人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册UNIT1 Part 4 Writing练习含答案

Part4Writing关于科学精神的写作写作题目假设你校下个月要举行科技节,现面向全体学生征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对科学精神的见解。要点包括:1.你认为科学精神包括哪些品质;2.列举两个相关的科学家;3.作为学生,我们应该怎样对待科学精神。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

思路点拨遣词造句Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空1.vt.处理;操纵

2.n.导弹

3.vt.&vi.减少;降低

4.adv.此外;再者

5.adj.生动的;鲜明的;丰富的

答案1.handle2.missile3.decrease4.furthermore5.vividⅡ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子第一段:阐述对科学精神的理解AsfarasI'mconcerned,thescientificspiritincludessome(基本的品质).

(2)Scientistsshould(投入并且有创造力).

(3)Scientistsmust(有丰富的想象力).

第二段:列举伟大的科学家(4)BecauseofQianXuesen'sdevotedworkonmissilesandrockets,China(成为一个如此强大的国家)intheworldinashorttime.

(5)ThehybridriceYuanLongpingdevelopedhas(减少了……的数量)thehungrypeoplearoundtheworldgreatly.

第三段:学生应该怎样对待科学精神Asstudents,weshouldapplythescientificspirittoourstudy,(以便)wecanhandlethedifficultiesandproblemswemeetwith.

答案(1)essentialqualities(2)bedevotedandcreative(3)haveavividimagination(4)becamesuchapowerfulcountry(5)decreasedthenumberof(6)sothat2.句式升级(7)用without短语把句(4)变为使用含蓄虚拟语气的句子,表示“如果没有……的话,中国就不会……”

(8)把句(5)变为强调句,强调主语

答案(7)WithoutQianXuesen'sdevotedworkonmissilesandrockets,Chinawouldn'thavebecomesuchapowerfulcountryintheworldinashorttime.(8)ItisthehybridriceYuanLongpingdevelopedthathasdecreasedthenumberofthehungrypeoplearoundtheworldgreatly.连句成篇AsfarasI'mconcerned,thescientificspiritincludessomeessentialqualities.Scientistsshouldbedevotedandcreative.Furthermore,theymusthaveavividimagination.Forinstance,withoutQianXuesen'sdevotedworkonmissilesandrockets,Chinawouldn'thavebecomesuchapowerfulcountryintheworldinashorttime.Similarly,itisthehybridriceYuanLongpingdevelopedthathasdecreasedthenumberofthehungrypeoplearoundtheworldgreatly.Asstudents,weshouldapplythescientificspirittoourstudy,sothatwecanhandlethedifficultiesandproblemswemeetwith.写作积累关于议论文的增分佳句1.开头:引出话题,提出论点①Thereisnodoubtthatpositiveattitudesandvaluesareboundtomakeabigdifferencetoeveryone.毫无疑问,积极的态度和价值观必然会对每个人产生巨大的影响。②Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat...Butitiswellknownthattheopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.人们普遍担忧……的问题。但是众所周知,关于这个热门话题的观点因人而异。2.主体:分层论述,阐明观点①Amajorityofpeopleapproveoftheopinionthat...Fromtheirpointofview,therearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitude,whichareasfollows:inthefirstplace...;furthermore...大多数人都赞同这种观点……从他们的角度来看,有两个因素促成了这种态度,如下:首先……;此外……。②Onthecontrary,somepeopledifferintheiropinionsonthismatter.Theyholdtheviewthat...Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...相反,有些人在这件事上意见不一。他们认为……。一方面……。另一方面……。3.结尾:总结全文,亮明己见①Thesescientistswhomadeexcellentcontributionstohumanbeingssetgoodexamplestousstudents.这些为人类做出卓越贡献的科学家为我们学生树立了良好的榜样。②Notonlyshouldweshowrespectforthegreatscientists,butwealsoshouldlearnthescientificspiritfromthem.我们不仅要尊重伟大的科学家,而且要向他们学习科学精神。实战演练(2022河北保定期末)假设你是李华。为了响应国家“了解中国科技发展的伟大成就,坚定文化自信”的号召,你校计划举办一场主题为“WhatMakesaGreatScientist?”的演讲比赛,请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。内容包括:1.列举一位伟大的科学家并介绍其伟大之处;2.你的感想。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

读后续写写作题目阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。EmilyWhitewasbornseventeenyearsagowithsomanybirthproblemsinherbody.Someofherorgans,bonesandmuscleswereoutofshape.Nooneexpectedhertosurvive.Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance.InEmilyWhite'shometown,therewasayearlyperformanceintheschoolauditorium(礼堂).IthadbeenperformedforsomanyyearsandactuallyhadbecomeoneofthemostimportanteventsoftheChristmasseasonformanyofthetown'speople.Manypeopletriedoutforiteachyearbutsomanywereturnedaway.Itcouldonlyincludethemostexcellentpeopleinthefield.Emilyhadabeautifulsingingvoice.LastyearshewenttoMrs.Owens—hermusicteachertoasktojoinintheperformance.Withoutlettinghersing,Mrs.OwenstookalookatEmily'sbodyandsaid,“Child,youarenotsuitable.Everyonewouldstareatyouandthatwouldmakeyouuncomfortable.Itwouldmakethemuncomfortable,too.”Withoutsingingasinglenote,Emilywassentbackthroughthedoorofthechoral(合唱的)room.Hurtandupset,shedecidednevertotryoutagain.ButMrs.Owensthenretired.Thisyear,therecameanewmusicteacher,Mr.Butler.HeheardaboutEmilyandsuggestedthatshehaveatry.Emilydidn'twanttoberejectedagain,soshehesitatedalittleaboutit.AsEmilystruggled,thedoorwaspushedopenandMr.Butlercalled,“Emily,you'renext.”Althoughkindofnervous,EmilydidasMr.Butlertoldher.Mr.ButlersatatthepianotoaccompanyEmily.WhenEmilyfinishedhertrialperformance,shethankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.Emilycouldn'tsleepthatnight.Shewassufferingfromthefeelingsthatshewasnotsuitableandthegreatneedtobeaccepted.Bythenextmorning,herstomachwaseveninpainbecauseofstress.注意:续写词数应为150个左右。Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.

Finally,thedayoftheperformancecame.

文本分析初识文本重点词汇1.outofshape变形的;不健康,身体不好2.makeit幸免于难,渡过难关3.recognizev.认出4.performancen.表演5.tryoutfor...参加……选拔(或试演)6.turnaway把……拒之门外7.rejectvt.拒绝接受,不予考虑8.hesitatev.犹豫,迟疑不决9.strugglev.挣扎;斗争10.sufferfrom...受……之苦;遭受……11.inpain疼痛;在痛苦中障碍词汇accompanyvt.为……伴奏长难句原句Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance.分析本句为并列复合句,but连接两个并列分句。第二个分句中,withherstrangebodyfigure作原因状语。译文她的确活了下来,但由于她奇怪的体形,每个人甚至从远处都能认出她。故事要素深研文本预测情节发展第一段:第二天,Emily紧张地浏览合唱室门上的名单(首句)→Emily被选上→Emily心情复杂,兴奋之余流露出不自信→Mr.Butler对Emily说了一番话,引导Emily接下来坚定信心,刻苦训练第二段:终于到了演出那天(首句)→Emily走上舞台后观众因她的外表而作出不好的回应→Emily不受影响,全身心投入表演→Emily演出成功,观众的态度发生转变→Emily战胜自己,完成蜕变遣词造句1.在横线上填入适当的单词(1)toone's让某人惊讶的是

(2)adj.神秘的

(3)remain保持冷静

(4)withallone's全心全意地

(5)come遇到

(6)beusedsth.习惯于某事

(7)one'sbreath屏息

(8)break突然开始

答案(1)surprise(2)mysterious(3)calm(4)heart(5)across(6)to(7)hold(8)into2.完成句子(9)Shewas(喜出望外)but(心存疑虑).

(10)Shehitherhandhard(却发现)shewasn'tdreaming.

(11)ThenMr.Butlerwalkedoutoftheroom(面带微笑).

(12)Emilywas(深受鼓舞),andshe(坚定地点点头)andpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.

(13)(一……就)appearingonthestage,shewas(迎接)scornfuleyes.

(14)Suddenly,theaudience(爆发出)thunderousapplause.

(15)Mr.Butlerwasmoved,andhegaveEmily(一个大大的拥抱).

(16)ThenheknewthatEmilyhad(战胜她自己).

答案(9)overjoyed;doubtful(10)onlytofind(11)withasmile(12)greatlyencouraged;noddeddeterminedly(13)Upon/On;greetedwith(14)brokeinto(15)abighug(16)overcomeherself3.句式升级(17)用形容词作状语合并句(9)和句(10)

(18)用倒装句改写句(11)

(19)用过去分词作状语改写句(12)

(20)用so...that...结构改写句(15)

(21)用强调句改写句(16),强调时间状语

答案(17)Overjoyedbutdoubtful,shehitherhandhardonlytofindshewasn'tdreaming.(18)ThenoutoftheroomwalkedMr.Butlerwithasmile.(19)Greatlyencouraged,Emilynoddeddeterminedlyandpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.(20)Mr.ButlerwassomovedthathegaveEmilyabighug.(21)ItwasthenthatheknewthatEmilyhadovercomeherself.连句成篇Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.Tohersurprise,ontopofthelistwashername!Overjoyedbutdoubtful,shehitherhandhardonlytofindshewasn'tdreaming.ThenoutoftheroomwalkedMr.Butlerwithasmile.“Emily,wehaveanotherpieceofgoodnewsforyou,”hesaidinamysteriousvoice.“Wechooseyoutobetheleadsinger.Doyoubelieveinyourself?”Greatlyencouraged,Emilynoddeddeterminedlyandpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.Finally,thedayoftheperformancecame.Uponappearingonthestage,shewasgreetedwithscornfuleyes.Butremainingcalm,shebegantosingwithallherheart.Whoknewhowmanysuchsituationsshehadcomeacross?Shewasreallyusedtoit.Whenshefinishedhersong,therewasamomentofsilence,asiftheworldwereholdingitsbreath.Suddenly,theaudiencebrokeintothunderousapplause.Mr.Butlerwassomovedthathegaveherabighug.ItwasthenthatheknewthatEmilyhadovercomeherself.写作积累与“神态描写”相关的表达1.脸上激动的表情:anexpressionofexcitementonone'sface2.坚定的眼神:adeterminedlook3.满意的微笑/神情:asmile/lookofsatisfaction4.灿烂的微笑:abrilliantsmile5.拉着长脸:drawalongface6.怒视某人:glareatsb.7.怒火燃烧的眼神:alookofburninganger8.因愤怒而颤抖:tremblewithanger9.她的脸上浮现一丝微笑。Asmil