高考英语二轮专题写作应用文复习-介绍学校变化课件

高考写作应用文介绍学校变化假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim曾经在你校读书，想了解学校有哪些变化，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.学校的变化；2.你的感受。注意:1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。题目分析姐解题步骤1.审题假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim曾经在你校读书，想了解学校有哪些变化，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.学校的变化；2.你的感受。注意:1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。WhatHow写作对象身份写作背景写作目的Communication交际得体？Version1:Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamreallydelightedtoknowthatyouusedtobeanexchangestudentinourschool.Knowingthatyouareconcernedaboutallthechangesinourschool,Iamwritingtosharewithyou.Version

2:…Knowingthatyouhavestudiedinmyschoolforseveralyears,Iamgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinourschool’snewchange,I’dliketomakeadescriptionofthechangeandsharemyfeelingswithyou.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim曾经在你校读书，想了解学校有哪些变化Communication交际得体Sample

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1:Howiseverythinggoingrecently?Knowingthatyouareinterestedinmyschool’schanges.I’mmorethanhappytosharewithyou.Sample

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Howiseverythinggoingrecently?I’mdelightedtoknowthatyouarestillconcernedaboutmyschool.I’mheretotalkaboutthechangesofitafteryourleaving.Sample

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Howiseverythinggoingrecently?Ithasbeenalongtimesinceyouleft,Ireallymissyou!Thereareindeedmanychangestakingplaceinmyschool,andIcan’twaittosharewithyou.Content内容如何展开?

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ChangesoftheschoolContent内容如何展开Hardware?Software?environmentequipmentPeople(teachers&students)Courses(corecourses/optionalcourses;

Class-Selectionsystem)ExtracurricularactivitiesAneffectiveleadingsentenceEffective:specificcontent&impressivelanguageOurschoolhaschangedalot!Ourschoolhaschangedremarkably!Ourschoolhaschangedinmanyrespects!Ourschoolhaschangedinbothfacilitiesandcourses.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinbothfacilitiesandcourses.Thepastthreeyearshavewitnessedgreatchangesinbothfacilitiesandcourses.Effective?2.Content内容如何展开?

Language语言如何支撑？Changesofschool硬Version1:Wehaveupdatedthestudyandlivingequipmenttothelatestversion.Themulti-mediacomputer,whichyoucomplainedaboutseveraltimes,nowrunsfluentlyandnolongercrashesdown.最新版运行流畅死机2.Content内容如何展开?

Language语言如何支撑？Changesofschool硬Version3:Hardwarefacilitieshavebeenupgraded,includingnewblackboardsandcomputersintheclassrooms.Theschoollibrary,whichhasbeenunderrepairduringthelastthreemonths,willreopennextweek.Itissaidthatthelibrarywillseatmorestudentsandthelibrarianshaverestockedthelibraryshelveswithlargequantitiesofnewbooks.硬件设备在维修中重新开放提供座位；容纳更新，补充大量3.LanguageTopicwords在告别晚会上上次见到彼此很想念你忍不住要和你分享发生变化和。。。差异很大呈现新面貌改变外观楼房修葺（翻新）设备更新面积扩建环境美化Changesofschool1.校园建筑的翻新2.图书馆、操场的扩建3.教学设施的更新4.环境的美化Renovate/reconstruct/repair/mendenlarge;expandupgrade;update;furnish；add；equipbeautify;decorateSentencesto

use自从告别晚会以来，我们已经有三年没见了。我们很想你。学校变化真大。学校设法让我们生活得更充实。成立了许多社团给我们提供实践活动。学校教学方法有很大改变。我们走出校园实践我们的知识。教学设备升级了，每间教室都装配了电子白板和最先进的电脑。去年修葺后，我们的教学楼有了文化气息，经典绘画作品和五颜六色的照片装饰着墙壁。整个校园焕发着活力，到处都种着树木或鲜花。欢迎你回来亲自看看学校的变化。你会感到很震撼。1.从告别晚会以来，我们在已经有差不多3年没见了。我们都很想念你。Ihaven’tseenyouforalmostthreeyearssincewesaidgood-byeatthefarewellparty.Wemissyoualot.2.学校真的变化很大。Literally,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.Literally,,ourschoolhaswitnessedgreatchanges.3.学校设法让我们的生活更充实。成立了许多社团给我们提供实践活动。Ourschoolhasdonealottohelpusachievemorefulfilledlives.Clubsandsocietiesaresetuptoprovideuswithsomehands-onactivities.4.学校教学方法有很大改变。我们走出校园实践我们的知识。Ourschool’steachingmethodshaveremarkablychanged.Wegooutofthecampustoapplyknowledgeintopractice.5.教学设备升级了，每间教室都装配了电子白板和最先进的电脑。Teachingfacilitiesareupgraded,witheachclassroomequippedwithelectronicwhiteboardsandadvancedcomputers.6.去年修葺后，我们的教学楼带有了艺术气息，经典绘画作品和五颜六色的照片装饰着墙壁。Renovatedlastyear,theschoolbuildingsbear/haveanartistictouchnow,withclassicpaintingsandcolorfulphotosdecoratingthewall.7.整个校园焕发着活力，到处都种着树木或者鲜花。Thewholecampusisburstingwithvigor,withtreesorflowersplanted/sittingeverywhere.8.欢迎你回来亲自看看学校的变化。你会感到很震撼。Welcomebacktoourschoolandhavealookatthesechangesforyourself！Youwillbeamazed!

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请根据下列提示，给你的美国笔友Peter写信，介绍学校的新面貌。Withsb./sth.doing/done/todoAbrand-newschool_____infrontofus,witheverything_____.Studyinginthebuildingiscomfortablewithwalls…Ourclassroomslookmore______with…Practice:Withsb./sth.doing/done/todo范文赏析Howiseverythinggoingrecently?Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyouareinterestedinthechangesofmyschool.SoI’mwritingtosharesomeinformationwithyou.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolwithintheseyears,andnowit’squitedifferentfromtheoneyouwerestudyingin.Firstly,ourschoolhasbecomequitemodern,withalltheclassroomsequippedwiththelatestcomputersandelectronicblackboards,addingtotheconvenienceofourstud