人教版英语八年级下册Unit-1-写作教学案

广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》成果人教版初中英语 单元话题写作指导八年级下册Unit1What’sthematter?写作教学案话题：健康与急救（教师使用）【写作目标】能根据别人的健康问题提建议，并能描述怎样对待健康问题。【阅读积累】词汇积累：写出下列单词和短语（课前任务）1、习惯于2、坚持做某事3、放松4、感冒5、同意做某事6、放弃决定做某事8、保持健康均衡的饮食10、拥有好习惯11、对……有益12、做运动13、越来越强壮14、多吃蔬菜15、对……有害参考答案：1.beusedto…2.keepdoing3.relax4.haveacold5.agreetodo6.giveup7.decidetodo8.keephealthy9.balanceddiet10.haveagoodhabit11.begoodfor12.dosports13.strongerandstronger14.eatmorevegetable15.bebadfor句型积累：根据汉语意思完成英语句子，每空一词。（课前任务）1、你怎么啦？Whatis________________________you?2、我发烧了。Ihavea________.3、我认为你该按时上学。Ithinkyou________gotoschoolontime.4、别放弃。Don’t________________.5、我习惯冒险。I________________________takingrisks.6、他割伤了自己所以放些药在上面。He________________________soheputsome____________onit.7、他得重感冒，让他多喝水、躺下、休息。Hehasa________________________,lethim____________morewater,____________downand____________.8、每天我做运动时，我感到很高兴。EverydaywhenI____________,Ifeelveryhappy.9、你运动得越多，就越健康。________________________youdoexercise,________________________youwillbe.10、保持健康对我们而言很重要。It’s____________forus____________________________________.参考答案：1.thematterwith2.fever3.should4.giveup5.amusedto6.cuthimself,medicine7.badcold,drink,lie,rest8.exercise9.Themore,thehealthier10.important,tokeephealthy三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。（课前任务）常用词汇：keepon(doingsth.),giveup,gotoadoctor,agreetodosth.,getintotrouble经典句型：Whatisthematter?Itisveryimportantto….Howcanwe…?Weshould….Ifeellike….Ithinkyoushould....You’dbetternot....Ifyoustillfeel...,youshould....Itdoesn’tsoundlikeyouhavea....Youneedtotakebreaksawayfrom....读写结合：请阅读下面的短文，然后按照信息表中的项目要求填写信息。（课中任务）ThereisanoldEnglishsaying.Ittellsusthatwemustgotobedearlyandgetupearlyinthemorning.Thenweshallbehealthy.Weshallalsoberichandclever.Thisistrue.Thebodymusthaveenoughsleeptobehealthy.Childrenofyoungageshouldhavetenhours’sleepeverynight.Childrenwhodonothaveenoughsleepcannotdotheirworkwellandtheymaynotbehealthy.Thebodyalsoneedsexercise.Walking,running,jumpingandplayinggamesareallexercise.Exercisekeepsthebodystrong.Exercisealsohelpsthebloodtomovearoundinsidethebody.Itisveryimportant.Ourbloodmovestoallpartsofourbody.Theheadalsoneedsblood.Exercisehelpsustothinkbetter.任务一：信息归纳阅读上面的材料，然后按照信息表中的项目要求填写信息。InformationCardTheoldEnglishsayingisthatgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearlyinthemorningmakesaman(1).(2)isgoodforhealth.Withoutit,childrenmaynotbehealthy.It’sgoodforchildrentosleepfor(3)hours.Exercisekeepsourbody(4).Allpartsofourbodyand(5)needblood.参考答案：1.healthy2.Enoughsleep3.ten/104.strong5.head任务二：找出上面材料中的好词好句：Usefulwords:healthyUsefulphrases:enoughsleepUsefulsentences:Itisimportant….任务三：赏析上面的阅读材料值得学习之处：有待改进之处：【实践写作】1、呈现写作任务为了保持健康，你平时是怎样做的？请根据下面表格中所提供的信息，以“KeepingHealthy”为题写一篇英语短文。ShouldShouldn’tHaveagoodeatinghabitEattoomuchortoolittleGotobedearlyStayuplateatnightExerciseThrowlitterhereandthere2、点拨思维，指导写作（1）写作技能指导本单元写作涉及的话题是“健康与急救”，写关于身体健康或出现健康事故的文章，主要包括如何保持健康，当出现健康事故时如何处理等内容。围绕这一话题学习情态动词should表达建议用法，灵活运用本单元学过的重点单词和重点句型，描述怎样对待健康问题，提出希望。在写这类文章时，给出意见或建议要语气委婉、内容合理，注意行文应完整、简洁。（2）写作思路点拨引入主题→Itisimportanttokeephealthy.介绍如何保持健康→First,….Second,….总结与提倡→Ithink….Ihope….3、分组讨论4、学生写作[我的草稿]（课中任务）[我的作品]（课中任务）[我的订正]（课后任务）【改评修正】[老师批阅][最终作品]（课后任务）【赏析作品】1、较差作品2、中层作品3、优秀作品4、参考范文KeepinghealthyAsweknow,healthisimportanttous.Howshouldwekeephealthy?First,weshouldhaveagoodeatinghabit.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessmeateveryday.Weshouldn’teattoomuchortoolittle.Drinkingenoughwaterisagoodhabit.Second,wehadbettergotobedearly.Weshouldn’tstayuplateatnight.Third,exercisingalotisgoodforus.Don’tthrowlitterhereandthere.Ifwetrytodothat,wewillbeingoodhealth.点评：这篇文章条理清晰，层次分明。作者能围绕每个信息点灵活使用shouldn’t/should还有hadbetter另外，文章最后一句用到了条件状语从句使得文章更有说服力。【链接中考】（课后任务）A.信息归纳阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。AccordingtoChinesemedicine,thebodyislikeatreethatlivesthroughtheseasonsofnature,anditneedsregularenergytostayhealthyandpreventillness.Thefourimportantbodilyorgansneedspecialenergyineachseason.Weshouldeatspecialfoodandvegetablestoprotectthem.Theliver,whichenrichesthebloodwithenergyandcleansthebadthingsinthebody,isreplenished(补充)inspringtime.We’dbettereatonions,carrotsandsomevegetableleaves.Theheartseekscomfortandcoolnessfromtheheatinsummer.Melons,pumpkin,cucumbers,tomatoes,bittermelon,andmanyfreshhigh-watervegetableshaveacoolingeffectandshouldbeeaten.Thelungsoftensufferfromcolds,coughs,andsorethroatsinthedryfallseason.Theyneedtobereplenishedwithfoodssuchasspinach(菠菜),bananas,pears,potatoes.Thekidneys(肾)arethelowestorgansinthebodyliketherootsofatree.Theyneedprotectioninwinterspecially.Replenishthekidneyswithvegetableslikebroccoli,greenchardandsomeothergreenvegetables.InformationCardThebodyneedsenergytostayhealthyandprevent（1）_____________________.Whenshouldweeatonions,carrotsandsomevegetableleaves?（2）______________________.Insummer,youshouldtakemorecareofyou（3）__________________.Thevegetablessuchasspinach(菠菜),bananas,spinach(4)___________________areespeciallygoodforourbodyinfall.Thelowestorganinthebodyis(5)____________________.参考答案：1.Illness.2.Inspringtime3.heart4.pears,potatoes5.thekidneysB．书面表达假如你是Ann，你的朋友Mary患了重感冒。请你给她写一封信，告诉她平时应该如何保持身体健康。词数在60—80.参考词：takemoreexercise多做运动；enoughsleep足够的睡眠DearMary,Howareyou?I’msorrytohearthat______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Ann写作指导：这是一篇半开放性作文，要求针对病情提出建议，时态以一般现在时为主。思路点拨：引出话题→I’msorrytohearthat....提出建议→Ithinkyoushouldlookafter…....it’simportantforyouto.......youshouldmakeyourselfstayhappy....表达愿望→Ihopeyouwill....参考范文：DearMary,Howareyou?I’msorrytohearthatyouhadabadcold.Ithinkyoushouldlookafteryourhealth.First,youshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruits.Andyoushoulddrinkmoremilkandwater.Second,it’simportantforyoutotakemoreexercise.Youcanplayfootballandgorunningeveryday.Itcanmakeyoustrong.Third,youshouldmakeyourselfstayhappyeveryday.It’sverygoodforyourhealth.Last,Ithinkyoushouldgetenoughsleep.Ifyoudon’t,youmayfeeltired.Makesuretogotobedearlyanddon’tstayuplate.Ifyouhaveahealthylifestyle,you’llbeingoodhealth.Ihopeyouwillfeelbettersoon.Yours,Ann点评：1、当我们听到不好的消息时，常用“I’msorrytohearthat...”表示同情。2、表达个人观点，用should提出建议，总领下文。3、first及下文的second,third,last的运用使文章层次分明，条理清晰。4、make在这里为使役动词，其结构为“make+宾语+宾语补足语”。5、提出愿望，表达对朋友的关心。教后反思：八（）班授课老师_________________八年级下册Unit1What’sthematter?写作学案话题：健康与急救（学生使用）【阅读积累】一、词汇积累：写出下列单词和短语（课前任务）1、习惯于2、坚持做某事3、放松4、感冒5、同意做某事6、放弃决定做某事8、保持健康均衡的饮食10、拥有好习惯11、对……有益12、做运动13、越来越强壮14、多吃蔬菜15、对……有害二、句型积累：根据汉语意思完成英语句子，每空一词。（课前任务）1、你怎么啦？Whatis________________________you?2、我发烧了。Ihavea________.3、我认为你该按时上学。Ithinkyou________gotoschoolontime.4、别放弃。Don’t________________.5、我习惯冒险。I________________________takingrisks.6、他割伤了自己所以放些药在上面。He________________________soheputsome____________onit.7、他得重感冒，让他多喝水、躺下、休息。Hehasa________________________,lethim____________morewater,____________downand____________.8、每天我做运动时，我感到很高兴。EverydaywhenI____________,Ifeelveryhappy.9、你运动得越多，就越健康。________________________youdoexercise,________________________youwillbe.10、保持健康对我们而言很重要。It’s____________forus____________________________________.三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。（课前任务）常用词汇：经典句型：四、读写结合：请阅读下面的短文，然后按照信息表中的项目要求填写信息。（课中任务）ThereisanoldEnglishsaying.Ittellsusthatwemustgotobedearlyandgetupearlyinthemorning.Thenweshallbehealthy.Weshallalsoberichandclever.Thisistrue.Thebodymusthaveenoughsleeptobehealthy.Childrenofyoungageshouldhavetenhours’sleepeverynight.Childrenwhodonothaveenoughsleepcannotdotheirworkwellandtheymaynotbehealthy.Thebodyalsoneedsexercise.Walking,running,jumpingandplayinggamesareallexercise.Exercisekeepsthebodystrong.Exercisealsohelpsthebloodtomovearoundinsidethebody.Itisveryimportant.Ourbloodmovestoallpartsofourbody.Theheadalsoneedsblood.Exercisehelpsustothinkbetter.任务一：信息归纳阅读上面的材料，然后按照信息表中的项目要求填写信息。InformationCardTheoldEnglishsayingisthatgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearlyinthemorningmakesaman(1).(2)isgoodforhealth.Withoutit,childrenmaynotbehealthy.It’sgoodforchildrentosleepfor(3)hours.Exercisekeepsourbody(4).Allpartsofourbodyand(5)needblood.任务二：找出上面材料中的好词好句：Usefulwords:Usefulphrases:Usefulsentences:任务三：赏析上面的阅读材料值得学习之处：有待改进之处：【实践写作】为了保持健康，你平时是怎样做的？请根据下面表格中所提供的信息，以“KeepingHealthy”为题写一篇英语短文。ShouldShouldn’tHaveagoodeatinghabitEattoomuchortoolittleGotobedearlyStayuplateatnightExerciseThrowlitterhereandthere[我的草稿]（课中任务）[我的作品]（课中任务）[我的订正]（课后任务）【改评修正】[老师批阅][最终作品]（课后任务）【链接中考】（课后任务）A.信息归纳阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。AccordingtoChinesemedicine,thebodyislikeatreethatlivesthroughtheseasonsofnature,anditneedsregularenergytostayhealthyandpreventillness.Thefourimportantbodilyorgansneedspecialenergyineachseason.Weshouldeatspecialfoodandvegetablestoprotectthem.Theliver,whichenrichesthebloodwithenergyandcleansthebadthingsinthebody,isreplenished(补充)inspringtime.We’dbettereatonions,carrotsandsomevegetableleaves.Theheartseekscomfortandcoolnessfromtheheatinsummer.Melons,pumpkin,cucumbers,tomatoes,bittermelon,andmanyfres