高考英语读后续写高分大招：三大步八小步速成作文法

高考英语读后续写高分大招：三大步，八小步速成作文法【一三大步】三步的核心即：审题构思润色审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。过渡词如What’smore,notonly...butalso，personally等。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。【二八小步】l情绪：消极情绪l细节：进一步解释描写l转折：个人的努力或借助外界l转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰l失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题l新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）l结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折l总结：点题，呼应前文读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：【三高考真题典例剖析】第1步情绪：情绪描写第2步细节：进一步解释描写情细节描写∶笑绪描写∶笑smilebrightly;laugh;beam;light(sth)up;lightupwith;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing;wearabright/broadsmile;givesbasmile看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。（1）Atthesightofthehelicopter，Janebeamedwithwildjoy.（2）Seeingthehelicopter，Janebeamedwithwildjoy.（3）Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter，Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.情绪描写∶哭cry;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutcrying;(one'seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtears细节描写∶哭（1）Hiseyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.他泪眼模糊。（2）Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的双眼哭得通红。（3）Heisclosedtotears.他快要哭了。（4）Tearsrolleddown/coursed/trickled/streamedhercheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。情绪描写∶害怕frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one'skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat细节描写∶害怕我感到很害怕。(1)Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.(2)Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.(3)Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.(4)Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(5)Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.(6)Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror;mypalmssweating.情绪描写∶高兴激动v.dance;jump/leapwithjoy;feelasurgeofhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;whistle;beovercomewithhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one'seyes)twinkle;(one'sheart)beat/poundwildlyadj.happy;delighted;overjoyed;excited;thrilled;wildwithjoy细节描写∶高兴激动当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。(1)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.(4))Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.(5)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.(6)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.情绪描写∶伤心痛苦sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;beovercomewithsadness细节描写∶伤心痛苦她伤心不已。(1)Samfeltextremelysad.(2)Asadnesscameoverher.(3)Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(4)Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.(5)Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.(6)Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.情绪描写∶生气愤怒felt/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury;eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm/sayangrily;sthmakessbbloodboil;sthmakessbextremelyangry;claspone'sfists/teeth;speechless细节描写∶生气愤怒Sam感到非常生气。(1)Samfeltveryangry.(2)Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.(3)Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.(4)Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.(5)Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.第3步转折：个人努力或借助外界（由“负”变“正”）鼓起勇气;他人的鼓励Pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo….)毫不犹豫(1)sbcouldhardlywaittodosth(2)withoutasecondthought(3)withouteventhinking(4)withoutdelay(5)withouthesitation_典例分析_费尔法克斯先生深夜开车回家，途中又累又困，于是违章停车，想休息一下，结果被警察逮住，接下来怎么写呢？Mr.Fairfaxloweredhisheadwithasigh,readyforaticket.(费尔法克斯先生叹了口气，低下头，准备接受罚款。)Unexpectedly,thepoliceadded,“ButI’llfigureoutsomeplaceforyouhaveagoodrestthough.”(出乎意料的是，警方补充说，“不过我想给你找个地方好好休息。”)Wildwithjoy,Fairfaxacceptedhisofferwithouthesitation,followinghimtodrivehiscartosomewherewarm(费尔法克斯毫不犹豫地接受了他的提议，跟着他开车到温暖的地方。)这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。主人公由开始的“焦虑”，原以为会被警察罚款，最后变“感动”：警察帮他找到温暖的地方。第4步转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰似乎(1)Itwaslikedoingsth(2)Itseemedasif/that希望(1)hopingthat..(2)see/feelaglimmerofhope(3)tryinghardtodosth欣慰(1)…..breathedasighofrelief-sighedwithrelief松了—口气(2)(awaveofrelieffloodedthrough/washedoversb(3)toone'srelief…使人欣慰的/放心的是……第5步失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题（由“正”变“负”）不幸的是(1)butbadluckforsb,.….(2),butinvain(3),butwithoutsuccess(4),butnouse不知道做什么(1)sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.(2)sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.(3)sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.(4)sbwasatalosswhattodo.(5)sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot._典例分析_感谢好心人：故事中，主人公的戒指被清洁工捡到后，物归原主，想要感谢这位好心人。你怎么继续描写。Iexpressedmygratitudeandpromisedhimawell-preparedgiftforthanks.(我表达了感激之情，并答应给他一份精心准备的礼物，以表示感谢。)However,heimmediatelyrefusedandhungupthephone.(然而，他立刻拒绝了，挂断了电话。)这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于“正向”，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于“正向”，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。第6步想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）某人想到/明白/有了主意（1）Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat+从句（2）Ithitsbthat+从句（3）Itstrucksbthat+从句（4）Itdawnedonsbthat+从句（5）（idea，thought..）occurred/cametosb（6）..came/flashedintoone'smind-...crowdedinone'smind（7）one'smindbegantorace第7步结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间(1)notlongafterthat,..=shortlyafterwards,….beforelong,….=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore+从句=Ittooksometimebefore+从句(2)foraninstant/moment事情有了转折(1)Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat+从句(2)Butonsecondthoughts,….(3)Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.第8步总结：点题，呼应前文主旨升华直到……才意识到（1）倒装句∶Notuntil+时间状语+didsbrealize/noticethat+从句（2）强调句∶Itwasonly+时间状语+thatsbrealizedthat+从句还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中(1)One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.(2)One'swords/voice/songlingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.(3)One'sheadwasstillfullof..经历与教训(1)Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonsbtaughtme/sblearnedfromsb!(2)Whata/anenjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuableexperiencesbhad!(3)Downdeepinone'sheat….在某人的内心深处第二部分“八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解_典例分析1_故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.八步法思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情绪）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（细节详述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（转折：个人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（转机：成功，希望来了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（衔接句：新问题来了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失败)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了办法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（开始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,UnclePaulcouldn’twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubeen?Iamjustcalling911.”（幽默对话）7.“ToAlice’sWonderland”myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!_典例分析2_故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain._______________________________________________________________Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._________________________________________________________________________第一段：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)读后续写续写1.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情绪2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个