新教材2025版高中英语Unit9LearningPartⅦ单元写作学案北师大版必修第三册

PartⅦ单元写作主题写作——学校活动【考题回放】假设你是晨光中学的机器人爱好小组组长李津，你的美国挚友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你准备邀请他加入你的团队，参与即将于7月底实行的青少年机器人技能竞赛。请依据以下提示代表爱好小组给他写一封电子邮件。1．竞赛的时间、地点；2．邀请他的缘由；3．训练支配将发送至其邮箱，请他提出建议。留意：1．词数不少于80；2．可适当加入细微环节，使内容充溢、行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：青少年机器人技能竞赛theAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris，Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiJin【写作构思】1．确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文——邮件主题：邀请加入爱好小组2．确定时态和人称。时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。3．明确写作要点：写信的目的→竞赛的时间、地点→邀请他的缘由→训练支配以及请他提建议。4．结合要点分为三个段落。【素材整理】1．关键词语willbeheld,promote,takepartin,winfirstprize,showgreattalentfor,asaconsequence,themostsuitable,inadditionto,suchas,Iwouldappreciateitif...2．单句写作(1)青少年机器人技能竞赛将于7月底实行以促进机器人科学的发展。(hold,soastodo)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)我想强调的是此刻我们小组正在招募新的成员。(what引导的主语从句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(3)我想邀请你参与，因为我知道你刚在你们团体举办的机器人竞赛中获得了一等奖，已经在设计机器人方面显示出了很高的天赋。(takepartin,showgreattalentfor)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(4)因此，我认为你就是最合适的人选。(asaconsequence)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(5)除了定期的训练外，训练支配包括参与各种各样的活动，比如参与一些国内的竞赛。(inadditionto,awidevarietyof)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(6)我将通过电子邮件发给你具体内容。(send)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(7)假如你能给我们一些如何使它完备的建议我将不胜感谢。(Iwouldappreciateitif...)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【连句成篇】DearChris，Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldattheendofJuly①soastopromotethedevelopmentofrobotics.②WhatIwanttostressisthatourgroupislookingfornewmembersatthismoment.Iwouldliketoinviteyouto③takepartinit,sinceIknowyou'vejustwonfirstprizeintheroboticscompetition④heldinyourinstituteandhaveshowngreattalentfordesigningrobots.⑤Asaconsequence,youarethemostsuitableperson,Isuppose.Thetrainingschedule,⑥inadditiontoregulartraining,includesjoiningin⑦awidevarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.Iwillsendthedetailstoyoubyemail.⑧Iwouldappreciateitifyougiveussomeadviceonhowtomakeitperfect.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiJin→①soastodo不定式作目的状语②eq\a\vs4\al(,what引导的主语从句和,that引导的表语从句)→③eq\a\vs4\al(takepartin参与)→④eq\a\vs4\al(,过去分词短,语作后置定语)⑤eq\a\vs4\al(asaconsequence因此；所以)→⑥eq\a\vs4\al(,inadditionto,除……之外)⑦eq\a\vs4\al(awidevarietyof各种各样的)→⑧eq\a\vs4\al(,高级句式：Iwould,appreciateitif...)【写作训练】假定你是李华，你校学生会暑期将组织“丝绸之路”沿线国家考察活动，留学生也可参与。请你用英语给对此次活动感爱好的留学生Jenkins写一封电子邮件，告知他相关内容：1．活动支配(参观、沟通等)；2．报名条件(年龄、身体状况等)；3．报名方式。留意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PartⅦ单元写作【素材整理】2．(1)TheAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldattheendofJulysoastopromotethedevelopmentofrobotics.(2)WhatIwanttostressisthatourgroupislookingfornewmembersatthismoment.(3)Iwouldliketoinviteyoutotakepartinit,sinceIknowyou'vejustwonfirstprizeintheroboticscompetitionheldinyourinstituteandhaveshowngreattalentfordesigningrobots.(4)Asaconsequence,youarethemostsuitableperson,Isuppose.(5)Thetrainingschedule,inadditiontoregulartraining,includesjoininginawidevarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.(6)Iwillsendthedetailstoyoubyemail.(7)Iwouldappreciateitifyougiveussomeadviceonhowtomakeitperfect.【写作训练】参考范文：DearJenkins，I'mmorethandelightedtotellyouaboutaschoolactivityforthecomingsummerholidays,namedTravelalongtheSilkRoad.Thedetailsareasfollows.InordertofindouttheconnectionsbetweenChinaandthecountriesalongtheSilkRoad,the15­daytourwillincludetwoparts.We'llvisittheculturalrelicsandthemuseumswithrichcollections.Inaddition,wewillcallonsomelocalresidentsattheirhomes.