读后续写+一次迟到的教训：诚信之路 讲义 高三第九次质量检测英语试题

第1页/共1页阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IgrewupinthesouthofArizonainalittlecommunitycalledEstepona.Iwas16whenonemorning,myfathertoldmeIcoulddrivehimintoaremotevillagecalledMijas,about18milesaway,onconditionthatItakethecarintobeservicedatanearbygarage.Havingjustlearnedtodrive,andhardlyeverhavingtheopportunitytousethecar,Ireadilyaccepted.IdroveDadintoMijasandpromisedtopickhimupat4P.M…ThenIdrovetoanearbygarageanddroppedoffthecar.BecauseIhadafewhourstospare,Idecidedtocatchacoupleofmoviesatatheaternearthegarage.However,IbecamesoimmersedinthefilmsthatIcompletelylosttrackoftime.Whenthelastmoviehadfinished,Ilookeddownatmywatch.Itwassixo’clock.Iwastwohourslate!IknewDadwouldbeangryifhefoundoutI’dbeenwatchingmovies.He’dneverletmedriveagain.Idecidedtotellhimthatthecarneededsomerepairsandthattheyhadtakenlongerthanhadbeenexpected.IdroveuptotheplacewherewehadplannedtomeetandsawDadwaitingpatientlyonthecorner.IapologizedforbeinglateandtoldhimthatI’dcomeasquicklyasIcould,butthecarhadneededsomemajorrepairs.I’llneverforgetthelookhegaveme.“I’mdisappointedthatyoufeelyouhavetolietome,Jason.”“Whatdoyoumean?I’mtellingthetruth.”Dadlookedatmeagain.“Whenyoudidnotshowup,Icalledthegaragetoaskiftherewereanyproblems,andtheytoldmethatyouhadnotyetpickedupthecar.Soyousee,Iknowtherewerenoproblemswiththecar.”注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dadletoutasighofdisappointment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However,determinedtoteachmealesson,Dadcontinuedhiswalkingbackhome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Dadletoutasighofdisappointment.AfeelingofguiltranthroughmeasIweaklyconfessedtomytriptothemovietheaterandtherealreasonformybeinglate.Dadlistenedattentivelyasasadnesspassedthroughhim.“I’mangry,notwithyoubutwithmyself.Yousee,IrealisethatIhavefailedasafatherifafteralltheseyearsyoufeelthatyouhavetolietome.IhavefailedbecauseIhavebroughtupasonwhocannoteventellthetruthtohisownfather.IamgoingtowalkhomenowandthinkseriouslyaboutwhereIhavegonewrongalltheseyears.”“ButDad,it’s18miles.It’sdark.Youcan’twalkhome.”However,determinedtoteachmealesson,Dadcontinuedhiswalkingbackhome.Dadbeganwalkingalongthedustyroad.Iquicklyjumpedinthecarandfollowedbehind,hopinghewouldchangehismind.Ibeggedalltheway,tellinghimhowsorryIwas,buthesimplyignoredme,continuingonhiswaysilently,thoughtfullyandpainfully.For18milesIdrovebehindhim,ataspeedofaboutfivemilesperhour.SeeingmyfatherinsomuchphysicalandemotionalpainwasthesaddestexperiencethatIhadeverfaced.However,itwasalsothemostimportantlesson.Ihaveneverliedtohimsince.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者16岁那年，爸爸让作者自己开车去修理厂修车，然后再去接他，但作者看电影忘记了时间。由于怕爸爸生气，作者撒了谎，但被爸爸揭穿。伏笔：伏笔一：主角被父亲告知需要将车送去附近的车库维修。这为主角在父亲询问时编造车辆需要维修的谎言提供了背景。伏笔二：主角在电影院看电影而忘记了时间，导致接父亲迟到。这为主角的内疚和需要编造借口提供了情境。伏笔三：父亲在等待主角时的耐心态度，这为父亲发现真相后的反应提供了对比。在续写部分，这些伏笔得到了回应：回应一：父亲对主角的失望叹息，是对主角编造车辆维修谎言的直接回应，揭示了主角的不诚实。回应二：父亲通过电话询问车库得知真相，这进一步强化了主角的谎言被揭穿，以及父亲对主角的失望。回应三：父亲决定步行回家，并让主角一同步行，这是对主角撒谎行为的教训，同时也是父亲教育主角诚实重要性的方式。通过这些伏笔和回应，短文构建了一个关于信任、诚实和教育的故事，强调了诚实的价值和撒谎的后果。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“爸爸失望地叹了口气。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸感到生气并自责，决定走路回家。②由第二段首句内容“然而，为了给我一个教训，爸爸继续步行回家。”可知，第二段可描写作者看着爸爸走路回家，自己感到难过，并得到教训。2.续写线索：父亲生气自责——决定独自走路回家——跟在父亲身后——难过自责——得到教训。3.词汇激活行为类①养育：bringup/raise②开始：begin/start③忽视：ignore/neglect情绪类①愤怒的：angry/annoyed②默默地：silently/quietly【点睛】[高分句型1]IhavefailedbecauseIhavebroughtupasonwhocannoteventellthetruthtohisownfather.(运用了because引导原因状语从句和who引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]IamgoingtowalkhomenowandthinkseriouslyaboutwhereIhavegonewrongalltheseyears.(运用了where引导的宾语从句)[高分句型3]Iquicklyjumpedinthecarandfollowedbehind,hopinghewouldchangehismind.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语和省略引导词that的宾语从句)下水文1Dadletoutasighofdisappointment."Honestyismoreimportantthananythingelse,Jason.Iwouldratheryoutoldmethetruthaboutthemoviesthanlieaboutthecarrepairs."Hiswordswerelikeaheavyweightonmyheart.IrealizedthegravityofmymistakeandthetrustIhadbroken."I'mreallysorry,Dad,"Isaid,myvoicebarelyaboveawhisper,astearswelledupinmyeyes."Ishouldhavebeenhonestwithyoufromthestart."Henodded,acceptingmyapologybutremindingmethatactionsspeaklouderthanwords.However,determinedtoteachmealesson,Dadcontinuedhiswalkingbackhome.Hesuggestedwewalkthedistancetogetherasaformofreflectiononmyactions.Thelongmilesbackwerequiet,savefortheoccasionalsoundofcarspassingby.Itwasawalkofsilence,butalsoawalkofunderstanding.Eachstepwasamomentformetocontemplatetheconsequencesofmydishonesty.Bythetimewereachedhome,Ihadlearnedavaluablelessonabouttheimportanceofintegrityandthevalueofbeingtruthful,nomatterthesituation.Itwasalessonthatwouldstaywithmefortherestofmylife.下水文2Dadletoutasighofdisappointment."Jason,trustisbuiltontruthandbrokenbylies.Iexpectedbetterfromyou."Hisgazewassternbutnotunkind,areflectionofthedisappointmenthefelt.Ihungmyhead,therealityofmyactionssinkingin."Iunderstand,Dad,"Imurmure