2025届高考英语精准冲刺复习 读后续写高分开端

2025届高考英语精准冲刺复习

读后续写高分开端题型分析01如何设置故事开端一、巧用副词副词有修饰性副词和连接性副词(句子副词)两类，可用于修饰动词、形容词、句子等。修饰性副词可表示程度、方式等，使所要表达的情感更加鲜明、强烈，使句子更具表现力和感染力。连接性副词的运用，能使句间的衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰，所表达的含义简洁明了。（一）修饰性副词Carefully,hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass.他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。Joyfully,heskippedupthestreet.他很高兴地跳过了街道。【这里的carefully和joyfully把后面两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。】典例赏析1.一到达Scout家,那个年老的女人就急切地按门铃。ArrivingatScout'shome,theoldwomaneagerlyrangthedoorbell.2.他真诚地说:“我母亲教导我，施以爱心，不图回报。”“Mymotherhastaughtmenevertoacceptpayforakindness,”hesaidsincerely.3.我默默地想：如果我听父母的话,这就不会发生了。“IfIhadlistenedtomyparents,thiswouldneverhavehappened,”Ithoughtsilently.4.简在黑暗中不安地躺着,非常想和汤姆还有她的家人在一起。Anxiouslylyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.5.当被其他同学热烈地欢迎时,她松了一口气。Warmlywelcomedbyotherclassmates,shefeltrelieved.6.玛丽十分担忧，如坐针毡。Terribly/Quite/Extremelyworried,Maryfeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.7.另外两个骑行者看到三个男人被一只凶猛的狼威胁着，完全惊呆了。Theothertwocyclistssawthreementhreatenedbyafiercewolf,absolutely/completely/totallyshocked.（二）连接性副词1.【段首句】Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.【续写句】Immediately,absolutedarknessruledtheforest.但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又变黑了。立刻，绝对的黑暗统治了森林。【这里用时间副词“immediately衔接+环境描写”，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。】2.Thenearerthehelicoptergot,themoreJaneflaggedtheyellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidn'tmissherthistime.直升机靠得越近，简挥黄色衬衣挥得越起劲。幸运的是，这次她没有错过这部直升机。【这里用Luckily副词衔接，增强行文连贯性】高考真题1.当所有人围着亚瑟时，他似乎十分担忧。最终，他意识到自己犯了错误。WhenthepeoplecrowdedaroundArthur,heseemedquiteworried.Finally,herealizedthathehadmadeamistake.2.【段首句】StephenandMartinefoundthecarpetinacornerandcarriedittothepool.【续写句】Thentheyfoundsomeropeinthegarageandtiedoneendoftheropetothecarpet.斯蒂芬和马丁在一个角落里找到了地毯，并把它带到了游泳池里。然后，他们在车库里找到了一些绳子，并把绳子的一端绑在了地毯上。3.【段首句】Thenextdaywenoticedtherewascigaretteashonthefloor.【续写句】Actually,itwasathiefwhoenteredourkitchenandgarage.第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。事实上，那是一个小偷进入了我们的厨房和车库。巧用非谓语恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复杂句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且可使表达更简洁、更高级。非谓语动词在写作中的形式主要为doing、done、havingdone和with的复合结构，其作状语时，主要表示原因、结果或伴随状态。（一）动词-ing,凸显同一对象同时发生不同的动作。“老人静坐”==>坐在夕阳下+看报纸+听广播Theoldmansatunderthesunset,readingthenewspaperandlisteningtotheradio.典例赏析1.她感到累极了,坐在溪边,让疼痛的双脚放松一下。Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestream,restingherachingfeet.2.Jane觉得冷得无法忍受,精疲力竭,完全不知道该如何应对这种可怕的情况。Feelingunbearablycoldandextremelyexhausted,Janewasquiteatalosswithhowtocopewiththeterriblesituation.3.他屏住呼吸,尽力不发出任何声音,免得让人知道他来了。Heheldhisbreath,tryingtonotmaketheslightestsoundthatmightbetrayhispresence.4.好奇心切,她从河岸边跑开,穿过田野去追兔子。Burningwithcuriosity,sheranawayfromtheriverbankandacrossthefieldtochaseaftertherabbit.（二）havingdone表现动作先后关系“没有买到票”==>排了很久队+被告知票卖完了Havingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthatthetickethadbeensoldout.典例赏析1.她在街上漫无目的地逛上好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。Havingwonderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.2.说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。Havingtoldthetruth,hefelteasierinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.3.做好充分准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。Havingmadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindow,expectingthearrivalofherdaughter.（三）-ed过去分词凸显被动“孩子们哭了”==>被感动+哭了Deeplymovedbythestory,thechildrenbegantocry.典例赏析1.坐在窗边，他喝着咖啡放松自我。Seatedbythewindow,herelaxedhimselfwithacupofcoffee.2.心情沉重地被拉在后面，Jane低下头，她的脸充满了绝望。Leftbehindwithasinkingheart,Janeduckeddownherhead,herfacecloudedwithaheavycloudofdespair.3.欣喜万分，他发出一声大叫，好像如处世界之巅。Thrilledwithjoy,heletoutacryasifhewereonthetopoftheword.高考真题1.【段首句】Withinthreeyears,Bonniehadbecomeafamousballerinaasshewanted.【续写句】Guidedbythetroupeleader,shesucceededinattainingtheleadingpositionintheSwanLake.三年之内，邦妮就成为了一名著名的芭蕾舞演员。在剧团团长的带领下，她成功地获得了在天鹅湖的领导地位。2.【段首句】Then,Iforcedmyselftowalktothefrontoftheclassroom.【续写句】Standinginfrontofallthestudentsmademeverynervous,andmylegskeptshaking.然后，我强迫自己走到教室的前面。站在所有学生面前使我非常紧张，我的双腿一直在颤抖。巧用介词短语句子开头可以使用表示地点、时间、原因等带有介词的短语，如asaresult,justatthatmoment,onmywayback等。（一）With/Without+宾语，表示“伴随着……”“有着……”或者“没有……”1.那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。Themandidn’tsayawordandpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.【改写】Withoutsayingaword,themanpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.2.【翻译】没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。ItisyourrecognitionandguidancethatIwrotethearticle.【改写】Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.典例赏析（1）熊怒吼一声，跑到湖边洗眼睛。Withanangryroar,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.（2）那人一言不发，把Kim从摩托车上扶起来，然后平静地走开了。Withoutsayingaword,themanpickedKimupoffthescooterandcalmlysteppedaway.（3）那个瘦小的小伙子毫不犹豫地跳进冰冷湍急的河水中。Withouthesitation,thethinyoungmanthrewhimselfintothecoldandswiftriver.（二）Toone’s+名词，表示“让某人……的是”【翻译】让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。Wewererelievedthattheysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile.【改写】Toourrelief,theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile.典例赏析（1）让我们如释重负的是，爸爸拒绝了这个主意。Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.（2）让她吃惊的是，她看到的只有森林，远远望去，还有一座白雪皑皑的山顶。Toherastonishment,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop.（三）In+名词，表示“……地”1.【翻译】她们好奇地瞪着眼睛看着结果。Theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresultssurprisingly.【改写】Insurprise,theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresults.2.【翻译】刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。Soonthekitchenwasfilledwithsweetsmell.【改写】Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.典例赏析（1）他们高兴地唱着跳着进入房间。Indelight,theyenteredtheroom,singinganddancing.（2）他们惊讶地睁着眼睛看结果。Inastonishment,theykepttheireyeswideopentoreadtheresult.高考真题1.【段首句】BillieJeanthoughttoherself.【续写句】Fromthatdayon,BillieJeanaskedherneighborsaboutanyjobsshecoulddo.比利吉自己想。从那天起，比莉·琼问她的邻居关于她能做的任何工作。2.【段首句】Afterwhatseemedacentury,therescueboatfinallybrokethroughthethickfog,withHansstandingupinthebow(船头),wavingtothewaitingcrowds．【续写句】Onseeingtheboat,thecrowd,whohadbeenwaitingwithanxiety,nowburstintocheers.经过一个世纪的努力，救援船终于冲破了浓雾，汉斯站在船头（船头），向等待的人群挥手。焦急地等待着船上的人群，立刻爆发了欢呼声。3.【段首句】Thatclassmate’scommentwaslikeasharpknife,cuttingJack’sheartintopieces.【续写句】Forseveraldays,hewasinlowspirits.那个同学的评论就像一把锋利的刀，把杰克的心切成了碎片。好几天，他精神很低落。巧用形容词短语形容词（短语）在句中作状语，表达人物做某个动作的原因、结果或状态，可放在句首或句末，增强感染力，使描述更生动形象。（一）adj.+todo（形容词+不定式）,主+谓1.【翻译】萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。Samwascurioustoknowwhoshewas,sohetiptoedintotheroom.【改写】Curioustoknowwhoshewas,hetiptoedintotheroom.2.【翻译】那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话说不出来，他惊呆了。Bobwasunabletosayawordandwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.【改写】Unabletosayaword,Bobwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.（二）adj.+as/though+主谓(as引导倒装句),主+谓【翻译】尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。Thoughshewasweak,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.【改写】Weakasshewas,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.（三）adj.andadj.（并列情绪形容词）,主+谓【翻译】妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。Asshewasspeechlessandhappy,Mumheldthetwinstightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.（四）adj.+that从句（情绪形容词+从句）,主+谓【翻译】突然一只兔子从马匹前跳出来。我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AsIwasafraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.【改写】Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.高考真题1.【段首句】“Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.【续写句】AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.我怕会伤害到这个可爱的小生物，不自觉地大叫了一声，喝住我的马。模拟练习02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。UpinLightsForsome,puttingupChristmaslightsisaholidaychore.ButforthePascuccifamily,itwasalwaysabigdayofcelebration.EveryyearonthedayafterThanksgiving,Sara'sfather,AnthonyPascucci,60,wokeupexcitedtostringlightsanddecoratethelawnofhishomeanddidn'ttakethemdownuntilFebruary,beingtheonlyhousewithChristmasdecorationsinthecommunity.AnthonyPascuccibelievedthebrightnessofthelightscouldcounter（抵消）someofthedarknessofthepastyearwithCOVID-19.In2020,asineveryotheryear,AnthonyPascuccistrungcolorfullightsallaroundtheirroofuntilitlookedasifsparklesweredrippingontothehallway.Sara'sbrother,AnthonyJr.helpedwiththewiring,whileSarahungornaments（装饰物）onthetreeinsidethehouseplayingthesong“WhiteChristmas＂overandovertokeepeveryoneinthespirit.Thewholeplacelookedlikeascenefromapop-upChristmasstorybook.OnChristmasEve,thewholehousetwinkledwithlightsandgiftswerepiledunderthetree.Everyonewaslookingforwardtooverlystuffedclams-atypicalItalianfeast.Butmostofall,theylookedforwardtoenjoyinganotherChristmastogetherasafamily.However,SarareceivedacallfromhercolleaguewhohadtestedpositiveforCOVID-19.ThoughSaradidn'thaveanysymptomsshedecidedtogettestedrightaway,aswellasthewholefamily.WhentheirresultscamebacktheyalllearnedthattheyalsohadCOVID-19.SeveralweekslateronearlyFebruary,AnthonyPascuccipassedawayaftergettinglunginfections.Inadditiontohelpingtoplanthefuneralforherfather,Sarahadtotackleaseeminglyendlesslistofdifficultto-dos.Itwasalmosttoomuchtobear.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右：2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Butwhensheretumedtothehouseafterthefuneral,thetwinklingChristmaslightsbroughtherasparkofjoy.Inthefollowingdays,moreandmoreChristmaslightswerereappearingonneighbors'houses.Butwhenshereturnedtothehouseafterthefuneral,thetwinklingChristmaslightsbroughtherasparkofjoy.ItwasthesweatylaborforChristmasdecorations;itwasthefamiliarsmelloftastyfood;itwastheremainingconnectionwithherbelovedone.Immersedinamixtureofgriefanddetermination,Sarawipedthetearsstreamingdowncheeks,climbeduptheladderandtightenedtheloosestringsoflights,replacingworn-outlightsandcleaningdustyones.PastastheChristmasDayhadbeen,Saracontinuedherfamilytraditionjustasherfatherdid.Whensomeneighborspassedby,theystoppedtochatwithSaraasacomfortandsomeeveninitiallyjoinedher.Inthefollowingdays,moreandmoreChristmaslightswerereappearingonneighbors'houses.NeverhadSaraexpectedsuchanamazingscene.Standinginfrontofthehouse,Saragreetedneighborswithexceedinggratitudeandinquiredaboutthelights.ThemysteryhadasweetexplanationthattheneighborshadgottogetheranddecidedcollectivelytohangtheirlightsbackinhonorofAnthonyPascucci.Sarawavedwithquiveringhandsandcried“Thankyou”tothosekindheartedpeople,tearsgraduallyblurringhereyes.Undoubtedly,thekindnessneighborsbroughtwarmedSarainthisbittercoldwinterandthesupportfromneighborswasanimportantreminderthatthebrightnessoflightscouldcounterthedarknessofsufferingslifethrewatus.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onenighttheearthquaked,reducingthevillagestoruinsandcausinghundredsofdeaths.IthappenedthatIwasawaythatnight.Ihadgonetothetowntobuymyschoolbooks.Istayedthenightatmyuncle'shouse.Wespenttheentirenightoutside.Icamebacktomyvilage.Myuncleaccompaniedme.Everysinglehouse,everywall,everyroofhadbeenflattened.Ourhousewasatwo-storeyedstonebuilding.Myfatherhaddiedofanillness,justfourteenmonthsbefore.Mymothertookcareofus.Iwastheoldest.MybrotherJohnwastenJane,mytwo-year-oldsister,wasthebabyofthefamily.Whenthesoldiersbegantoclearthedebris（废墟），myuncleledmeaway.“Theyhavetakenthebodiestotheriverbank，＂hesaidgently．6tCome，youmustperformthelastrites（仪式）tothedeadbeforesunsetTomorrow，wewillgobacktothetown."Ihadlastseenmyfamilywhileleavingforthetown.TheystoodatthedoorwayandwavedJohnandJane.ThatisthewayIwillalwaysrememberthem-smilingandwavingatme.Jane?Shewasnotattheriverbank."Theyhavenotfoundher,"myunclesaid."Sheisdead.,,"Butwemustfindher,"Ishouted.Iranbacktothevillage,tothespotwheremyhousehadstood,searching,crying,searchingonmyknees...“Boy,itisnouse!"avoicesaid.Ilookedup.ThespeakerwastheArmyofficerinchargeofthereliefoperation."Whomareyoulookingfor?"Mysister,"Isaid,fightingtocontrolmytears.Helookeddirtyandexhausted