英语考试写作-听力讲座-串讲副本

大型讲座之

---写作巅峰策略

兰州大学谭剑波

Tangible

第一讲：转换思维

--从思维层面解决障碍

1why?

Limitation;naturalexpression

adultChinese—babyEnglish??

滚滚红尘，风流倜傥，丘壑遍布

2how?1难词变易

AdultChinese—babyEnglish--babyChinese

中华文明很璀璨（2010考研文化火锅）

Chinesecivilizationisresplendent.?Chinahasthelongesthistoryofmorethan5000years.

他很挑食。Beparticularaboutfood.Helikestoeatwhathelikesandrefusestoeatwhathedislikes.

简单变难：是采取措施保护人类与自然界平衡的时候了

（2011水污染）

Itistimetotakestepstokeepthebalancebetweennatureandhumansociety.

是什么的时候了:itishightimethat+did/should

采取措施：

stepupactionagainst/todo

保持平衡：

strikethebalance

总结：Itishightimethatwesteppedupactiontostrikethebalancebetweennatureandhumansociety.

启示：动笔前先想一想（头脑泡泡+金字塔）

第二讲

Aclearstructure1.三点式，

避免一堆式不低于三段不超过四段

2.观点次重要与篇幅大小。

2009年四级考试真题作文题目：

Freeadmissiontomuseums

1、越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？

2、也会带来一些问题；

3、你的看法？

2008年12月英语六级作文真题

HowtoImproveStudents’MentalHealth

1.大学生心理健康很重要

2.为此，学校可以••••••

3.我们自己应该••••••

2012年考研写作真题

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing:1)describethedrawingbriefly2)explainitsintendedmeaningand3)giveyourcomments总结：中间偏长首段次要3.干净工整beclearandclean

用横线或斜线表示删除，不可用括号；不能用汉语或其他语言批注解释或致歉。如：

Iamsorry;oh,thisisamistake;

不要，forgetittobecontinued

见反面，不好意思更不要（good，Nice）供人选择4.英语作文之审题，

回忆记忆仓库，把相关句型或表达做上记号，

保证亮点出现如：第一：

Inthefirstplace,Firstandforemost,Themostimportantfactorwehavetotakeintoconsiderationissth./that…第二：

Inthesecondplace,Whatismore,Furthermore;Itisalsoofgreatimportancetopaycloseattentionto…that/

第三

Inaddition，

Additionally，

Besideswhatismentionedabove,itisnecessarytothinkabout…转折：but—(butt)however,nonetheless,nevertheless,

所以:sotherefore,Itnaturallyfollowsthat…

长句不要都用Firstandforemost；Furthermore；Besideswhatismentionedabove,itisnecessarytothinkabout…

Themostimportantfactorwehavetotakeintoconsiderationissth./that…Inthesecondplace；Additionally

第三讲长句扩展秒杀策略

--从实质上提高分数

1.加引导词：让句子高端强烈推荐四大引导：事实上是…Itisafactthat…

令人惊奇的是…Itisasurprisethat…

毫无疑问…Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat…

2.写插入语强烈推荐三大插入语：

asamatteroffact,directlyorindirectly,inonewayoranother,

插入语可以放在各段首末句，或各段第二句，一旦被发现可以严重加分。

插入语的位置：在很大程度上生态平衡对人类社会的长远福利非常重要。（2012-2013话题）

Ecologicalbalanceis,toalargedegree,essentialtothelong-termwelfareofhumansociety.(be后)

阅读古典名著直接间接的提高了我们对历史社会以及人性的理解。（2012-2013话题）

Readingclassics,directlyorindirectly,improvesourunderstandingofhistory,society,andhumannature.(行前)

沉溺于电脑游戏可能会以种种方式对我们的身心健康造成重大影响Becomingaddictedtocomputergamesmay,inonewayoranother,haveagreateffectonbothourmentalandphysicalhealth.(助行间)

口诀：be后行前助行间

3.写原因状语从句原因状语从句引导词

duetothefactthatowingtothefactthatprimarilyowingtothatpartlyduetothat

利用三种高端方法提炼高端长句建造和谐社会很重要。（2012-2013话题预测）

Buildingaharmonioussocietyisimportant.

1.引导词：随着工业化和商业化的发展毫无疑问“Withtherapidadvancesincommercializationandindustrialization”

2.插入语：事实上

3.从句：因为当今社会充满竞争，和谐社会在社会发展中扮演着不可缺少的作用。

playanessentialroleindispensableWiththerapidadvancesincommercializationandindustrialization,thereisnodoubtthatbuildingaharmonioussocietyis,asamatteroffact,veryimportantduetothefactthatoursocietyisbecomingincreasinglycompetitiveandaharmoniousenvironmentcanplayanindispensableroleinthesocialdevelopment.Withtherapidadvancesincommercializationandindustrialization,thereisnodoubtthatbuildingaharmonioussocietyis,asamatteroffact,veryimportantduetothefactthatoursocietyisbecomingincreasinglycompetitiveandaharmoniousenvironmentcan,directlyorindirectly,playanindispensableroleinthesocialdevelopment.

不要写太长。不要炫耀。

第四讲四六级写作改革之应对

--靠近考研作文

从“图画，故事，名言”中找到切题点写作文。

1.只有第一段需要应对

2.没有提纲要列出三个提纲在心里列出，自觉遵守提纲必须紧扣题目意图

名言：well-knownsaying

警句：aphorism

一段话：anillustration/astory

（如名言所示，（某物在干某事）：有一个深刻含义显示某某的重要性）

Asisillustratedinthewell-knownsaying,thereisadeepermeaningshowingtheimportanceof/suggestingthesignificanceof(determination)inourpursuitofsuccess.

写作学习策略：了解策略+必备句型+必备词汇+操练+高人修改

新概念三—六级，考研的最佳功底教材

新概念二---四六级考研的基础教材

Thankyou!

四六级听力技巧总结和启示

谭剑波20081226.A.Tointroducethechiefofthecity’spoliceforceB.TocommentonatalkbyadistinguishedguestC.ToaddresstheissueofcommunitysecurityD.Toexplainthefunctionsofthecitycouncil27.A.HehasdistinguishedhimselfincitymanagementB.HeisheadoftheInternationalPoliceForceC.HecompletedhishighereducationabroadD.Heholdsamaster’sdegreeincriminology28.A.TocoordinateworkamongpolicedepartmentsB.TogetpoliceofficersclosertothelocalpeopleC.TohelptheresidentsintimesofemergencyD.Toenablethepolicetotakepromptaction29.A.PopularB.DiscoveringC.EffectiveD.Controversial20081226.A.Tointroducethechiefofthecity’spoliceforceB.TocommentonatalkbyadistinguishedguestC.ToaddresstheissueofcommunitysecurityD.Toexplainthefunctionsofthecitycouncil短文内容是？27.A.HehasdistinguishedhimselfincitymanagementB.HeisheadoftheInternationalPoliceForceC.HecompletedhishighereducationabroadD.Heholdsamaster’sdegreeincriminology他的优势能力28.A.TocoordinateworkamongpolicedepartmentsB.TogetpoliceofficersclosertothelocalpeopleC.TohelptheresidentsintimesofemergencyD.Toenablethepolicetotakepromptaction

目的是？29.A.PopularB.DiscoveringC.EffectiveD.Controversial效果态度26.Whatisthepurposeofthespeaker'sremarks?

27.WhatdoesthespeakersayaboutMr.RobertWashington?

28.WhatistheideabehindtheCommunityPolicingProgram?

29.HowhastheCommunityPolicingProgramturnedouttobe?

几点建议：

1.多听才是王道，语感很重要听什么材料？难？易？

2.发音很重要，自己发错了，对的也变错

3.淡定很重要，抓紧一切时间预读

4.听得懂的东西可能就帮你做对80%;

听不懂的反而不影响；听不懂可能是好事；当然不能都听不懂。

听力原文必备词汇预测

常以正确答案形式出现听力总原则：--不是要听懂，而是做对。完全听懂可以对90%基本听懂可以对85%听懂一点点可以对70%简直听不懂可以对70%

--关键在于预读预读和审题是关键之关键1.快速阅读加快速度，节约三分钟左右，一定要舍得。（根据各校具体情况）--通读所有选项，排除异己，列出听写之外选项的问题。2.所有directions大约共五分钟左右。--进行第二次预读。加深第二次印象。3.每个小题之间的间隔，拿出8秒来预读第三次。总结：三次预读可以让你印象非常深刻。做题难度大大降低。2007.12.-17.(5,10-6)A)Thewomanwonderedwhythemandidn’treturnthebook.

B)Thewomandoesn’tseemtoknowwhatthebookisabout.

C)Thewomandoesn’tfindthebookusefulanymore.

D)Thewomanforgotlendingthebooktotheman.17.M:I’vebroughtbackyourOxfordCompaniontoEnglishLiterature.Ithoughtyoumightuseitforyourpaper.Sorrynottohavereturneditearlier.

W:Iwaswonderingwherethatbookwas.Q:Whatcanweinferfromtheconversation?

问：大家最能听清楚的是那几个词？

wherethatbookwas.

启示：根本不用都听懂；明显的东西听懂就好了。2007.12.-15.(4-4,50)A)Heistakingcareofhistwinbrother.

B)Hehasbeenfeelingillallweek.

C)HeisworriedaboutRod’shealth.

D)Hehasbeeninperfectcondition.2007.12.-15.(4-4,50)A)Heistakingcareofhistwinbrother.

B)Hehasbeenfeelingillallweek.

C)HeisworriedaboutRod’shealth.

D)Hehasbeeninperfectcondition.15.W:Hello,John.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ihearyou’vebeenill.

M:TheymusthaveconfusedmewithmytwinbrotherRods.He’sbeensickallweek,butI’veneverfeltbetterinmylife.Q:Whatdowelearnabouttheman?考点：I’veneverfeltbetterinmylife.从没感觉这么好过

--itcannotbebetteritistoogoodtobetrue.itcannotbeworse.听不懂段落，听句子，听不懂句子听词汇，听不懂词汇，听语气。重复即所得reservereservation所听即所得(所听指的是语义片段，不只是单词）最后即所得(往往每个片段最后出现重点内容）11.(1,15-2)A)Sheusedtobeinpoorhealth.B)Shewaspopularamongboys.C)Shewassomewhatoverweight.D)Shedidn’tdowellathighschool.

A)Sheusedtobeinpoorhealth.B)Shewaspopularamongboys.

C)Shewassomewhatoverweight.D)Shedidn’tdowellathighschool.11.W:IranintoSallytheotherday.Icouldhardlyrecognizeher.Doyourememberherfromhighschool?

M:Yeah,shewasalittleoutofshapebackthen.Well,hasshelostalotofweight?Q:WhatdoesthemanrememberofSally?

明显易懂：lostalotofweight2007.12.-13.(2,30—3,20)A)Teachinghersonbyherself.

B)Havingconfidenceinherson.

C)Askingtheteacherforextrahelp.

D)Tellinghersonnottoworry.2007.12.-13.(2,30—3,20)A)Teachinghersonbyherself.

B)Havingconfidenceinherson.

C)Askingtheteacherforextrahelp.

D)Tellinghersonnottoworry.13.W:Whatwouldyoudoifyouwereinmyplace?

M:IfPaulweremyson,I’djustnotworry.Nowthathisteacherisgivinghimextrahelpandhe'sworkinghardhimself,he’ssuretodowellinthenextexam.Q:What’stheman’ssuggestiontothewoman?

明显部分：he’ssuretodo2007.12.-18.(5,50—6,20)A)Mostoftheman’sfriendsareathletes.

B)Fewpeoplesharethewoman’sopinion.

C)Themandoesn’tlooklikeasportsman.

D)Thewomandoubtstheman’sathleticability.18.W:Totellthetruth,Tony,itneveroccurstomethatyouareanathlete.

M:Oh,really?Mostpeoplewhomeetme,

includingsomefriendsofmine,don’tthinksoeither.Q:Whatdowelearnfromtheconversation?关键词：either

（并不是怀疑能力，目前局限于表象）2007.12.-16.(4,30-5)A)Shesoldallherfurniturebeforeshemovedhouse.

B)Shestillkeepssomeoldfurnitureinhernewhouse.C)Sheplanstoputallheroldfurnitureinthebasement.

D)SheboughtanewsetoffurniturefromItalylastmonth.选项中的绝对词与相对词绝对词：mustneveralwaysonlyallwhenever,whatever,whoever…

总结：绝对词出现的选项一般都是错误的。相对词：

probably,possiblybelikelytopartly,some16.M:Didyoureallygiveawayallyourfurniturewhenyoumovedintothenewhouselastmonth?

W:Justtheuselesspieces,asI’mplanningtopurchaseanewsetfromItalyforthesittingroomonly.Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?关键词：just情感题06年6月11（1，20—2）11.A)Thegirlsgotonwellwitheachother.B)It’sunderstandablethatgirlsdon’tgetalong.C)Shewasangrywiththeotheryoungstars.D)Thegirlslackedthecouragetofight.M:Whatwasitlikeworkingwiththoseyoungstars?W:Itwasagreatgroup.Ialwaysgotmadwhenpeoplesaidthatwedidn’tgetalong,justbecausewe’regirls.Therewasneverafight.Wehadagreattime.Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

关键词：wehadagreattime!长对话策略可以通过研究选项的关键词，找到题目是什么，进一步推出全文主旨是什么，进一步做题。2008,619.A.AnoticebytheelectricityboardB.AdspromotingelectricappliancesC.ThedescriptionofathiefindisguiseD.Anewpolicyonpensioners’welfare

--内容content20.A.SpeakingwithaproperaccentB.WearinganofficialuniformC.MakingfriendswiththemD.ShowingthemhisID

--干什么whatisgoing/doing21.A.TobeonthealertwhenbeingfollowedB.NottoleaveseniorcitizensaloneathomeC.NottoletanyoneinwithoutanappointmentD.Towatchoutforthosefromtheelectricityboard

--应该干什么whattodo22.A.ShewasrobbedneartheparkinglotB.AllhermoneyinthebankdisappearedC.ThepensionshehadjustdrawnwasstolenD.Shewasknockeddowninthepostoffice--Whatiswrongwithher?

从21,22推论出本对话中心主题，可以搞定第19题。通过19题的确定，搞定22题。20题一定讲行窃的手段。设身处地为“贼”想。DictationDirections:

Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthepassageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneralidea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillintheblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissinginformation.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhavejustheardorwritedownthemainpointsinyourownwords.Finally,whenthepassageisreadforthethirdtime,youshouldcheckwhatyouhavewritten.Directions:

Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthepassageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneralidea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillintheblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissinginformation.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhavejustheardorwritedownthemainpointsinyourownwords.Finally,whenthepassageisreadforthethirdtime,youshouldcheckwhatyouhavewritten.Firsttime—generalideaSecondtime—fillin36-43withtheexactwords44-46:exactormainpointsThirdtime—checkit???不能这样！

1.大意可以自己读出来，第一遍就要做题，

做那些题？多少题？

36-43中的一半左右，4个。太多做不完，影响理解。

1）怎么读大意？文章首尾，首两句，尾两句，中间只读空格前后内容

--可以了解文章主旨大意。

2）第一遍做题可以不写全，写出几个字母，待补充。2.第二遍做36-43中剩下的题目，补充单词，使其完整。

44-46会有停顿，写其中的部分内容，草稿哪怕是零碎的单词，也必须写拼凑，归纳出大意。

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