人教版中考英语复习九年级全册Unit+14+写作ABC课件

写作ABC.写作得法，事半功倍。.好词好句天天记，下笔如有神仙帮。学习目标1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。请你以“＿＿＿＿Ｉ“llneverforget”为题写一封信，向外国笔友介绍令你难以忘怀的一个人或一件事（物）。

“_________________________Ｉ“llneverforget”要求：1.先把题目补充完整；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；3.词数为80个左右。composition考题分析Haveatry,please.AnUnforgettableLesson“____I’llneverforget”---一件难忘的事(Anunforgetablething)一个难忘的假期-AnUnforgettableHoliday难忘的时刻(Anunforgettablemoment)一堂难忘的课(AnUnforgettableLesson)OnethingIcantforget我难忘的一件事一次难忘的经历(AnUnforgettableExperience)一次难忘的旅行(Anunforgetfultrip)我忘不了的一件事(OnethingIcan”tforget)一张难忘的相片(Amemorablephoto)难忘的经历(Anunforgettableexperience)写作训练的具体流程审定列写查赏开头主体结尾定内容定语法定句型评题目译补连提定体裁记叙文的写作要素：5W1HWhenWhereWhoWhat开门见山，交待事情的.......HowWhy说明事情的经过，描述原因What总结I’msureyoucan!Comeon!�定写作训练的具体方法译补连提Howtowrite请你以“__________Ｉ’llneverforget”为题写一封信，向外国笔友介绍令你难以忘怀的一个人或一件事（物）。

定体裁：定内容：定语法：人称：时态：语态：记叙文难忘的人/事是谁/什么；为什么难忘第一、三人称一般现在时主动语态（一）例题审题一般过去时（二）头脑风暴

一，“＿＿＿＿Ｉ’llneverforget”1，ThepersonI’llneverforget2，ThethingsI’llneverforget二，Whywillyouneverforget…?你可以谈论一个人（朋友、家人、同学、老师）Whatmakesyouunforgettable?Giveanexample.父母的养育；恩师的教诲；朋友的安慰；亲情的可贵；爱情的美好第一次做饭，第一次表演，第一次养宠物……，一个个“第一次”就像一行行脚印，印在我们成长的道路上，令我们难以忘怀……你可以谈论你最喜欢的一本书、一部电影、卡通故事、一项运动、一副照片、一个节日、一个季节、一次记忆深刻的旅行。Thefriendinteresting/exciting/helpful/happy/enjoyable�同学友谊“____________Ｉ'llneverforget”�

初中阶段的学习马上就要结束了，在这三年中，你一定和你的同学结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面英语提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述你和同学之间的故事。提示：1.Whoisyourbestfriend?2.Whatmakesyougetonwellwithher/him?3.Oneunforgettablethinghappenedtoyoutwo.Thefriend单句翻译�------狠抓句型、分层达标策略B层(达标）：三年来，我在五中交了好多朋友，最要好的是李华了。IhavemadealotoffriendsinNo.5MiddleSchool.Oneofthemismybestfriend.HisnameisLiHua.�2.她黑黑的头发、带着一副眼镜，非常的活泼、可爱。Shehasblackhairandshewearsapairofglasses.Sheisverylovelyandpretty.�3.她有许多爱好，比如跳舞、跑步、玩游戏。她的最爱就是听音乐。Shehasmanyhobbies,suchasdancing,runningandplayingcomputergames.Herfavouritehobbyislisteningtomusic.4.我俩在同一个年级但不在一个班。We’reinthesamegrade,butindifferentclasses.5.我们经常互相帮助，有时也争吵但很快就和好了。Wehelpeachother.Sometimeswefightbutwealwaysgetalongwell.B层（达标）6.当我有困难的时候，她总是及时来帮我。WhenIwasintrouble,shecanalwayshelpmeintime.7.她总是告诉我要努力学习并帮助我学习英语。HealwaystoldustostudyhardandhelpmewithmyEnglish.8.她经常鼓励我并且给了我许多关于学好英语的建议。SheencouragedmeandgavemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.9.我是如此感动以至于我决定要好好学英语

IwassomovedthatIdecidedtostudyhard.10.在她的帮助下，我的英语取得了很大的进步。WithherhelpImadegreatprogressinEnglishrapidly.A层（提优）11.她总是告诉我：“你是最棒的！相信自己！没有什么不能的。”shealwayssaidtome"Youaregreat,Justbelieveyourselfandeverythingyouwantwouldbeachieved."12.她告诉我要坚持不能放弃，我从她身上学到了很多。ShetoldmetokeepworkinghardandnevergiveupandI'velearnedalotfromher.13.当别人有困难的时候我也要学着去帮助别人。Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.14.我认为帮助别人是件快乐的事。Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.15.我忘不了我们在一起学习、玩耍的美好时光。Iwillneverforgetthetimewhenwestudiedandplayedtogether.连句成篇表并列：表转折：表原因：表目的：表顺序：表总结：其他：and,also,aswell…but,however,while,although…so,because,for,therefore…·inorder

to,sothat…firstly,secondly,firstofall,then…inmyopinion,inaword…what’smore,notonly…butalso…（四）连句成篇and,also,aswell,so,because,for,but,however,while,although,though,therefore,inorder,sothat,by,firstly,secondly,firstofall,then,next,besides,what’smore,notonly…butalso,afterall,finally,thelastbutnottheleast,like,suchas,forexample/instance,ononehand,ontheotherhand,foronething,foranotherthing,inmyopinion,inall,inaword,

Howtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolintwomonths.IhavealotoffriendsinNo.5MiddleSchool.Oneofthemismybestfriend.HisnameisLiHua.Iregardhimasmybestfriendhe’salwayshelpfulfriendlytome.Shehasblackhairandshewearsglasses.Sheisverylovelyandpretty.Shehasmanyhobbies,dancing,runningandplayingcomputergames.Herfavouritehobbyisreading.We’reinthesamegrade,indifferentclasses.wehelpeachother.wefightbutwealwaysgetalongwell. heattractsmemostisthathelikesmusic,too. wehavetime,welistentopopsongstogether.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears'life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember, IbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.hardItried,Istillcouldn'tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.shefoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.,shehaskepthelpingme.,I'vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI'mgoodatit.becauseandsuchas

butSometimesWhatWheneverwhenNomatterhowAssoonas

SincethenLittlebylittle

呈上启下，连词很重要。Iunderstandwhatshesaid,“Justbelieveyourselfandkeepworkinghardeverythingyouwantwouldbeachieved.”IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherfriends.I'velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.SheoftenhelpedmewithmyEnglishindass

afterclass.andIwasbadlyillIcouldn'tgotoschoolforthreedays.ShecametomyhouseandhelpedwithmyEnglish.IwasmovedIdecidedtostudyhard.WithherhelpIworkharderthanbeforeandmadeprogressrapidly.IthankedherverymuchandImissedher,too.Thatdaywasoneofthehappiestdayswehadtogether.SheismybestfriendI’llneverforget.Not

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alsooncesothatsothat亮点提升1.词组搭配:

Howtimeflies,graduatefrom,regard…as，

befriendlyto，suchas,getalongwell,Nomatterhow，dowellin,giveup,assoonas,hadatalkwith,sincethenkeptdoingsth,littlebylittle,becomeinterestedin,begoodat，

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help….withmakeprogress开头：中间：结尾：helpeachother（五）亮点提升2.句型从句（原因）because,notonly…butalso…,（时间）Whenever/when/assoonas/sincethen,（让步）Nomatterhow/once,（结果）so…that...引导的状语从句（that）引导的宾语和定语从句3.比较、最高级级结构：workharderthan....thehappiestdays,mybestfriend主题升华1.I'velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.2.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.3.Iunderstandwhatshesaid,“Justbelieveyourselfandkeepworkinghard,everythingyouwantwouldbeachieved.”得分要领拿到必拿的分1）2）3）4）5）6)人称（读者意识）语序（简单句的五中基本句型）时态（混用）内容（结构清，要点全）连接（关联词）

提升（好词，好句）英语写作普遍易犯的错误1.是否有大、小写错误2.是否与拼写错误3.是否有标点错误4.是否有语法错误注意：1.主谓是否一致2.动词的时态3.语态的使用是否正确4.词组的搭配是否正确学生作文评价表评价项目（共15分）

评价要点

分值自评

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篇章逻辑（4分）

要点顺序合理

且语序正确4

用词正确（3分）

单词用法及拼写正确3

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（3分）3种以上（含3种）

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如果以上评价要点都符合，但有语言错误，请按1-2个知识点错误扣1分处理。

（八）评价修改��作文评分标准作文15分，其中内容分6分，语言分6分，组织结构分3分。�语言评分标准：语言分主要从语法规则和词数两方面进行评分。1、拼写：每错一个扣0.5分。2、语法：每错一个扣0.5分。3、标点符号，大小写：每两处扣0.5。4、语言分最多扣4分。词数不足30个得分不超过总分一半分，不足40个得分不超10分，不足50个12分组织结构评分标准：

1、内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给满分。2、通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即是无语法错误，一般不给组织结构分。内容评分标准：一档13-15分

�包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，

用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。

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10-12分

�基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。

�三档

7-9分

�内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。

�四档

4-6分

�只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。

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0-3分

�只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。

Howtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinamonth.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears'life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn'tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I'vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI'mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherstudents.I'velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.SampleTheteacherI’llneverforgetMyschoolI’llneverforget

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