高考英语应用文写作表达微技能（全国）03申请信

03申请信(2012年，全国课标卷）假定你是李华，从互联网((theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI’dliketotakepartinit.I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I’llbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHua【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1.结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段自我介绍；参加意图；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.人称：第一人称；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：(1)兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostof…advertisedin…(2)见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。Inreplytoyouradvertisementin…,Ibegtoapplyforthepostof…inyourcompany.(3)看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementinthepaperfor…IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationsandforwhichIhavebeenlookingforsometime.(4)我想申请入贵校学习。Iwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollege.(5)我想在贵校……系继续深造。Iwouldliketofurthermystudiesin…Departmentofyouruniversity.第二部分：介绍详情套语：(1)我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。Mymajoris…,andIunderstandyouruniversityhasagoodprograminthisfield.(2)……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。Bornin…in…,Igraduatedfrom…Universitymajoringin…Ihavebeenworkingin…sincemygraduation,andIhavethereforeattainedrichexperienceinthisfield.(3)毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……Upongraduation,Ifirstworkedas…Thefollowingjobwas…andcurrentlyIamworkingfor/in…(4)我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。IamnowstudyingatBeijingSecondForeignLanguageInstituteandwillsoonbegraduatedasanEnglishmajor.第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因套语：(1)贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。Thekindofworkinwhichyourcompanyisengagedparticularlyinterestsme.(2)我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。IfeelIhavethenecessaryqualificationsandexperienceneededforthepositionof…advertisedinthenewspaper.(3)受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。UndertheinfluenceofthecoursesIhavetaken,IhavedevelopedaspecialinterestinRestaurantandHotelManagement.第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复套语：(1)如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。Yourearlyresponsewillbemuchappreciated.(2)希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。Ihopeyouwillkindlysendmeanapplicationform.(3)如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。Iwouldgreatlyappreciatereceivingcopiesoftherequiredapplicationformsandanyinstructionsyoumaybesokindastogivemeregardingmypossibleadmission.(4)希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationsmorefully.(5)我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyoufurtherdetailsconcerningmyself.模板①DearSirorMadam,Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin________________________(报纸/网站名称)of________________________(广告发布时间).NotonlydoIhavethequalificationsforthisjob,butalsoIhavetherightpersonalityfora______________(工作名称).Ononehand,_____________________(第一个原因).Ontheotherhand,______________________(另一个原因).Shouldyougrantmeapersonalinterview,Iwouldbemostgrateful.Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme，pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytimeat________________________(电话号码).Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication,andIamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②DearSirorMadam,I’m_________(简单自我介绍).WhenIwasreadingtheadvertisement,_________(表达看到相关广告后的感受).Ithinkit’sagoodopportunityformeto_____________(应聘的原因).ThereforeIrecommendmyselftowithouthesitation.I___________(陈述本人的性格优势).Foronething,Ican___________(陈述本人特长一).Foranotherthing,Ican___________(陈述本人特长二).Pleasecontactmeat___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码).Ore-mailmeat___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua模板③DearSirorMadam,I’m_________(简单自我介绍).I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition_____________(说明写信的目的)。Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause______________________________(说明为什么想得到这次宝贵的机会).___________.Besides,__________________.(分层次说明自己的优势)IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua1.申请信写作方法①首段：a.自我介绍；b.申请原因；c.说明写信目的。②主体：a.详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；b.询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。③尾段：a.强调上述材料的重要性；b.希望尽快得到答复；c.要求手册及申请表；d.表示感谢。2.写作流程图说明写信目的介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)说明申请该职位或学校的原因恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor)的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1.自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；2.参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearsirorMadam,I’mLiHua,aseniormiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IhappenedtoreadtheadvertisementthatyouhavepostedontheInternet,employingChinesestudentsaspart-timetutoroftheChineselanguage.Iaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromChinaandI’dliketogetthisjob.Forme,ChineseismynativetongueandI’mexcellentatit.Besides,I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor9yearswithagoodcommandofspokenandwrittenEnglish.I’mwillingtohelpforeignerslearnChinesewellandintroduceChineseculturetotheworldaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyours.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua1.假如你是李华，想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请用英语写一封100词左右的申请信。申请信的开头和结尾已给出，申请信应包括以下三方面内容：你参加这次活动的目的；你的爱好和兴趣；你希望住在有孩子的美国家庭。注意：可根据所给信息适当发挥。DearSirorMadam,IwouldliketojoininUShomestayprogramme.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2.假如你叫王玲，今年参加了某大学自主招生。这所大学要求考生用英语写一封申请信，请按下面提示写一封英语申请信。内容包括：1.个人情况

2.个人条件

3.申请此大学原因注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数。2.可以增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearDean,MynameisWangLing.I’velearnedthatyouruniversitywilladmitstudentsinadvance.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.假定你是高中生李华，你在校园网上看到一则招募暑假英语夏令营志愿者的广告，请你写一封申请信要求参加。内容包括：1.提出申请2.自身的英语情况；3.相关经验；注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：英语夏令营EnglishSummerCampDearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHuaandI’mastudentinahighschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4.假设你是李华，你打算申请某国际著名书友会的会员。请你根据以下提示信息写一封申请信给该网站的负责人Mr.Green。内容主要包括：1.简要的自我介绍;2.表明参加意图;3.希望获准。注意：1.120词左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.假定你是李华，你校外教MrSmith将在暑假开展英语短剧表演培训活动，他需要招聘一名学生助手。请你写一封申请信参加应聘，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMrSmith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua参考答案1.DearSirorMadam,IwouldliketojoininUShomestayprogramme.Ithinkit’sagoodwaytoimprovemyEnglishandbroadenmyhorizons,IalsohopetohaveachancetovisitsomefamousplacessuchasthestatueofLibertyandreallywanttoexperienceauthenticAmericanculture.IenjoysurfingontheInternet,amfondoftravellingandlovesportsandpopmusic.IdoquitewellinEnglishandcantalkeasilywithEnglishspeakers.IhopetostaywithanAmericanfamilywiththreeorfourchildren.StayingwithalocalfamilywillgivemeauniqueopportunitytoexperienceAmerica’slanguage,everydaylifeandcustoms.I’msurewe'llhaveagreattimetogether.Thankyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】试题分析：本文属于提纲作文，考生首先要看清楚要求，然后再根据要求详细讨论。本文的话题是写一封申请信，申请参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，属于书信类作文，所以使用一般现在时。在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语agoodwaytodosth.做某事的好方法；broadenmyhorizons开拓视野；haveachancetodosth.做某事的机会；suchas诸如；befondofdoingsth,喜欢做某事；haveagreattime玩得高兴。还有非谓语Stayingwithalocalfamily…做主语为文章增色不少。2.DearDean,MynameisWangLing.I’velearnedthatyouruniversitywilladmitstudentsinadvance.Withagreatlongingtoenteryourschool,I’dliketomakethisapplication.Iamagirlof18atHongxingHighSchool.Idowellineverysubject,especiallyinEnglish.IeverwonthefirstprizeintheNationalEnglishSpokenContestforthehighschoolstudents.Deeplyinterestedinyourschool,whichenjoysahighreputationandbeautifulcampus,IamwritingtoyouinthehopethatImayobtainanopportunitytofurthermystudyinyouruniversity.Ifyoucouldgivemeachance,I’llbeverygrateful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursTruly,WangLing【解析】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你叫王玲，今年参加了某大学自主招生。这所大学要求考生用英语写一封申请信，请按下面提示写一封英语申请信。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：longto渴望，application申请，dowellin在……某方面干得好，firstprize一等奖，highreputation盛誉，campus大学，inthehopethat怀着…的希望，obtain获得，opportunity机会，grateful感谢的。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【亮点表达】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Deeplyinterestedinyourschool,whichenjoysahighreputationandbeautifulcampus,IamwritingtoyouinthehopethatImayobtainanopportunitytofurthermystudyinyouruniversity.运用了定语从句和inthehope等高级表达方式。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3.DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHuaandI’mastudentinahighschool.I’dliketoapplytobeavolunteeroftheEnglishSummerCamp.Firstofall,I’mveryfondofEnglishandtakeanactivepartinallkindsofactivitiesrelatedtoEnglish.Second,I’vetakenpartinplentyofvoluntaryworksinceIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent.Lastly,I’vegotagreatdealofexperienceinorganizingEnglishactivities.I’dbehonoredifyoucanchooseme.I’llmakeeveryefforttodomyjobandyouwon’tregretit.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生写一封申请信，参加暑假英语夏令营志愿者。【解析】词汇积累首先：firstofall→tobeginwith参加：takepartin→participatein各种各样的：allkindsof→avarietyof大量的：plentyof→alargeamountof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’llmakeeveryefforttodomyjobandyouwon’tregretit.拓展句：I’llmakeeveryefforttodomyjob,ensuringthatyouwon’thaveanyregretsinchoosingme.【亮点表达】[高分句型1]Second,I’vetakenpartinplentyofvoluntaryworksinceIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent.(since引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]I’dbehonoredifyoucanchooseme.(if引导的条件状语从句)4.DearMr.Green,MynameisLiHua,a16-year-oldseniorhighschoolstudentfromChina.Ilearnfromyourwebsitethatyourbookclubwelcomesmembersfromdifferentcountries,soI’dliketotakepartinit.IlovereadingbooksandalsoliketosharewhatIhavereadwithothers.Yourbookcluboffersmeagoodchancetoread,sharebooksandmeetotherbooklovers.SoI’mwritingtoyouandhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyourbookclub.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给某国际著名书友会网站的负责人Mr.Green写一封申请信，申请成为其书友会的会员。【解析】1.词汇积累参与：takepartin→joinin喜欢：love→befondof提供，给予：offer→give希望：hope→expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合原句：MynameisLiHua,a16-year-oldseniorhighschoolstudentfromChina.拓展句：MynameisLiHua,whoisa16-