高考英语复习读后续写练习：疲惫打工人遇到陌生人重新燃起对这个城市的喜爱之情

高考英语读后续写语篇练习疲惫打工人遇到陌生人，重新燃起对这个城市的喜爱之情1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ThatcoldJanuarynight,IwasgrowingsickofmylifeinSanFrancisco.ThereIwaswalkinghomeatoneinthemorningafteratiringpracticeatthetheatre.Withopeningnightonlyaweekaway,Iwasstilllearningmylines.Iwashavingtroubledealingwithmypart-timejobatthebankandmyactingatnightatthesametime.AsIwalked,IthoughtseriouslygivingupbothactingandSanFrancisco.Citylifehadbecometoomuchforme.AsIwaswalkingdownemptystreetsundertallbuildings,therewasacolddampwindblowingofftheseawhichnearlythrewmeoffmyfeetandIfeltverysmallandcold.Ibegantoruntokeepwarmandtokeepawayfrompossiblerobbers.Veryfewpeoplewerestilloutexceptafewsad-lookinghomelesspeopleunderblankets.4续写原文Aboutablockfrommyapartment,Iheardasoundbehindme.Iturnedquickly,beingafraidtoseesomeonewithaknifeoragun.ThestreetwasemptyandtheonlylivingthingIcouldseewasafrightenedcatoutsideasmallrestaurant.Evenso,thenoisestillhadmademenervous,soIstartedtorunfaster.NotuntilIreachedmyapartmentbuildingandunlockedthedoordidIrealizewhatthenoisehadbeen.Ithadbeenmywalletfallingtothesidewalk.5续写原文Suddenly,Ididn'tfeelcoldandtiredanymore.IranoutofthedoorandbacktowhereI'dheardthenoise.AlthoughIsearchedthesidewalkanxiouslyforfifteenminutes,Icouldn'tfindmywalletanywhere.MytearsbrokefreewhenIrealizedmywalletmightbegoneforever.6段首句Para1:JustasIwasabouttogiveup,Iheardagarbagetruckpulluptothesidewalknexttome.

Para2：Yes,sir!Itwasmywallet.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述的是作者在一天的工作之后，感到对这个城市，对生活的对工作都失去了兴趣的时候，因为得到了别人的帮助，又重新燃起了对这个城市生活的喜爱之情。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：JustasIwasabouttogiveup,Iheardagarbagetruckpulluptothesidewalknexttome.由第一段首句内容“就在我要放弃的时候，我听到旁边的人行道上停了一辆垃圾车。”车上有人喊作者的名字，作者感到惊讶，故事由此展开。11续写思路分析Para2：Yes,sir!Itwasmywallet.由第二段首句内容“是的,先生!是我的钱包。”可知，第二段可描写那人把钱包递给作者，作者感到高兴的同时，也得到了有价值的东西，获得了人生感悟。12续写思路分析续写线索即将放弃时出现垃圾车——有人喊作者名字——还钱包——高兴——感悟13续写素材可用词汇：行为类寻找：lookingfor/searchingfor得到，获得：got/gained递给我钱包：handedmywallettome/gavemywallettome拿回，取回：gotback/takeback/bringback情绪类令人惊讶：surprising/amazing/astonishing好笑的，逗乐的：amused/entertained/funny14续写素材[高分句型1]

Whenthevoicecalledmefromtheinsideofthetruck,IthoughtIwasdreaming.（句中when引导时间状语从句）[高分句型2]

Isthiswhatyouarelookingfor?（句中使用what引导的表语从句）[高分句型3]

Irealizedthatthecitycouldn'tbeabadplaceaslongaspeoplewerewillingtohelpeachother.（句中使用that引导宾语从句和aslongas条件状语从句）15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现JustasIwasabouttogiveup,Iheardagarbagetruckpulluptothesidewalknexttome.Iheardamancallmynamefromthetruck.Itwassurprising!Whenthevoicecalledmefromtheinsideofthetruck,IthoughtIwasdreaming.Howcouldthismanknowmyname?Thedooropened,andasmallred-hairedmanjumpedout.Hehadanamusedlookinhiseyes,"Isthiswhatyouarelookingfor?"heasked,holdingupmywallet.Ireallycouldn'tbelievemyeyesatthemoment.17范文呈现Yes,sir!Itwasmywallet.

Joywelledupinsidemewhenthemanhandedmywallettome.Itwasnearly3ambythetimeIgottobedthatnight.Iwouldn'tgetmuchsleepthatnight,butIhadgotmywalletback.Ialsogotsomethingvaluable—Irealizedthatthecitycouldn'tbeabadplaceaslongaspeoplewerewillingtohelpeachother.18范文译文就在我快要放弃的时候，我听到一辆垃圾车停在我旁边的人行道上。我听到一个男人在卡车上叫我的名字。太令人惊讶了！当卡车里的声音叫我时，我以为我在做梦。这个人怎么会知道我的名字？门开了，一个红头发的小个子男人跳了出来。他眼中带着好笑的神情，举起我的钱包问：“这就是你要找的吗？”。此刻，我真的不敢相信自己的眼睛。是的，先生！那是我的钱包。当那个人把钱包递给我时，我心