2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖（全国）09.慰问信（原卷版）

备战2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖必备09慰问信【真题示例】（2022·辽宁沈阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，你了解到在英国的笔友James在学校运动会赛跑比赛中弄伤了脚，请你给他写封慰问信，内容包括：1.表示慰问；2.给予建议；3.表示祝愿。注意：1.词数80-100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。HiJames,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourfootataschoolsportsmeeting______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】HiJames,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourfootataschoolsportsmeeting.Iknowyouareverysadbecauseyoudon’tgetanyprizeduringthissportsmeeting.Don’tbediscouraged.Cheerupanddosomethingtogetbetter.Ithinkyoushouldhavearestandlieonthebed.Don’twalkorrun.Takethedoctor’sadviceandpaymoreattentiontoyourfoot.Youneedn’tworryabouthomework.Youcanaskyourclassmatesandteachersforhelp.Meanwhile,youshouldeathealthily.Eatmorevegetablesandfruit,andtheyaregoodforyourhealth.Ihopeyoucangetbettersoon.Yours,LiHua【必背句式】开头句型1.

Iwas(awfully)sorrytohearthat

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句子

(your

teamlostthegame.)2.

Iwasshockedtohearof

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sth.(yourfailureintheexam.)3.

I’mwritingtotellyouhowsorry

I

amtohearabout

sth.

(yourloss

…)4.

Knowingyoursituation,

I

feelterriblysorryabout

sth.…中间段句型1.

Iquietunderstandhowyoufeelnow，but...我特别能理解你现在的感觉，但...2.

Youhavedevotedyourselfto...你在...方面付出了大量的精力和时间3.

Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficulttodo...但是众所周知，做...本身就极其困难4.

Toprepare...,youhavemadeeveryeffort.为了准备这次...,你已经尽了最大努力5.

It’snotyourfaulttodo........不是你的错结尾句型1.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.

If

I

candoanythingforyou,doletmeknow.3.

Remember,wewon’tbefarawayifyouneedanyhelp!4.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.【模版示例】模板=1\*GB3①Dear,Iwasverysorrytohearthat.（交代事由）It’sunderstandableforyouto.（表明主要观点）However,ifyoucan

adopt

different

perspectives,.（提出建议）First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceupto（直面）theresult?Anyway,.Besides,youcanalso.Therefore,if,youwill.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板=2\*GB3②Dear______,Iam______,Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafter________./Iamshockedatthenewsabout______________(引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情)Atpresent,_________decidesthatitwillgiveyou________whenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方)Iwilltrymybestto________,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.(表示自己意愿提供帮助)Mayyourecoversoon./Goodluckandbestwishestoyou!(表达愿望与祝福)Yourssincerely,__________________【突破策略】一、题型特点慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。二、写作思路第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；第三步：表达愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1.Iwasshockedatthenewsabouttheearthquakein…听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。2.On…,anincredibleandunknownearthquakesuddenlyhappenedin…,…Province.在……，……省……市突然发生了一场惊人的、未曾预知的地震。3.Wearesosorrytohearthenewsabouttheearthquake.听到地震的消息我们很难过。4.Weareverysorrytolearnthat…我们非常遗憾地得知……5.Ijustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek.我无法告知你当你听到你发生事故我是多么难过。6.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.我刚刚得知上个星期你病了。7.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIlearnedthat…当我听说……时，我非常关心8.Ijustwantedtoletyouknowhowconcernedweare.我只想要你知道我们是多么担忧。9.Ihopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。10.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth/earlyrecovery/rapidrecovery.我们真心/祈祷你能很快完全康复。11.Wearelookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.我们真心希望你早日康复。12.Onlywehavetheperseverancecanwedefeatthenaturaldisaster.我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。13.Pleaseextendourdeepsympathytoyourfamily.请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.如果需要我的帮助，请告知。【写作演练】1．假定你是李华，通过对话了解到你的好朋友Paul面对过去长时间的网课及将要到来的考试等问题，心理压力很大，请你给他写一封安慰信。内容包括：1、表示安慰问候；2、提供减轻压力的建议或办法；3、美好祝愿。要点：1、词数80—100：开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．你是班长李华，得知同班同学Stella生病需要在家休息一段时间。你希望写一封慰问信转达全班同学对她的关心和祝愿。信中包含以下要点：1表达关心；询问病情2.给予建议：谨遵医嘱，保持良好心情3.提供帮助，........(请至少补充两点）4.鼓励及祝愿注意：（1）文章80-100左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）（2）文章内容必须包含所有要点，并且有适当的发挥（3）不得透露学号/姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分DearStellaIamsorrytohearthatyouapplyforatemporaryleavebecauseofyourillness._______________________________________________________________________________________Cheers,LiHua3．你校英语校报有一个名为JustAsk的专栏。平日你校学生会将自己的困惑投稿到这个专栏，小编则需对投稿进行回复。假设你是李华，恰好是这个专栏的小编。近日你收到一封来自Amanda的投稿，现请你阅读此封投稿并回复。Ihavehadalotofarguments(争吵)withmyparentssinceIbecameaninth-grader.Weargueaboutdifferentthingsbutmostlyaboutmyschoolwork.Forexample,Iamneverallowedtousethemobilephonebecausetheywantmetopayfullattentiontomystudy.Ifeelquiteuncomfortableandthisterriblefeelingislikeadarkcloudaboveme,sowejustkeeparguing.IknowitiswrongbutwhatshouldIdo?Yours,Amanda回信的开头已给出。回信需涵盖以下要点：1.表示关心与慰问；2.分析学生提到的问题；3.针对问题给出合理的建议；1)告诉父母你的真实感受，被控制的感觉让你感到不舒服；2)制定合理使用手机的规则，……3)……要求：1.词数要求80词以上；2.不得出现真实人名、校名等；3.需恰当的自我发挥，使文章更完整。提示词汇：充满压力的stressed

合理地reasonablyDearAmanda,Iamsorrytohearthat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________