期末复习写作专训Module13课件九年级英语下册（合肥地区）

模块写作专训Module1Travel⁠

⁠本模块围绕“旅行”这一话题设计了一些语言实践活动，如谈论假期生活，描写自己的一次旅游经历等，其中涉及乘坐的交通工具、旅游地点、难忘的人和事等。⁠

⁠[经典例题]下表记录了去年5月1日你与家人的旅行。请你根据表格内容写一篇英语短文描述这次短暂而愉快的旅行，词数80～100。第一天我们乘飞机到达了聊城。天下着雨，长途旅行后，我们累了，因此第一天下午我们在宾馆休息。第二天阳光明媚，我们参观了光岳楼（GuangyueTower）、铁塔（theIronTower）及山陕会馆（Shan-ShaanGuildhall），了解了很多历史知识。第三天上午我们在东昌湖划船，下午乘飞机回家。[思路点拨]①

要点提示：根据表格内容写作，并适当进行拓展。在写作过程中，要注意时间顺序。②

时态：以一般过去时为主。③

人称：以第一人称为主。[写作提纲][高分范文]MyparentsandIwenttoLiaochengforatripbyplaneonMay1lastyear.Itwasrainyandweweretiredafterthelongflight，sowerestedinthehotelintheafternoon.Thenthenextday，itwassunnyandwevisitedGuangyueTower.Intheafternoon，wevisitedtheIronTowerandShan-ShaanGuildhall.Welearntalotaboutthehistoryfromtheguide.Onthethirdday，wewentboatingonDongchangLakeinthemorning.Intheafternoon，

weflewbackhome.Thetripwasshort.However，Iwasveryexcitedandenjoyeditalot.⁠

⁠去年国庆节，你和家人一起去黄山旅游。请你写一篇英语短文描述你们这次短暂而愉快的旅行，词数80～100。内容包括：1.黄山位于安徽省南边；2.从合肥开车，大约3个小时到黄山，我们沿途品尝了当地美食；3.第二天登山，由于气温骤降，我们欣赏了雾凇（rime），没看到日出、云海；4.第三天回家。

LastNationalDay，IwenttoMountHuangwithmyfamily.ItliesinthesouthofAnhuiProvince.IttookusaboutthreehourstodrivetherefromHefei.Onthewaythere，wetastedlotsoflocalfood.Itwassonice.

LastNationalDay，IwenttoMountHuangwithmyfamily.ItliesinthesouthofAnhuiProvince.IttookusaboutthreehourstodrivetherefromHefei.Onthewaythere，wetastedlotsoflocalfood.Itwassonice.

Onthesecondday，itgotcoldsuddenly，soweputonourcoats.Wewereluckytoseetherimebecauseofthesuddencold.Wewentbackhomeonthethirddayanditwaswarmagain.ItwassuchawonderfuljourneythatIwillneverforgetit.

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Onthesecondday，itgotcoldsuddenly，soweputonourcoats.Wewereluckytoseetherimebecauseofthesuddencold.Wewentbackhomeonthethirddayanditwaswarmagain.ItwassuchawonderfuljourneythatIwillneverforgetit.

⁠Module2Education⁠

⁠本模块的核心话题是“教育”。学生能够相互交流并谈论身边的事物，表达自己对学校生活的观点。⁠

⁠[经典例题]某英文网站正在举办以“Myschoollife”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你写一篇80～100词的短文投稿。内容要点参考词汇SubjectsEnglish，science...Teachersandclassmateskind，helpful...Activitiesbasketball...[思路点拨]

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要点提示：根据表格内容写作，并适当进行拓展。在写作过程中，要注意句子之间的衔接。②

时态：以一般现在时为主。③

人称：以第一人称为主。[写作提纲][高分范文]MyschoollifeI’mLiHuafromSunnyHillMiddleSchool.I’dliketosharemyschoollifewithyou.

Wehavemanysubjectsatschool，suchasChinese，English，scienceandsoon.IamfocusedonChinese，forIthinkit’sgettingmoreandmorewidelyusedthroughouttheworld.Ourteachersandclassmatesarekindandhelpful.WheneverIhaveproblems，theyarealwaysreadytogivemeahand.Schoolactivitiesarerichandcolourful.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmates.Ilikereadingaswell.SoIoftenspendmyfreetimereadingintheschoollibrary.MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIenjoyit.⁠

⁠（2023·亳州涡阳县模拟）为构建德智体美劳全面培养的教育体系，国家印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》，把劳动教育纳入人才培养全过程。请你结合自身体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。不少于80词。内容包括：1.上劳动课，学习生活技能；2.参加实践活动，如：植树、洗菜等；3.学做家务，如整理房间、学做菜等；4.养成良好的劳动习惯。

Guidelinesonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutin2020inordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.

Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iwelcomethemwarmly.Firstly，weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskills.Secondly，wecantakepartinafter-schoolactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorwashingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also，weneedtrytodosomechoresathome，liketidyingroomsorcookingsomedishes.Aboveall，weshouldformgoodworkinghabits.

Inaword，thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.

⁠Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iwelcomethemwarmly.Firstly，weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskills.Secondly，wecantakepartinafter-schoolactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorwashingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also，weneedtrytodosomechoresathome，liketidyingroomsorcookingsomedishes.Aboveall，weshouldformgoodworkinghabits.

Inaword，thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.

⁠Module3Lifenowandthen⁠

⁠本模块的中心话题是“现在与过去的生活”，具体围绕“与过去相比，生活中的巨大变化”这一主题展开，要求学生能够使用比较级和最高级描述我们或其他国家人民现在与过去的生活环境的差别。⁠

⁠[经典例题]假设你是李华，你的朋友John想了解你家乡的变化，请你给他写一封词数为80～100的邮件，从居住环境、上班方式及道路状况等方面介绍一下家乡的变化，并适当表达自己的看法。[思路点拨]①

要点提示：根据题目内容写作，并适当进行拓展。在写作过程中，要注意比较级的用法。②

时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。③

人称：以第一、三人称为主。[写作提纲][高分范文]DearJohn，Inthepasttenyears，greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast，

thereusedtobesmallhouses.Theroadswerenarrowandthelivingconditionswerebad.Peoplewenttoworkonfootorbybike.Buttherearemanytallbuildingsinmyhometownnow.Therearemanywiderroadsandthehousesarebrighterandbigger.Peopleusuallygotoworkbybusorbycar.What’smore，peoplenoweatbetterandlivelonger.I’mhappytoseethesechangesinmyhometown.Ithinkit’sstillimportanttorememberthepast.Ihopemyhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Yours，LiHua⁠

⁠某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据要点提示，写一篇以“Mybeautifulhometown”为题的英语短文投稿。不少于80词。要点提示：1.过去的家乡：河水被污染，垃圾到处都是；2.现在的家乡：山清水秀、空气清新、鸟语花香；3.你的感想。Mybeautifulhometown

Myhometownisabeautifulplace.Ithasawideriverandisrichinfishandrice.Therehavebeenalotofchangesinmyhometown.

Inthepast，theriverinmyhometownwaspolluted.Therewasmuchrubbishandpeoplelivedahardlife.

Myhometownisabeautifulplace.Ithasawideriverandisrichinfishandrice.Therehavebeenalotofchangesinmyhometown.

Inthepast，theriverinmyhometownwaspolluted.Ther