→lecture比赛：petition→contest2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IamwritingonbehalfoftheSchool’StudentUniontoinviteyouhelpusjudgetheEnglishSpeakingpetitiontobeheldattheLectureHallon10December.拓展句：IamwritingonbehalfoftheSchool’StudentUniontoinviteyouhelpusjudgetheEnglishSpeakingpetition,whichwillbeheldattheLectureHallon10December.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thenyouwilldiscussyournoteswiththreeotherjudges,whoareEnglishteachers.(运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Finally,makeadecisionaboutwhoesfirst,secondandthird.(运用了who引导宾语从句)4.假定你是李华。你校英文报刊登了一则招募校运动会志愿者的启事。请你写一封申请信，内容包括：1.申请理由：2.你的优势。参考词汇：招募recruit注意：1.词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEditor,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】范文DearEditor，Learningthatvolunteersarebeingrecruitedfortheschoolsportsmeeting,I'mwritingtoapply.Althoughnotengagedinanyevent,Iconsideritmydutytomakecontributionstoitssuccess.Whatdistinguishesmefromotherapplicantsismyabilitytocopewithurgenciesondifferentoccasions.Besides,mypreviousexperienceswillhelpmemunicatewithothersbetterandmakeproperandquickresponses.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifmyapplicationwereapproved.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校写一封申请信，申请成为校运动会志愿者。【详解】1.词汇积累招募：recruit→employ认为：consider→regard责任：duty→responsibility处理：copewith→dealwith2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Learningthatvolunteersarebeingrecruitedfortheschoolsportsmeeting,I'mwritingtoapply.拓展句：I'mwritingtoapplyassoonasIlearnthatvolunteersarebeingrecruitedfortheschoolsportsmeeting,【点睛】【高分句型1】Whatdistinguishesmefromotherapplicantsismyabilitytocopewithurgenciesondifferentoccasions.（运用了what引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifmyapplicationwereapproved.（运用了it作形式宾语，if引导的条件状语从句）5.假定你是李华，你随父母来到美国已有半个月了，但你感到烦恼。请你根据下面提供的有关信息，用英语给当地报纸写一封信，请求帮助。内容要点如下：1.父母忙于工作和学习；2.单独在家，整天与电视为伴；没有朋友，感到孤独；3.请求帮助。注意：（1）信的开头与结尾已给出，不计词数；（2）词数：100个左右。DearEditor,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,

Iamwritingtoyouforhelp.Iamtheonlychildinmyfamily.IcametoAmericahalfamonthago.MyparentsarealwaysbusywiththeirworkandtheyhavetogotoeveningclassestolearnEnglish.Whentheyareout,Ihavetostayathomealone,doingnothingbutwatchingTVallday.Thoughtheprogramsareinteresting,IstillfeellonelybecauseIhaven’tgotanyfriendsherenow.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyougivemesomeadvice?

Bestwishes,

Yours,

LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给当地报纸写一封信，寻求帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累帮助：help→assistance学习：learn→study有趣的：interesting→amusing建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Idon’tknowwhattodo.拓展句：Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.【点睛】[高分句型1]Whentheyareout,Ihavetostayathomealone,doingnothingbutwatchingTVallday.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Thoughtheprogramsareinteresting,IstillfeellonelybecauseIhaven’tgotanyfriendsherenow.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)6.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友汤姆Tom暑假想来中国游玩，请你给他写一封信向他推荐一个好玩的主题公园。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearTom,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearTom,Iamgladtoremendafunthemeparkforyoutoexplore.OneofthemostexcitingthemeparksinChinaistheShanghaiDisneyland.TheparkoffersauniqueblendofChinesecultureandDisneymagic.ItfeaturesclassicDisneycharacters,thrillingrides,andimmersiveexperiences.YoucanstrollthroughFantasyland,exploreAdventureIsle,orembarkonanunforgettablePiratesoftheCaribbeanadventure.Also,don’tmissthecaptivatingnighttimeshowsandparadesthatwillimpressyoualot.IbelievethatvisitingitwillbeahighlightofyourtriptoChina!Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Tom写信，向他推荐一个好玩的主题公园。【详解】1.词汇积累开心的：glad→pleased令人兴奋的：exciting→thrilling提供：offer→provide难忘的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：TheparkoffersauniqueblendofChinesecultureandDisneymagic.ItfeaturesclassicDisneycharacters,thrillingrides,andimmersiveexperiences.拓展句：TheparkoffersauniqueblendofChinesecultureandDisneymagic,whichfeaturesclassicDisneycharacters,thrillingrides,andimmersiveexperiences.【点睛】【高分句型1】Also,don’tmissthecaptivatingnighttimeshowsandparadesthatwillimpressyoualot.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】IbelievethatvisitingitwillbeahighlightofyourtriptoChina!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)7.假定你是李华，得知市少儿图书馆将要开展以“中国文化”为主题的系列活动，内容包括画脸谱、赏京剧等，请给你校的交换生Sam写一封信，邀请他一起申请当志愿者。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.简单介绍本次活动；3.简述志愿者的工作任务。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：少儿图书馆Children’sLibrary；脸谱facialmakeupDearSam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearSam,I’mdelightedtoinformyouthattheChildren’sLibraryinthecitywillholdanactivitytospreadChineseculture.Duetothefactthatyou’rekeenonChineseculture,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoapplyforvolunteerworkwithme.TheactivityisscheduledtobeheldnextMondaymorning,withitscontentsrangingfrompracticingfacialmakeuppaintingtoappreciatingBeijingOpera.Asvolunteers,notonlywilltheyhelparrangeanddecoratethevenue,buttheywillalsohelpguidethevisitorsandpublicizetheactivity.ItissuchameaningfulexperiencethatIamconvincedthatyou’llnotmissit.PleaseconfirmyourparticipationbeforethisFriday.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校交换生Sam写一封信，邀请他在市少儿图书馆将要开展的以“中国文化”为主题的系列活动中当志愿者。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→pleased举行：hold→host因为：dueto→becauseof欣赏：appreciate→admire2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：ItissuchameaningfulexperiencethatIamconvincedthatyou’llnotmissit.拓展句：SuchameaningfulexperienceisitthatIamconvincedthatyou’llnotmissit.【点睛】【高分句型1】Duetothefactthatyou’rekeenonChineseculture,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoapplyforvolunteerworkwithme.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)【高分句式2】TheactivityisscheduledtobeheldnextMondaymorning,withitscontentsrangingfrompracticingfacialmakeuppaintingtoappreciatingBeijingOpera.(运用了with的复合结构)8.假定你是李华，你的外国好友Hans在你校的校园网上看到你们上音乐课的照片。他来信询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.音乐课简介(学习内容，上课时间和地点等)；2.你的收获。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答；3.不得出现学校或班级的真实名字。DearHans,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearHans,Knowingthatyouareinterestedinourmusicclass,I’mhappytoprovideyouwiththerequestedinformation.Ourmusicclassfocusesonavarietyofmusicalaspects,suchasmusictheory,instrumentpractice,andgroupperformances.Theclassmeetstwiceaweek,onTuesdaysandThursdays,from4:50PMto5:30PM.Wehaveourmusiclessonsinaspecializedclassroom,equippedwithdifferentmusicalinstruments.Participatinginthemusicclass,I’velearnedhowtoreadsheetmusic,improvemyinstrumentplayingskills,andappreciatevarioustypesofmusic.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoask.Yours,LiHua【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给外国好友Hans介绍自己上音乐课的情况。【详解】1.词汇积累了解到：know→learn对……感兴趣：beinterestedin→haveaninterestin高兴的：happy→glad各种各样的：avarietyof→various2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ourmusicclassfocusesonavarietyofmusicalaspects,suchasmusictheory,instrumentpractice,andgroupperformances.拓展句：Ourmusicclassfocusesonavarietyofmusicalaspects,whichincludemusictheory,instrumentpractice,andgroupperformances.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouareinterestedinourmusicclass,I’mhappytoprovideyouwiththerequestedinformation.（由that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoask.（由If引导的条件状语从句）9.假设你是李华，你在某英文旅游网站看到一则招聘以中文为母语的人做本地导游的假期工作，你对此很感兴趣。请根据以下要点写一封申请信。要点如下：1.消息来源，求职心愿；2.自我介绍，自己的优势；3.获职打算，请求答复。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,IreadfromyourwebsitethatyouwantalocaltouristguideinChina.Iamveryinterestedinthisjob.Iama17­year­oldChineseboywithagoodknowledgeofbothChineseandEnglish.Besides,Iamgoodatmunicatingwithothersandexpressingmyself.Inaddition,Iamfondoftravelling.Duringmyvacation,Ioftengotravellingwithmyfamilyorfriends,soIamquitefamiliarwiththetouristattractionsinthiscity.IfIcangetthisjob,IbelieveIcandoitverywell.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为一名导游。【详解】1.词汇积累精通：withagoodknowledgeof→withagoodmandof另外：Inaddition→Additionally喜欢：befondof→enjoy好(副词)：well→perfectly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Iama17­year­oldChineseboywithagoodknowledgeofbothChineseandEnglish.拓展句：Iama17­year­oldChineseboywhohasagoodknowledgeofbothChineseandEnglish.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iamgoodatmunicatingwithothersandexpressingmyself.（运用了动名词短语municatingwithothers和expressingmyself作宾语）【高分句型2】IfIcangetthisjob,IbelieveIcandoitverywell.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）10.假定你是高二学生李华，你想在寒假期间拍摄一段短视频，向外国朋友介绍你的家乡。给你的外教Jim一封邮件，请他帮忙修改你已写好的英文解说词。内容包括：1.请求帮助；2.修改要求。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：修订revise；解说词narrationDearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’mplanningtoshootavideotointroducemyhometowntomyforeignfriends,andIhavealreadyfinishedtheEnglishnarrationsmyself.Forlackofconfidenceaboutthelanguageuse,I’mwritingwithsinceritytoaskyouafavourtorevisethem.Thevideolastingaboutfiveminutes,itwouldbebetterforthenarrationstobelimitedto800words.Moreimportantly,thelanguageisexpectedtobeaccurate,vividandauthentic,enablinginternationalfriendstobetterappreciatemyhometown’ssceneryandculture.Manythanksforconsideringmyrequest.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的外教Jim写一封邮件，请他帮忙修改你为一段拍摄家乡的视频写好的英文解说词。【详解】1.词汇积累完成：finish→plete诚意：sincerity→goodfaith修改：revise→polish感谢：thanks→gratitude2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thevideolastingaboutfiveminutes,itwouldbebetterforthenarrationstobelimitedto800words.拓展句：Thevideo,whichlastsaboutfiveminutes,itwouldbebetterforthenarrationstobelimitedto800words.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thevideolastingaboutfiveminutes,itwouldbebetterforthenarrationstobelimitedto800words.(运用了独立主格结构)【高分句型2】Moreimportantly,thelanguageisexpectedtobeaccurate,vividandauthentic,enablinginternationalfriendstobetterappreciatemyhometown’ssceneryandculture.(运用了现在分词作状语)11.假如你是你校英语报社的编辑MissWang，现在小冬因不善于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的回信，给他提出一些建议和意见。注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearXiaodong,I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,MissWang【答案】DearXiaodong,I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First,whynotlearnaboutyourclassmates’likesanddislikes?Thenyoucanfindyouhavemuchinmonwiththem,anditcanhelpyougetalongwellwiththem.Second,takinganactivepartinthediscussionsinyourclasshelpstoshowyouarefriendly.Third,itwouldbeagoodideatohelpotherswhentheyareintroubleandshowthemyouarekindheartedandhelpfultopeopleallaround.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoufollowthetipsabove.Yours,MissWang【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假定自己是校英语报社的编辑MissWang，现就小冬因不善于交流在交友过程中遇到的困难给他回一封信提出一些建议和意见。【详解】1.词汇积累做……有困难：havetroublein→havedifficultyin建议：tip/advice→suggestion参加：takepartin→participatein表明：show→indicate2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Thenyoucanfindyouhavemuchinmonwiththem,anditcanhelpyougetalongwellwiththem.拓展句：Thenyoucanfindyouhavemuchinmonwiththem,whichcanhelpyougetalongwellwiththem.【点睛】[高分句型1]Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoufollowthetipsabove.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)[高分句型2]Third,itwouldbeagoodideatohelpotherswhentheyareintroubleandshowthemyouarekindheartedandhelpfultopeopleallaround.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)12.假定你是李华,你校将举办以“急救”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1·急救的意义（挽救生命,减轻痛苦等）；2.呼吁学习急救知识。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。Goodmorning!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________