初升高英语无忧衔接及新课预习（全国）衔接点20 书面表达（解析版）

衔接点20书面表达（初高考点差异及衔接）初中要求书面表达主要考查学生以下能力:1.综合运用英语的能力;2.观察能力、理解能力、联想能力、灵活运用所学英语知识的能力;3.初步运用所学的英语知识和表达方式传递信息和表达思想的能力。浙江中考书面表达的话题包括个人情况、家人朋友、生活学习、兴趣爱好、人际交往、节假日活动、计划愿望、文化习俗、旅游交通、文娱体育、科技发明、饮食健康、自然环境等。设题通常有写人叙事类、介绍说明类、做法建议类、观点表达类、邮件回复类等。词数80—100。高中要求应用文写作任务贴近学生真实生活,试题具有开放性和灵活性,有利于学生使用所学英语知识讲述身边的故事,表达自己的思想,有利于培养学生的创造性思维。撰写祝贺信,邀请信等应用文。考生需要根据情境任务,分析写作目的、写作对象,将审题时的思考与写作内容相关联,并结合自己的背景知识或经验,展开丰富的想象,构思活动内容和栏目内容,运用恰当的语言、得体的语气完成交际任务,撰写出各具特点的文章。【初中书面表达考点聚焦】答题步骤Step1审和列先审题,理清、明确写作任务的体裁、主旨和要点,弄清题目所给的情境、要求表达的要点、文体格式、时态和人称等。然后,根据要点及关键词列出提纲,提纲可包括段落结构、单词、短语、句式等。Step2扩和连首先,将提纲中的单词、短语、句式扩展成句,再将句子扩展成段。然后,加上适当的连接词使文章层次分明,逻辑清晰。最后,酌情选用高阶表达优化写作,美化文章。至此,完成草稿。Step3查和抄把草稿誊抄到答题卡上之前要检查:①是否偏离主题;②是否遗漏要点;③语言是否正确、规范、得体;④行文是否连贯、流畅;⑤语言是否丰富多样;⑥词数是否符合要求。誊抄时要注意书写整洁、大小写和标点符号使用规范。抄完后再核对一遍,确保无误。分类训练一写人叙事类为了弘扬传统文化,你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了丰富多彩的文化活动(culturalactivities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数80—100;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。MyTraditionalCulturalExperiencesOnMay19,ourschoolorganized_____________________________________参考范文MyTraditionalCulturalExperiencesOnMay19,ourschoolorganizedmanytraditionalculturalactivities.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.

Inthemorning,IvisitedNingboMuseumwithmyclassmatesandenjoyedthebeautyoftraditionalarts.Everyonewasexcitedtolearnaboutthelonghistoryofthecity.Atnoon,wemadeNingboTangyuan(Dumplings).Welearneditwasasymboloffamilyget-togethers.Intheafternoon,wereadmanyancientlocalstoriesandsharedtheminthestory-tellingcompetition,learningaboutthetraditionalvaluesofourcity.Theseactivitieshavenotonlyhelpedmehaveabetterunderstandingofourcity,butalsoleftalastinginfluenceonmyheartandmind.分类训练二介绍说明类你校英语文化节举办了主题为“SharingMyHometown”的短视频征集活动,你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿,在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。ProcessGains•makeaplan•collectinformation•createavideo•understandlocalculturebetter•...注意:(1)发言稿必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;(2)你们的收获至少两条;(3)词数:80—100;(4)发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:收获gainHi,everyone!IamhappyheretoshareourexperienceinmakingavideoofSharingMyHometown.Tostartwith,_____________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!参考范文Hi,everyone!IamhappyheretoshareourexperienceinmakingavideoofSharingMyHometown.Tostartwith,wehadaheateddiscussionandmadeaplancarefully.Afterthat,wemadeeveryefforttocollectinformationindifferentways.Forexample,wetalkedtoourelders,whotoldusstoriesabouttraditionalfoodandfamouspeople.Usingtheinformationwehadcollected,wecreatedanEnglishvideo,whichwaslaterchosenasoneofthebestworkstointroduceourhometown.

Fromthisexperience,wehavegainedalot.Aboveall,wenowunderstandourlocalculturebetter.Inaddition,ourEnglishhasimprovedgreatly.Lastbutnotleast,we'verealizedhowimportantgoodteamworkis!Thanksforyourlistening!

分类训练三做法建议类假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。UncivilizedbehaviorSuggestions•threwrubbisheverywhere•pickedflowers•climbedtrees•putrubbishintobins•…注意:(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;(2)你的建议至少两条;(3)词数:80—100;(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilizedbehavior;编辑editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorwhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Yourssincerely,LiuJun参考范文Deareditor,

IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorwhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Somevisitorsthrewrubbisheverywhereandleftplasticbagsflyingaround.Somepickedflowerswithoutpermissiontotakephotossothattheycouldshowoffonline.Andsomeclimbedtreesforfun,whichmightresultinseriousaccidents.

Ithinkitiswrongtoenjoyoneselfatthecostofothers.Visitorsaresupposedtoprotecttheenvironment,likeputtingrubbishintoproperbins.Andtheyshouldbecarefulnottocausetroubletothelocalsandkeepawayfromdanger.Inthisway,agreener,cleanerandmorecivilizednewvillagewillbethereforusalltoenjoy.Yourssincerely,

LiuJun

分类训练四观点表达类假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。WhatwereonshowWhattheyaremadeof/fromWhatyouthinkclotheschairsmodelplanes...wastepaperplasticbottlesusedwoodandglass...creativesave......注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。Hello,everyone!I'dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.参考范文Hello,everyone!I'dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.

Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,includingclothesmadeofwastepaperandmodelplanesmadeofusedwoodandglass.Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolors.Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforcomputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!Withthezipperofjeansonthetop,twopocketsontwosides,thebackpacklooksbothusefulandfashionable.Itevenhasalogo!Ifeltamazedathowwastecouldbeputtosuchgooduse.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergyandbuildagreenerfuture.【高中书面表达考点聚焦】考纲解读应用文写作任务贴近学生真实生活,试题具有开放性和灵活性,有利于学生使用所学英语知识讲述身边的故事,表达自己的思想,有利于培养学生的创造性思维。撰写祝贺信,邀请信等应用文。考生需要根据情境任务,分析写作目的、写作对象,将审题时的思考与写作内容相关联,并结合自己的背景知识或经验,展开丰富的想象,构思活动内容和栏目内容,运用恰当的语言、得体的语气完成交际任务,撰写出各具特点的文章。考点清单备考建议1.动笔前的审题是撰写高质量文章的保障。一般来说,审题包括几个方面:审体裁(祝贺信还是邀请信等)、审人称(写给谁,收信人决定作文是正式文体还是非正式文体)、审时态(每一段用什么时态,现在时态还是过去时态等)、审内容(2个要点还是3个要点等)。2.审题后考生可运用写作总体规划图勾勒出文章总体结构。3.重视积累写作词汇,不断提高语言质量词汇的积累是文章语言质量的重要保证,考生在日常欣赏年级或班级写作范文时,要注意摘抄好词好句。4.注意要点之间的衔接,突出文章的逻辑连贯性首先,注意要点与要点之间的逻辑连贯。英语应用文写作包括2—3个要点,考生要注意要点与要点之间的互相呼应。其次,注意要点与细节之间的连贯。考生还要注意所添加的细节必须与要点密切相关,不可以脱离主题句。最后,注意保持段落写作的完整性。构成段落的三个要素是主题句、扩展句和结论句。有时,由于篇幅有限,结论句可以略去。类型一邮件/书信——申请/求职假定你是李华,今年暑假你校将迎来一批英国访客,现面向全体高三学生招募对苏州文化比较了解的同学做志愿向导,请你写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头、结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,Yours,LiHua答案DearSirorMadam,

I'mextremelygladtoknowourschoolwantsavoluntaryguidetoreceiveagroupofBritishvisitors,soI'mwritingtoapplyforthisjob.Mygrandpaisasilkcraftsman,soIknowalotaboutsilktextiles.IamalsoaloyalvisitortoSuzhougardens,theirstoriesandbuildingsfamiliartome.Besides,Ihavelearnedhowtomakefoldingfans.What'smore,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallyoralEnglish.Additionally,I'measy⁃goingandskilledatcommunicating.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua

精彩语句1.精美词汇applyfor申请haveagoodcommandof精通2.出彩结构Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.(条件状语从句)写作类型二倡议书你校英语学习社团(EnglishClub)将举办“读名著,学英语(ReadClassics,LearnEnglish)”活动。请你代表该社团写一封倡议书,发表在校报上。内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.号召积极参与。注意:写作词数应为80左右。ReadClassics,LearnEnglish答案ReadClassics,LearnEnglishDearfellowschoolmates,AimedatappreciatingthecharmofEnglishclassicsandpromotingEnglishlearning,theschoolEnglishClubwillhostthe“ReadClassics,LearnEnglish”activity.Thisactivitywilllast2weeks,scheduledfromApril1stto14th.Variousactivitieshavebeendesigned,rangingfromattendingalectureonreadingtipstorecommendingthefavoriteEnglishclassics,followedbyexchangingreadingexperienceaswellasreadingskills.AnyonewhohasinterestinreadingEnglishclassicsiswelcome.Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation.EnglishClub精彩语句1.精美词汇promotevt.促进;推动beaimedat旨在;以……为目的2.出彩结构Variousactivitieshavebeendesigned,rangingfromattendingalectureonreadingtipstorecommendingthefavoriteEnglishclassics,followedbyexchangingreadingexperienceaswellasreadingskills.(现在分词短语作后置定语和过去分词短语作状语)写作类型三邮件/书信——请求帮助/提供帮助假定你是李明。你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.表达祝愿。注意:写作词数应为80左右。DearDavid,Yours,LiMing答案DearDavid,

I'mdelightedtolearnthatyou'vestartedlearningChinese!KnowingthatyouwouldliketohaveabettercommandofChinese,I'mwritingtosharewithyousomepracticalsuggestions,justforyourreference.Withproperguidanceandenoughpractice,you'reboundtolearnChinesewell.Tobeginwith,itisadvisablethatyouregularlywatchsomeChineselearningprograms,whichwillexposeyoutoanauthenticlearningatmosphereandwillhelpyoudevelopabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Besides,you'dbettermakesomeChinesefriendsandcommunicatewiththemasmuchaspossible.Withfrequentcommunicationinreallife,you'lleventuallyimproveyouroralChineseandfeelmoreconfident.Hopefully,mytipsabovecanbeofsomehelp.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiMing

精彩语句1.精美词汇haveabettercommandof更好地掌握beboundtodo一定会做……beofsomehelp有些帮助2.出彩结构Tobeginwith,itisadvisablethatyouregularlywatchsomeChineselearningprograms,whichwillexposeyoutoanauthenticlearningatmosphereandwillhelpyoudevelopabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.(虚拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句)写作类型四邮件/书信——感谢假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim知道你即将参加高考,发邮件向你表示祝福并给你提供了几条考前学习的建议,你感觉非常有效。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1.感谢他的祝福;2.你比较获益的一条建议及理由。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,LiHua答案DearJim,Thankyouverymuchforyourletterandyourverybestwishes,whichreallyencouragemealot.Thetipsyougavemeareallpracticalandhelpful.Ihavebenefitedalotfromthem.Theonethatworksverywellonmeis“UsingMindMapstoReview”.Bydrawingmindmaps,IamclearerabouttheknowledgesystemsandhaveabetterunderstandingofeachsectionthatIreview.Iamnowmoreconfidentaboutmypreparationandexams.Thankyouverymuchagainandbestwishestoyourgraduation.Mayyouhaveafruitfulcollegelife.Yours,LiHua写作类型五邮件/书信——告知/邀请假定你是李华,你校正在为前来参加国际夏令营的外国中学生筹划中国传统艺术展。请你用英语写一封邮件通知外国中学生们,内容包括:1.欢迎参观;2.内容简介;3.注意事项。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案Onepossibleversion:Dearfriends,Welcometoourschool!KnowingthatyouarekeenonChinesetradition,ourschoolisholdingaTraditionalChineseArtExhibitionforyou.Letmeintroduceitindetail.Theexhibitionwilllast3days,fromJune11toJune13inourschool.Itcoversavarietyofactivities,rangingfromlearningdailyChinesetoChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture.Inaddition,theexhibitionprovidesachanceforstudentstoenjoysomeartworksinourmuseum,whichisagoodwaytolearnaboutourhistory.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesignupforitbeforeJune10onourschoolwebsite.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇bekeenon喜爱indetail详细地signupfor报名参加2.出彩结构Inaddition,theexhibitionprovidesachanceforstudentstoenjoysomeartworksinourmuseum,whichisagoodwaytolearnaboutourhistory.(which引导非限制性定语从句)写作类型六报道你校最近举办了春季运动会,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.运动会的基本情况;3.比赛的意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目已为你写好。TheSpringSportsMeet答案TheSpringSportsMeetToraiseourawarenessofphysicalhealthandenrichourschoollife,ourschoolheldtheannualspringsportsmeetontheplaygroundlastThursdayandFriday.Alotofstudentsfromeveryclasssignedupforthesportsmeet.Theytookpartindifferentkindsofevents,suchasrunningandthehighjump,andtriedtheirbesttosucceedintheirselectedsports.Someofthemevenbroketherecordsofourschool.Thesportsmeetwashighlyappreciated,becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorewillingtocooperate.精彩语句1.精美词汇signupfor报名参加selectv.选择appreciatev.欢迎2.出彩结构①Toraiseourawarenessofphysicalhealthandenrichourschoollife,ourschoolheldtheannualspringsportsmeetontheplaygroundlastThursdayandFriday.(不定式作目的状语)②Thesportsmeetwashighlyappreciated,becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorewillingtocooperate.(because引导原因状语从句)写作类型七演讲假定你是李华,你校外教MrThomson下周将结束两年的聘期回国任教,你将作为学生代表致欢送辞。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.对MrThomson表示感谢;2.介绍MrThomson的教学情况;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案Dearfriends,Howtimeflies!MrThomsonwillleaveforhishomelandnextweekafterhehasbeenworkingdiligentlyatourschoolfortwoyears.Now,itistimeforustoexpressourthankstohim.Duringthepasttwoyears,MrThomsonhasdevotedhimselftoimprovingourEnglish,whichhasleftagoodimpressiononus.Hemakeshisclassessolivelyandinterestingthatallofusenjoyeveryminuteofthem.ItishiscreativeworkthathasmadeusachievegreatprogressinourEnglishlearning.WewishMrThomsonapleasantjourneyhomeandgoodhealth.That'sall.Thankyou.精彩语句1.精美词汇leaveagoodimpressionon给……留下好印象devoteoneselfto致力于……2.出彩结构ItishiscreativeworkthathasmadeusachievegreatprogressinourEnglishlearning.(强调句型)一你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。注意:1.词数100左右;OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.答案OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.Itaimstoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectingoceans.

Whyshouldweprotecttheocean?Thereasonisthatitprovidesvariousbenefits.Tobeginwith,theseaisasignificantsourceoffood.Withtheworldpopulationgrowing,wearerelyingontheoceanmoreandmoreforsurvival.Inaddition,notonlydoestheoceanproducemuchoxygen,butitalsoabsorbsmuchcarbondioxide,whichremarkablycontributestoregulatingtheEarth'sclimate.Also,vastamountsofmedicinalproductscomefromtheocean,includingingredientsthathelpfightcancerandheartdisease.However,theseaisbeingdamaged.Hugeasitis,itismoresensitivethanwethink.Thus,itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestoprotectit.Otherwise,futuregenerationswillnotforgiveus.二学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述;2.简单评论;3.你的建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.答案LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.TolearnmoreabouthowseniorhighschoolstudentslearnEnglishafterclass,recentlyourschoolEnglishnewspaperisholdingaheateddiscussion,whosethemeis“LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom”.Thefollowingaretheresultsofasurveyconnectedtothediscussion.

ThepercentageofstudentswhochoosetolistentoEnglishsongsandwatchEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%,whilethosechoosingtoreadbooksinEnglishandbrowseEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.Fromwhathasbeensaidabove,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthatmoststudentsprefertochoosemorerelaxingandinterestingwaystolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroom.AsfarasIamconcerned,aslongaswedomorelistening,speaking,readingandwritingafterschool,wewilllearnEnglishwell.三假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.建议交流的具体内容及其原因;2.交流时间和其他相关事项。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,How'severything?Yours,LiHua答案Onepossibleversion:DearJim,How'severything?I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwillbeaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou'llbeusing.Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10⁃minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua四假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。DearSir,