Unit3FamilyMattersDevelopingideasWriting课件高中英语

Unit

3

FamilymattersWriting写作技法写一篇家庭回忆Ⅰ.技能指导1.写作指南：

家庭回忆属于家庭叙事类的记叙文，要通过完整的故事情节和形象生动的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果交代清楚。2.常用表达：（1）开头I

was

cleaning

my

room

yesterday

when

I

noticed...昨天我正在打扫房间，这时我注意到……As

I

was

looking

at

it,

...of

that

day

came

back

to

me.当我正看着它时，那天的……又出现在我的心头。（2）主体It

was

my

mother's

birthday,

and

I

decided

to...那天是我妈妈的生日，我决定……After

knowing

what

happened,

my

mother...在知道发生了什么事后，我妈妈……（3）结尾It

was

an

unforgettable

day

and

we

ended

up

laughing.那是令人难忘的一天，我们最后都开怀大笑了。I

love

my

mother

and

I

love

my

family.我爱我妈妈，我爱我的家人。Ⅱ.情景再现

假如你是李华，你在清理书架时偶然看到妈妈过去写给你的一叠卡片。这些卡片帮你摆脱了压力，让你开始快乐地学习。请你写封电子邮件，把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友Tom。注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear

Tom,___Yours，Li

Hua【审题谋篇】【词汇储备】1.

____________adj.鼓舞人心的encouraging2.

________n.焦虑anxiety3.

________adj.感到有压力的stressed4.

_________清理clean

up5.

___________度过go

through6.

___________落后fall

behind【句型运用】1.

当我清理书架时，我发现了一叠卡片。___________________________________，

I

found

a

stack

of

cards.When

I

was

cleaning

up

my

bookshelf2.

读到上面的文字，我的眼睛湿润了。______________________________,

my

eyes

watered.When

I

read

the

words

on

them3.

这些鼓舞人心的卡片帮助我度过了沮丧（的日子）。___________________________________________

my

frustration.These

encouraging

cards

helped

me

go

through4.

刚上高中的时候，我感到有压力，害怕落后于别人。_______________________________________________________________________________I

felt

stressed

at

the

beginning

of

high

school

and

I

was

afraid

of

falling

behind

others.5.

很快妈妈发现了我的问题。从那以后，每天早上我都能在书桌上找到一张特别的卡片。Soon

Mum

found

my

problem.

From

then

on,

_________________________________________________.I

could

find

a

special

card

on

the

desk

every

morning6.

渐渐地，我变得不那么焦虑了，在学业中找到了乐趣。____________________________________________________________Gradually,

I

became

less

anxious

and

found

pleasure

in

my

studies.7.

妈妈让我明白压力是不可避免的。____________________________________________________Mum

makes

me

understand

that

pressure

can't

be

avoided.8.

重要的是如何应对它。______________________________________What

is

important

is

how

to

deal

with

it.【句式升级】1.

用v.-ing形式作状语改写句2。__________________________________________Reading

the

words

on

them,

my

eyes

watered.2.

用强调句型改写句3。__________________________________________________________________It

was

these

encouraging

cards

that

helped

me

go

through

my

frustration.3.

用count或matter对句8进行升级。_______________________________________What

counts/matters

is

how

to

deal

with

it.【连句成篇】

将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。Dear

Tom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li

Hua

When

I

was

cleaning

up

my

bookshelf,

I

found

a

stack

of

cards.

Reading

the

words

on

them,

my

eyes

watered.

It

was

these

encouraging

cards

that

helped

me

go

through

my

frustration.

I

felt

stressed

at

the

beginning

of

high

school

and

I

was

afraid

of

falling

behind

others.

Soon

Mum

found

my

problem.

From

then

on,

I

could

find

a

special

card

on

the

desk

every

morning.

Gradually,