感谢信：外教辅导获得作文比赛一等奖 讲义 高一下学期3月月考英语试题

感谢信：外教辅导获得作文比赛一等奖（河北省保定部分高中2023-2024学年高一下学期3月月考）假定你是李华，你在刚刚结束的校英语作文比赛中荣获一等奖。请给帮助你的外教George写一封邮件，内容包括：1.告知比赛结果；2.回顾他的帮助；3.表达感谢。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearGeorge,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段告知比赛结果（要点1）；第二段回顾外教的帮助（要点2）；第三段表达感谢（要点3）。写作提纲：标题：感谢信给外教George引言：向George问好并直接告知自己在校英语作文比赛中获得一等奖的喜讯。正文第一段：回顾帮助描述George在比赛准备过程中提供的具体帮助，如写作技巧指导、词汇建议等。强调这些帮助对自己的影响和重要性。正文第二段：表达感谢表达对George的感激之情，感谢他的时间、耐心和专业指导。说明George的支持如何增强了自己的信心和能力。正文第三段：展望未来表达对未来继续合作的期待，展望在George的帮助下取得更多进步。结束语再次感谢George，并期待他的回复或进一步的交流。结尾：以诚挚的问候结束信件，并署名“李华”。参考范文：DearGeorge,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell!Iamgladto

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(113words)Yours,LiHua中文翻译亲爱的乔治老师：见信好！我很高兴地告诉您，在刚刚结束的校英语作文比赛中，我荣获了一等奖！我始终记得您不仅纠正了我语法上的错误，还耐心地指导我如何更好地组织和展开论述，使我的文章结构更加清晰、论点更加突出。您的专业知识和严谨的教学态度让我受益匪浅。没有您的帮助，我就不会取得如此巨大的进步。再次感谢您给予我的帮助和支持。您的帮助不仅提高了我的写作水平，更激发了我对英语学习的热情和信心。李华本文的亮点：（1）Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell运用无灵主语结构；（2）keepsbinformed告知某人；（3）Istillrememberthedayswhen...其中when引导定语从句；（4）withgreatpatience耐心地；（5）Itis...that...运用强调句型；（6）Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldnothave...运用含蓄虚拟条件句；（7）Wordsfailtoexpressmygratitudefor...言语难以表达我的感激之情。下水文1DearGeorge,IamwritingwithgreatjoytosharethefantasticnewsthatIhavesecuredthefirstprizeintheschool'sEnglishessaycompetition.Yourpatientcoachingandinsightfulfeedbackweregreatlyimportantinrefiningmywritingskillsandshapingmyessaytoperfection.Reflectingonthejourney,IamdeeplygratefulforthetimeandeffortyouinvestedinguidingmethroughtheintricaciesofEnglishcomposition.YourencouragementandexpertisehavenotonlyhelpedmesucceedinthiscompetitionbutalsoignitedapassionfortheEnglishlanguagewithinme.Thankyouonceagainforyourinvaluablesupport.Ilookforwardtoourcontinuedcollaborationinthefuture.Warmregards,LiHua下水文2DearGeorge,IamelatedtoinformyouthatIhavewonthefirstprizeintheschool'sEnglishessaycontest.Yourassistancewaspivotaltomysuccess.Younotonlyprovidedmewithconstructivecriticismbutalsoinspiredmetothinkmorecreatively.Lookingback,thecountlesshourswespentdiscussingvariouswritingtechniquesandyourpatientcorrectionofmydraftswerewhattrulysetmeapart.YourdedicationtomyprogressissomethingIwillalwaysappreciate.Iwanttoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourunwaveringsupport.Itwasyourbeliefinmyabilitiesthatgavemetheconfidencetoexcel.Thankyouforeverything.Yourssincerely,LiHua下水文3DearGeorge,IamoverthemoontosharewithyouthatIhavewonthefirstprizeinourschool'sEnglishcompositioncompetition.Thisachievementwouldnothavebeenpossiblewithoutyourexpertguidanceandencouragement.Yourkeeneyefordetailandyourabilitytodrawoutthebestinmywritingweretrulyinvaluable.Thetimeyouspentwithme,refiningmyargumentsandenhancingmyvocabulary,hasmadeallthedifference.Iamprofoundlythankfulforyoursupportandment