应用文类型4：咨询信

咨询信【试题探究】

假定你是李华,打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给TravelAmerica国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询,内容如下:

1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线;

2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。注意:

1.写作词数应为80个左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Step

1:审题布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时要点1.写信目的2.咨询的内容:旅游路线,旅游费用Step

2:巧饰亮点要点1:我打算在美国住10天左右,希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景,品味一下当地的风俗。一般表达:I______________________________________,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句式升级(定语从句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,_____________Ihopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.intendtostayinAmericaforabout10daysduringwhich

要点2:除此之外,我想了解路线的价格,包括所有旅游费用。一般表达:Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升级(分词短语作定语)Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,________________________________.coveringallthetravelingexpensesStep

3:衔接成篇DearSir/Madam,

I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.

IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【句式储备】1.篇头——开篇表明写信目的IamLiHua,aChinesestudent,studyinginNewZealand.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomeinformationregarding/concerningtravel.我是李华,一名在新西兰学习的中国学生。我写信是想询问一些关于旅行的信息。2.篇中——陈述要咨询的内容①Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknowthedeparturetimeandtravelingroute.首先,我很想知道出发时间和旅行路线。②Secondly,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthetravel?其次,我需要支付多少旅费?③Thirdly,isthereanythingIshouldpayspecialattentionto?第三,有什么我应该特别注意的吗?3.结尾——表感谢,盼回复①Iwouldbemuchappreciatedifyoucouldfurnishmewiththeaboveinformationandyoucancontactmevia1234456@df.erf.如果您能提供我上述信息,我将不胜感激,您可以通过1234456@df.erf与我联系。②Thankyouandyourpromptreplywillbehighlyappreciated.谢谢你,如能及时回复我将不胜感激。【拓展训练】

假定你是李华,高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。内容包括:

1.对申请者的相关要求;

2.课程的相关事宜;

3.住宿和吃饭的条件;

4.需要做的相关准备。注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearSirorMadam,

Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.

Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandaccommodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtom